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The Neopian Times Week 127 > Short Stories > The Secret of Merriwillo

The Secret of Merriwillo

by ezrhide

Author’s Note: This story the sequel to my other story, The Legend of Merriwillo which can be found in Issue 124. I strongly suggest reading the first installment, and then read this one. You won’t be disappointed!

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Rollo, the shadow Kougra, and his owner, Konrad, walked through the town of Merriwillo, conversing in hushed voices. They were arguing about the choice that Konrad had made.

     “I can’t believe you got to make this decision ALL by yourself without even asking me!” Rollo groaned.

     “Listen, Rollo, I want to stay here as much as you do, but you know I need to get back to my job. Tell you what; we’ll visit back here in a couple of weeks. Go for a vacation. How about that?”

     “Well, I guess so if the dictator here won’t change his mind. You are no fun!”

     Konrad pushed playfully at his beloved pet. “Cheer up, old boy. We’re not leaving forever. Besides, all our belongings are at home.”

     “Yeah, I guess so…” Rollo grumbled. The two walked in silence after that. Both were very sad to leave the lovely town of Merriwillo, but it had to be done, for now at least.

     “Where are you going?” an Acara called out from the street.

     Konrad replied, “We’re leaving for now, though we may return. We leave you with best wishes!” The Acara didn’t reply, but looked strangely at them, and then smirked.

     “That was odd,” Rollo whispered.

     “No, it’s nothing. They’re just sad to see us go.” But Konrad was wrong. Every pet or human they wished farewell either smirked and laughed, or glared strangely at them, as if they knew something that Konrad and Rollo didn’t. After a while, it began to creep them out. Soon the two were practically sprinting to find the gate that the woman and her Gelert had greeted them at only a week or two ago.

     When they finally arrived at their destination, Rollo noticed that the woman and the Gelert were standing in the exact same spots as they had before. It was like neither had budged in weeks.

     Konrad smiled at her as they approached, “Well, it’s been a nice stay, but we’ll have to be taking our leave now.”

     “What do you mean?” she asked with confusion.

     “Well, we’re L-E-A-V-I-N-G. You know, going home?” Rollo spelled out for her. Rollo laughed at his joke, but the woman remained unmoved.

     The woman then chuckled, mocking them as the others had, “But why would you want to leave? Is this town not perfect?”

     “It’s nice, but we have our own home. In fact, we’ll be going now. Goodbye!” Konrad began to walk forward to pass outside the gates, but the woman stepped in front of him. The Gelert did the same to Rollo.

     “No one ever wants to leave here, for here it is perfect. Every other town will not compare to this paradise. No, you will not be going, for you have come. Therefore, you cannot leave. ”

     “Yes, we will be going. Now I don’t even know if we’ll ever return!” Konrad’s voice was rising in anger. “Who are you to tell us what to do?”

     “We,” she motioned to the Gelert, “are the gate keepers of Merriwillo. No one leaves or enters without our consent. But I am feeling good today. I will let you, as you call it, “leave.” But remember my words. No one really leaves Merriwillo. No one really escapes. I will be seeing you soon.” The woman and her Gelert stepped aside to let them pass. They both began to laugh, an evil laugh. Hurriedly, Konrad and Rollo whisked past the two, afraid they might try to stop them from leaving again. But even as the two practically ran from Merriwillo, the woman’s laugh could still be heard everywhere. Chills ran up Konrad’s and Rollo’s spine, afraid again for what might happen to them. The woman had seemed so sincere. Could she be telling the truth?

     The thought was swiftly swept from their mind. The sun was shining brightly, the clouds were puffy and blue, and the wind whistled softly, brushing locks of shaggy hair against Konrad’s face. What a beautiful day. Except for that laugh. Rollo could still hear it echoing, biting at his mind. Finally, “Konrad, what do you think that lady meant about never escaping?”

     “Don’t worry, Rollo. I’m sure she’s full of bologna. Besides, as long as we stick together, we’ll be fine.” Rollo smiled wearily at Konrad, trusting his every word. To get the laugh off his mind, he started humming that ever-familiar tune,

     “15 men on a dead man’s chest, Yo ho ho and a bottle of…”

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“So, which way do you reckon we take?” Rollo asked Konrad timidly. The two stared up at the creepy forest that they had once been lost in. He couldn’t help thinking about his first encounter with it,

     “The trees all stood extremely tall with sharp branches protruding from the trunk all the way up to the think bushy part at the top. Various weeds, small and large, smooth and prickly, dotted the forest floor. Frightening bugs and wild petpets could be heard making noises or, from the rustling leaves, simply just creeping around. No light was seen illuminating the dark space, except for a few treeless spaces where natural skylights were created. The forest boundary looked as to go on forever for no ending could be sighted. It was almost as if they were looking in at a ghost-town.”

     “Isn’t there another way around?” Rollo peeped hopefully.

     “I don’t think so. We’ll just have to try our luck and hope for the best,” Konrad tried to lift Rollo’s spirits, but failed. Konrad himself was feeling rather crummy and hopeless.

     Rollo stared at the ground once again. All of a sudden, two familiar paws were planted in front of him. Looking up, the Pirate Kougra stood before him! Yes, the same Pirate Kougra that had helped them find Merriwillo before. Rollo sprang to his paws.

     “Yes! I wished so much that you’d come back! You’re here to help us, right?”

     “Hmm, mate… help may be seen in different ways. But yes, I would say it’s helping,” Ezhno had a twinkle in his eyes that scared Rollo. However, he called to Konrad.

     “Konrad! Look who’s here to help us!” Konrad turned around and looked at Rollo. From his point of view, Rollo was talking and pointing to nothing.

     Konrad rolled his eyes and sighed, “Aren’t you a bit too old for imaginary friends?”

     “What are you talking about? Don’t you see him???”

     Konrad grew a bit angry. “Let’s not play games now. We need to make a plan.”

     “He can’t see me, young mate,” Ezhno spoke. “Humans don’t see me.”

     “Why not?”

     Ezhno laughed, the same laugh as the lady’s, “Hmm… none can truly say. But do now dwell on unneeded things. How about I get ye out of the fix now?”

     “Oh that’d be great! Please lead us anywhere but through this forest!”

     “As you wish. Just make sure your owner follows.”

     “Sure thing,” Rollo clapped his hands in happiness and turned to Konrad who was staring strangely at him, “Konrad, will you follow me? Will you trust me? Remember, I lead you out of the forest. Trust me once more. Somehow, I know I can get us out of this.”

     Konrad hesitated but nodded reluctantly after gazing deep into Rollo’s sincere eyes, “If you think you and your imaginary friend can get us out of here, then I will trust you. You have never failed me before.”

     Rollo grinned, and turned to Ezhno. “Alright, follow me then.” The Pirate Kougra began to glide away from the forest in the opposite direction of Merriwillo. Rollo and Konrad began to run to catch up, relieved that they were not traveling to Merriwillo. The woman would never find them now, not with Ezhno to protect them. But, Rollo wondered, if Ezhno was a legend of Merriwillo, why was Merriwillo such an odd town?

     After about an hour of traveling, Konrad began to yell at Rollo, who began to yell at Ezhno, “We need a break! Please, slow down or stop! We are not as strong as you!” To their relief, Ezhno slowed and soon halted. Both owner and pet fell to the ground. When they looked up, Ezhno was nowhere to be seen. Instead… the woman and her Gelert stood in front of them. Behind her were those gates, and through them was the town of… Merriwillo.

     “Greetings, once again. Did I not tell that you couldn’t escape? No, once you enter Merriwillo, there is not such a thing as “leaving.””

     Konrad and Rollo gaped. “Yes, I know it was Ezhno who brought you here. For he is our guardian of Merriwillo. You see, when Ezhno first came here and started a town with his family, they were soon besieged by roaming pirates, and never allowed to leave. Eventually, he and his family just sort of faded off. They weren’t fully alive, yet not fully gone. While Ezhno’s family decided to leave here and roam the land, Ezhno decided to stay with the town he had lived so long in. But not just stay, but also continue its growth.

     “He decided that any pet or owner to wander into this town should stay and become like he himself. A ghost, almost, not alive but not yet gone. Now, of course no one would want to live here if they knew everyone was just a shadow, so Ezhno disguised it. To normal eyes, this town would seem perfect,” as the woman spoke, she drew closer. Reaching out, she touched Rollo and Konrad lightly each with one hand. Both boys shivered coldly, for her touch was frigid, light, and creepy, almost as if she had not really touched them, “But to those who are like shadows and reside in this Merriwillo eternally, the disguise is unshielded.” She took her hand back, and stepped out of their view to let them gaze upon the town behind the gates.

     Rollo gasped in horror as his heart started racing. This was not the merry town of Merriwillo that the two had taken refuge in. It was like a… ghost-town. Everything was gray and broken. Spider webs caked the windows of the crippled buildings. Cracks covered the once shiny roads, and the gates were crumbling and dangerous. Worst of all were the other pets and owners that had lived there, who had seemed so happy and charming. They looked gaunt and faded, like shadows. No, this was not Merriwillo.

     “Yes, now you truly see the secret of Merriwillo. It is not for the faint of heart, but rather the ones who will live her for eternity,” the woman spoke again. When Konrad looked back to her, she appeared the same as the other shadowed pets. “Welcome to your new home…” She let out a crackled snicker.

     Konrad and Rollo shook their heads, “No, we aren’t staying. We have to leave now.”

     The woman’s laugh was cut off sharply, “Do you not listen? No you cannot leave. Where would you go, looking as you are? No, you belong here.” With that she took a giant leap to get behind Konrad and Rollo. With a great heave she pushed them towards the hard marble gates. Both boys shrieked, awaiting the pain that would surely come. Instead, they simply glided through the wall without a touch of pain.

     Gasping with shock, Rollo and Konrad looked at each other, ready to express what magic had befallen them, but instead gasped again. Each one had turned a transparent, light, fragile shadow, exactly like the shadow pets that inhabited Merriwillo. Without a word, Rollo reached to touch Konrad's cheek, but his hand fell through, touching nothing. With a sharp swallow, the woman spoke once more, "Now you are one us. Now you reside in Merriwillo. Now you are among the eternal..." As she stopped speaking the gates began to close, locking Konrad and Rollo, a Shadow Kougra, into the dark streets of the haunted town of Merriwillo.

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Author's Note: I hope you liked the odd ending. I happen to like this freak, mysterious endings… for, yes, this is the end for it will not be continued. Neomail me with any comments. Thanks and I hope you enjoyed!


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