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Hi I'm Marianna. I'm just your average girl who loves to read and play on Neopets. My age is not important. Oh and I ♥ Harry Potter. I like Twilight too. Hey look at this guy.
Well back to more about me. (Great now I sound stuck-up. :P) I can be random if I want to. Oh and it's true I'm an.....
Well that's about it. Thanks
Mine:
Hey this idea was really cool, so I made my own. They are not great (and very plain, but simple is good) and I used Photobucket's coloring and stuff. Well enjoy.








Site CSS edited by Vampire with Fangs. Testures/Blending 100% by Taylor @ VWF. Layout was simply edited & re-distrubited for this sites use only. Original CSS by Block-Head.
Cursor from Irrevocably Twilight, Thanks for asking.
Oh and images that have no link are from Photobucket dot com.
The decorated Cullens and Werewolves were decorated at Picnik dot com.
How many people are on including you. :o
~From http://whos.amung.us/~
Hey, we're the Cullens. We live in Forks, Washington. If you don't know who we are or anything about us Google Twilight Wiki and click the first option.
Hey we came to crash this party the Leeches were having. So here we are. Oh and Jake's only here for Nessie. I hope you enjoy it here.
Hi, We're the Sunrise Sets characters. This is a fan fiction about what happens after Breaking Dawn. I hope you enjoy.

70.5%/100 {I'm not the sharpest pencil in the box, but I'm getting there. :D }
• 9/20-First Impression Eek. Your site isn't...too appealing. I think it's time for a layout makeover XD Your image should blend with the background color. That is a really bad turn-off to most professional graphic makers...like me XD Although I like the Family Photo addition...but try to have a blended image, I can make you an awesome layout if you want. But anyways, back to reviewing, it's just that it isn't too professional looking.
•22/30-Content I like the adoption idea, but why don't you have some kind of icon section or something, it needs more...I don't really know what it is...but it just needs something. I love the fact that you have adoption characters for Sunrise Sets, that really rocks.
• 4.5/5-Grammar There was something that caught my eye that didn't make sense, so re-read over your site. XD (Half a point isn't that bad)
• 10/15-Organisation A lot of sites have used this site template before, so try something new, and I noticed that it's only viewable in Internet Explorer, and you said that you use Firefox, so try to make it viewable in both explorers. That would totally rock.
• 2/2-Affies You do have affies that list you back XD Great job. =]
• 7/10-Link Back Buttons Your first few are really good, but whats with the last of them? They don't have anything to do with your site...
• 6/8-Site Name Adopt a Cullen...hm...what to say...The name seems a bit un-professional, but a lot of Twi-hards are big fans of your site, so I have to give some credit XD
• 10/10-Originality Your site is 100% original! I haven't heard of anyone else having an adoptable agency for Twilight! Great job.
Final Comments Your site still needs some make-overs & re-vamping. So as long as you listen to what I say, your site will be a big hit one day!
Layout= 8/10, I loove your layout, but I don't like the scroll bars. The width just annoys me.
Creativity= 9/10, It'sool that you would come up with adoption place.
Grammer= 9.5/10, It's pretty good!
First Impression: 20/20 It looked really neat.
Updates: 5/10 You have mussed a lot of updates. Not so good :(
Grammar: 10/10 Great vocabulary :)
Creativity: 15/15 Nice thinking of the adoptables and letting your ister use them XD
Orginization: 24/25 Great except you have to widen the scroll bars or shorten them :(
Affies: 5/5 You have a good amount.....but have them go a little faster.
Content: 10/14 Not much to do on the site....add a place where people can request other things from twilight or the music you can play.
Extra: 8/8 A lot of other icons like the dancer and the boom box....great :)
Layout: 5/10 I really don't like the scroll on the right and in the middle.....but other than that great site :)
Total: 82/107 Grab A Prize
Site Layout:10/20
Link Button:18/20
Graphics:15/20
Organization:20/20
Updates:10/10
Credit:10/10
Comments: uhmm...first off, your site isn't veryy attractive, I mean look at your layout, too DARK and not my type. Your link button kinda freaks me out too, it closes up their nose..awkward. I love the idea of adopt-a-cullen though, I myself love the movie twilight. Your graphics look like they've been cut-off some picture....*sigh*. You have earned the silver Award.
First Impression:[17/20] Ok when i first see the name of your site i say wow this person is smart. I have never seen an adopt a cullen site before its a very unique idea. Then i click the link. Your Site is amazing as i first see it. Your layout is nice I actually wanted to stay and read the whole site and everything It was so cool! But then i scrolled down i saw the pictures and said man i have seen these thousands of times before. I could tell you just copied them off the internet. I think you should make all the pictures the same size and maybe add something unique like i went to Twisite and she has 200x200 pictures they are amazing i would do something like that
Layout-[5/10] I love your layout but the red is just a tiny bit to bright. I love your color scheme though its just like mt other site Twilight Layouts. I looker at your picture and found out you did no make it. Thats ok becuase you have a picture site not a premade site but i always take off 5 pionts for that.
Info/Content-[20/30] I love your idea about the whole adopt a cullen thing!! I love how you make everything funny about your site like your counter and site mascot. You got your mascot at the same place as me. I took pionts off though becuase of your pictures they just don't look like ya made them i think you should ask twisite if you can use hers or at least edit the pictures to make them your own like maybe make them all the same size or make the back ground behind them sparckle or something like that make it unique edit your pictures at picnik.com they rock!
Spelling/Grammar-[10/10] I could not find one mistake but i think you should add a longer welcome its very short.
Creativity-[15/20] How could this not be creative its an adopt a cullen site how wonderful the only thing not creative is your pictures but you can work on that.
Blog/counter-[10/10] You have everything i was lookin for and more i love how you got the wolf and said it was jacob! You have some good ideas keep them Up! And you even update alot good!
What needs fixing?- I think you need to edit your pictures and make them all the same size i think you need to get rid of that long srollbar it annoys me. And i think you should add more characters like the la push people and called it the adopt a la push section. You have a lot in store for people just a few things need fixing. I would go back to your site but not for your pictures i would go to see if you changed them to something unique. Great job! Total-87/100
First Impression- (7/10) Prudy layout! I love the bulletin board and the colors match well! I like how you have the counters at the top, but I dont like how the Updates scroll in the box. I am using Safari so it might be different. But when I first entered your page there was nothing in the updates box for like.. 10 seconds then finally the updates came. I would suggest not letting the updates scroll though. Anyway, the Best Viewed in IE really stands out cause its bright green. Why not get a blue-ish color of that? Green doesnt match your layout thats why it stands out. Haha, I love your adoptables :P
Layout- (10/10) Great layout! Colors match, I would change it 1 bit.
Content- (9/10) You should have your navigation a bit higher... its pretty low down there and people try and find the nav first. I love how you have a Coming Soon section.. otherwise I am well informed in your site!
Organization- (5/5) Nicely done, your site is super organized.
Neatness- (10/10) Again, nicely done.
Creativity- (5/5) It was so creative of you to think about making a Adopt a Cullen site. Your site name attracted me, and probably a lot of other people to come to your site! (: Your buttons are also very wonderful, and awesome layout! Comments- You did an awesome job! Keep working hard and fix the small mistakes and soon your site will be better than ever!
Total Score: 46/50 You have received an A in your review. Please take the /A/ award.
First Impression-[20/20] Really good I like the color of your layout.
Layout-[10/10] I really like the colors of it and it has good pictures.
Info/Content-[20/20] You keep it updated and you have a adoptables.
Spelling/Grammar-[10/10] No Mistakes. Creativity-[15/15] It is very creative that you thought of it. Great Job
Bonus-[25/25] You Got the Bonus because you do custom adoptables. Great Job and people enjoy your site.
Total-[100/100]
First Impression:[19/20] Well the banner looks really nice but it would be even better if it would match the blue.
Layout-[9/10]Love your banner! Mostly it would be better if it matched the outer color(blue).
Info/Content-[20/20]Pretty much everything looks good!
Spelling/Grammar-[10/10]no mistakes!
Creativity-[15/15]Awesome creativity! Try to fix those changes i said if you can to your layout.
Total 73/75 97%
Coming soon
Vampirewithfangs:For the awesome layout and the button.
Rissa826: My lovely sister and gave me the idea of the thanks
J.K.Rowling: For the Harry Potter series. One of my favorite books, and a world of magic. Also not being able to hear Lavender normally without thinking of Lav Lav and Won Won. XD
Stephenie Meyer: For the Twilight series. Another of my favorite series. Also for the world of vampires and werewolves. Oh and not being able to hear thunder without thinking of baseball. XD
My Parents: For everything and always loving me. :D
guest: For coming here!!!!!!
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