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Lemon Cupcake This is the basic review. We look at the coding, spelling, and the overall idea of the site.
Chocolate Cupcake This is a sort of "first impressions" review. What do I think when I first see the site? Does the layout look good? Is it too short? Too long?
Confetti CupcakeThis type of review looks mainly at the content. We proofread and check spelling. We also look at how you sound when you talk on your site.
Red Velvet Cupcake
This review is very elaborate. It covers all aspects of your site: Is the layout messy? Is your spelling bad? Do your links work? What is the quality of your graphics?
Just be aware that this review might take awhile.
Carrot CupcakeThis is a very fast review, to be used possibly when you're short on time. I point out pros & cons, what I (and possibly others) like and don't like.
Chocolate Chip This review is my personal favorite; It is 100% custom! You decide what I judge: Will it be graphics, content, layout, or something else? Your choice!
Ice Cream Cupcake The Ice Cream review mainly judges your graphics and links. (If they work or not) I will also look at the quality of images and buttons (if any.)
These are just extras you can add to your review style. :3
SprinklesBy using the Sprinkles topping you are asking me to be less harsh. I am a bi of a harsh rater, so I recommend this review for those a tad bit more sensitive than others. ;)
Chocolate Shavings The Chocolate Shavings topping makes me EXTRA HARSH. I will use harsh words, yell in your face, and demand you fix everything that is wrong.
Rainbow Frosting This topping gives your site the ability to be the featured site! Recommended for young sites that need visitors. Please do not use this extra for pet applications. :3
A la mode Adding ice cream to your cupcake automatically takes you off the rankings list.
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Application for Grueno 88%
Order: Confetti Cupcake
Toppings: Chocolate Shavings
One of the only criticisms I have is that there is nothing to criticize! I do have a few notes for you, however:
*I think it would make it easier for the reader if you provided some sort of navigation. I realize that you are not the best at coding, but there are plenty of guides out there that can help you.
* The likes/dislikes section is empty, at lease from what I could see :/
This sentance: "Hello, Allie, and welcome to my application for Greuno," I suggest you replace Allie with #visitor, but all in caps, so it would look like this: "Hello, guest, and welcome..." This makes the reader feel welcome whoever they are.
Rue will always be kept fed, watered, and happy.
Instead of saying this, you should say something like
"Rue would be treated like all my current pets:
She will always be kept fed, watered, and happy."
Fosters roll their eyes at applications who say their
pets wil be fed, watered, etc.
leaving her stranded far behind." I found this sentance
hard to read,you should try re-wording it.
I am a major fan of the Hunger Games series"
HUNGER GAMES FTW! okay, I had to say that. :POverall, your application was very nice. There was a bit of room for improvement but not much was needed. I give you an 88%! I hope you get Rue ;)
The cool fun fair (guild) 80%
Order: Lemon Cupcake
The layout is good and the theme is cute.
All of your links work great!
The sparkly green "welcome" sign on the side goes a bit outside the text box, you should probably resize it.
The background of the poll is black and makes
the poll impossible to read; I think the color
should be different on that part (If possible)
I can't see the rest of the guild but
I bet it's just as cute as the homepage.
Overall, the guild is very cute. There is room for improvement, but it is very nice. I give you an 80%.
Order: Red velvet cupcake
Toppings: Rainbow Frosting
When I see your site the first thing I feel is, just Welcome. It is truly beautiful and welcoming, and you can tell what the purpose of the site is wiithout having to read too much. It is great that you have a layout request site; there seems to be a lack of those from what I've seen, but I'm not sure. On to the review!
Layout- Very pretty, I like the color scheme. The sidebar is conveniently placed and easy to use.
Content- I found n spelling or grammar mistakes. All text is easy to find and read.
The color scheme for the text fits well with the color scheme of the layout itself; another good sign!
The text in the text boxes is almost white and hard to read. Although this doesn't matter as much as the text of the actual page, I suggest you make it black or blue.
Graphics- This is the most important part of the site, isn't it? ;) All the graphics have great quality. I found no broken links on the page either.I give you 98%. Your site is lovely, simple, and easy to use. ;)
Adopt Today Rating
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1. Sunshine: 98%
2. App for "Rue:" 88%
3. Lucy's Shields: 85%
4. App for "Toot:" 78%
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Lucy's Custom Shields 85%
Toppings: SprinklesLayout: I thinks the layout is magnificent. Even though it is a premade, it fits in well with the mood of the site, and the color scheme is great, too. The navigation and links work magnificently ;)
Content: Content is also great. You make the reader feel welcome. There are no awkward sentances in your introduction and the instructions are clear as glass. Your code, which I tested, works perfectly.
The selection of shields, however, isn't very large. It would be a much more appealing page if you either a)Added more Shields, or b)Linked to a separate page with the shields on it.
Graphics: Your graphics, especially the shields, are very high quality. You gave me a link to a page with the future link back buttons/banners, and they are short, sweet, and to the point.Overall, your site is very pleasant to view and easy to use. I give you an 85%! ;)
Pet App for "Toot" 78%
Order: None :PLayout: The layout is very sweet and simple. It is very well thought out and clean, and the background doesn't hurt me eyes. (That is common in pet apps, so that's a good sign ;)
Content: At the end of each section, there is quite a bit of empty space, which, if possible, you should delete. You describe your pets very well. You also treat Toot like he is already part of your family, something that all fosters love!
Your art and graphics are high quality and easy to look at.Overall, your application is very nice. I found no major flaws in it, and it is nice and long. (Which is good, since the competition for UC's is crazy.) I give you 78% :)
Adopt Today Rating
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