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The Neopian Times Week 142 > Articles > “Once Upon a Time”: A N00b’s Guide to Writing -- Part 2: RolePlay

“Once Upon a Time”: A N00b’s Guide to Writing -- Part 2: RolePlay

by neodonnaz

ROLE PLAYING BOARD – Hey! It’s me, neodonnaz, and I’m back again with part two of my little series-article-thing… amajig. I am really, REALLY sorry I took so long but it really couldn’t be helped… Before you start shouting at me, I know role-playing isn’t writing stories, and that it’s not even technically writing…

Well, actually, it sort of is. I mean, you are not actually writing a story to print out and share, but role-playing is one of the most valuable things any potential writer could learn to do. You get to fine-tune the way you write, and interact with other people, and really become someone else. It’s a way of developing your personal style. So that is why I feel I need to include it.

So… let’s do this thingy!

1. Glossary

Once again, glossary is important—and the role-playing board has a different glossary than the NW. So here it is:

Regular—Same definition—someone who appears regularly on the board.

RP/RPG—Role-play, role-playing/role-playing game.

Mary-Sue/Gary-Sue—Ugh, I hate these! Mary-Sues are female characters that are perfect in every way. Here is an example of a Mary-Sue: “Boys goggle at Mary-Sue as she walks up to the board to calculate Einstein’s theory.” Gary-Sues are the male equivalent. NEVER EVER create a Mary/Gary-Sue. IF YOU DO YOU WILL BE KICKED OFF EVERY SINGLE BOARD.

M00f/N00b—A whiny person who reports people for stupid reasons, begs, or posts disgustingly off-topic boards. For more, see “Despie”.

Power-playing—Technically controlling other people’s characters. I.e., “Bob slashed Bill’s head off with a sword.” Bill’s creator never gave you permission to do that, did he? Say, “Bob slashed toward Bill’s neck with a sword…” Bill’s creator can decide whether to kill Bill.

Making your character invincible, with unlimited powers. (“Joe threw a fireball at Bob, and blocked Bob’s razor attack with an invincible shield he was carrying.”)

Despie—Despies create the Mary/Gary-Sues, and ruin all the topics. They usually force love or gore into the plot. They power-play and god-mode. (Just one or two of these works, too.)

Literate—A person who tries to have rps that are not totally predictable, and who manages to create good topics and characters with interesting flaws.

Charrie—An abbreviation for character.

**Author’s Note: Now, I saw some people on the NW board the other day getting upset about my previous article for the stereotypes (Literate, m00f, despie). And I do think people should help other people who are not as good at writing or who don’t grasp certain things—it is a literate’s responsibility, in a sense, because everyone deserves to be able to write the best they will ever be able to write—but there are certain things (chatspeak poems…) that no one will be able to like you for. Same here—there have been so many articles about rp-ing, so people should know not to power-play, god-mode, or use Mary/Gary-Sues. One more thing: Regs aren’t necessarily popular, just people seen around a lot.

2. What topic?

Like the structures of poetry, there are a million different topics you could choose to rp. Here are some of the more common ones:

Medieval—Basically, medieval is usually set in the woods. Elves? No—elves are despie-ish (unless you go about it in the right way, which is REALLY hard to do). Wood spirits? Only if you develop a good character—we’ll cover that later. Evil people from the Shadow Clan? Sounds good. Evil is always needed.

Camelot-esque—We-ell… this isn’t the most popular topic, but it’s my favorite, anyway. “Camelot-esque” is my term for medieval not set in the woods— medieval with (preferably) realistic, non-fantastical people, set in/near actual houses. Another type of medieval.

Fanfiction—Well, fanfiction is being one of your favorite characters from a certain movie, book, etc., and acting as them. You could do this the limited way I see most of the time—where you just follow the plot you already know—or you could do it a better way: going into the past or future and rp-ing in that setting, at that time. It’s really a lot of fun!

Neopet RP—Kind of simple: You take your neopet, give them a personality, and act as them. You don’t have to go into the Haunted Woods or skip off merrily towards the Healing Springs… they could be exploring the far side of Neopia, or just reading in their Neohome. This type of RP is almost long-gone (I never see it anymore at least) but a lot of fun.

Before you get mad at me for not including a certain topic, I know there are millions of other topics out there. Some of them I don’t even understand! So… moving to the next part: characters.

3. Character-building

Creating characters is one of the most important parts of rp-ing. I’m going to use my character, Vinnifer, as an example. So let’s start:

What’s your topic?—If you like mostly fanfic rp-ing, then you won’t need to create a character—you just need to choose one. If you’re doing Neopets RP, then you just need to choose one of your pets and create a personality. Sometimes people need servants, lords, whatever, so you could just choose one of those. I mainly like to do Medieval and Camelot-esque Medieval.

Appearance—Looks aren’t everything? Guess again. You need to create a realistic appearance for your character so that other people will be able to paint a mental picture. Maybe they’ll say, “Bob reaches out to touch Sue’s long brown hair.” Well that’s fine… unless Sue’s hair is short and blonde. Also, some characters (though not necessarily the actual people) may be prejudiced against blonde hair. They need to know if they have to act that way toward Sue. Vinnifer, for example, has long, flowing honey-blonde hair, very fair skin, and delicate features. She is usually found in some lovely, long, flowing dress.

Flaws—Your charrie’s personality is the most important thing in creating a character…almost. And every good character has flaws. (Remember, Mary/Gary-Sues are perfect BUT nobody likes them.) Vinnifer is vain, selfish, spoiled and stuck up. You don’t need to make your character that horrible, though. Maybe she’s scared of… everything. Maybe he is sensitive and not very strong but tries to hide that by acting macho. Maybe they have huge egos. Think of something interesting!

Balancing the personality—You need to think of something good about the character, unless it is a character who grew up in a world where no one knew what good was. The personality needs to be balanced. Vinnifer’s good traits are her history and appearance, though fine things bring out the best in her. You know what I mean; the character has to balance out.

A history—All characters need a bit of a history. Vinnifer’s history is that she is the daughter of the King of Bain. She wanted a new horse but her father wouldn’t get her one, so she ran away and now is trying to find her way back to her castle. By history I basically mean a biography. Ask yourself where the charrie came from, ask yourself as many questions as you can think about your character… and answer them! Something to do that is really fun is to interview your own character. You will know your character better and be able to show it better.

So, we’ve created a nice character, and we want to try her out. On to the boards!

4. Using your character

You’ve chosen your topic. You’ve created a character: Time to be your character!

Name: Vinnifer of Bain

Parents: King and Queen of Bain

Flaws: Vain, selfish, stuck up, bratty—too used to being a princess.

Appearance: Long, flowing, white-blonde hair, with wide, grey-blue eyes. Delicate features, including a dainty nose and visible cheekbones.

Good traits: Respectful and kind to anyone who might be her class or above; finery brings out the best in her.

Bio: Vinnifer was riding with her father once, and she complained about her horse. Her father insisted she would not be getting a new horse, so she ran away, but is now trying to find her way back to the castle.

Time to be your character!

Enter the right topic, read the previous posts and always ask before posting (unless specified NOT to ask: then don’t!)—Okay, this is important. If you barge into the wrong topic without reading the previous posts, everyone will stare.

Let people know if you’re OOC—Always let other people know if you are talking out of character. Surround it with the proper phrases:

OOC| We need more bad guys. |BIC

OOC means “out of character” and it goes before an out-of-character post. After the post, put BIC (“Back in character”), press the “return” or “enter” key, and continue in character. You could also put ((double parentheses like this)) around an OOC part of a post.

Show your character through its actions—One-line posts (referring to “in-character”) are so hated, sometimes “No one-liners” is a requirement. Sometimes it’s because people just write, “Vinnifer walked over and said ‘hi.’” If you show your character through their movements, then people will better know how to interact with your character and you probably won’t have a one liner. We know Vinnifer, so how about, “Vinnifer stopped and looked. She started to her feet and strode over gracefully, nose in the air. ‘Hello,’ she announced importantly.” That’s better.

Get inside your character’s head.—Since you should know your character well, you should be able to know what they’re thinking. This is important. Pause, and think about your character. Ask yourself what your character would do in the current situation. Talk like them. Walk like them. You’ll understand your character better, and you’ll better be able to discuss your character’s words and actions.

PAY ATTENTION!—It is important that you pay attention. This goes back to the first part about not barging in—you need to know what’s happening so that you can use it in your posts.

Well, that’s really it. Have fun!

Once again:

See you next week!

I’m out of time and space here, but thanks for reading! See you next time!

Author’s note: If you want to rant or rave about my article please Neomail me, but please do it if you have a point to make or a question to ask. That’s all, though, and thank you! See you next time!


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