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2. Dragon's Lair

Overall | Petpages | User Lookups | Mixed/Other

Home

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Adoptables/Pixels

  • Penciled is inactive (last update was in December 2014).
  • All of the Cupcakes! is closed.
  • Beyond the Batter is inactive (last update was in October 2014).
  • The site Piinattsu's Adoptees is broken; many of the images have been moved/deleted.

Adoptions/Trades

  • Home At Last is closed.
  • Ray of Light is on hiatus.
  • Hippo Adoption Agency is closed according to the owner's userlookup.
  • For Draik's Sakes! hasn't been updated since October 2014.
  • Avatarable hasn't been updated since November 2013.

Art & Writing

  • Artfullness is closed.
  • Meghaanlee's Art no longer takes requests.
  • Writer's Workshop is on hiatus.
  • Manga Coloring For Beginners has several broken images in its content.
  • The layout for Adding a Character is broken but the page is still usable.

Coding & Design

  • The site Lore is linked in italics.

Dailies/Nps

All links check out.

Directories

  • Vestige was last updated in November 2014.
  • Laputa hasn't been updated since December 2014.
  • Archways Directory was last updated in December 2014.
  • Auditore Shop Directory is closed.
  • There is no indication when the first Altador Cup Directory was last updated.
  • The second Altador Cup Directory was last updated in May 2008.
  • The Guide Library is probably out of date with some of its links lsited.
  • The Observatory also probably contains some broken links.
  • The Tutorial Place may also have broken links.
  • Eclectic hasn't been updated since May 2013.
  • Greenhouse was last updated in August 2014.
  • Flying Solo hasn't been updated since April 2014.
  • Remember Me was last updated in December 2014, but the site does not have to be updated often since it's a UC pet directory.
  • Past Winners hasn't been updated since November 2014.

Fonts

  • For Daggre's Awesome Font Tutorial , all of the example images are broken. Perhaps strike this link?

Graphics

  • Esquire hasn't been updated since late December, 2014.
  • Rocanola does not offer requests anymore, but hasn't been updated since march 2014.
  • CC Images hasn't been updated in several weeks.
  • Meiyu hasn't been updated since December 2014.
  • Whirligig hasn't been updated since July 2014.

Guides

  • Feed the Meepits is closed (page reset).
  • The layout for Brayca's Guide to Scams is broken and hasn't been updated in a whle.
  • Games of the NC Mall has out of date information.
  • The Toy Box is out of date (last update was in March 2013).

Miscellaneous

  • The Ixi Closet is on hiatus and the content is not available.

Premades

  • Mundinho de Talissa has several broken images, but some of the content is still available for use.
  • Nienke's Premades is no longer updating its content.
  • The layout for Sugary Premades doesn't function completely.
  • Symphonie Premades has a broken layout with broken images, as well.
  • Since many of these sites haven't been updated in months/years, I'll check the code to make sure that it functions as it should since the filters have changed. I'll get back to you after the link sweep about which sites have broken content, as this will take a while.

Requests

  • K's Shields may or may not be inactive.
  • Scheme was last updated in December 2014. Possibly inactive?

Review Sites

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Untaken Names

All links check out.

Extras Page

  • (Former Items) Link the banner made by Caro here.
  • (Former Items) The first "Ranked at" button links to a dead page which is on a frozen account (not sure if they made the button or not). If you remember the username of the person who made the button, link the button to them.
  • (Former Items) Link the last button here.
  • (Gifts) The second gift banner was made by Lina.
  • (Gifts) Change the link for the last gift banner to here.
  • (Rankings) A Small List no longer has rankings due to the site no longer being a directory. Remove the link? It's up to you, as the site remains open.
  • (Rankings) Digihear is no longer open.
  • (Rankings) Affinity is no longer open.
  • (Fine Tuning) Soroptimist Directory is no longer open.
  • (Fine Tuning) A Small List does not have rankings anymore. Again, not sure if you link because the site is open but no longer offers rankings.
  • (Fine Tuning) Digihear is no longer open.
  • (Fine Tuning) Shenyi is no longer open.

Sitely

All links check out.

Final Remarks

  • The counter appears broken.
  • Any links not mentioned have no change in status.
  • NT articles weren't checked since they're static links and all had very similar URLs.

2.1 - Petpages

Overall | Petpages | User Lookups | Mixed/Other

If a site isn't listed here, then all of their premades work just fine or the site is striked.
(a/b): a is the number of non-functioning/broken layouts; b is the number of layouts styles on the site.
Some layouts given on the pages only differed in colour scheme, so those weren't checked as colours aren't broken (wouldn't that be silly if they were?).
Layouts tested in Firefox.

Classique

  • One of the layouts don't work. (1/5)

Coast

  • This site belongs in the Mixed category since they offer premade userlookups, petpages,and petlookups.
  • All of the layouts work.

Exclusive

  • Four of the layouts have broken images associated with them (2 of them backgrounds, 2 of them banners). (4/10)

Papeterie

  • Two of the layouts are usable, but none work like they're intended to. (7/7)

Simple CSS

  • Six of the layouts have broken images in them, some the frame, others the background, and sometimes both. (6/12)

These Are Premades

  • One of the layouts are broken. (1/11)

Unlocke

  • Four of these layouts have a broken image that isn't a major issue. (4/16)

2.2 - User Lookups

Overall | Petpages | User Lookups | Mixed/Other

If a site isn't listed here, then all of their premades work just fine or the site is striked.
(a/b): a is the number of non-functioning/broken layouts; b is the number of layouts styles on the site.
Some layouts given on the pages only differed in colour scheme, so those weren't checked as colours aren't broken (wouldn't that be silly if they were?).
Layouts tested in Firefox.

Ameria's Premades

  • Two layouts are broken. (2/15).

Back to You

  • One layout has broken images that can easily br replaced. (1/11)

Lua

  • Two of the layouts are minorly broken. (2/10)

Salient

  • All of the layouts have a broken image for the link back.
  • Two layouts have broken backgrounds. (2/16)

2.3 - Mixed/Other

Overall | Petpages | User Lookups | Mixed/Other

If a site isn't listed here, then all of their premades work just fine or their site is striked.
(a/b): a is the number of non-functioning/broken layouts; b is the number of layout styles in that section of the site.
Some layouts given on the pages only differed in colour scheme, so those weren't checked as colours aren't broken (wouldn't that be silly if they were?).
Layouts tested in Firefox.

Ailure

  • One pet lookup has non-working links. (1/4)

Mellie's CSS

  • Four petpage layout styles have a filtered word in it, but works fine if removed (4/22).
  • One petpage layout has a broken background.
  • One userlookup's alignment is off. (1/11)
  • Seven of the petlookup styles have their alignments off. (7/18)
  • Two of the petlookup styles don't display like the previews, but work just fine. (2/18)

Mundinho de Talissa

  • The petpage layouts they have for public use are templates from Exclusive with very few edits, although it says on her site that she did edit them, but it doesn't mention that on the premades. The rules of Exclusive state that they can be edited as long as it was stated that they were, but says nothing about redistributing them.

Nienke's Premades

  • Two petpages have broken images. (2/40)
  • One of the guild layouts is too long in terms of character count, but that's easily remedied by removing the dummy text. (1/8)

Silent Serenity

  • Two of the retired userlookups are broken. (2/16)

That One Page

  • Two petpage layout styles have a filtered word in it, but works fine when removed. (2/25)
  • Two petpage layouts have headers that aren't working. (2/25)

3. Parchment

Overall | Short Stories | Series Stories | Request Portfolio
Each story/request type has its own section. Updates were not proofread.

Home

  • Add a comma here: [send in requests, and more]

Stories

  • Change [different parts to it. Such as] to [different parts to it, such as]
  • Perhaps add a word to [abandoned pets join to] to change it to [abandoned pets band together to]? Something along these lines.

Request

  • [fruits and reading stories] sort of sounds like the reader is eating the stories. Maybe [fruits and reading several stories]?
  • Remove the comma in [ink bottle, and a].
  • Not proofreading related, but at the end of the request and pickup page, the back button leads to the extras section. Is this intended?
  • Change [and in it's place] to [and in its place].

Extras

  • Change [want to see. But please] to [want to see, but please].
  • The second to last quote was said by Steve Jobs.
  • (Quotes) [more than 9000] should be [more than 9,000].

Sitely

  • For consistency with the blurb at the beginning of the Stories section, change [It read, you] to [It read: You].
  • The copyright at the bottom should be 1999-2015. Don't forget that that appears two times.

3.1 - Short Stories

Overall | Short Stories | Series Stories | Request Portfolio

Illusen Tales

  • [All the other faeries listened, but as I kept watching the dark faeries, especially the little one, about my age.] This line is a bit confusing on what you're trying to convey. I'd rephrase it.
  • Remove the comma at [casts good spells, couldn't be].
  • Paragraphs should have only one speaker. The second, third, and fourth paragraph have Illusen and Jhudora talking.
  • Change [an earth faerie we are] to [an earth faerie; we are].
  • Remove the comma at [dark purple, and black].
  • Confused on what Illusen is saying at this point: [but the only why]. Is she trying to say [the only reason]?
  • Change [stay away, but] to [stay away from dark faeries, but].
  • Make sure there's a space between [Finally she said,Alright].
  • Change [friends. in secret] to [friends, in secret].
  • Brain Tree is a proper noun.
  • Capitalise Faerieland here: [traveled back to faerieland].
  • Change [ever since. Away from] to [ever since, away from].

The Abandoned Project

  • Neopian(s) should be capitalised throughout this story.
  • Change [their owners, and buying stuff right] to [their owners, buying stuff, right].
  • Now a days is one word.
  • Change [on the walls, it was] to [on the walls; it was].
  • [how the pet is] is a weird way to phrase what you're saying. Perhaps [information on the pet]?
  • [a success until today] sounds like they were a success up until the telling of the story. Remove [until today].
  • Rephrase [brings us until today] to [brings us to today].

Snowfall

  • [Twas] should be [T'was].
  • Change [sugar cookies are set] to [sugar cookies were set].
  • Story is being told in past tense, so [Oh, it's so beautiful!] is [Oh, it was so beautiful!]
  • When the baker is talking about the tree, he mentions another tree in the [Central]. I'd double check if the place is called the Central; it may be called the centre plaza.
  • Perhaps rephrase [family made truce with] to [family made peace with]?

A Musical Prodigy

  • Change [wasn't home. Which was] to [wasn't home, which was].
  • Change [After dinner] to [After cooking dinner].
  • Change [pleading gave with my clam one. Okay. I said] to [pleading gaze with my calm one. Okay, I said].
  • Change [Right when I was down] to [Right when I was done].
  • [crushed me in a bone crushing hug] is a bit repetitive. Choose different words.
  • [really talented sis] should have a comma. Change it to [really talented, sis].
  • Was the brother saying that at the same time Riley was hugged? Clarify.
  • Without is one word at [I said, with out].
  • Change [representing the mood sadness.] to [representing the overall sad theme of the piece.]
  • At this point, it is not clear when Riley was playing. Was she playing the song at the recital? Or after the recital? I'd go back and reread this section and make edits as needed to show when she was playing the song, because at first it sounds like she is playing after the recital.
  • Also some confusion if Riley is a boy or girl, although Riley's gender doesn't affect the story.
  • Change [prestigious Arts school] to [prestigious arts school].
  • When the mother says [did I good job], does she mean [did a good job]?
  • Change [I haven's had] to [I haven't had].
  • [She began talking again when we entered the house, and kids have gone to bed.] The end of this sentence is weirdly phrased. Perhaps [She began talking again when we entered the house, after my siblings went to bed.]?

3.2 - Series Stories

Overall | Short Stories | Series Stories | Request Portfolio

A New Beginning: Part 1

  • Is this story told in past or present tense? The line [were not always at peace] makes it sound like this story happened in the past, because they're at war.

A New Beginning: Part 2

  • Change [had a really conversation] to [had a real conversation].
  • Add a comma between the two okays where Kara is starting to tell a joke.
  • Add a comma after face at [smile on her face says].

A New Beginning: Part 3

  • Change [since they were little bunnies] to [since they were little].
  • Use the plural form of Ms. ("Mss.", "Mses.", or "Mmes.") instead of the singular form at [Ms.Blake and Kara].

Desert Wanders: Part 1

  • Owner and sister shouldn't be capitalised in the fifth paragraph.
  • The shouldn't be capitalised in [across The Lost Desert].

3.3 - Request Portfolio

Overall | Short Stories | Series Stories | Request Portfolio

Rita @ Eternity

  • Change [a single leaf. It's bright] to [a single leaf. Its bright].
  • Change [brown. Kind of like] to [brown, kind of like].
  • Change [and in it's place] to [and in its place].

James @ Coax

  • Kiko Lake is a proper noun.
  • The word Kikos is a proper noun.
  • Change [a small house. And the] to [a small house, and the].
  • Change [the room is two] to [the room are two].
  • Change [word take me there when] to [words, "Take me there" when].

Rebecca @ Stardust

  • Change [night sky. Then more] to [night sky, then more].
  • Add a comma after no at [No not the brown].

Rose @ Whisper

  • Change [in search of it's secrets] to [in search of its secrets].
  • Change [timeless. As if] to [timeless, as if].
  • Add a comma after you at [you haven't well,].
  • Add a comma after here at [Now here take this].

Lisa @ Honey

  • The flower was falling to the ground, but it suddenly ended up in the reader's hand. Bit confusing here.

Justine @ Starry Sparkles

  • Remove the comma at [represent dreams, and fantasy].
  • Add a comma after no at [No not floating].
  • Change [wavy hair. As dark] to [wavy hair, as dark].
  • Remove the comma at [of luck, and magic].
  • Remove the comma at [the path, until you].
  • Change [the marketplace, see] to [the marketplace, you see].
  • Add a comma after alright at [Alright here's a little ].

4. Sitesaholic

All edits are displayed in chronological order so you don't need to jump around your page to find items. Please neomail me if you have any questions about anything.

Home

  • In the first paragraph, [That time is gone, but with Sitesaholic I hope to bring it all back, and get people using these sites, and helping these sites grow by bringing users to them.] should be [That time is gone, but with Sitesaholic I hope to bring it all back, and get people to use these sites, and help these sites grow by bringing users to them.]
  • I don't think the first o in On-Neo needs to be capitalised. Up to you.
  • Perhaps change [non-site owners] to [non-site owning users]?
  • Updates were not proofread.
  • Change [points they would of earned] to [points they would have earned].
  • Remove the comma at [earn more points, by using].
  • [special things such as, shout-outs] should be [special things such as: shout-outs].
  • Change [layout requests, etc. All provided by] to [layout requests, etc., all provided by].
  • [about how collect points] should be [about how to collect points].
  • Remove the comma at [redeeming points, and what rewards].
  • Add a comma here: [visit the "Rewards Catalog, also located].

Sign Up

This section is good.

Point Banks

  • Remove the comma in [with a bank, as a hidden].
  • The T should be lowercase at [within 48 hours (This].

Rewards Catalog

This section is good.

Site Owners

  • Change [reward costs, you can then] to [reward costs; you can then].

Events

  • [1st Ever Event] should be [1st ever event] unless that is the name of the event.

Advertise

  • [portfolio, etc for] should be [portfolio, etc. for].
  • Rephrase [It either costs 100 points, or you are offered it for different reasons.] to [It costs 100 points unless you are offered it for different reasons.]. This is still a little awkward as it isn't really clear what the different reasons may be.
  • Change [redeem it click here and give me] to [redeem it, click here, and give me].
  • There is some pronoun ambiguity in the last sentence, [Once approved you can come back to find it linking to that page!], namely with what "it" could be. Perhaps rephrase it to [Once approved you can come back to find your ad on this page!]?

Sitely

This section is good.

5. Lawless Lutari

All of your Lutaris are in the correct categories!

Home

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Get Listed

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Lutaris

  • These Lutaris are on frozen accounts: Xanro (Dimensional), Fulo (Maractite), and Keryo (Skunk). Not sure if you still want them to be listed still or not.
  • Psilocybani (Disco) apparently does not exist. Their pet lookup states, "Sorry, there is no Neopet by that name in Neopia."

Toybox

All links check out!

Pet Spotlight

All links check out!

Extras

All links check out!

Sitely

  • Undead's Uni Database has moved to here.
  • Not related to the link sweep, but there is a board sig at the very end of your sitely?

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