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Bonjour, I'm Sarah, Owner of "Cold Kiss". This is a fabulous review site. It is very unique. Not as harsh as the others out there. Plz read on if you would like to learn a little about me.


Hey, my name is Sarah. I'm from the USA. I have a England and Australian accent. I have brown curly hair and a Unique style. I have 4 siblings. I have 3 older half siblings with the names of Summar-18, Hayleigh-19,& Jake-15.I have a younger brother named Bradley-11. And i'm 14. I want to be a singer and actess when i get older. I love the Jonas Brothers. I love the movie 'Camp Rock'. I love watching Scary Movies and Funny Movies. Most movies i watch are Pg-13. I dont like Miley Cyrus/Hannah Montana. I dont like Demi Lovato much. I do not like posers, phoney's, dorks, people who yell at me, video games, or stuff that my siblings like. Thats all for now. Continue at looking at the site.
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All of your content must be in decent organization. Content can not be only Icons and a few blends, if it is, then dont bother applying. It has to be the whole shabang of Site Layouts, Blends, Music Codes, Userlookups, CSS Layouts, Guild Layouts, etc. The content on your site must be a bit of a mix. The content can not only be Disney stars like Miley Cyrus and The Jonas Brothers(Yes I'm a fan, but still). It has to be a variety.

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Cleared on: August.12.2008

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Taylor, Kali, Evvie, & JuJu @ Unhappy Dream-July.24.08
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Nikki and Andrea @ Fallen Rainbows- August.15.08
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Lily @ Elements Graphics-August.20.08

Reviewed: Thursday-July.24.2008
First Glance: 13/15. When i first saw the layout, it was pretty Cool. But I think the layout could use a little work. It needs just a little bit more pictures/blending. But it is very Cute. I love it. =]
CSS/Coding 15/15. I love the coding. It totally fits the Jonas Brothers picture at the top. Very nice work on the CSS/Coding.
Content: 17/20.You have lots of conent. The only thing I dont like about the content is that most of it is Disney. I think you need to get more of Reality content and narrow down on Disney. And your blends aren't exactly blends, some of them are just pictures put on top of each other with words. For Example:

Updates: 9/10. I think you should work on posting less stuff info, and keep atleast a couple days worth of updates that way Visitors know that you update alot. Try not to put a question mark "?" by the date cause that may question the visitors if you really do update or if you just changed the date of the blog so it looks like it.
Originality: 15/15. Its definitly original. I bet alot of people who are looking for disney Graphics would Probaly go to you. But, you could use a few less animations. Its still a 15/15 for this portion.
Grammar/Spelling: 8/10. I found a couple mispelled words, seen here:
Redristriute----Redistribute
Advetizment----Advertizment
Wiil----Will
The Honas Brothers----Jonas Brothers
All very close but check back over when you spell things. That may help visitors understand you better.
Other:12/15. I think you should try adding more layouts. Like CSS, Or even userlookups. It may help with getting more visitors. And I love your userlookup *wink wink*. =]
Total: 89/100. Good Job. And thanks for being the first person that i can review. Your site is awesome and its pretty cool. Just remember to make your layout a little bit different like by Actually blending the layout and adding a couple textures and brushes and it could totally improve your site. And remember to Actually blend your blends, or else its just a picture colage. Thanks. And Good Job.




Reviewed:Thursday-July.24.2008
First Glance: 10/15. The layout is pretty colorful but its not very well blended. Its bright and it stands out but it doesnt have very much of a layout. It, to me, looks like you just put some pictures together and just erased the backgrounds. And I think you should just stay with one blend at the top of every page instead of changing it up. Its a unique idea, but it kind of is distracting.
CSS/Coding: 13/15. Very good coding. But i think that it could use some more colors. Like not too bright, and not too Dull. Your CSS, Is a bit too bright and not very colorful. You could use more of the Bold, Italic, And Underline to make your text stand out More.
Content: 13/20 I love how on the music, you have it so the people have to only click the artist's name instead of scrolling through all the music to find what they're looking for. I think thats a good idea. Your blends on the other hand, they need a little work. They're not blends in my point of view. To me, they look like a colage of pictures put on top of each other. Examples here:
They need to actually be blended. I suggest,if you dont already have it, Paint Shop Pro or Photoshop or Some other program that can blend. And try not using Photobucket. Some of you images dont show up.
Updates: 10/10. Very nice job on the updates section. Its in a nice order. Good Job. Originality: 15/15. Its very original. I think its the most Jonas Brother gaphics i've ever seen on neopets.But I Suggest you make more than just Jonas Brothers and Demi Lovato layouts.
Grammar/Spelling: 10/10. Looks to me that everything was spelt right. And I do understand why you put "Stone" for "Alyson". Cause of neopets!! Good job on spelling things!!
Other: 15/15. I loved how everything was organized and such. It was a very unique site. Keep up the Good Work.
Total: 86/100. Everything was very unique. But work on your CSS work and your Blending.

Reviewed:Friday-July.25.08
First Glance: 13/15. It was amazing when I first came on the Site. The layout picture was very delightful. The thing I Didnt like, was the way the side of the layout was. its just straight. But very nice. [=
CSS/Coding: 12/15. I loved the coding but I think it could use a little more of the colors that are in the layout picture. Like brown, black, grey, or Grey, black, and white. It would make it work more.
Content: 17/20. I loved all the Variety you had. But i think you could use just a bit more of other stars than disney. I understand you love disney, but it could use more of a variety of stars. And some of the Items you had could use a little less blending or a little less of color bubbles like this for example:

Updates: 10/10. I loved the update section. Everything was in order. And it was nice and tidy and inside of the "update box". [=
Originality: 15/15. Its very original. Alot of disney fans must love going there. I has lots of content and lots of other original items. Its very unique. I love it. [=
Grammar/Spelling: 10/10. I didnt find one mispelled word. Good job. Lovely work!!
Other: 15/15. I love your userlookup on your main account. Its very adorable. I love how you made it and its not premade. Its amazing. Keep up the good work.
Total: 92/100. Very nice work!! I lovely. I adore it. I think you could use some more brushes on the layout picture and some more colors from the layout picture on the CSS. Other than that. I love it. Its a truly amazing site. Keep up the good work!!


Reviewed:Sunday-July.27.08
First Glance: 15/15. I love the layout. I'm not a huge fan of Demi Lovato, But you made this layout of her look absolutly Flawless. I love the colors in the Demi Part of the Layout. Very Nicee!!
CSS/Coding: 13/15. It looks a little simple. It could use a little more work. Like more colors then just Red, Black, and White. Like try to work with some of the colors that are in the little part behind Demi. Like the Notebook part.
Content: 18/20. You should add some CSS Layouts. It might help a little or even fonts. Not very many Neopet sites have fonts anymore. So try adding a little more of that. I love how you have more then just Disney. You have other things then Disney. Love it. But this Blend isnt exactly a blend. It to me, just looks like a picture....

Updates: 10/10. I love how you have your Updates section organized by Actually saying when you last cleared everything else. Thats very cool and unique. Lovely!!
Originality: 15/15. It was very original. Its very different. I love it.
Grammar/Spelling: 10/10. I found nothing mispelled. You did a very Fine job on spelling. =]
Other: 15/15. I loved the Avril Lavigne Lookup. It looks darling!! Its amazing!!
Total: 96/100. Very Nice Job!!! Lovely!! Just work on some more brushes on the layout. Keep up the good Work.

Reviewed: July.29.08
First Glance: 13/15. To me it could use a little bit more work then just a big blend. It could use more colors.
CSS/Coding: 9/15. Its hard to see your text. I Suggest you get it has a white background beind your text. It might help a little. Other then that, the Css/Coding looks Great.
Content: 17/20. Very nice job. You had a big Variety. I love how your not all disney and how your also not all neo related. Its fabulous. Its very Nice. But your Icons look a bit too JPG/JPEG. Although, i'm not a huge fan of how your site layouts are made. For Example:

Updates: 9/10. The update section is very nice, but the font is a bit too light. Its a bit hard to read. Please fix that. It may help with Visitors.
Originality: 15/15. Everything is very original. I like how if you make a guild layout with a particular image, that you also use it in a pet page so they dont have to have a guild of the Particular guild layout.
Grammar/Spelling: 10/10. Very good. I did not find one Mispelled word. Good job!
Other: 14/15. I think its really unique how you have Scrollbar codes. I've never seen that on any Site. But i think you should also put a variety of more colors with that. Other then that, its pretty Cool.
Total: 87/100. Very Nice work. Be sure to work on your layout and your site layouts. But other then that, Very nice job.

Reviewed: August.01.08
First Glance: 15/15. When i first saw this site, It looked absolutely incredible. Its an amazing layout. The Selena layout is gorgeous. I love it. Well done.
CSS/Coding: 13/15. I think the headers are a bit too small. And the CSS didnt work very well in my firefox. But was able to open my Internet Explorer finally.
Content: 17/20. I think you should really add a bit more of reality things other then just Disney. Some people love things other then Just Disney. Yes, i'm a fan of disney, but others may like more then disney. Like models, etc. But i do think this icon could use a little less gradients or whatever you used. Example:
Updates: 8/10. Your updates section is not very good i'm sad to say. I think you should keep a few entries of your updates before your latest on there. That way the visitors know what else is new.
Originality: 10/10. I love everything that is on your adorable site. Everything is very original and very tidy and i just love it. Expecially your blog icon. So gorgous.
Grammar/Spelling: 10/10. I didnt find one mispelled word. Good job.
Other: 15/15. I love your polka dotted background. Its fabulous.
Total: 88/100. Very good job, just lighten up on things and a little less disney, and your site could be on its way to stardom. Nice job. =]


Reviewed: August.01.08
First Glance: 13/15. I think the layout could use a little more of brushes or texture or something to spaz it up. If you add a little more of that, it may increase your visitors and convince them to come back.
CSS/Coding: 15/15. I loved the coding. I also like how you use bold, italic, and underline. And the colors you used for the bold, italic, and underline. It looks very nice. But i'm not so crazy over your text area background. Its kind of, distracting and you cant really see where the Text is. If you change that. It may help.
Content: 18/20. I love the variety you have, but i think you need to add a little more to it. There not very much. I also think you should add some site names, or fonts or something. Your icons could also use a little less of the Gradients. Example here:

Updates: 10/10. I love how you dont get rid of your last updates right away. You leave a few up and you dont just have one update in the update box.
Originality: 15/15. Your site is very original. I love how its not all disney and how its not all reality things like models.
Grammar/Spelling:10/10. I didnt find any mispelled words. It was very good. Nice job. Keep up the good work.
Other: 15/15. I love the color pallet colors. Those are some cool colors.
Total: 96/100. Be sure to add more content. And also add more brushes to your layout. Good Job. Keep up the Good Work.

Reviewed: August.15.08
First Glance: 15/15. Thats incredible layout!! Thats amazing. But i do know you didnt make it. But thats ok. It works perfectly with your site.
CSS/Coding: 13/15. I didnt quite like that i had to go on my Internet Explorer. Next time try to get a site layout that works on both Internet Explorer and Mozilla Firefox. It may help. But nice job.
Content: 17/20. I'm not that big of a fan of how you do your color bubbles. To me it just looks like a dot of color. To make it look good, you may want to put that layer on either "Soft Light" or "Screen". And i'm not a fan of your icons. All of them are pixelated. Not everyone likes pixelated icons. For Example:

Updates: 10/10. I love your update section. Most of the sites i've reviewed, they're update section was either marquee or it was like a blog. And i'm not a fan of marquee.
Originality: 15/15. Nice job. Its very good. Except it needs more content. But other then that, its very nice.
Grammar/Spelling: 10/10. Godd job. I didnt find anything mispelled. Nice job. Keep up the good work.
Other: 15/15. I love your guys' userlookups. Very cute.
Total: 95/100. Be sure to add more content and try making your own layout sometime. Visitors like it best when you do. But keep up the good work.


Reveiwed: August.19.08
First Glance: 13/15. Nice layout, but i'm not fond of how her Background Changes from grey to Purple/Blue.
CSS/Coding: 13/15. I'm not too big on your headers. They're a bit small. And there's too much purple on the page. Its a big distracting.
Content: 20/20. Very nice variety. I think you need to work on your Color Bubbles, cause in this one, its just a dot of color. Example:

Updates: 10/10. Nice job on the update section. Very Organized. And i'm glad its not marquee. Cause its hard for me to read it in Marquee . =]
Originality:15/15. Thats a very original site. I love how you have brushes on it. Nice job.
Grammar/Spelling: 8/10. There were a few mispelled words in your blog. Besure to correct it. =]
Other: 15/15. I love your ashley tisdale guild layout. Its adorable. and Pretty.
Total: 94/100. Nice job, keep up the good work.=]

Reveiwed: August.19.08
First Glance: 13/15. Its too bright and too much is pixelated. I suggest less pixelateing.
CSS/Coding: 13/15.It looks a bit too simple. Your bolds, italics, and Underlines could use a bit more color to help them stand our.
Content: 20/20. i love your variety of things. It has a huge variety.Nice.
Updates: 8/10. Your update section took up half of the right column. I suggest you put your updates in a box like mine. And your might want to update more. The last time you updated was August 16th.
Originality: 15/15. Its very original. I love your selena page pack. But i suggest you code those so that people who dont know how to, can use it.
Grammar/Spelling: 7/10. On your august 13th Update, your grammar was not very good, you said: "But i lazy". and on you August 16th one, you said "Just print em out". If you use proper grammar, it might help the vistitor want to return to your site.
Other: 15/15. I love how you have bookmarks. i've never seen a site with "Book Marks" on it. Thats soo cool!!
Total: 91/100. Work on your layouts and work on your grammar a little more. But keep up the good work.=]

Reveiwed: August.19.08
First Glance: 13/15. Very nice picture of the jonas brothers. (i'm a fan too). Its very cute. But there is a bit too much Pink.
CSS/Coding: 13/15. Again, a bit too much pink. There is pink on everything. I'm not a fan of pink, but i can handle seeing it, just there is way too much on here.
Content: 15/20. There is too much disney. Not everyone on neopets loves disney, some people like fashion models (Like my layout on here). You might want to try adding more of not just disney. And some you need a little work on wear you put color bubbles. You chose good colors, but you put too many bubbles. Or how much color you put on the blends. For example:

Updates: 10/10. I love how organized it is. Its not all scrunched up and in the marquee form. (Note: not a fan of marquee). =]
Originality: 15/15. Its soo original. i havent seen a site like this at all. Good job.
Grammar/Spelling: 10/10. i didnt find anything mispelled. good job.=]
Other: 15/15. I absolutly, adore your Selena Gomez userlookup. Its sooo pretty.
Total: 91/100. Very nice job. try using less pink, and try adding more of other things that arent just disney. keep disney, just add a bit more of reality. Nice job. Love it. Keep up the Awesome work.


Reviewed: August.20.08
First Glance: 15/15. I absolutly love the layout. Its soo cute and it has a very good color combination.
CSS/Coding: 15/15. I did see your credits section that you didnt make the CSS but you did edit it. Which is still counted. By editing it, you made it soo much better. =]
Content: 20/20. I love the variety. Its sooo organized. And its not all disney, like most sites. I absolutly love these two Blends:

Updates: 10/10. I love how you explained when everything gets cleared. Nice job.
Originality: 15/15. This site for sure is sooo original. I've never seen anything like it.
Grammar/Spelling: 10/10. I found nothing Mispelled, Good Job.
Other: 15/15. I LOVE YOU HANNAH BETH BLEND!! Its amazing!!
Total: 100/100. CONGRADULATIONS!!! YOUR MY FIRST 100%!!!! WELL DONE!!! Keep up all the FABULOUS work.=]=]=]=]