A Little Friendly Poetry Contest Advice What I will give you are little tidbits I've picked up from both other people, and from entering well over 100 poems myself.
Agent of the Sway: Departure - Part Eight "Commander," Altador said with a nod. "I'm glad you got here so soon. We're dealing with a magical enemy similar to the minions of the Darkest Faerie. Multiple forms, unknown numbers, unknown source."
Of Menaces, Hopes and Icky Space Food: Part Five "In this corner, a carefully planned takeover with high-grade blaster supplies and probably trained warriors. In the other corner, a kid with a mop. And you didn't bring your mop."