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The Neopian Times Week 148 > Continuing Series > The Thunderbolts: Part Three

The Thunderbolts: Part Three

by yellowlabs765

Saturdays were usually Montana's favorite day: the freedom, the spare time, the long hours of practice with his friends. This Saturday was different.

     A gentle rain pounded outside the garage. Montana sat motionless in the dim light of the

     single lamp that illuminated the entire garage, head rested in his paws, a large yellow envelope resting in his lap. A downhearted look was drawn on the Gelert's face. He knew he had to tell his friends the truth about the envelope. But how could he tell his friends the truth? The truth hurts. And when you have to tell your friends the truth, they can wind up becoming your worst enemies.

     Montana ran a claw across the words. "To the Owner of Montana. Open Immediately--Important." He sighed heavily. Sure, he was happy that he was on the road to stardom, and sure, he was glad he had fans. And sure, all that's well and good, but pushing your friends aside...that's a whole other story.

     There was a soft knock at the garage door. "Montana!" the voice yelled. "Open up! It's pouring out here!"

     The Gelert hesitated for a bit. He couldn't let them in. Whatever, he told himself, the news can wait until tomorrow. No, that wouldn't be right. No, I should...Ugh! What should I do? Open the door, or leave my friends to freeze in the rain? Montana slunk down from his stool and slowly slid open the door.

     A Mynci, Acara and Eyrie were all huddled together under a large yellow and pink umbrella, somber expressions spread across each of their faces. "Hey Monty," Tansy whispered. "Can we come in?"

     "Uh..." The Gelert rubbed the back of his neck nervously, his eyes wandering. "Sure. Come on in. Take a seat."

     "Thanks," Mike said, "took you long enough." The Neopets shoved past Montana and sat in a large circle on the concrete garage floor.

     Montana walked over to the circle and sat down beside Tansy. "So, how's your Sat-"

     "Montana," Tansy interrupted, "we're not too pleased with you right now. Why did you leave us hanging yesterday?"

     "W...what do you mean?"

     "You just sashayed out of that skating rink like we weren't even important to you," Wynn spoke up, his eyes angry narrow slits. "You didn't tell us anything about the agent or what he said to you."

     Montana sighed as he covered his eyes in exasperation. "I'm sorry, okay? I just had a lot to do here, okay?."

     "Whatever," Tansy replied angrily, "nothing's ever more important than you friends. We were all planning to go out and celebrate."

     "Yeah," Mike blabbed, "I spent weeks working at Tansy's owner's bakery just to earn money to go out and eat someplace."

     "I'm really sorry," Montana regretted.

     "Hmph." Tansy wrapped herself tightly in a large purple blanket she found in the corner of the garage. "So, exactly what did the agent tell you about the band?"

     "Well..." Montana cleared his throat and cracked a weak grin. "I got accepted."

     "Okay, that's neat," Wynn reasoned, "but what about the rest of us?"

     Montana gulped silently. A large knot began to shape in his stomach as all of the pets looked him in the eyes. "Well...I got accepted."

     "So? What does that mean?"

     "It means that...I...got accepted."

     He knew it. Montana was expecting it; the long awkward silence, the knot in his stomach, the guilt he'd have to face. But the load was off his chest. He told his friends the truth.

     Tansy's face began to twitch as if she were going to cry. "But...Montana, how could you?"

     "Look, I talked to the guy and..." Tansy left the circle and began to storm out of the garage. Montana stepped in front of the pink Acara. "...he said that there was only a spot for one guy in the new band he's managing, and..."

     The Acara began pulling the door open. Montana grabbed her shoulders in frustration, whirred her around and began shaking her. "Tansy, listen to me! It's all he could manage!"

     "I did listen to you!" Tansy shrieked, her red cheeks swelling as tears flowed freely from her rosy eyes. "That's what got us into this whole muddle!"

     "Tansy..." Montana began to cry as well. "It's all he could do. I'm sure of it."

     "If it was all he could do," Tansy rebutted, "then why didn't you turn him down? Why give up your friends for your moment of fame?"

     "I'm..." Montana's voice began to grow deeper. "I'm not giving you up!" His lips began to purse in anger. "It's not like everything I do has to be about you! It looks like I'm not the only selfish one around here."

     The Acara's eyes were filled with fear as she raised he paw to strike her friend. Montana grabbed her paw in the nick of time.

     "Don't hit me!" Montana demanded as he shoved the Acara's paw to her side. "All you've ever talked about is our friendship, our band. Well, if all of you have a problem with it, then why are you the only one making a big fuss about it?"

     "Because we've been to scared to talk about it until now," Wynn hissed as he rose from the floor and walked by Tansy's side. "The truth is, you are letting us all down. And if you're turning against Tansy..." The Mynci tenderly grasped the Acara's small paw in his and wept silently. "...Then I'm standing with her."

     "Me too," Mike said. "I hate your selfish attitude. You never gave us snack time, and I'm sick and tired of it. You always work us too hard just so you can get your gig." He scooped the Acara's paw to his side. "I'm standing against you, too!"

     "But guys, wait!" Montana crumbled under the pressure. He began to weep loudly. "You...you can't leave the band. You just can't leave. We've all worked hard to get this far. Please. Don't leave."

     "We may have worked to get this far," Wynn rasped, "but you're the only one benefiting from it all."

     "I...I..." Montana's face balled up tightly as he shoved the Mynci to the ground. "You just stop talking! I'm not even done talking yet!" Montana sniffled twice and wiped his eyes. "Now, just listen. The band doesn't have to split apart..."

     "Montana," Tansy pleaded as she tugged on the Gelert's arm.

     "...Because I've already arranged to solve this problem..."

     "Montana..."

     "...And I asked my brother to take over the band so..."

     "Montana, listen! We're not taking this anymore!" Tansy snatched her umbrella from the floor. "We've heard enough. We all know you're going to ditch us. It's what we'd expect from you. So right now, I'm officially saying this." The Acara snatched a skinny silver bracelet from her wrist. A gilded thunderbolt was inscribed into the thin metal plate in the middle of the chain clanked softly as it dropped to the hard floor. "I'm quitting the Thunderbolts."

     Wynn stepped forward and dropped his bracelet on the floor. "Me too."

     Mike shrugged. "I lost mine, but me too."

     Montana began to cry again. "Fine then. If you're quitting, then you have no business in my garage! Get out!" He opened the door furiously.

     "We will," Tansy backfired as the pets paraded out of the door. "And I call myself an idiot for ever liking you."

     Montana gave the Acara a blank stare, then closed the garage door. It was over. For good.

     The Gelert looked around the barren garage. It looked so large now, so open, now that the drums and keyboard were no longer there.

     Montana walked to the back corner of the room. A shard of syrup-stained glass lay lonely on the cement. The Gelert cradled it lovingly in his paws, stuffed it in his pocket, and sighed, "The only piece I have left of you guys."

***

A week passed. The sun shined brightly through the tall trees as birds began to twitter and sing. A pink Acara slung a guitar over her shoulder. "Five! Six! Seven! Eight!"

     A loud beat began to ring out. It was just like it was in the garage; loud, electrifying, exciting, but this time, it was much slower. The Acara closed her eyes and began singing:

     "There's sickness and mugging, there's fixes and scraps;

     There's all sorts of unsettling and trying mishaps;

     But I know from experience, as a matter of fact,

     That's there's nothing worse than being stabbed in the back.

     "I've been betrayed, my heart is broken;

     I begged and pleaded, but he has spoken;

     He's mulish and stubborn, his heart is like stone,

     He ditched us forever, he left us alone."

     Tansy's head swung slowly as each mellow note soared above the thick branches of the trees and vanished into thin air. As the sun shone warmly on her face, her troubles began to flee from her. A heavy weight was lifted off of her shoulders as he strummed her guitar.

     "Hold it!" Wynn called out. Tansy's eyes snapped open as she glared at her Mynci friend. "Why are we singing this song? It's about Montana!"

     "Yeah," Mike agreed. "No one wants to sing about him anymore! There's no need to obsess about that son of a snob."

     "But," Tansy whined as she dabbed here eyes, "it makes me feel better if I sing away my problems. It's better than punching something."

     "Really?" Mike held his large stomach with pride and beamed. "If I have a problem, I just eat it away."

     "Figures," Tansy said. "Come on, lets start over. Five! Six!--"

     "No," Wynn argued. "I'm not singing this song. Let's sing Phantom Of The Concert, please?"

     "No!" Tansy wiped her forehead. "It's too hot to argue with you guys. We're going to play--"

     "If you're going to boss us around like that big, black, stuck-up, curly-eared, googly-eyed bully, then I'm leaving!" Wynn tossed his drumsticks onto the plush grass of Tansy's front lawn.

     "Me too," Mike said.

     "Ugh!" Tansy stormed over to the two pets as they left the house. "Fine! Leave!"

     "We will," Wynn said.

     "Fine! Run off to your little buddy Montana, traitors!"

     "We're not going to see Montana," Mike boasted, "we're going to start our own band!"

To be continued...

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The Thunderbolts: Part One

The Thunderbolts: Part Two

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