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2. Dragon's Lair
- Jepzine's Cafe is now closed since the account is frozen.
- Purin hasn't been updated since December 2015, and also offers requests.
- Bisou is closed.
- Aludra's Makeables is now closed.
- The Velvet Underground is now closed.
- Fuzzy's Draik Lab is on hiatus.
- Hissi Adoptions is now closed.
- Secret Garden is on hiatus.
- The Island of Misfit Toys is an active site.
- Adri & Sarah's UC Trading Guide is closed.
Art & Writing
- Doing the Art Thing is on hiatus.
- LemonPOP was last updated late December 2015.
- Zaine's Art was last updated July 2015.
- Diabolical Box is closed.
Coding & Design
- Filter Solutions isn't going to be updated since Weapon has been on a hiatus, but the site stil functions.
- I'm not sure if Doodlebop's Color Guide is supposed to have colour in the blank cells on the page, but other than that, the page still functions.
- The above also goes for Ichor's Help Page.
- Create Impressions has some important images that are broken.
- 4 Corners has enough information on the page that the broken images (which are just part of the key) don't detract from it.
- Tips For Better Icons has a few images that are broken.
- Kim's 50k a Day Guide is outdated since the scores are based off of the rations from 2011.
- Roxxaniee's 40k A Day is based off of rations from 2008, so it is no longer relevant.
- Smile's Tips On Making Neopoints is closed.
- Starrytimes's Dailies & 50k A Day Guide has a few scored on it that are from 2008.
- The Wealth Runs Deep has ratio scores that are from 2012.
- Zen's Neopoint Guide has score ratios that are from 2010.
- Autumn Rain hasn't been updated since July 2015.
- The Popsickle Stand was last updated November 2015.
- The Shelf Directory was last updated July 2015.
- Asura was last updated November 2015.
- #hashtags is more of a guild directory than an extension of Asura, if it even is that now.
- Diamond Directory was last updated December 2015.
- Archways Directory was last updated October 2015.
- Rainy's Bori Directory was last updated November 2015.
- Diamond Bruce Directory was last updated November 2015.
- Draik's Nest was last updated December 2015.
- Heffalump Haven is closed.
- Faerie Feathers was last updated July 2015.
- Lawless Lutari was last updated November 2015.
- Poogle Pages was last updated September 2015.
- Mouflon is closed.
- Identity is closed.
- Cherry Blossom is closed.
- Chrysalis is closed.
- Magnet was last updated July 2015.
- The majority of the images at Mint Condition are broken.
- I'm not sure if Saayiita's Strawberry Patch is actively taking requests because the owner has been on recently and I don't see any updates.
- The icons are gone for Rocanola, but the rest of the content is still there.
- Bejeweled Tutorials is closed.
- Meiyu was last updated August 2015.
- One of a Kind is on hiatus.
- Whirlgig is on hiatus.
- The request page of Whirlgig is gone.
- Stellar Shields is closed.
- Flaunt was last updated December 2015.
- Lend A Hand has recently been updated.
- Rush Hour was last updated December 2015.
- Spring Cleaning is closed.
- Sublime Design was last updated September 2015.
- The Anti-Scam Tips Page has a broken link which stops the rest of the content from displaying.
- The Toy Box looks pretty complete except for the opening image.
- Relax & Restock is closed.
- Images at Restocking are broken.
- Innukas is now known as Layouts by Alexa.
- Sakura Express is closed.
- The images from These Are Premades are broken.
- Altador Cup: Graphics and Resources have moved here and is called Maple Field now.
- The images at Back to You are broken.
- Hannah's Graphics was last updated April of some year.
- Images at Salient are broken and was last updated in June of some year.
- Beetle offers requests.
- Brevity is on hiatus.
- Satellite is closed(?) because the owner's account is frozen.
- Hirondelline's Layouts has broken images.
- Landscape was last updated December 2015.
- Pandora was last updated December 2015.
- Peaceful was lat updated in August of some year.
- Lux's Shop Resource is currently on a revamp.
- Chinensis Designs is on indefinite hiatus.
- Catnip is on indefinite hiatus.
- I'm not sure if Ascendio should be striked since the owner of the site has been on in the past week.
- Beta is on hiatus.
- Beta was last updated December 2015.
- Route 10 is on hiatus.
- I'm not sure if Wishes and Dreams is open or not since the layout is broken and there is no content.
- One of the owners of Shark Tank is either taking a leave from Neopets or left.
- Lush was last updated November 2015.
- I don't think The Gift Site Consulting is on hiatus since the owner is updating her directory.
- 30 Beginnings was last updated December 2015.
- Abyss was last updated August 2015.
- Ambidexterity was last updated November 2015.
- The first "Listed @" button should link to Nina's lookup since Cataclysm is closed.
- Not related to the link sweep, but you might want to place some padding around the buttons that don't have any links since they squish against each other.
- Add a comma here: [send in requests, and more]
- Change [different parts to it. Such as] to [different parts to it, such as]
- Perhaps add a word to [abandoned pets join to] to change it to [abandoned pets band together to]? Something along these lines.
- [fruits and reading stories] sort of sounds like the reader is eating the stories. Maybe [fruits and reading several stories]?
- Remove the comma in [ink bottle, and a].
- Not proofreading related, but at the end of the request and pickup page, the back button leads to the extras section. Is this intended?
- Change [and in it's place] to [and in its place].
- Change [want to see. But please] to [want to see, but please].
- The second to last quote was said by Steve Jobs.
- (Quotes) [more than 9000] should be [more than 9,000].
- For consistency with the blurb at the beginning of the Stories section, change [It read, you] to [It read: You].
- The copyright at the bottom should be 1999-2015. Don't forget that that appears two times.
3.1 - Short Stories
- [All the other faeries listened, but as I kept watching the dark faeries, especially the little one, about my age.] This line is a bit confusing on what you're trying to convey. I'd rephrase it.
- Remove the comma at [casts good spells, couldn't be].
- Paragraphs should have only one speaker. The second, third, and fourth paragraph have Illusen and Jhudora talking.
- Change [an earth faerie we are] to [an earth faerie; we are].
- Remove the comma at [dark purple, and black].
- Confused on what Illusen is saying at this point: [but the only why]. Is she trying to say [the only reason]?
- Change [stay away, but] to [stay away from dark faeries, but].
- Make sure there's a space between [Finally she said,Alright].
- Change [friends. in secret] to [friends, in secret].
- Brain Tree is a proper noun.
- Capitalise Faerieland here: [traveled back to faerieland].
- Change [ever since. Away from] to [ever since, away from].
The Abandoned Project
- Neopian(s) should be capitalised throughout this story.
- Change [their owners, and buying stuff right] to [their owners, buying stuff, right].
- Now a days is one word.
- Change [on the walls, it was] to [on the walls; it was].
- [how the pet is] is a weird way to phrase what you're saying. Perhaps [information on the pet]?
- [a success until today] sounds like they were a success up until the telling of the story. Remove [until today].
- Rephrase [brings us until today] to [brings us to today].
- [Twas] should be [T'was].
- Change [sugar cookies are set] to [sugar cookies were set].
- Story is being told in past tense, so [Oh, it's so beautiful!] is [Oh, it was so beautiful!]
- When the baker is talking about the tree, he mentions another tree in the [Central]. I'd double check if the place is called the Central; it may be called the centre plaza.
- Perhaps rephrase [family made truce with] to [family made peace with]?
A Musical Prodigy
- Change [wasn't home. Which was] to [wasn't home, which was].
- Change [After dinner] to [After cooking dinner].
- Change [pleading gave with my clam one. Okay. I said] to [pleading gaze with my calm one. Okay, I said].
- Change [Right when I was down] to [Right when I was done].
- [crushed me in a bone crushing hug] is a bit repetitive. Choose different words.
- [really talented sis] should have a comma. Change it to [really talented, sis].
- Was the brother saying that at the same time Riley was hugged? Clarify.
- Without is one word at [I said, with out].
- Change [representing the mood sadness.] to [representing the overall sad theme of the piece.]
- At this point, it is not clear when Riley was playing. Was she playing the song at the recital? Or after the recital? I'd go back and reread this section and make edits as needed to show when she was playing the song, because at first it sounds like she is playing after the recital.
- Also some confusion if Riley is a boy or girl, although Riley's gender doesn't affect the story.
- Change [prestigious Arts school] to [prestigious arts school].
- When the mother says [did I good job], does she mean [did a good job]?
- Change [I haven's had] to [I haven't had].
- [She began talking again when we entered the house, and kids have gone to bed.] The end of this sentence is weirdly phrased. Perhaps [She began talking again when we entered the house, after my siblings went to bed.]?
3.2 - Series Stories
A New Beginning: Part 1
- Is this story told in past or present tense? The line [were not always at peace] makes it sound like this story happened in the past, because they're at war.
A New Beginning: Part 2
- Change [had a really conversation] to [had a real conversation].
- Add a comma between the two okays where Kara is starting to tell a joke.
- Add a comma after face at [smile on her face says].
A New Beginning: Part 3
- Change [since they were little bunnies] to [since they were little].
- Use the plural form of Ms. ("Mss.", "Mses.", or "Mmes.") instead of the singular form at [Ms.Blake and Kara].
Desert Wanders: Part 1
- Owner and sister shouldn't be capitalised in the fifth paragraph.
- The shouldn't be capitalised in [across The Lost Desert].
3.3 - Request Portfolio
Rita @ Eternity
- Change [a single leaf. It's bright] to [a single leaf. Its bright].
- Change [brown. Kind of like] to [brown, kind of like].
- Change [and in it's place] to [and in its place].
James @ Coax
- Kiko Lake is a proper noun.
- The word Kikos is a proper noun.
- Change [a small house. And the] to [a small house, and the].
- Change [the room is two] to [the room are two].
- Change [word take me there when] to [words, "Take me there" when].
Rebecca @ Stardust
- Change [night sky. Then more] to [night sky, then more].
- Add a comma after no at [No not the brown].
Rose @ Whisper
- Change [in search of it's secrets] to [in search of its secrets].
- Change [timeless. As if] to [timeless, as if].
- Add a comma after you at [you haven't well,].
- Add a comma after here at [Now here take this].
Lisa @ Honey
- The flower was falling to the ground, but it suddenly ended up in the reader's hand. Bit confusing here.
Justine @ Starry Sparkles
- Remove the comma at [represent dreams, and fantasy].
- Add a comma after no at [No not floating].
- Change [wavy hair. As dark] to [wavy hair, as dark].
- Remove the comma at [of luck, and magic].
- Remove the comma at [the path, until you].
- Change [the marketplace, see] to [the marketplace, you see].
- Add a comma after alright at [Alright here's a little ].
5. Lawless Lutari
- These Lutaris are on frozen accounts: Xanro (Dimensional), Fulo (Maractite), and Keryo (Skunk). Not sure if you still want them to be listed still or not.
- Psilocybani (Disco) apparently does not exist. Their pet lookup states, "Sorry, there is no Neopet by that name in Neopia."
- Undead's Uni Database has moved to here.
- Not related to the link sweep, but there is a board sig at the very end of your sitely?
Any of these images are fine. If these images aren't good, I can choose new ones.