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Welcome to endless autumn.
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reviews are currently open!

the grading!

First Impression: ?/15: This includes your link back buttons, your headers, and everything I see right when I come in, or before I even arrive (buttons). Do I want to stay, or click the X?

Layout: ?/20: This is a very important section. Of course, content matters, but how you display it is really important. Is it a premade layout? Is it unique? Are the colors blinding, or do they blend well?

Content: ?/30: Stolen content gets an automatic zero for this section. Is your content nicely done? Is it high quality? Did you spend time on it?

Originality: ?/10: Is this your unique idea, or is it a copy of someone else's site?

Spelling/Grammar: ?/10: I won't be really strict here, as I forget to capitalize every once in a while, but chat speak and poor spelling isn't acceptable.

Organization/Neatness: ?/15: Overall, is your site neat and organized, or is it a big mess? Are visitors overwhelmed by content everywhere and nothing in categories, or is it nicely arranged?

Bonus Points: ?/5: Did your site really stand out? These bonus points are hard to get!

Final Score: ?/100

Pathway Buttons!

First Impression: 10/15: I like your link back buttons, but you're a button request site, for god's sake. If people like your link back buttons, they'll click them, thinking you can make similar buttons for them. You MUST have your own buttons. That's why I took off so many points. Also, you need a banner. Try a banner request site... maybe Goldmine?

Layout: 15/20: Hmm. You have a premade layout, which is fine, I guess, but it seems like you didn't edit it at all! You also might want to put your updates in a scroll box. You also might want to put your portfolio in one, too. I like the pixel/buttons at the top of your page. On your frequently asked questions, the very last question is in italics. Any particular reason why? Now, at the bottom, on your credits section, you NEED to link back with clickable links, not just this: "/~blahblahblah".

Content: 22/30: You still have a lot of work to do. You definitely need to have a font/animation section like the other sites. I see your explanation, but people WILL NOT request buttons from you unless they can choose these things! A lot of your fonts are hard to read. Here are some fonts I suggest: Redensek, silkscreen, 04b03, handyoo, mizu. I really like your banners. Now, I don't exactly understand the "add my credit?" section. If you have link back buttons, you don't need that.

Originality: 10/10: Your buttons and banners are very different!

Spelling/Grammar: 10/10: Perfect.

Organization/Neatness: 15/15: great job.

Bonus Points: 0/5:These bonus points are hard to get!

Final Score: 85/100

LadyBug PetPages!

First Impression: 13/15: Your link back buttons are very cute. As the first thing that visitors see, that's important. Your banner could be better. The font is rather unprofessional.

Layout: 17/20: I like your layout. There's a few things that could be fixed, though. For example, the scroll bar is the default. i suggest editing it. Also, it seems like you have a font problem. I'm not a fan of any of the fonts you use.

Content: 24/30: Your pages are very well coded, but it seems that you have several color/pattern clashes.

Originality: 10/10: Very unique!

Spelling/Grammar: 10/10:Good job! I recommend not capitalizing as many words. Maybe bold them instead!

Organization/Neatness: 15/15:Great job.

Bonus Points: 0/5: These bonus points are hard to get!

Final Score: 89/100

Emma's Guild Directory!

First Impression: 13/15: Your link back buttons are nice. I like that you have one that says "Listed at..." and also one with just the name. However, I suggest that you make one saying something like "Listed at Emma's Guild Directory." Your colour scheme is nice, and I like the balloon pixels, but your main header doesn't really stick out. I suggest you make or request a banner.

Layout: 15/20: This is a premade layout, which i can understand as your site isn't a CSS/layout site. The color scheme is okay, though. Your "helpful" section doesn't link. you might want to fix that.

Content: 30/30: You have a nice variety of guilds. They range in size and theme.

Originality: 8/10: not extremely original, but I like that you added a bit about each guild.

Spelling/Grammar: 8/10:Good job! You have several punctuation mistakes such as "To apply nm me your site URL and you must have a button". You're missing several commas. On your sister site section, there's several mistakes. "your guild to here page aswell".

Organization/Neatness: 15/15:Great job.

Bonus Points: 1/5: I really like that you add a bit about each guild, and that you link to both the guild and the webbie.

Final Score: 90/100

Katie's Fonts!

First Impression: 14/15: I love the layout at first glance. The starry theme is very nice! Your link back buttons are nice, but the variety isn't great. They're all very similar.

Layout: 18/20: The layout's GREAT. I love it. However, the header/link font is very annoying. Also, the link backs for the buttons are hard to click on. Whenever I try to click it, the link moves. Good job editing the text areas. I hate it when people leave them as the default.

Content: 30/30: You have a great variety of fonts.

Originality: 7/10: this is hard to judge. I mean, your fonts are nice and pretty and well done, but they're not that unique. A lot of people have fonts like yours.

Spelling/Grammar: 10/10:Perfect.

Organization/Neatness: 15/15:Great job!

Bonus Points: 3/5: I really like your site!!

Final Score: 97/100

Otaku Studio!

First Impression: 12/15:Your link buttons are nice, but they don't seem to fit the rainbow scheme of your site. I suggest adding a few that are brighter colors. Your banner is very nice. I like the colors and the version name "rainbow veins". Nice job.

Layout: 20/20: This is great! Although it's a premade template, you did a GREAT job customising it. I really like the color scheme, if I haven't said that enough already.

Content: 25/30: You seem to be off to a great start, but you don't have a LOT of content yet. I hope you plan on adding more soon.

Originality: 10/10: this is very original.

Spelling/Grammar: 10/10:Perfect.

Organization/Neatness: 15/15: Great!

Bonus Points: 2/5: I love the customisation of your layout.

Final Score: 94/100

Panic Plot Ideas!

First Impression: 13/15: I really like your link back buttons. They are varied. It bothers me when people's link back buttons are all very similar. You don't have that problem! Good job! Now on to your main banner. It's not terrible, but it could be better. The fonts used aren't all that great. Did you make it? I suggest you request a banner from someone. Maybe Goldmine?

Layout: 18/20: Hmm. A lot of people use Storm templates, but yours is different. I like that you added a banner at the top, and edited the fonts. Also, I like the shades of blue colour scheme. Now, the "to the top" pixel has that annoying blue box around it. to get rid of it, add "border=0" after the image URL. that gets rid of the coloured border.

Content: 26/30: I like your plot ideas. I like how they only give you a hint of the plot, not the WHOLE story. That's good. But I suggest you do some investigating and try to notice some weird things in Neopia to incorporate into your plots, such as the existance of the myth of "Jelly World". Use something that already exists rather than making up the entire plot. Know what I mean?

Originality: 10/10: Your plots are very original.

Spelling/Grammar: 10/10: Perfect.

Organization/Neatness: 13/15: Your page seems to be pretty organized, but I think if you get any more user-submitted plots you might want to add them to the main column on the right. I also think that you should add the "disclaimer" to the bottom of the page. About your navigation. The names are clever, but just looking at them in the nav, I don't really have much of an idea what they're about.

Bonus Points: 0/5:These bonus points are hard to get!

Final Score: 90/100

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