BITTEN COOKIE A site directory Welcome to Bitten Cookie petpage directory. Here you can find all of your petpage guide needs! Neomail me the form to be added. : A really good site :One of my sites Form Copy and paste this code into an neomail and click the envelope to neomail! Hey Lynda! I love bitten cookie! Can you add me? ||your name: ||your username: ||Site name: ||Category: ||Site url: ||How did you find this site?: ||chocolate: Envelope by Bunny Love Pixels Rules Rules -No chatspeak -Neomails that say 'list me or ill report you' will be reported. -Use the form -Give me the full correct link. -Do not say "list my site" i cant read minds, i dont know what you mean. -When i say chocolate you say chip! -If you don't follow the rules you will be ignored and I hate to be rude by not answering but it only really takes about 30 seconds to stop and read them. Featured Site This week's Featured site is: A new Contest site with SOTM (site of the month), BOTM (button of the month) and POTM (pixel of the Month)! Great layout, pretty banner, way to go Monde! Total Site Count: {106 } Adoptables Most Recommended Site: Kailia_Lynn Pirate Jewelry Aisha Adoptables Anna's Aisha Adoptables Aki Usul Adoptables Faerie Tales Adopt a Nooblet Adopt-A-Cullen Adopt-A-Celebrity 8-Bit Adoptions Alkazar's Eyrie Adoptables Alonna Adoptables Boodoptables Chinese Zodiac Adoptables Hilariousgirls Adoptables Chomper Adoptables Spork Adoptables E-Eggs ^TOP^ Adoption Agencies Most Recommended Site: We Can Adopt Painted Pets Too! Star's Adoptions Maleah's Adoption Agency Electric Adoptions Aureate's Cottage Adopt Your Dream Pet Hearts2Homes Zaptastic Adoptions Adopt Today! Black Roses ^TOP^ Avatar Guides Most Recommended Site: Avvy's Secret Avatar guide Guide to Secret Avatars Pakrat Shopping List Avatar Help Auto's Avvy Help ^TOP^ Battledome Most Recommended Site: Battledome Guide Weaponpedia A simple guide to beating the black pteri Battledome made easy Challengers ^TOP^ Cooking Pot Most Recommended Site: Cooking Pot Recipes Cooking Pot Recipes SideNote:For bonju info go here. Its at the top of the page. ^TOP^ Clothes and Wearables Most Recommended Site: WCG (wearable Clothing Guide) TNC (TheNeopetsCloset) ^TOP^ Css/Html help/Premades/Requests Lookups, Petpages, ect. Most Recommended Site: Outsiders Graphics No Tomorrow Exclusive Amber's Css Visionary_Graphics Kill the Lights Premades Seriko's Premades ThunderStruck Lookups Darkness Premades Requests Most Recommended Site: Shattered Crystals Exhilarating* Mix and Match Buttons Amazed Midnight Cherry Button Requests The Good Kind Graphics Starcastic Button Requests The Gift Shop ICONS Other Graphix/HTML help Most Recommended Site: Css|Guide Filter Solutions Foomanshu Zbryant's Button Page TOP Font Guides Most Recommended Site: Dawnbugs Fonts Moony's Fonts Siggy Fonts Bubbles Color Charts Mithrandhir Font-Seite SideNote: This last site is in german but scroll down and its got some awesome fonts! ^TOP^ Dailies Most Recommended Site: Cutiie dailies 100k a day Daily Neopet Clicks Turmy Guide Yameiko's Dailies NeoLinks ^TOP^ Directories Most Recommended Site: Chomby Cavern !smaash Landslide Al Dalil Soroptimist Directory Sandstar's Directory ^TOP^ Misc. Most Recommended Site: Twice Painted Rave TOP Music Most Recommended Site: Music Disc Emzee Music Stingrays Music codes Meroy Music ^TOP^ Untaken Names Most Recommended Site: The End of the Rainbow Synoname ^TOP^ Pixels Most Recommended Site: Tiffy's Pixels Amber's Pixels Bunny Love pixels Tropical Pixels Kingdom Pixels ^TOP^ Plot Guides Most Recommended Site: Darkest Faerie (altador plot) Plot GuideOPEN Petpet Park Plot GuideOPEN Altador Cup InformationCLOSED The Return Of Dr. SlothCLOSED ^TOP^ Quest Help Most Recommended Site: Faerie Quest Directory Quest Help Guide ^TOP^ Review Sites Most Recommended Site: Picnik Blanket The Script The Beach House Eternal Mayhem Moonsong Reviews Extravagence Moonlight reviews Seabreaze Analysis Paint It Lovely Scream Reviews Snapple Reviews ^TOP^ Screenies and About Me Most Recommended Site: Wocky's Screenies Kayke's Screenies Frosty's Screenies Swantila's Screenies Site of the Month Most Recommended Site: Monde de Beau Better Than You Sugar Sweet & Pink ^TOP^

Updates November 22, 2009: added some sites and got a cute cookie pixel. November 21, 2009: Got reviewed at CC! November 15, 2009: Added a few sites and got an affie. November 10, 2009: Added a new SOTM! Nevember 7, 2009: Check out my new site! here!! Added more sites! November 3, 2009: Cleaned up some dead links, added more sites! November 2, 2009: Changed Layout ! woo woo =) November 1, 2009: MAJOR UPDATE!! Changed background, added awards, changes layout a bit, and added recommendation bullets. Halloween, 2009: Happy Halloween, i only got 95 peices of candy :( (lol, only!) October 24, 2009: Added a SOTM category and a new site! Also changed background! :3 October 23, 2009: Hey, you remember Amber's css? she took down the layouts cause she was tired of people stealin' her stuff. well, she said if you poke around a it, you might find some things. well, i found the layouts! go here and youll see some of her lookies! October 23, 2009: Added 2 buttons from Clover and Starcastic Both say "Im listed at Bitten Cookie" for all of you that are listed! October 22, 2009: Thinking of chaging layout entirely. check out this page and tell m whether you like the current or new! October 20, 2009: Changed layout a teensy bit. You like? :3 October 19, 2009: Requested a button. Thinking of changing layout. or at least the text coloring. October 17, 2009: I need to get in the habit of updating more! Sadly, i have nothing to say. October 15, 2009: Added a button, listed some people. =) October 8, 2009: Got my first button from Midnight Cherry. You like?!? I've also requested from a few other sites as well, but I haven't heard back from them yet. =) October 6, 2009: Haven't posted in a while. added like six categories. almost done! requested a few button so you can link me. October 4 2009: Started page! woo woo! Site Nav Adoptables Adoption Agencies Avatar guides Battledome Cooking Pot Clothing and Wearables Css/Html help/Premades/Requests Font Guides Dailies Directories Music Misc. Untaken Names Pixels Plot Guides Quest Help Review Sites Scrennies and About Me Site of the Month Contact Me pinktwirlz Back to Neopets Listed At Affies Want to be affies? Neomail me your site name and site url and your in! Envelope by Bunny Love Pixels My Awards Drag and drop to address bar to view From: Stash Of Toasted Muffins From Comet From SparrowSong Reviews From: Stash Of Toasted Muffins Im a svcker for the free ones =) Creds Banner By Dark Light Photoshoped blue by dreamgurl_36 Envelope by [Bunny Love Pixels] Sign by [Bunny Love Pixels] Layout by Exclusive. Arrows by Amber's Pixels Other Bullets by Serendipity Pixels Music Note Bullet by Sofia's Goodies Reviews From First Impression 6/10 Your layout's is nice, a classic Exclusive. But the pink banner clashes with your layout badly. Really badly. And all of those borders around your buttons also makes a bad impression because it just looks unnatural. I will explain how to fix this in the Layout section. Layout 14/20 Like I mentioned in the First Impression section, your layout is nice, a classic Exclusive. But the pink banner is like painting over a gorgeous painting with plain black. And, the banner doesn't even have your site's name on it, or anything concerning your site! You can request a great banner from the following sites: The Goodie Box and Kiss of Beauty. I could even make you one, if you'd like. I like how you added the bow pixel, but you should change it to something like a star or a bullet, simply something smaller. It's much too big. Also, remember in the First Impression section when I mentioned all of those annoying button borders? Well there is an easy fix to that! Simply put this code (border=0) between the image URL and that last bracket at the end of your image code. Do that to all of the buttons on your site with that problem and to all of YOUR link back buttons. Then you'll be all set in the Layout department. Content 23/30 You have listed a lot of sites, but there are a few things you should fix in your Content. Firstly, for the site you think is the best of each category: you shouldn't name it the Best Site. You should call it the Most Recommended Site or something like that. Because you may think that one pixel site is the best in it's genre, and maybe I think it's a different site. Because just labeling a site the Best Site seems a bit rash. And, you shouldn't have your form to get listed in it's box on the side column, it should be in a text area on the main column under your rules to get listed, which you should move to the main column. Now, moving onto your links. They are fine, but the links themselves are bland. Spruce them up. Add some CSS to them to make them colorful and have cool effects. And then another thing: your genres for linking should in alphabetical order, not some sort of random order. It's weird for your navigation to be in alphabetical order but the genres to be in a random order. And you should add some links to your lookup and your neomail to your site navigation too, but at the bottom. Oh, and the introduction to your site; it needs A LOT OF WORK. It is very boring. Use a thesaurus to find some interesting words to spruce it up! Spelling/Grammar 4/10 I see a LOT of Spelling/Grammar mistakes on your site. A LOT. First of all, your name of your site should be capitalized in your site's introduction. It should be capitalized every time it is mentioned, really. Also, sometimes, whenever you list a site, you misspell the site's name. For instance, instead of Seabreeze Analysis, you typed Seabreaze Analysis. Wrong. And a lot of times, you didn't capitalize a proper noun or name or the word I. Check around your site for errors like that. Originality 3/10 I don't see anything that really makes your site pop. You have a Best Site feature, and not many directories have that, but other than that feature, you don't have anything that makes your site pop. Why not add a special feature? Neatness 6/10 Your site is overall neat, but there are some things here and there that make it look cluttered. Like, for instance, your affiliates' and listers' link back buttons are are scrolling. That's a big no-no. That look weird and you have to chase the button while it's scrolling by. And, like I mentioned earlier, you should have the genres of your listed sites in alphabetical order, not some random order. Sitely 5/5 You are listed at plenty of places, but you don't have many affiliates. Also, your link back buttons are not that great. You should request some nicer buttons from some nicer buttons request sites. Overall Score 61/100 Bitten Cookie, you have a lot of work to do before you can become a great directory! Fix up your site, and soon you'll be great! First Review... 61/100, hmm, not bad. Gave Lots of good advice, and good ideas. I'll take the advice to heart! From Layout 9/10 Nice layout. You didn't make it, but you chose an awesome layout so that's good. :P ~~~~~~~~ Grammar and Spelling 10/10 Can't see anything here! Nice work! ~~~~~~~~ Theme7/10 Nice theme. Lots of people have cookie themed sites though... ~~~~~~~~ Content 19/20 You have a fair amount of sites listed. Try to have a goal of 200. But good work! ~~~~~~~~ Sitely20/20 You have Updates, site navigation, listed at, affies, my reviews, credits, awards, and link back buttons. Sweet linkge! xD ~~~~~~~~ Neatness20/20 Your site is very neatly and orderly. Some people (not me!) don't like things in scroll bars though. I won't take any marks off for that though because I think it looks neat. :) ~~~~~~~~ Would I stay?10/10 Of course! Very nice! ~~~~~~~~ Favourite thing10/10 Your pweety banner! OOOOO shiny! ~~~~~~~~ Originality8/10 Pretty original I guess. ~~~~~~~~ Score 113/120 Go pick up your award!!! :) ~~~~~~~~ Other Notes~ Nice work! I love your site! Just keep doing what your doing. Maybe somehow make your directory a little more original. So people know it and it stands out in the crowd! :P Good luck! Second Review... 113/120, wow, that's alot better than #1, I don't really think she was strict enough. Oh, well, at least I won an award! From: First Impression : 5/5 Nice, nice. The site layout is pleasant enough to keep me at your site. x) Site Info : 5/5 In 2 lines, you've managed to sum up your site nicely. (I admire that, because I often ramble on and on helplessly... hahaha) Visual Appeal : 13/15 Mmmm, it bothers me that the banner image is bright pink while the rest of your site is blue. If you want, I can use Photoshop to change just the color of your banner to blue-ish so that it matches the rest of your layout. ;) Other than that, the site looks great. Nice and subtle background, matching colors. Layout (coding) : 19/20 The coding's great. You chose a good premade... Exclusive's layouts are wonderful. The blue shade of the links is a BIT bright and light for my personal liking though. ;P I know I'm being picky... but I like text that's easy to read, hehe. Content : 21/30 Sorry, but I'll have to take off points in this section. Since your site is a directory site, the only thing I can judge in the content section is the number of sites you have listed. You should advertise more to get listees. Sometimes aside from waiting for people to request, you could neomail the sites and ask if they'd want to be listed at your directory or not. Apart from that, I like how your links are organized into their own little scrolling boxes in each section. The "Most Recommended Site" feature is fantastic. Organization : 10/10 Yep, your site is well-organized. I like your detailed navigation. (: Sitely Stuff : 9/10 Nothing major, but perhaps you could go find more affies? x) Just to fill up the space. ;P Four is a little too few. And I like how you posted the entire reviews in your "Reviews" section. You really took the advice to heart and worked on improving your site. (: Buttons : 2/5 You have a lot of choices for the visitor, that's good. But sorry, I don't like them. ): Hmm, may I suggest some button request sites? In This Moment, Exhilarating*, and Buttoness. TOTAL SCORE: 84/100 ---- third review...I think i did a great job, dont you? Pending..... 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