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Faerie Fountain

First Impression 9/10: The banner was very cute and the colors were matched very well. Everything looked organized and neat. I think that you should add a longer message on the top stating what is special about your pet directory than others. That will most likely attract more eyes.

Updates 4/5: Try not to delete your updates. Only delete them if you have like 20 updates in the box. You only have 2 right now, but they are easy to read and understand.

Neatness 15/15: Your pets are divided up that your viewers can easily understand and get to the pet as fast as they could. The table makes it much more organized. All your pets is organized in alphabetical order which is very good.

Quality/Content 19/20:I like how you have a key describing the pet's status, but I recommend you use icons that have to do with faeries. Right now, the icons look a bit random. It's great that you included a picture of the pets so that people can see how it looks.

Spelling/Grammar 4/5: You have a something wrong here: If you have a a Faerie Pet, please neomail me with this info. You have a double letter.

Layout 13/15: I recommend that you get a 2 column layout so that all the link back buttons and awards can go there. Right now all the stuff is on the background not on the white. That looks a bit messy.

Organization 19/10: You have a navigation for your pets, but you should also have one for your site.

Overall Impression 18/20: You have a variety of faerie pets for viewers to choose from or just simply look at. I would definitely come back!

Advice/Tips: Just try to fix up your site a bit with the advice stated above. There are only just little improvements needed to be made.

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Total Score: 91/100

Doll City

First Impression 6/10: When I first visited your page, I thought that the banner on top was a bit frightening. It looks sort of " in your face-ish." Get a smaller banner and try to pick an image that is related to dolls. The right sidebar just drifted off from the rest of the layout.

Updates 3/5: Your updates and blog should be put below the welcoming message. For the blog, you shouldn't use textareas you should always use div boxes. Look in the advice/tips section of this review and you will find a site that will help you with that.

Neatness 13/15: The headers on the page looks sort of creepy because you just cropped the eye part of the banner image on top. The link back button section should be on either sidebar.

Quality/Content 16/20: Your dolls look like they were just made with those online doll maker sites. They give you a default person and all you do is dress them. I can find a lot of these all over the internet. You have very creative ideas though. All of your link back buttons did not include (/a) on the end of it. (Replace the parentheses)

Spelling/Grammar 5/5: No spelling and grammatical errors were seen.

Layout 13/15: As I have stated above the right sidebar just drifted apart from the whole layout. Since you have so many dolls, you should also add div box for all of your dolls so it doesn't take up so much room on your site.

Organization 18/10: You have a really long navigation bar and you should always put the navigation bars on the left/right sidebars. The main is for your main content. (Like your dolls.) It takes up too much room if you put it in the main. The categories of the navigation bar are really creative though.

Overall Impression 17/20: You really need to work on your site a lot. Right now, your site looks very messy and out of place. I'm definitely sure that once you fix it, your site will look very nice.

Advice/Tips: Read over the advice and tips I have given above. You should state on your welcoming message section that your site can not be viewed on Firefox. You should also have a 88x31 size link back button. That's the normal size. You can request one from my button request site, Devotion,listed on the left sidebar of this page.

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Total Score: 81/100

Angel's Dailies

First Impression 8/10: I found myself in a very detailed site. I think you have a bigger banner that has your site name on it. That should be on the very top, not on the side.

Updates 3/5: Your updates are not that organized and looks all cramped up. Try increasing the height. You should at least skip a line when there is a new update also.

Neatness 15/15: All the links are organized in different sections and very organized. All the daily links fit well and not cramped up with unnecessary things. Your site looks very presentable and nothing looks messy or out of place.

Quality/Content 20/20: You have a picture for all the daily links which is good. I see other sites that just provide you with text links. That would be too plain. I like how you also mentioned other sites besides your own site. That way, viewers can easily compare between them and give the viewers some other choices.

Spelling/Grammar 5/5: No spelling and grammar errors were spotted on your site.

Layout 14/15: Your layout looks fine. Plain and simple. I only took off a point because it was made by someone else. As I have stated above, include a bigger banner. I found picnik(dot)com very helpful for editing.

Organization 9/10: Your page doesn't need to be scrolled as much as other sites do. You have to scroll a whole bunch to get to what I really want to see. You should still include a mini navigation bar though.

Overall Impression 18/20: I found no broken links around your site and you definitely update this site well and double check too. I would definitely come back to this to help myself to some neopoints or get some free food for my Neopets.

Advice/Tips: Add a bigger banner. Try to increase the height of the updates scroll box. Add a small navigation bar.

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Total Score: 92/100

Flour

First Impression 10/10: The banner is so cute and it fits perfectly with your site name. The color scheme of your site fits well with the banner also. Your site name is very unique.

Updates 5/5: You included updates everyday and I really like how you still kept the updates from Vanilla Bean and Harvest Collection.

Neatness 15/15: Your site looks very presentable. Everything looks like it's in the right place and not out of order.

Quality/Content 20/20: Your reviews are very detailed and really points out your strength and weaknesses. I like how you included an FAQ section on every page to let your viewers know more before neomailing you about it.

Spelling/Grammar 2/5: Instead of using default links. It's in the review you wrote on my site. For your reviews page, it's accessibility and accessible not accessable. For your navigation bar on the reviews page, you spelled Bright Lishts and also my review site is called Review Passion. For your Angel's Dailies review, you had this spelling error: "There is some misspelled punctuation in your About sectrion."

Layout 15/15: The color of the headers matches with the layout pretty well.

Organization 10/10: For each of your pages you have a navigation bar. That's great. It leads viewers to the reviews you have done and the categories in your directory.

Overall Impression 20/20: I really like your awards. They are just too cute! Your site is very organized and you actually put a lot of effort into it.

Advice/Tips: Your button's color is a bit too light for viewers to actually see the title of the site.

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Total Score: 97/100

Lizard's Untaken Names

First Impression 9/10: Everything looked neat and organized except for the fact that your sidebar is so far away to the left.

Updates 4/5: You should put your updates on the top of the page, not the bottom.

Neatness 14/15: It's all alphabetical which makes everything much easier. That formatting is very nice and it's easy to find. I like how you have a baby name section also. For the section where you post how you were reviewed, you should use (p) before the Polka Dot Reviews link back button.

Quality/Content 20/20: You are very creative when it comes to making up names and this site was thought up well. I also like how you put the pronunciation of the names beside it so viewers can actually read it.

Spelling/Grammar 4/5: For your site title on top isn't it suppose to be Lizard's Untaken Names?

Layout 13/15: As I have stated above the sidebar is too far to the left. Maybe you can add a banner on top with the site's name. It will make it look more attracting to the eye.

Organization 18/10: You have a navigation that actually works and it definitely helps a lot more. Why does some of the names I hover over turn into a different color and some doesn't.

Overall Impression 18/20: You have a very creative site. I don't think I saw this kind of site before. It makes creating a Neopet much easier now that I have some idea of the names I can choose from.

Advice/Tips: Fix the layout a bit.

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Total Score: 91/100

Hershey's Island

First Impression 7/10: When I first arrived at your site, I couldn't find the name of your site. I didn't even know where I was at! I am going to take 3 points off that.

Updates 5/5: Nice and simple updates.

Neatness 15/15: Everything is in it's place and not scattered everywhere. The content were displayed in a very orderly matter.

Quality/Content 20/20: I like how you gave description of Hershey, Hershey's home ,and his sister. You also displayed the likes and dislikes on the page. That was really creative. You also make nice graphics.

Spelling/Grammar 5/5: You explained everything very well in complete sentences. No spelling errors.

Layout 14/15: I like how you made the layout yourself, but as I noted above, I didn't know your site's title. The colors are combined well with your pet's color. You make nice layouts as well. The art on top was very nice.

Organization 10/10: You have a navigation bar! That makes it so easy for me to move around!

Overall Impression 20/20: Included everything that is needed. You don't need much improvements on the site. You have enough details and information about your pet.

Advice/Tips: Add site name on the banner so it's easier for your viewers to understand where they are and remember your site!

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Total Score: 96/100

Bright Lights

First Impression 8/10: I didn't really like the banner . The quality of the image was not that good and I have to tilt my head to the left to see Miley. I didn't think that the circled part of her head was really necessary. I took 2 points off of that.

Updates 4/5: You actually have updates which is good. I think that the blog was a little too long. Try to make it more brief so viewers can understand your point.

Neatness 14/15:I know you don't want your viewers to scroll down a lot to find the grahpics they want, but it's ok to make the content a little bigger. I know you can drag it to the address bar, but if it's bigger, it's better. Or at least have bigger scroll boxes.

Quality/Content 18/20: The images or graphics didn't have anything special about it. Just what I expected from a regular Disney site. Try using a different program, it may help.

Spelling/Grammar 5/5:I didn't find any spelling and grammatical errors.

Layout 13/15: I think that you should connect the two columns together. It looks sort of weird with a space in between. I didn't like the color pink for this layout very much. It's doesn't carry a Christmas feel.

Organization 10/10: I'm glad you have a site navigation. Way easier for viewers to move around.

Overall Impression 17/20: I don't think I will really remember this site after I reached it once. It didn't make me want to bookmark this site for later.

Advice/Tips: You should put the rules section under the updates section.

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Total Score: 89/100

Justin's Shenkuu Directory

First Impression 8/10: Your layout's name is not right. Isn't it Justin's instead of Justin? So I took 2 points off of that because it's really important for you to get the name of your site right. The layout really matches your site's name.

Updates 4/5: You only have 2 updates. That's not enough! I know that you like to share everything with your viewers, but try to make the updates a bit more brief. I would recommend you organizing your updates into a scroll box.

Neatness 15/15:I didn't think anything was a piece of mess. The information were gathered properly in the right categories/sections.

Quality/Content 20/20: You gave a lot of information about your site's topic. I like how you included a games section. If I wanted to know about Shenkuu, I would definitely go to your site!

Spelling/Grammar 4/5:Your title is wrong. For the Thanks section, you had the sentence"I would like to point out his sit …."You mean "site" right?

Layout 14/15: I also suggest that you use the same layout image, but make it 2 columns. So it's easier for you to put your other information besides Shenkuu. I really like your color scheme though.

Organization 10/10: Your site is pretty organized for a directory. You can also make a site navigation so the viewers can jump around the site very easily.

Overall Impression 20/20: You are very creative when you were creating this site. I thought that you did not leave any information out about Shenkuu.

Advice/Tips: Just some tips I noted above is just fine. You were not missing anything about Shenkuu.

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Total Score: 95/100

Zach's Lookups

First Impression 9/10: When I first came upon the site, I didn't find anything special about it. It was pretty simple, but not boring.

Updates 4/5: You have updates which is better than no updates, but try to update even more.

Neatness 13/15:I like how you put your lookups and news on the main bar and the other details on the sidebar.

Quality/Content 19/20: Your lookups are not the best, but still needs to add a little more detail to it.

Spelling/Grammar 4/5:I think for your rules section, you should use the word legible instead of readable. I think that's a bit better.

Layout 15/15: I like how it is a 2 column layout which is very nice.

Organization 10/10: Your site is really easy to navigate. You don't have to scroll down a lot to get to what you want.

Overall Impression 18/20: Overall, your site is pretty neat . There can be little improvements to the lookups.

Advice/Tips: The word legible instead of readable. A little more detailed lookups. You should combine the 2 sections, questions and say hi.

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Total Score: 92/100

Baybeluv08's music + icons

First Impression 8/10: Nothing really was really surprising or attracting to the site. For the banner, maybe you should use a better font or a cuter one to match your site's name.

Updates 4/5: The last update was 4 days ago which is too long for you to not update.

Neatness 15/15: The formatting of your site is neat and organized and separated into individual categories/sections. I know where your music section is and where your icon section is very easily. I like how you put the music codes in alphabetical order.

Quality/Content 20/20: Your icons are pretty nice and you have a wide variety of music codes.

Spelling/Grammar 4/5: I think it's a bit better if you didn't put Muzick and put the actual word Music. It just looks sort of sloppy like that.

Layout 15/15: I am glad you didn't use a premade and made one yourself. Good job! It can really show someone's character with a layout. Like you love pink right?

Organization 9/10: I recommend you putting your navigation and site navigation above the welcoming message. It will make the site become more easy-to-access.

Overall Impression 20/20: Your site is very cute with the color pink. It really matches with your site name also.

Advice/Tips: You should put the paragraph about why you don't have a burn book above the one rule. Just a little tip to help your site improve.

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Total Score: 95/100

Polka Dot Reviews

First Impression 9/10: The first thing that I saw was the banner which is just the same size as the layout. I also like the border of the banner which is also polka dotted. Just a little tip on the banner, maybe you should put a background color for your banner. It's too white. Maybe a color from your polka dots might work out.

Updates 5/5: I know that your site just opened so you only have 1 update. I won't take points off of that.

Neatness 15/15: The headers are great for your site which makes it tidier and divided into categories/sections.

Quality/Content 20/20: Your reviews are very detailed and gives enough information for your viewers to understand what is needed to improved or changed.

Spelling/Grammar 4/5: For the forums section, did you mean forms not forums? Because that's a whole different meaning. Check on that.

Layout 15/15: I like how the background matches your site name and the colors are really neat.

Organization 8/10: Just a little tip, maybe you could put the contact info in the "forum" section also. So its easier for them to contact you with the forms. Maybe put the requests section below the updates box.

Overall Impression 20/20: Overall, I think that your site is really organized and thought out well.

Advice/Tips: For the "note" section, maybe you can put it on the next line with "(br)" it may look nicer.

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Total Score: 96/100

Sugar Sweet Graphics

First Impression 8/10: When I first came upon the site, I notice that the text on the banner was not very visible. The banner too big.

Updates 0/5: There were no updates on the site which is not good because you can't let your viewers see what's new on the site. An updates section is crucial for a good site.

Neatness 13/15:The format of your site needs to be worked on. Maybe you can request another layout from the site Impulse.

Quality/Content 17/20: Nothing really special about the graphics. The quality was not that good. Some of the colors don't work well together. Use the site picnik(dot)com instead of Photobucket . For your link back buttons, you should save as PNG so the quality is better.

Spelling/Grammar 4/5: Your Nice Graphics section has a misspelled word, "inconvenience" is the correct way of spelling it.

Layout 13/15: The layout is not really special in any way. Just pink hearts and nothing unique.

Organization 10/10: Your site is sort of hard to move around because you have to scroll down so much to find what I want.

Overall Impression 18/20: Overall, I think a lot of improvements need to be done on your site.

Advice/Tips: Maybe you could use the editing site called picnik(dot)com. Change the spelling.

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Total Score: 83/100

Blossoming Babies

First Impression 7/10: Nothing really attracted my eye when I first went to the site. I noticed that the banner's width did not fit with the layout, which is not good.

Updates 3/5: There are updates everyday, but you should put the new updates on top of the old ones. Also, maybe you should put the date above the text, then it would look more organized.

Neatness 13/15: Maybe dividers in between each Neopet will work pretty well. Not too fancy ones though. Simple ones will work just fine.

Quality/Content 20/20: You gave the right information for the pets, which is good. Always double check if something changed or not.

Spelling/Grammar 5/5: No spelling and grammar errors.

Layout 14/15: I think I have seen the background somewhere else. Nothing really special, but it matches your site well.

Organization 7/10: The navigation doesn't seem to be working the way it should be. Are you trying to put the names of the Neopets in alphabetical order? Try checking on that.

Overall Impression 17/20: Overall, I think that you still needs some work on your site. Just little fixtures and repairs will be what you need.

Advice/Tips: Add some dividers. Organize your updates a little bit with the advice above. Check on the navigation.

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Total Score: 86/100

Summer's Premades

First Impression 10/10: The site's banner attracted my eye the most. I like how the banner has overlapping text. It fits very well with your site.

Updates 3/5: There wasn't any updates except for one. Maybe you should try to update more. I totally understand how hard it is to juggle other things along with your site, but try your best!

Neatness 15/15: The formatting of the layout is nice. Nothing confusing for the viewers. I like how there is always a topic/ title for everything because you let your viewers know what you are talking about instead of squishing a lot of stuff into one topic.

Quality/Content 20/20: The lookups were setup well on the site. There are different styles to choose from and a lot of different theme for each of the styles. Very unique.

Spelling/Grammar 5/5: No spelling or grammar errors as far as I know.

Layout 15/15: Your layout is simple but yet cute. You don't need an extremely fancy layout to form a great site. It's what you bring to the table. Like your awesome lookups.

Organization 9/10: I like how the navigation bar is above everything else. So you won't have to read a whole lot before going to the section that you want to get to. Maybe if the navigation links are just a bit bigger.

Overall Impression 19/20: Overall, I really like the petpages and lookups. They are different from other premade sites. Your hard work will take you very far.

Advice/Tips: Bigger navigation links. Try updating maybe every other day.

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Total Score: 96/100

Soroptimist Directory

First Impression 10/10: When I first looked at it, I noticed that there were a lot of content and details on the site. The name is so unique and I have never heard of it before. The banner was very creative since it also combined another picture into it.

Updates 5/5: Gave the viewers enough information to know what is currently going on with the site.

Neatness 15/15: The formatting of the site is nice. All split up into categories and topics so that the viewers will not get confused or lost.

Quality/Content 20/20: You gave all the details that were needed and even did some extra credit there too. The FAQs was good for the viewers because it can just receive an answer there instead of you neomailing everybody.

Spelling/Grammar 5/5: No spelling and grammar errors. Everything is easy to read and understand.

Layout 13/15: I really like the layout because it can store all the content for your site . 3 panel style suit's the site well. Just a little comment on the dividers/ underline. I thought it was a little too much of those. Once I scroll down a bit, I see another one.

Organization 10/10: I like how your navigation bar is on the top right. Once I get to the site, I can immediately search for the category I want.

Overall Impression 20/20: Overall, I think that you put a lot of effort into making this site very convenient for all the viewers.

Advice/Tips: Not that much lines/dividers on the site. It makes feel like I don't know where to start reading.

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Total Score: 98/100

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