2/10- First Glance; My first impression was BOO! Yes, I am a Twilight fan but this layout is HORRIBLE! I am really sorry for this comment but I really hate this layout. Pink doesn't match Twilight at all. I only gave you these 2 points for the layout. It would look a lot better if you got a petpage layout with a banner of Twilight and then ton down the background image with maybe like a light grey that had the words Twilight on it.

4/10-The layout; Again, I really hate the layout! Pink and Twilight do not go well at all. Twilight is about Vampires so pink? Really not a great choice! You also have no text at all but a little bit in the affies and credits. Get some text up on that page! The page doesn't even scroll. ;[

1/20-Content; Okay. I was REALLY disapointed when I see Your Graphics You only have two little tiny banners with NO! coding! That is really sad! You say these are your graphics but I can tell that you got them both off photobucket or another uplpading site! It's okay to get them off there but dont say they are yours, put you got them off photobucket or wherever you got them.

5/10-Spelling and Grammer; It took me a minute to understand this

I don't take credit of making this, but i do take credit of editing this. Oh and I can't forget PURE OBSESSION for her awesome music on my other pages!

That to me doesn't make since. If you didn't make it put who did make it if you made it put that you did make it! Also I had to deducted a lot of these points because you have barely any text at all. That makes your site look un-finished. ;[

5/20-Unique; I really do not see anything unique about your site! You have 2 uncoded graphics, no welcoming message, but you do have a navigation bar and fanmail.

2/10-Extra's; You have no extra's execpt for the fanmail and I read that fanmail and it''s not even about your site!! That's about your lookup. Put that on your lookup but not on your site.

10/10-Music; Good! No music!

5/5-Affies;Do you have affies?

2/5-Other; I did neomail you and tell you that your site looks unfinished and it really is. Not only does it look that way I am feeling it is. Please neomail me for any help that you would need and I will be glad to help you because I know how you feel, check out my graphics site that I have and if you see anything on mine that you wont help on like the coding just neomail me!

36/100-Total! Your site has a lot of room for improvement. Neomail me and I will give you all the help I can then I will re-review it! Good try though!


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