ON HIATUS
Ok, schools been really busy for me, so I have decided to go on hiatus for a little while. Reviews are closed, and I'm sorry to everyone on the waiting list, but I just don't have much time. Affies and directories leave me up, as I will be back soon. Thanks for the cooperation.

-Mal





Welcome to Mallowy Reviews




Welcome to Mallowy Reviews! This is a review site run by Mal. Mallowy Reviews was founded on August 23, 2009. Here you can submit your site to me, and I will critique it, by telling you how you can improve it to make it even better! Here at Mallowy Reviews, there is no limit to how great your site can be!

Blog


9/18 - Fixed the layout to work with the glitch! I also cleared the waiting list!
9/16 - I deleted some of the old updates, because the box was getting too cluttered.
9/15 - The glitch is over! I reviewed Sunny Dazy and I'm trying to add all of the reviews and such that I've completed, so be patient please! Anyway, I had to revamp the layout because TNT didn't fix the glitch completly, but it looks pretty much the same, besides the navigation. I hope you all like it, and I'm trying to get everything back to normal!
9/8 - We are now the featured site at The Daily Neopian Inquirer! I also reviewed Truth, today.
9/6 - Yay! We have the new layout, number four! Thanks to everyone who voted, you should feel proud ^^ . Anyway, we got a few new affiliates today and got reviewed by Mystical! Also, for now instead of choosing the layout, you can neomail me tips, suggestions, or fanmail and I will post it under the help out section!
8/23 - Grand opening! Yay! Got 1 new affie

Rules

1. Use the application
2. Link back before, during and after the review. If I don't see a link back after one week, your review will be deleted.
3. Please, no complaining. You asked for my opinion and I am giving it to you.
4. When I say "anything else?" you say "snarf".
5. I do not do re-reviews.
6. I do not do off-neo sites, screenies, adoption applications, or about me pages.


Link Back


Button made by
Futago



Button made by Dee Star Buttons



Button by Paprika



Button by Juicy Buttons



Guestbook



Since 9/23/09

Site of the Day

click it. I dare you.
This auctually kept me entertained for awhile. How long will you click the chokato for?

Apply for an award



Reviews are....Open/Closed

You want to get reviewed? Okay!

All you have to is neomail this to me!


- SEND IT -


Waiting List



Grading


Layout...?/20
Layout is very important to me. Did you make the layout? Is it premade? Do the colors match?

Organization...?/10
Is your site easy to navigate through?

Sitely...?/20
Do you have a good amount of affies and listings? Do you have 2+ link back buttons?

Content...?/30
Is the information sufficient? Will it help out the average neopian?

Grammar...?/10
Are there spelling errors?

Updates...?/5
Do you update frequently? When was your last update?

Counters...?/5
Do you have any?

Total...?/100
you need 90/100 to get the award (:







Reviews


Average Score: 84%
Reviews: 24

Fresh Unique Shields


I'm sorry but you did not earn an award. You got a score of 89/100. Let me explain...
Please take the award down from my last review, as you did not earn it this time
Layout - 16/20 Ok, the layout isn't too impressive, kind of boring if you ask me. There's not much color to it; in fact, the only color is the pink elephant in the corner of the table, and the font. You should add a background, or atleast a more colorful banner.
Organization - 20/20 You have good navigation, but when you hover over the links, the text gets HUGE, which is so annoying.
Sitely -18/20 Some of your affiliates have a blue border, and they're all different sizes. You should require size 88x31 buttons, or resize them yourself like I do.
Content - 20/20 Your shields are amazing! Plus they're is so much variety! Keep up the great work!
Grammar - 8/10 For some reason, you never capitalize your I's. For example.."Wow i have not posted updates", " Any way i have been working on the new site", or "And i have been doing this request". It looks very unprofessional.
Updates - 4/5 You update every few days, but try to update more frequently.
Counters - 3/5 You only have one type of counter; get the other one from whos.among.us.
Award: no


Dark Silver Mist Premades



I'm sorry but you did not earn an award. You got a score of 71/100. Let me explain...
Layout - 18/20 The colors match, and they work well with the name of your site, but you should get a banner! Also, you have to scroll to the right to get to your content, which is awfully annoying.
Organization - 20/20 Everything is very easy to find, thanks to your navigation sections! Nice job!
Sitely -4/20 Whats going on? Your site was so good until you got to this section! You have no affies, and you were listed at no directories! How are people supposed to find your site when its not listed anywhere!? Also, your only link back button looks like it was made quickly on paint, and the font is really hard to see. If you need any help finding any directories, feel free to neomail me and I'll give you some links.
Content - 19/20 Your css is really good! Make more please! You definatley have some talent and great potential! Keep working at it!
Grammar - 10/10 No mistakes!
Updates - 0/5 No updates...
Counters - 0/5 No counters...
Award: no


Sunny Daze Adopt a Newbie




I'm sorry but you did not earn an award. You got a score of 66/100. Let me explain...
Layout - 15/20 The layout is premade so you got five points off automatically. Plus, it looks like you didn't edit it at all. You should atleast get a banner, to show your personality a bit! But, the colors are bright and cheerful, which is nice to see, especially with an adopt a newbie program!
Organization - 17/20 You have links to Neopia, but not around your site. That would be really helpful to navigate around. Also, why is the credits link different from all the others? Is it because you're trying to get it to stand out? If so, give it its own section! Most sites do that to make sure everyone sees it.
Sitely -7/20 You only have one link back button, one directory listing, and one affiliate. This is not the best i've seen. You need to get more of each. Maybe advertise that you need affies on the Help Chat? Or apply to some button making sites for some animated buttons.
Content - 15/20 You don't really have any content, besides the rules and such. I would suggest making a list of everyone who applied to be mentors and newbies, and possibly a list of successful matches. You could also have a section where newbies can say how much they love their mentor!
Grammar - 7/10 Under your rules for newbies section, the numbers aren't lined up right. For example, it says rules two and three in the same line. Another mistake is in the newbies' rule number two. It says "2. ...if s/he doesn't, elaborate :)" It should say she/he, instead if s/he.
Updates - 5/5 You're updating frequently, and you have useful updates!
Counters - 0/5 You have no counters D:
Award: no

Twisted Shrooms


Congratulations! You've won the Gnarly Guide Award!. Pick it up at You got a score of 90/100. Let me explain...
Layout - 17/20 The layout is pretty good. Its easy on the eyes, and the background matches the mushroom theme! Plus, you made it yourself.
Organization - 19/20 I'm so glad you have that navigation section because I would never want to have to scroll with that teeny tiny scrollbar all the way down your page. But, there are a lot of links in the navigation . Could you possibly remove some less important links, or combine sections?
Sitely -17/20 Your affies, reviews, and link back buttons are great, but you're not listed anywhere from what I can see! Get your site listed at directories; there are plenty of them out there, so you should have no trouble finding any.
Content - 20/20 Woah. Great job! Your site is so full of information about shrooms, fungus, and toadstools! I have no suggestions for your content, just keep up the great work!
Grammar - 10/10 You're spelling and grammar was great!
Updates - 3/5 You don't update very frequently. Sometimes you go 15 days without an update!
Counters - 4/5 You have a "visitor #..." counter, but you should also get an online counter.
Award: yes!


Truth


Congratulations! You've won the Radical Reviewer Award! You got a score of 90/100. Let me explain...
Layout - 17/20 The layout is premade, but it looks like you edited it by adding a nice background and banner. The background isn't distracting from your content, and the banner doesn't look pixelly or stretched. Nice job.
Organization - 18/20 You have links to each review, but not to the other features of your site. You should also have links to how to get reviewed, affiliates, etc. It would make your site a lot easier to navigate through.
Sitely -16/20 You have a small amout of each section. You need more affies(I would say a good amount is 15-20), and you need to be listed at more directories. I also noticed one of your directories, Infinity Listings, has closed. You have two link back buttons, but I would get two more so you have more of a variety.
Content - 20/20 Your reviews are long, and they have helpful comments. You really know what you're talking about when you are reviewing sites! Keep up the good work!
Grammar - 10/10 You're spelling and grammar was great!
Updates - 5/5 It looks like you update pretty frequently.
Counters - 4/5 You have a "visitor #..." counter, but you should also get an online counter. Plus, the visitor counter doesn't match the rest of your site.
Award: yes!


Booktastic Book Bonanza


Reviewed 9/7
I'm sorry but you did not earn an award. You got a score of 83/100. Let me explain...
Layout - 18/20 The background is very distracting, and it makes the bright orange text hard to read, and extremely hard on the eyes.
Organization - 17/20 You should get a layout that has two columns so that it is easier to navigae around. You could have all of your books in a main column, and your affiliates, listings, and reviews in another column. I see you have navigation links, but I almost missed them. Make them stand out more by adding a header.
Sitely -15/20 You only have one link back button. I would say a good amount would be atleast 3, so there is more of a variety for your viewers to choose from. You only have 5 affiliates; why not more? Also, some of your affiliates have that ugly border. Remember to add the border=0 code.
Content - 20/20 Your site content is great! Its so helpful to anyone who is looking for that Booktastic Book Award! I also like how you group the books by price, so that its easier to find a book you may be looking for. I would also suggest, that after grouping them by price, put them in alphabetical order. You could also say somewhere that if you press "CTRL + F", then you can search for a book. Finally, I would also link to the Booktastic Book Shop somewhere.
Grammar - 10/10 You're spelling and grammar was great!
Updates - 3/5 You say when the last update was, but what was it?. You should keep a list of all of your updates.
Counters - 0/5 You don't have any counters…
Award: no


Moo!


Reviewed 9/6
I'm sorry but you did not earn an award. You got a score of 83/100. Let me explain...
Layout - 13/20 Its premade, and it looks like you didn't edit it at all. Its bad enough when sites are premade, but when you don't add a banner, or change the coloring(if that's permitted by the site) it doesn't look good. You shoud make a banner for your site atleast, to give it a little personality.
Organization - 17/20 The three column layout is very organized, but what would make it better is to have navigation links, not just to neopets, but around your site too. Also, your "affies", "listed at", and "reviewed at" sections should all be on the same side.
Sitely -17/20 I would suggest getting another link back button, but you have a good amount. I didn't take any points off for that. You need more affies, and listings. I understand you're a new site, but I grade on your site right now, not what its going to be like in the future. You should also try to look to get reviewed more.
Content - 17/20 You have a lot of pets listed; Very nice. But, you should have navigation links to each color so that people don't have to keep scrolling. Also, I like how you have all things realated to kaus. But I would suggest you also have a section saying how to get a kau, including morphing potions, paintbrushes, magical plushies, etc., and kau avatars. Another thing you could do is have kau fan art where you can get peopl e to draw pictures of kaus. You could also have a kau lovers fan club or something for people who one 2 or more kaus on one account. You don't have to do these things , they're just suggestions to make your site better. One last thing is the marquee at the top. Its going to fast for anyone to possibly read. Also, I don't get the "cow" section. All it is is a picture of a kau.?
Grammar - 10/10 You're spelling and grammar was great!
Updates - 5/5 From the looks of it you update frequently. Nice job.
Counters - 4/5 You have the page views counter,but not an online counter. Try to get one of them from whos.among.us.
Award: no


Gigi's Adoption Agency

Gigi's UFA/UFT Adoption Agency
Reviewed 9/3
I'm sorry but you did not earn an award. You got a score of 70/100. Let me explain...
Layout - 15/20 Its premade, so you automatically got 5 points taken off. But, It works for your site(probably because It was made for an adoption site by sunnyneo…)
Organization - 15/20 You should have navigation to each pet on you page. Maybe catagorize them by pet or color in case people are looking for a certain color or species.
Sitely - 5/20 Ouch. This hurt you, A LOT. You have link back buttons, but none of them are the standard 88x31 size. Not many people will link back to you with the "buttons" you have now. Also, you didn't even make most of them! They were made by a website. Also, you have no affies, you're listed at no directories, and from the looks of it I'm the only person who's reviewed you. How are people supposed to find your site? How are these pets ever going to get adopted?!
Content - 20/20 You have a lot of pets, very nice. And I really like how you have a list of succesful adoptions! You should link to each of the pets though so people can see them.
Grammar - 10/10 You're spelling and grammar was great!
Updates - 0/5 No updates…
Counters - 0/5 You have no counters...
Award: no


Petchy's Guide to Millions


Reviewed 9/3
Congratulations!! You have won the Dynamite Dailies Award! You got a score of 94/100! Let me explain...
Layout - 16/20 Why made the layout? Did you? Was it premade? I'm not sure, but If it was made by you, let everyone know! Be proud of your coding skill! Other than that, the layout is great. When I go to your site I feel welcomed. The colors go together really well. Also, the banner is really beautiful.
Organization - 17/20 You have navigation, but I couldn't find it at first. You should make the font bigger, or make the font stand out somehow. Also, your site seems kind of crowded, its not a big deal, but maybe you should switch to a one or two column layout.
Sitely - 18.5/20 You have a lot of affiliates, directories, and you were reviewed a few times. Nice! But you shouldn't make them in a marquee. Its annoying and I like to look at affiliates and things at my own pace, I don't like to have to wait for them all to scroll through.
Content - 20/20 This is one of the best dailies guide I've ever seen! You have everything one looks for when going to a dailies page. I especially like the sniping guide, and how it says "List of things to snipe:". That is so helpful! Especially to those who are new at sniping.
Grammar - 10/10 You're spelling and grammar was great!
Updates - 5/5 You update almost everyday! Good job!
Counters - 5/5 You have both types(:
Award: yes!


Mystical Magik


Reviewed 9/3
I'm sorry but you did not earn an award. You got a score of 85.5/100. Let me explain...
Layout - 14/20 Well, I had to take five points off because your layout is premade. You make premade lookups, so you must be good at coding, right? Then why is your site layout premade? That doesn't look good to your viewers. The colors are okay, but your site doesn't seem very welcoming. Try using brighter, more cheery colors(pinks, blues, greens, purples, etc.) to make your viewers feel more welcome; Just a suggestion. The banner is nice, but you can tell that that speech bubble was copy and pasted in there. You should just write the site name on the image, not put it in a bubble.
Organization - 17/20 You have navigation to neopets, but not around your site. This isn't really a big deal, since theres not many places to navigate too, but it doesn't hurt to have a few navigation links around your site. I would put it above your affies.
Sitely - 19.5 /20 You have a lot of affiliates, directories, and you were reviewed a few times. Nice! But, I saw one link(in your affies, Scoofii's Daily Scoop) didn't work. The site has been closed. Auctually, It was one of my sites. What a small world!
Content - 17/20 You're lookups are pretty good, but keep going and make some more! That's really all I can suggest to you until you make more lookups.
Grammar - 10/10 You're spelling and grammar was great, but I have a suggestion: Under rules, #5 says "You understand! Good! :)" You should make it say "You understand? .." With a question mark instead of an exclamation point.
Updates - 5/5 You update pretty frequently. Good job!
Counters - 3/5 You have one counter, but you should also get the # of viewers counter from boingdragon.
Award: no


Forbidden Fruit

Twilight graphics here!
Reviewed 9/1
I'm sorry but you did not earn an award. You got a score of 86/100. let me explain...
Layout - 17/20 Your layout is really nice! Its made by you, and its really good! I just have a few suggestions. I have to scroll left and right, which can get annoying. I view Neopets in Firefox, so i'm not sure if the problem is the browser. I also don't like how when you hover over the banner, the welcome message pops up. Its not horrible, it can just get annoying. I think you should either keep it there, or move it somewhere else. Also, you should fix the "Archives" section. There is a scroll bar at the bottom but you only scroll like 1 centimeter! You should also use the headers in there for the whole layout, so you can locate things easier.
Organization - 19/20 Your site is so easy to navigate around, but I suggest to have navigation sections under each part of the page, since you have so much content under each section.
Sitely - 17/20 You have a lot of affiliates, but i can't find where you're listed at any directories. If your affiliates are the directories you're listed in, you should put them in their own section.
Content - 20/20 Your graphics are amazing! Really, I have no suggestions for them, great job! Keep going!
Grammar - 10/10 No mistakes!
Updates - 3/5 You should save all of your old updates, not just recent ones. (:
Counters - Nice! You have both types of counters, and they match your layout !
Award: no


Quizmania


Reviewed 8/29
Congratulations!! You have won the Dynamite Directory Award! You got a score of 94/100! Let me explain..
Layout - 18/20 The banner is huge, and it doesn't have much to do with your site. You should have a banner that has a background of paper and pencils or something. Ohh! Or that could even be your theme.
Organization - 17/20. Your site is very organized, but I suggest doing one thing. You should create some navigation links, to help everyone get around your site easier, and quicker.
Sitely - 20/20 Wow. You are perfect in this catagory. You have bunches of affies, reviews, directories and link backs. Keep up the good work!
Content 19/20 You have so many cute quizzes! I even took one during your review ^^ But you should say who you are in your intro. I also don't like how your pet is doing the talking. You made the page didn't you? o.0
Grammar 10/10 No mistakes
Updates 5/5 You have lots of updates, and your site is still improving(:
Counters 3/5 You have a good visitor counter, but you should also have an online counter from http://www.whos.among.us
Award: yes!

HC-rets


Reviewed 8/28
I'm sorry but you did not earn an award. You got a score of 75/100. let me explain...
Layout - 12/20. *yawn* Its pretty boring. All it is is a picture, and two columns. The font is jus plain black, theres no background, and not much color. I think the side picture is a banner, but the banner should say the name of your site, and a slogan if you have one. You should make your layout more colorful, change the text color, and just make the layout prettier. Simple as that.
Organization - 9/10. Its organized, and easy to navigate through. All I suggest is that you get a navigation section to make it easier to find things throughout your site.
Sitely - 14/20. You have two link back buttons, but I think its nice when sites have atleast 3, so theres more of a variety for your clients to choose from. Also, you have a few affiliates, but not enough. I say a good number to have is around 15. One last thing is that you're not listed in any directories! Get your site out there for all to see!
Content - 27/30. This is such a great idea. Plus it's unique, which is also a plus. I've never seen a site like yours before, where people can release their neopets secrets. It's like a psychiatrist! A suggestion I have is to have more secrets from other people. Also, you should say when your site was created, and
Grammar - 9/10 Your grammar seemed near perfect. But I found one problem..you say : "All images will be saved in my own account so I don't sap your bandwidth". What does sap mean? Is it a typo, or just a word I don't know?
Updates - 1/5 You only have one update. You should keep all of your updates in a scrollbox so that people can see whats going on with your site and the new things that are happening.
Counters - 3/5 You have a visitor counter but you should get an online counter from http://whos.amung.us/ Those counters say how many people are viewing your site right now.
Award: no


Screenies of Pie


Reviewed 8/27
I'm sorry but you did not earn an award. You got a score of 29/40. Let me explain...
Layout - 7/10 You made it yourself, but its not very organized. You should separate your site into two columns. You could put affies, link backs, directories, & reviews in one column, and your screenies in the other. Also, you should have a navigation section, so that people don't have to scroll all the way down to find your screenies and things.
Sitely - 6/10. All you have are affies, and they all have that ugly blue border. Please, use the border=0 code, and organize them. Also, your're not listed in any sites, and from the looks of it, i'm the first site you've been reviewed by. Thats not good. If you're not listed in any directories, how do people find your screenies?
Content - 10/10 Your screenies are hilarious!! And do people really give you all those nice items? Wow. Keep up the screenies, they're great!
Grammar - 6/10 One word. Chatspeak. You have too much of it, and it looks unprofessional. Take out some of the smiley faces. Its up to you, but thats just my suggestion.
Award: - no.
note: your screenies can only get you so far.

Ultimate Lookup Finder


Reviewed 8/27
Congratulations!! You have won the Dynamite Directory Award! You got a score of 35.5/40! Let me explain..

Layout - 7/10 You really need to get a two column layout. It would work so much better for your site. You could put affies, link backs, directories, & reviews in one column, and your content in the other. Also, I don't like how the background repeats. It doesn't look very good. You should try to get a premade petpage from Kill the Lights or Exclusive. Also, the banner looks a tad pixelly. But its not awful. I auctually like the magnifying glass idea. maybe you could use it as your theme. Like have a magnifying glass following footprints or something?
Sitely - 8.5/10 you have a good amount of affies, reviews, and link backs, but it doesn't look like youre listed in any directories! Its very important to be listed in directories when you want your site to be famous. Otherwise, its very hard to find your site. Content - 10/10 You have alot of sites, and this site is very helpful to people looking for lookups. But you should separate them into categories like "neo-related", "simple", etc. Yoou should put the sites in a scrollbox so that you don't have to scroll as much. One last thing is that you should put a description of their site or give it a rating so people know which ones are top notch and which ones to check first.
Grammar - 10/10 I found no mistakes whatsoever. Great job!
Award: yes!

Lend Me Plz


Reviewed 8/26
Congratulations!! You have won the Gnarly Guide Award! You got a score of 38/40! Let me explain..
Layout - 8/10. Its a little plain and simple, but it works for your site. You should probably move the navigation to the top of the right sidebar, so its easier to find. Once you do that, your site will be so easy to navigate with. Nice job.
Sitely - 10/10 You have a good amount of affiliates, and you're listed at a good amount of directories, which is good. But, it can never hurt to get more! However, I would say you should get 2 or 3 more size 88x31 buttons, so your viewers have more of a variety to choose from.
Content - 10/10This site is great. I am not a big avatar collector, but if I was this would without a doubt be the site I would refer to. It answers every question I could possibly think of regarding lending avatars. It is also a very unique idea. I've never seen a lending/getting lent guide before. Its really a great idea. (and I never knew how much a super attack pea costed! Its auctually quite depressing. D: )
Grammar - 10/10 I saw no mistakes. *claps*
Award: yes!


Neowink

Negg Blinkie
Reviewed 8/26
I'm sorry but you did not earn an award. You got a score of 30/40. Let me explain...
Layout - 6/10 Its premade, which automatically takes some points off. Also, why is your link back section randomly in the middle of your graphics?? Although, I do like how you have some back to the top buttons.
Sitely - 6/10 You only have 2 link backs and 1 of them is a blinkie. When people link back, they want buttons sized at 88x31, and thats not what you have. You should request a button from a request site. Also, you're not listed in any directories, and you only have 1 affiliate. How are people suppost to know your site?
Content - 8/10. You have alot of graphics, but their not high in quality. Some of them look like they we're made quickly on paint. Also, you say that you don't care if people don't link back or claim it as their own. Why would you not care if someone claimed all your hard work as their own? However, on a positive note, I like how you have a chart saying how long the graphics should take. It really helps clients know how long they will have to wait!
Grammar - 10/10 I didn't find any mistakes. Nice job!
Award: no


Chocolate Twilight


Reviewed 8/26
I'm sorry but you did not earn an award. You got a score of 27/40. Let me explain...
Layout - 7/10. You made it yourself, but it is very boring. The colors are very "blah" and they don't grab the viewers attention. Also, the table isn't centered, and looks odd since its to the right. You should try making another column for your affies, link back, etc.
Sitely - 4/10. You only have one link back button, and its not very good. I can tell it was made in paint, and it has that ugly purple border. Use the border=0 code. Maybe request a button from a site like Juicy Buttons or Button Bay. Also, you only have 4 affies, and you're not listed in any directory. How are people supposed to find your site?!
Content - 7/10 First, you need an updates box. How are people supposed to know whats going on with your site? The art is pretty good, but you don't have alot of it. Get more requests, and your site will be alot better.
Grammar - 9/10 In your introduction, don't use caps so much. And calm down with the exclamation points. It comes off as annoying to your viewers. So, instead of "REQUESTS ARE OPEN!!!", it should be "requests: open".
Award: no


Vintage Wonderland


Reviewed 8/26
Congratulations!! You have won the Great Graphics award! You got a score of 38/40! Let me explain..

Layout - 8/10. Its premade, but its good you said that the layout was only temporary. The colors match perfectly with the background, and I didn't find the background distracting at all. But, I think you should make the banner longer to match the width of the tables. I also think that you should have a scrolling div for the icons so its not so much of a scroll. Plus, it would make it look better when one column isn't terribly longer than the others. Another thing I noticed is that you should put your link back on the left column and your reviews on the right (pretty much just switch them).
Sitely - 10/10 Great job. You're a new site but you've still got affies, reviews, and you're listed in directories.
Content 10/10 - I really like your icons. They look very nice and pretty. But I think in your intro you should say the date that the site opened. I found it in your updates but you should put it out where people don't have to look for it.
Grammar 10/10 - yay!No mistakes(:
Award: Yes!


What You Missed at the Boards


Reviewed 8/25
I'm sorry but you did not earn an award. You got a score of 32/40. Let me explain...
Layout - 8/10 Its kind of plain. But the colors go well together and I like the banner. However, I don't like how there is a white box behind the box that has "About the Screenies". It might be IE, or it might not. I'm not sure. I also don't like how the banner isn't centered, but everything else is (again, this might be the browser). Also, navagation links are necessary. Especially with a site where you have to scroll alot.
Sitely - 7.5/10 Under "Equally Amazing Links", I can't tell which sites are affies, which are directories, and which are review sites. So, you should seperate them under different headers. (ex. one header for affies, another for directories, and another for reviews.) This makes it alot easier for your viewers. Also, you should get a button made by a button site. Your's are good, but I think the buttons from premade button sites look nicer.
Content - 7/10 Your screenies are...average. I didn't thinknthey were HILARIOUS, but they weren't horrible. Personally, I like when screenies have pictures. It makes them alot funnier and more enjoyable to look at. Honestly, I probably wouldn't come back to your screenies the way they are now. Sorry, but I said I would be harsh.
Grammar - 9.5/10 The only mistake I found is where the banner says "PROBABLY MOST AMAZING LINK EVER". It should be "links" since there is more than one. Also, under that it says "Oh, you know! The one that gets you back here". It should say "the ones that get you back here". Also, you don't have a period at the end of that sentence.
Award: no


Hopeless Thoughts


Reviewed 8/24
Congratulations!! You have won the Great Graphics award! You got a score of 35/40! Let me explain..
Layout - 8.5/10 I really like that you make the layout yourself. It shows that you've put alot of time and effort into your site. Plus, the banner is cute. But, the content area is awkward. The headers where it says "welcome", "graphics", blends, etc, are weird. The pink only goes 3/4 of the way, and it doesn't look good. Also, where you have the navigation links, "help" is below the rest of the links.
Sitely - 7/10 You have alot of affies which is good, but the way they're set, isn't. Some of them have that ugly border and they are all different sizes. Maybe you should require affies to have an 88x31 button. You also need to get listed at directories and be reviewed more. Get your site out there for everyone to see!
Content - 6/10 Its hard to grade you on this, because you don't really have any content. All you have is blends. But, the blends are good, which got you the 6/10. You say icons and banners are coming soon, but when?
Grammar - 9/10 I saw very little chatspeak, which is good.
Award:yes!


Xweetok directory


Reviewed 8/24
I'm sorry but you did not earn an award. You got a score of 27/40. Let me explain...
Layout - 7/10 The layout is premade, and kind of blah looking. Add a banner, or some more images to liven it up. It doesn't really stand out to me. It's boring.
Sitely - 6/10 You haven't been reviewed yet, and you're not listed anywhere. How are people supposed to find your site? Start looking for review sites and directories. Also, your link back button and most of your affie's buttons have that ugly border. Please, use the border=0 code.
Content - 8/10 You have pretty good content. But most of your xweetoks have less than 2 pet counts. You need to find more pets. I also noticed under the "enter your xweetok" section, you don't have a link to neomail you. Most viewers aren't going to want to go search for your pet, go to your lookup, and click the neomail button. So, have an easy access link right there to help them out.
Grammar - 6/10 You need to buy a grammar book. You have way too many smiley faces. It makes your site look less professional. Also, Your title and headers aren't capitalized.
Award: no


Golden Afternoon


Reviewed 8/24
Congratulations!! You have won the Great Graphics award! You got a score of 39/40! Very nice! Let me explain...
Layout - 10/10 I love the layout! the colors match perfectly and its very easy to navigate around the site.
Sitely - 9/10 You should get more affies and get reviewed more. Get your site out there so you will get more viewers!
Content - 10/10 Great job! You have good quality and quantity. I can't wait to see the shields you make in the future!
Grammar - 10/10 No mistakes. Just what I love to see.
Award: yes!


Sugary Premades


Reviewed 8/24
Congratulations!! You've won the Powerful Premades award! You got a score of 39/40. Let me explain....
Layout - 9.5/10 Your layout is ADORABLE! I love it. The colors match perfectly and I love the banner. But, i had to take .5 off because you really need scrollboxes for your affies. Since you have a good amount of them, it does nothing but take up space in your layout.
Sitely - 10/10 Good amount of affies, listings and reviews. Perfect.
Content - 10/10 Great layouts. I think they're really cute. Plus, you have alot of different styles and color versions of each one.
Grammar - 9.5/10 I didn't know where to put this but in your intro you say "So to your left, you'll see the Dessert of The Moment". Nothing is to the left. You should say "above you'll see...." I didn't see any other mistakes. Nice Job!
Award: Yes!




NEOPETS, characters, logos, names and all related indicia
are trademarks of Neopets, Inc., © 1999-2009.
® denotes Reg. US Pat. & TM Office. All rights reserved.

PRIVACY POLICY | Safety Tips | Contact Us | About Us | Press Kit
Use of this site signifies your acceptance of the Terms and Conditions