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Neopia's Fill in the Blank News Source | 31st day of Hiding, Yr 27
The Neopian Times Week 34 > Short Stories > NeoHome of Doom

NeoHome of Doom

by gryphonsong

They were a melancholy group. Stumbling along Summit Strip as if they had been walking forever. Finally, they reached the end of the street.

"What number was the house again?" A fire Scorchio named FlamingFireCannon asked his owner, GryphonSong, quietly.

Pinching the bridge of her nose, GryphonSong answered, "3346 Summit Strip, Terror Mountain." She spoke as if she had said it one too many times, which was true.

"Home sweet ski lodge of doom..." A purple Eyrie, NeverForgetGriffiane, said with a sigh and began trudging to the house on the street corner.

GryphonSong turned to look at the huge mansion with the letters 3346 carefully engraved on a plaque on the door. The bottom floor was excellently planned and made entirely of stone; the next two stories were made of wood. The place was dark, haunting and looked abandoned. GryphonSong watched as her pets began to walk toward it. True, it did give off the feel of a ski lodge, and a rather frightening one at that, but it beat living in their shop.

In utter defeat, GryphonSong began to follow her pets. She stopped for a moment to eye the barbed wire fence that bordered the snowy landscape. Shaking her head as she continued, she muttered, "Griff was right."

Meeting up with her four shivering pets at the door, GryphonSong pulled out the silver key and began to unlock the door. It creaked slowly open and GryphonSong entered tentatively, and quickly turned on the gas lamp next to the door on a peg. Her shoes tapped and resonated throughout the long, desolate hallway. She looked at her surroundings: wooden floors, royal wallpaper and a lone heater in the corner.

Tapping in behind her, MissingMoonstruk, a faerie Uni, entered. "This isn't so bad," she said, looking around. With a scream, she jumped backward, knocking over FireCannon.

"EEP!" Triano the Pepito yelped as he hung from a cobweb on the ceiling.

With an annoyed sigh, GryphonSong reached up to untangle the little fish. With a wriggling Triano under one arm, GryphonSong continued down the hallway as the others began to enter. Peeking into the rooms, she saw that the movers had loaded all of their boxes in, but everything still seemed unbelievably dusty.

Moonstruk trotted up behind her. "I don't like it here," she said. Not normally one to complain about anything but food and her family, GryphonSong took note of her Uni's discomfort.

"All we need to do is to fix it up and you'll feel right at home," GryphonSong said soothingly.

"Why not Neopia Central like everyone else, I ask, but no, we have to live in the expensive places..." Moonstruk muttered. "We could have at least moved to Faerieland..."

GryphonSong ignored her Uni's complaints and set Triano on the floor and let him hop after as Moonstruk went to find her boxes of furniture. As GryphonSong neared the end of the hall, she found the staircase. It was tall and lonesome, but she started up. Each step creaked noticeably and GryphonSong took a breath as she continued. Something crashed and GryphonSong turned around. "Did you guys break something?" She called and was answered by a chorus of no's. Her eyes widened as she turned back to the staircase and looked up. What was it? She had to know, so she continued.

Each step seemed to bring a whole other terrifying question to GryphonSong's mind. What could it be up there? Could it be the Pant Devil? Well, Moonstruk could take care of that, after all, she had completely pulverised four of them, and left not one spared. But what if it was something else? Could it be the Lava Ghoul? She stopped dead in her tracks. What if it was the Shadow Usul? She looked up the dusty stairs once more; the mover's foot prints all ready fading... but wait! Was that a new set of footprints? Could it be? Did the Pant Devil or the Shadow Usul even leave footprints? She looked up the staircase again, and was about to take another step when Moonstruk gave out a loud shriek.

GryphonSong turned and ran quickly down the stairs and ran to the sound of Moonstruk's shriek in the future living room. Griffiane stood on a green bean bag chair, holding a pink diary high in the air above Moonstruk's head, who was rearing up to get it in her teeth.

With a sigh of relief, GryphonSong put a hand on her hip and looked at the two. "Give Moonstruk back her diary, Griff."

"But I found it," Griffiane said indignantly.

"I don't care if you dove down in the depths of the Maraquan ruins for it, give it back to her," GryphonSong said sternly and Griff gave it back to the Uni with a groan.

Moonstruk, diary in teeth, nodded her thanks to GryphonSong and trotted out of the room. Stopping at the doorway, she put the diary down on the floor for a moment to say, "I get first pick on rooms!" With that, she picked the diary back up, gave Triano a moment to flop up onto her mane and he tied himself down just as Moonstruk went galloping around the corner and up the stairs, Griffiane followed soon after, a purple streak down the hall.

"Wait - you guys!" GryphonSong called, running out of the room and yelling to them at the foot of the stairs. "I need to tell you something!"

It was too late. Griffiane yelled and Moonstruk screamed. LoveChargoun, the blue Lupe, and FireCannon darted out of the rooms they had claimed as their own and followed GryphonSong up the staircase and into the hallway on the second floor. Griffiane turned around, his face pale and walked shakily over to GryphonSong. "We saw it... Big... Big thing..." he murmured, his eyes glazing over.

Moonstruk, however, was looking at a particularly dark part of the floor with extreme interest. Poking the darkened spot with a hoof, she looked back at GryphonSong. "Something was here."

"Like what?" Chargoun asked, leaning against the wall.

"Like… Like a shadow…" She looked back at the floor and sighed.

"Usul?" GryphonSong asked.

"No… Like… You." She pointed her muzzle at GryphonSong.

"Me? Like a human ghost?" she asked, walking over slowly.

Moonstruk and Griff nodded. "It looked surprised to see us. It took one look at us and disappeared. What it was doing, I'll never know."

GryphonSong sighed and looked at the second staircase that led up to the third floor and she rested a hand on the railing. "Then let's go up and see." She could sense the others discomfort, but they followed her ascent of the stairs. At the top, it was just as dark as the other floors, and GryphonSong switched on a gas lamp. The light of the flame danced across the room and hit the shadow creature. It cringed back but GryphonSong yelled to it, "Don't go! We aren't going to hurt you!"

"Us hurting it? I'm more worried about the other way around!" FireCannon hissed in GryphonSong's ear.

I would not hurt you. The creature said, more in their minds than out loud. But my pet, she might.

"Who's your pet?" GryphonSong asked.

My pet, is more commonly known as the 'Shadow Usul.' We died here; it was an accident, when I finally got wood floors. We had torches for lighting, fireplaces for heating. I didn't think much of it... But a torch fell off the bracket... Shaduin, my Usul, was standing by the fireplace, it hit her in the back and she fell in, I tried to get to her, but the flames caught me, too... The ghost shuddered. Ever since we've been afraid of the light, turned to the shadows for answers. Shaduin tries to protect me, to make people fear this place... But I miss the company. The last owners of this house rebuilt it, and I liked them, but Shaduin had fallen too far in with the shadows, she told me no one could live here. Ever.

Ascora! What are you doing, conversing with the living? The Shadow Usul hissed as it came up from the floor. I trusted you! I thought you would scare them away from here, and this is what happens? Ascora, please don't do this to me!

No, Shaduin. These people have done us no harm. Let them be. Ascora said softly.

"Shaduin, we don't mean to bother you. We didn't even know you resided here. Please, we don't want any trouble," Moonstruk said softly. "None at all."

You? Who trespasses on my land? My home? You think you are strong like me, you who prances around with her faerie wings and strong legs! You will never replace me in this house! Shaduin cried.

They did not mean to trespass, Shady! They only meant to live! She said it herself, she didn't know that we were living here, leave them be! Ascora cried, and she shrank back into the wall, surprised by her outburst. Shaduin was eerily silent and her glowing eyes rested on GryphonSong.

Do you mean us harm?

All five shook their heads. "We only mean to seek shelter and hope to live in peace with you," Chargoun said. "No more than that."

Shaduin looked from Ascora to the five. In silent decision, she bowed to GryphonSong and her pets and walked over to Ascora. If you want them to live here, she said, I would be honoured.

Ascora looked at her Usul and a smile crept over the ash grey ghost's face. I would like that very much, Shady. With that, they disappeared into the wall of the NeoHome with a laugh.

"Well," Griffiane said, "Now that that's over..." With a quick movement, he had snatched up Moonstruk's forgotten diary and bounded down the stairs with it. Moonstruk ran after with a yell. "GRYPHONSONG!" she screeched and Triano was knocked off of her back and landed with a thump on GryphonSong's foot.

"Really, I don't get it. Something extremely amazing and history making can happen, and they simply forget about it," GryphonSong said in wonder.

Chargoun and FireCannon shrugged. "By the way," FireCannon said, "Did you take my pillows, Chargoun?"

"You mean the pretty pink ones?" Chargoun asked.

"Yea, those are the ones," FireCannon answered.

"Yup," Chargoun answered. After a moment of silence, Chargoun bounded down the stairs with FireCannon in close pursuit.

"I'm going to obliterate you!" FireCannon screamed as he followed.

GryphonSong, her jaw dropped and her brow furrowed, looked down the stairs in awe. They were probably the only ones that knew the Shadow Usul's name and owner, and they had just met two extremely frightening things, had just witnessed a history-making event, and now they were going to go and chase each other around the house for what the other had taken. She shook her head. "It's just you and me now, Triano," she said and looked down at the empty floor in puzzlement. "Triano?"

"CHARGE!" Triano screamed from outside. GryphonSong rushed to the window to see Triano, his tail tightly twined around Chargoun's Christmas Anubis, Bailey's neck, chasing Griff's Airax, Atreyu, around the house while Moonstruk yelled at Griff and FireCannon yelled at Chargoun. Would it never end?

Well, most likely, no. The Shadow Usul said with a grin behind her.

"Be quiet!" GryphonSong said. "Now I have a mind - probing Usul poltergeist to deal with on top of it all.

Oh, don't worry. I'll only mess up your table and chairs in your kitchen and put your rug on top of the coffee table in the living room. Otherwise, you'll hardly know I'll be here.

Without really thinking about it, GryphonSong walked over to her Royal Oak Bed and slammed her head on the bedpost. "Stupid, stupid, stupid, stupid." She hissed to herself over and over again as her world of chaos continued around her.

"You've always got me!" FireCannon's White Stego, Cyrin, said from her pillow.

GryphonSong took a moment before collapsing on the bed and gathering Cyrin in her arms. "We're both..." And together, they began to chant, "Stupid, stupid, stupid, stupid" over and over again.

What a happy ending, eh?

The End? (Not in this life, buddy.)


The author of this story would like to tell everyone who sees this that if you find a strange, seemingly abandoned Pepito in your NEOHOME - you can keep him.

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