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The Neopian Times Week 37 > Continuing Series > The Fine Line 2: Dreamer's End (vol. 1) - Part Six

The Fine Line 2: Dreamer's End (vol. 1) - Part Six

by gundamblaze

Episode XI: So I Defy Destiny
"I'm tired... and bored... and hot... and..." SnowOhki just kept muttering things as we crossed through the plains.

"So?" Cubix muttered back. "You're the one with ice magic, shower us with it! Shoot out some ice, and have Ritsuzen melt it!" Okay, this was getting weird. Both Cubix and Willie were actually getting good ideas.

"Okay. Hora-Gyou!" The ice shot up and Ritsuzen used his Ro-Yaru Kaen to melt it into a cool mist.

"Mmmmm... that's better... how long will this last?" Well, Sakari seemed to be enjoying it. But I promptly put them back in order.

"Guys, we don't have a lot of time for a break. Must I remind you how much time is passing in the other dimension as we speak? A few months have gone past by now! We don't have time to doodle!" Everyone looked rather depressed at what I had said. That's because they knew I was right. They all grumpily got up and we started towards the village again.

"I am so BOOOOOOORED!" Orichalkon yelled out. No sooner than that than him and SnowOhki were playing Shot for Shot. I was too tired to care.

"You know, there must be a more constructive way to spend your time," Ryo nagged.

"Huh? Did you say something, Ryo? I couldn't hear you over the sound of my fist pounding on Orichalkon," SnowOhki replied back.

"I might as well make up for that battle I lost," Orichalkon muttered. We all continued on our merry way, letting them pound on each other. Ignorance truly is bliss. Thankfully, Orichalkon was the victor this time. Now he wouldn't feel bad for getting beaten up by a girl... quite easily, I might add. SnowOhki pummeled him last time.

"Hey guys, is that the town?" Sakari asked us. It certainly looked like a town. Buildings, people, and all the other things a town was comprised of. When we approached the gates, we comprised a plan of action. Of course, who else but Sakari would create the plan.

"Okay, I'm going to look for a PC to get the new recruits. The rest of you can do whatever you want. Brad, you're going to go see the Prophet."

"Why just me?" I asked.

"Because, Valens gave you that amulet... maybe it has something to do with the Prophet." I nodded in compliance.

"All right!" Willie yelled. "While you two work, we get to walk around and slack off!" He was awfully cheerful.

"I couldn't let you work all by yourself, Sakari," said Ryo. "I'll come help you."

"Oh sure, make yourself look like a gentleman and me like a bad guy," Willie ranted.

"Yeah, that's the plan."

"Ritsuzen and I will try and get any help from the townspeople," said Kage.

"You can work all you want, I'm gonna enjoy this little stop." Willie quickly walked off, and I set out to find the Prophet.

***

"This town's pretty big Brad! This could take a while to find," Orichalkon said to me as he limply walked. He was very tired.

"I promise we'll rest as soon as we find the prophet. It's almost night, anyway. I say we'll all be sleeping here tonight. Now, keep looking around for the Prophet." I then heard a voice behind me.

"Did you say the Prophet?" I turned around to see a blue Gelert staring me in the eyes.

"Yeah, that's right. Do you know where I can find him?"

"Sure. Just go up on the wooden plank level of the town and he's in the massive tent to the left." I hadn't even noticed that half the town was on suspended planks until now. I bid the Gelert thanks and farewell, and headed up the stairs to the suspended area of town.

I eventually came across a tent with a faint glowing coming from it. The sun was almost set, and we were both extremely tired. Just as we were about to walk into the tent, a Grarrl stopped us.

"Sorry, only one at a time." Orichalkon nodded at me, and I walked in. The flaps of the tent closed, and the crystal was released from beneath a curtain.

"Hello, young one. I see a fabled human has found their way." THIS was freaky.

"You are... the Prophet? Valens wasn't joking about a giant crystal..."

"Ah yes, the one incapable of a journey. But I see different for you. Why have you come to see me, young boy?"

"I ask of your assistance in finding the gems to open the Tree of Desolation, so that I may free this world of evil."

"We shall discuss that later. I feel a strange force coming from you. I know something I feel you should know. You may wait to hear, or you can listen to what I have to say about it now."

"Tell me what you see, Prophet," I hesitantly replied.

"As you wish. Many people believe there is no such thing as Destiny, but the truth is that it does exist. However, Destiny cannot bind all people. Some people are so powerful, have such big a purpose, that Destiny cannot keep a hold on them. If the purpose is so important that it requires the person to make their own decisions, Destiny will release the chains of those people. But then there are people that Destiny does not want to release, but the force of the person is too strong, strong enough to bend reality itself. Destiny will do whatever they can to stop those people, whether it be making them turn back, or simply wiping them out. I'm afraid Destiny hasn't merely let you go. You are defying Destiny with your adventure. And Destiny will do anything it can to stop you, even if it means taking your life." I was in total shock. It was all just too much to take in. My heart was racing with fear and anxiety. "But, about the gems... I cannot locate two of them for you, but I hold one of them. I trust you will make good use of it." A glowing blue gem floated into my hands from out of the darkness. "Keep it safe."

"I will. Thank you for your assistance." When I exited the tent, everyone but Sakari was there to greet me.

"So, what'd the Prophet tell you?" Ryo asked me.

Episode XII: The Demon Strikes!
"That's all? Aw, that stinks," said Ryo.

"It's not too bad... only two more gems to go!" I couldn't tell them what the Prophet told me. It was all too much. I wonder if it was the same for them? Or was I the only one defying Destiny's laws... I would be a massive burden. "So... how's Sakari doing, Ryo?"

"Not the best... every time we try to send them the codes and stuff, they see it as a Trojan virus. It doesn't look like we'll be seeing any new allies anytime soon. I guess we should go check and find out what she's up to." I started to follow Ryo down off the planks to the lower level of the town.

"Brad," Orichalkon spoke. "Did the Prophet really tell you nothing useful?"

"Yeah... strange, isn't it? Proves Valens wrong." I didn't especially like lying to my pet, but what choice did I have? We soon came to a very sophisticated building, which seemed quite out of place in such a rural town. I saw Sakari busily typing away in the corner. I walked over to greet her.

"Any luck?" I said quickly, scaring her in the way I had hoped.

"BRAD! Don't do that! How was the meeting with the Prophet?"

"It was fine... nothing extremely useful in terms of information, but he did give me a gem we can use on the Tree of Desolation." Sakari looked at me awkwardly, like something was wrong with me. She then continued talking.

"I give up. Sorry, but I just can't get past the firewall. Looks like we'll have to finish this on our own."

It's for the best, I thought. I can't endanger any more lives than I already have.

"Stupid computer!" said Kyoutan. He then started bashing it in the side.

"Kyoutan, stop that! It's not the computers fault!" Sakari was yelling at the top of her lungs. Kyoutan looked up with a vacant face.

"Of course it is." We all sighed.

"Just... don't touch the computer, okay?" Kyoutan nodded. "Brad, can I talk to you in private for a moment?" One word came to my mind. B-U-S-T-E-D!

"Umm... sure." As we walked over to the other side of the room, Willie, Ryo, and Kage made whistling noises to mock me.

"Oh be quiet, all of ya!" Sakari yelled at them. "Now Brad, I'm going to ask you again. What did the Prophet tell you?" This wasn't going well for me.

"I told you, he didn't tell me anything."

She let out a little giggle. "You're lying. I can tell when people are lying, so don't even try it. Now, Brad, what did he really tell you?"

"... I can't tell you Sakari."

"Why not?"

"I just... can't. You'll have to accept that." I tried to walk away, but she grabbed me by the shoulder.

"Brad! Tell me what's going on now!" I quickly released myself from her.

"Leave me alone! I can't tell you!" And with that I ran out of the building, leaving Sakari, Orichalkon, everyone behind.

I'll do this on my own. I will no longer cast a burden upon these good people... my friends. I should've known they were too good of friends to let me go so easily. Orichalkon floated up to my shoulder.

"Brad... what's wrong with you? Why won't you tell us what's going on?" In a fury, I knocked him right off my shoulder onto the ground. I felt remorse for what I did, but I couldn't turn back around. I had to keep going, and rid them of me. So I ran. I ran right out of town and started searching for the gate to The Horror Shell. I knew the only one I could go to was Valens. The Prophet said as long as she didn't go on a journey, she'd be safe.

You're free, my friends... Just as I thought I was approaching The Horror Shell, I heard a girl's voice from behind me.

"Brad? Is that you?" I turned around to see Laura, standing there with her Shadowed Shoyru, Dracosis.

"Laura? What are you doing here!?"

"Well..." And so she explained everything about the Neomails, NeoP0rt and the trip through the Ethereal Plains.

***

"Laura, you have to get away from me. NOW!" I didn't have time to chat. "Go to the town over there, you'll find some others like you. But I have something to do, and I have to do it on my own."

"Brad? What's wrong? I came all this way, and now you won't even talk to me!" It was obvious she wasn't going anywhere. I had to think of some way to lose her. Then I remembered what a strange allergy she had to the smell of leather. It would make her drowsy to the point that she just fell asleep. The jewel on the amulet Valens gave me was surrounded by leather. I put the amulet up to Laura's face, and before she knew what was happening, she was asleep in my arms. I set her down on the ground.

"HEY! What'd you do to Laura, demon!?" Dracosis yelled at me.

"Relax, I just put her to sleep so I can get away. Take care of her, would ya?" Dracosis nodded, and I ran right through the dimensional warp to The Horror Shell.

"Valens? Are you here!? Darn... oh well. I guess I'll just put this gem in the socket." I quickly ran to the tree and inserted the gem. "There... two to go." Just then, I heard Orichalkon's voice strike my ears.

"Brad! Stop running!" I was cornered. So I just dropped to my knees and listened.

"Brad..." Sakari said. "Why are you doing this?" That's when the ground started to shake.

"Guys, I don't wanna alarm anyone, but I think we're in trouble!" Willie yelled over the loud shaking. As I looked up, I saw a massive black hole open in the sky. As I stepped back, closer to the group, a group of black claws emerged from the void. And they jumped at us.

"This can't be happening!" Sakari yelled. Everything was happening so fast. I knew some of us were already gone, but I didn't know who! And that's when I saw the claw coming towards me.

"Brad, look out!" Ryo yelled as he jumped in front of me. The claw that was originally aimed for me took him instead. I was the only one left. The arms were looking weak, and they retreated.

"No... I knew this would happen... Destiny is taking them all away from me! Orichalkon, Sakari, they're all gone! And it's all my fault!"

And so I stayed there, on my knees, thinking about my lost friends.

To be continued... one day.

Previous Episodes

The Fine Line 2: Dreamer's End (vol. 1) - Part One

The Fine Line 2: Dreamer's End (vol. 1) - Part Two

The Fine Line 2: Dreamer's End (vol. 1) - Part Three

The Fine Line 2: Dreamer's End (vol. 1) - Part Four

The Fine Line 2: Dreamer's End (vol. 1) - Part Five

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