Pick up your request here. Please let me know when you're done with the request!
4. Colored Wishes
- Join the first two sentences together, as the second is a sentence fragment. [Hello guest, and welcome to Colored Wishes, providing you the].
- Inset a comma at [what you need, feel free to].
- Not sure if you need to mention if it's a image-heavy site, but I have a super fast connection so I don't have an issue with loading time. If you notice it or others do, keep it and remove the last !, but if not, then I would remove the note.
- Join these sentences together with a comma: [I absolutely love customizing my pets, and not just in Dress to Impress].
- Completely optional, but you can capitalize Neopoints if you want to but that's up to you; just make sure that it's consistent throughout your site.
- Same as for Neocash.
- Lengthen [neo] to [Neopets] in the second paragraph.
- Change [actually listed on
my neopetLemenia's petpage] to [actually listed on Lemina's petpage].
- Join these sentences together: [with the customization, so maybe].
- In the Me section, the second paragraph, it says not to copy the custom item for item, but in the second bullet point in the rules that it's alright to copy as long as it's not a customization site like yours. It's not clear whether or not it's alright to copy.
- Not a proofreading point, but once the Darigan pets are listed, the hover over to display the pet color and species does not work. However, those pets that do not have the display, when hovered over, show a tiny box on the cursor that says what the Neopet is.
- The same hover effect is not appearing like in the NC Ideas category.
Request a Customization
- Change [will be on it's way!] to [will be on its way!].
- Join together the last two sentences in the first paragraph: [what looks good, so feel free].
- Remove the space after the slash in the second bullet point.
- Add a period at the end of the third bullet point.
- Remove the space after the slash in the form.
- Change [As
thetime goes by] to [As time goes by].
- In the second bullet point, capitalize the words in the subject so that it reads [Voting on Colored Wishes!].
- Remove the space after the slash in the third bullet point.
Kriffy's Item Spotlight
- Remove the spaces after the slashes.
- The back button on this page leads the reader to the Sitely page, not back to the ToC for the You category.
- In Link Back, remove the second sentence or place it in parentheses.
- Link The Lunch Box to here.