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Elephantzze's Art
Score: 92/100
Problems: Under sister site, I don't think you meant what you typed. It says, "You should defiantly take a quick look around her site, and if you ever need a shield you know where to go! :)". You probably mean "definitely". Defiantly would be if you wanted people to break the rules. :)
Under "Credits", all except the last sentence have periods. You should add one there or eliminate the others.
Comments: I think on the main page the "Opened on" should be an extra line below.
Make the box on the pick-up page wider so you don't have to scroll over.
On the portfolio, try putting asterisks after the "**Drag into address bar to see full size" too.
On the Extras, try making the image narrower so you don't have to scroll over.
Under LInk back, try putting asterisks at the end too. And link back is often put under "sitely".
Overall: Pretty good, not many typos, I just made a lot of suggestions.
Tincebella's App
Score: 93/100
Problems: In the Welcome: It took me lots of time and editing to make this app nearly perfect for you, Chay, and other to enjoy. -It should be others
In the second paragraph of the story, you have "Haha Bella, to slow for us!" A purple draik said. "Yeah, yeah whatever Delilah." Bella sneered. -It should be (bold is changed) "Haha Bella, too slow for us!" A purple draik said. "Yeah, yeah, whatever, Delilah." Bella sneered.
Fourth paragraph: OH MY GOSH. Your just a draik." She chuckled.-Missing opening quotation mark, and should be "you're
Well, no" Miji answered.-You need a comma after "no
You're missing capitals and opening quotes.
Under plans, "petpet" should be capitalized.
Customization-Neopets gotta have fun too right? :) -fun too, right? You're missing the comma.
I'm not good at physical art but I am extremely computer savy. -I think savvy has two v's?
Profile: thanks should have a capital "t"
Comments: Well, you only asked about the story, but I did a bit more.
Overall: You have a lot of text and a lot of errors. Good job overall! It's a good story.
Ella's Banners
Score: 99.9 (With a bar over the 9)/100
Problems: None! Congrats!
Comments: When you link to a section, only part of the title comes up. I'm in Safari.
Perhaps under "Size of Banner" in the form, you should say, "or exact size". If you know how.
Overall: You have a great site with amazingly few errors! Take your perfect award! Yes, take the award as if your site was perfect (100/100). My comments may not be possible.
Broadway
Score: 96/100
Problems: Under "Welcome": I'm Karli, your lovely star *flips hair*- You have no period.
Under "Audition": Only sites on neopets.com.- You shouldn't have a period there.
Under "Playbill": You have random link back buttons. Why?
Comments: Your first box should be a little bit smaller. The next thing shouldn't show.
Overall: You have a really nice site with almost no errors. Great job!
The Ultimate Guide to Slorgs
Score: 88/100
Problems: Under "Contact Me", it says "If you hany any comments…". It should say "have".
Under "Slorg Avatars", it says "Have a Slorg attached to your petpet for 100 or more days.". It should say pet, not petpet.
Under Slorg Colors, under Green, it says "Also slorg's original color". Slorg should be capitalized.
Comments: You have two empty Affie sections.
Under Slorg Games, the images should be links too.
Overall: Pretty good, I love the page. It's really creative. But the way the colors is done can be confusing. Great job! Take your award!
