imperfect perfection*

Hello!" You hear a cheery voice call to you, "My name is Jackiiee, are you here to see your site is perfect?" She smiles as she points at the header. It reads: Imperfect Perfections. Jackiiee nods and looks at you, her brown eyes glowing, "Yup, that's the name. I hope you enjoy your stay! Just read all the stuff below then send it in if you want a review." She looks up at you again and smiles. Then she walks away, disappearing in the wind.

you hear a voice in the wind *

Novmeber 22nd-
Got another review request, so I am closing reviews D: Will finish all my reviews [hopfully] today, or by the end of this week. I also have a "summative task" due tomorrow. BUSYBUSYBUSY JACKIIEE! D:

November 21st-
OKAY. SO, ON THE 19TH I HAD THE WORSTEST HEADACHE KNOWN TO MAN. It was because of my awesome music trip ever *pokes blog below*. I am now affiliates with On the Run. Working on Innocent Word Reviews ... review xD

November 18th-
Later... Affiliates with the Script! (: And I finished one review!
I HAVEN'T UPDATED IN FOREVER. I AM FINISHING UP THE FLORIST'S REVIEW RIGHT NOW =D I haven't been updating because I have so much homework right now. English, and Religion textbooks are piled in front of me right now mocking me (yeah, mocking me! D:) Anyways, I got listed at The Schoolhouse and I am now affiliates with The Beach house. :D Tomorrow I am going on the most fantasical music trip ever! I promise I will finish reviews as soon as possible! :(

November 15th-
Later... I am now affiliates with The Courthouse! :D I am also an attorney there as well :)
HAPPY 10TH BIRTHDAY NEOPETS! :D

November 14th-
Quick update before I go to Saturday school (ugh). I got another review request! :D I will do most of my reviews today, since I finished all of my homework and I have no life (haha). ;D

Novmeber 11th-
Later... Finished one review! Sorry it took so long, trying to be as in depth as possible xD Also, tweaked the criteria a little xD
I will finish at least one review today! :D I also got another review request. Also... Happy Remembrance Day!

November 9th-
Later... Still working on my essay as I type D: A big thank you to Cass for pointing out a spelling error x3

I am now listed at Rave! =D I also got another review request. Short update, because I need to finish my english essay! D:

November 8th-
*squeals like a little girl* Yesterday I got 80 page views! =D Thank you all so much! :D Right now, I am listening to Celebrity Status by Mariana's trench while doing my english homework x) Anyways, going to finish at least one review today ... well, hopefully. I am also going to change the awards, with a blend from Lauren. Thank you! :D

November 7th-
Later... Another review request! =D
One new review request! (: I also got a button from Buttoness! Thank you! (: I have a lot of homework to catch up on, but I will finish at least one review this weekend. I have english, and a french test to study for. Wish me luck! xD

November 5th-
One new review request! (: I have so much going on right now ;-; I had to recite something from Romeo and Juliet today, it was fun! I got a 91% =D Anyways, have have a bunch of french homework, but I'll try to start at least one review today! (: Listening to Tick Tock by Kiesha, its a really catchy song xD

November 3rd-
Later... Done One review! It took me awhile because I was trying to be as in depth as possible xD Hopefully I'll finish the last one today or tomorrow! I also made my own button! I am so proud of it! Thank you Buttoness for your awesome button tutorial! It really works. You should try it! ;)
I will finish all my reviews today! (: I also edited the introduction, its nicer now xD I am also going to fix the site up and little. I hope you like the changes!

November 1st-
Later... Leena gave Jackiiee some tips about the affiliate and listed at boxes. THANK YOU =D I am also now affiliates with Windy! Yay! =D
Argh! I have a headache -.- I also got someone else on the waiting list! (: I am also working on the review for Pirate Girl's easy way to 15K. I hope I finished these reviews soon (;

October 31st-
Later... I FINISHED ONE REVIEW! =D
HAPPY HALLOWEEEN ! =D Anyways, I started reviewing, and I will finish all the people on the waiting list today, not that there are a lot of people on the waiting list xD I am also applying to get listed a lot of places so I can get more popular.

October 30th-
Ello! Today I had to dress up for school. I was a construction woman! xD Anyways, I got ONE new affiliate! I am also going to neomail the people whose sites have been VERY inactive and tell them that if they don't show any improvement in their site in the next few weeks, they will be deleted ;-; Always a shame to delete affiliates... Anyways, on the brighter side, my classroom door was voted MOST CREATIVE! Yeah! =D I also got one new review request~ I will be working on reviewing right now. ;3

October 29th-
Yay! Got my first review request! (:

Getting everything ready, opening will most likely be later today, or tomorrow! I am so excited. And once again, I am VERY sorry for losing the sites on the waiting list. Please neomail an application if you want to be reviewed!. Yes, I am accepting applications to be reviewed right now =D So please send a form in today! I am also doing an affiliate sweep. Sorry if I cut you from my list! D: I also moved my sister site to my affiliates since she was unactive. I'm also giving my affiliates that are inactive 1 more week, if they don't respond to my neomail, they will be removed ):

October 28th -
OH MY GOSH. I am soo sorry, I lost all the people on my waiting list, if you want to still be reviewed please neomail me the new form. Once again, I am so sorry!
Okay, well, new layout because the old one didn't support textareas D: But oh well xD Getting stuff up today, and hopefully, I will be neomailing all my affiliates and listers today! :D

October 27th -
So I've decided that I'm just going to have a blog instead of having updates. So much easier! Starting on my re-vamp! What do you think? (: Still under construction. Putting up my affiliates and listers, if you haven't figured out that I'm re-vamping; I will neomail you! ;D Ugh, I also have a test to study for ;-; WISH ME LUCK! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE be patient with me. I have so much going on right now xD

Rules&Criteria

Reviews are:
Reviews will be; Medium Slow

001. I do not review: off-neo sites, guilds, 'about me' pages, shops, galleries, or guilds. Everything else is fine!
002. Do not send me hate mail. You're asking for MY opinion on your site.
003. Jackiiee likes cookies. You may need to know that.
004. Do not ask me if your review is done. I will neomail you!
005. NO STOLEN CONTENT on your site. Whether your applying for my affiliates, or to be reviewed.
006. If you get a 79% or lower, you can apply for a re-review in about two weeks with improvements to your site.
007. If I don't respond to your review request within two weeks, please send me another one!
008. I have the right to reject ANY applications.

Criteria

First Impression- /15 First Impressions are VERY important. What do I think when I first look at your site? Do I think 'WOW' or 'BLEH'.
Organization&Neatness- /10 Is your text legible? Are your headers neat? Is everything where its supposed to be? Can I find everything fine?
Updates/Blog- /5 Do you update every so often? Everyday? Do you have a blog?
Spelling&Grammar- /5 Can you spell?
Content&Quality- /30 Does your content make my eyes bleed? If they're reviews; are they fair? If they're graphics; are they in good quality? Is there a good variety? Content and its quality makes a site what it is.
Other- /10 Does your site have a counter? Multiple link back buttons? How about a 'about you' section? Or a 'about the site' section?
Layout- /10 Is your layout premade? Is it 'blah'? Or is it AMAZING?
Originality/Effort- /15 Is the idea original? Is your site's name original? Are you reviews/graphics original? Is it obvious that you put a lot of effort into your site?
Total: ?%
Comments: My extra comments here

Review Form
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Reviews

Waiting List

Inncoent Word Reviews
Soroptimist Directory
Stargrazer
No Tomorrow
Neo~Nice
Anna's Dailies

The Three

First Impression- 14.5 When I first looked at your site, I really like the banner and layout. It all went really well with the theme and your introduction. But I also didn't quite understand why the navigation header was 'Take a Number'. Shouldn't that header be for your 'Fill out the Form' part of the site? I also really like your colour scheme, good job! :D

Organization&Neatness- 8 Your text and headers are neat. Everything seems to be very organized (good job). But, PUT YOUR REVIEWS IN A BOX, this way it would be easy to navigate your reviews, it would also make your page MUCH shorter, especially if your expecting more and more reviews for the future. But your site it neat and organized, except for the 'reviews' part. But it can be easily fixed ;)

Updates/Blog- 4 You update almost everyday! Very good. But, who is updating everyday? It is Nicole? Is it Leena? Or is it Chloe? You should put who updates what
(ex: Leena Reviewed +1 Site!
Nicole +1 listed @
Chloe We got a sister site! )

Spelling&Grammar- 5 Good job! It seems like all three of you can spell! :D

Content&Quality- 28 I really like how you have an through introduction in the beginning and then another brief introduction at the beginning of each section. You also have a good amount of reviews, many of them in good quality. Some of them more in depth than others; like sometimes Leena's reviews have more detailed descriptions of the criteria of the site(s). Although, Nicole's reviews are quite good, as well. But overall, you have really good in-depth reviews (some better than others), and a good amount of them as well.

Other- 8 You have affiliates, a sister site, awards, reviewers and listers. An 'About the owners' section would be really cool, since there are three different owners. You should also get a counter so you can show off how many people come to your site daily.

Layout- 8.5 Your layout is really nice. It fits really well with the theme and the banner. I have nothing much to say about the layout. Its really nice. Although the background could use the occasionally pops of dark green or black to match your banner.

Originality- 15 Your site name is really original, I wouldn't be able to think of a name like that xD Your site ideas are original, like your criteria, and your introduction. Your layout is original as well. Good job!

Total: 91%
Comments: Okay, I really love your site. Its very original for a review site, and you also have many reviews is good quality. Your layout could use a background with occasional colors of dark green and black instead of the same boring gray. You should also get a counter and add an 'About the owners' section. Overall, you have a fantastic site! Keep up the great work! You can pick up your award.

Pirate girl's quick easy way to 15K

First Impression- 6 First of all, your background goes with your theme of 'Pirate Girl's easy way to 15K', but what's with the pink everywhere? You don't really have a color scheme, which I highly advise you to get. I also not very fond of your site name, it's a little too long for my taste. Your background could use another color behind the dubloons; a light grey would be nice. Your banner is very nice; you should try to make your layout's colors match the colors of your banner. So far, my impression of your site is not that great.

Organization&Neatness- 6.5 Erm... I'm not a big fan of they type of font you chose; but you can read it clearly. I like the text on your headers; just not the color of the background. Your organization could use some work. Your navigation should go at the top of one of your sidebars, and the 'neomail me' section should go under your updates. You also have neomail signs everywhere, even though you already have a 'neomail me' section! Everything else seems to be in order. Just fix the things that I told you and you'll be on your way! :)

Updates/Blog- 5 You update almost everyday! Good job! But when you update during the same day, you say:11/01/09 (and again)-I added two affies.
11/01/09 (again)-I changed the envelopes back.
11/01/09-I sent a review request to Rose Reviews.

You should say:11/01/09 (later)- I added two affies
11/01/09 - I send a review request to Rose Reviews
But I didn't take any marks off ;D

Spelling&Grammar- 3 When you say, "Your pet may get another level..." it should be " Your pet may gain another level.... I also don't like when you say "Try your luck" in the beginning some of your descriptions of the games. It gets a little annoying. "Successfull" is spelled Successful. Other then that, everything is seems fine. The "Listed in" header should beListed at.

Content&Quality- 22 You have quiet a few dailies on this page. Very good! But some of the descriptions aren't very well written (Like when you say,Collect and change bank accounts when you have enough. Enough of what?!). I also like how you have images with each link. A few questions: Why do you have your "Horrible Link Back Buttons" there, when you don't expect anyone to use them? As far as I'm concerned that is a waste of space. If you don't like them GET RID OF THEM. Another one is: What is with the question marks beside some of the links?! What are they there for?! You need to TELL people what they mean. You can put something like this before you list your dailies: = PUT WHATEVER IT MEANS HERE. I also don't understand what a "Random Awesome Picture" has to do with dailies. If you're so proud of it, put it on your profile! Overall, you have a variety of dailies and their links. Good job!

Other- 8 You have a variety of link back buttons; but only two are actually in "good" condition. You have an "About me" section, "About the pet" section, affiliates, listers, reviews, a counter, a "stalker" counter, and fan mail. The ONLY thing about the fan mail is that it's in marquee! NEVER put any images on marquee! It makes it difficult for people to know what it says, click on it; or in this case, drag it to the address bar.

Layout- 4 Your layout is premade. Which is fine - but I have to take some marks off. Your background needs a color behind the dubloons; not just white. The background for your headers are - ugh. You need a different color! Pink does not match anything in the layout. A light, or dark grey would be nice. I, honestly, aren't too fond of the type of font you are using. A smaller font preferably. But your banner is really nice, and the theme of the layout is nice as well (maybe from exculsive, or kill the lights).

Originality- 5 I don't really think anything is original with the site. The name is okay, not the best. I have seen other more popular dailies sites out there. You have to make your site more appealing and more unique so people would want to go there to get their daily links! I suggest you start with a more appealing layout(Maybe from exculsive or kill the lights). But one thing that I have never seen on everyone's site is the "About the pet" part. Which is a good start! Try to think of something creative to add to your site!

Total: 59.5%
Comments: Okay, well, you're off to a good start! All I really suggest is a new layout, and a good color scheme. You could get a layout from Exculsive or Kill the Lights; of you can get a custom from XS Ideas. Maybe you should also change your font to make it a tad smaller, and a more in depth description for each daily. You have a little organizing to do, but not very much. You on your way! (:

The Audit

First Impression- 14 First of all, I love your layout, nice colors, and a nice color scheme. The only thing that I found annoying was how your div boxes are off to the left. If you put them in the center they would look much neater. Your site name is also very ... interesting. Not many people may know what it means, it would be nice if you put a definition of "Audit" on your site. I can't really find anything that I don't like about your site right now! Good job! :D
Organization&Neatness- 7 Text and headers are very easy to read. You're "Extra" Header should be "Vote for me!", and if you want to make an "Extra" section, it should go on the sidebar. Your sister/brother site announcement should also should be on the sidebar right before your affiliates. Your "Other Sites" as well as your "counter" should go on your sidebar. You're very neat; just your organization could use a little tweaking. ;D
Updates/Blog- 3.5 Your farthest gap between updates is 15 days! But you have updated almost everyday since then. Good job!
Spelling&Grammar- 1 You have a lot of problems in your updates with spelling [September 3, 2009:I add one more button, and I become an affie to another awsome site:)]. Add should be added, become should be became, and awsome should be awesome. So check your updates and fix your spelling mistakes! You forgot a comma in "If you do good, usually, you get an award!" For the second rule, I don't understand this sentence: "Don't get mad at me if I give you a bad grade! Ask some friends to look over your site first, then they could tell what you need to fix, then you come to me...and you get a good grade:)". You may want to consider revising it to: "Don't get made at me if I give you a bad review! Ask some friends to look over your site and help you fix it. When you're done revising it, come to me, and you may get a better grade!. In your criteria, for the spelling/grammar; it says: "Is it full of mistakes?" It should be "Do you have many spelling mistakes?". Specail is spelled special, adjustmeant is adjustment. You need to edit a lot of your grammar! Go over your site, and please, please, PLEASE, edit your text!
Content&Quality- 10 You have quite a lot of reviews done. Good job! I don't like how you say "Okay?" in every review, its gets annoying after a while. Also, some of your reviews are a little ... odd. For instance, for the review "In this Moment" you said: "Content- (27/30) Your buttons are amazing! High quality! Wahoo! And I see you make your own buttons. That's good. But you could add more, and not have all of them with animation. It's just that some people don't like animation. Okay? Nothing personal. Also, try to get listed at some more directories." Honestly, how could they add more buttons? Wouldn't they need requests to do that? Also, what if all the button requesters wanted animation with their buttons? The button maker can't stop adding animations to their buttons because they don't want to. Your reviews are also a little biased, one example is how YOU don't like too many animations, and how you don't like HTML coded layouts (from Anna's Dailies review). Try to look at it from a visitor perspective. You also don't go into depth; which many sites appreciate so they know what they're doing wrong and how they can fix it. I also don't understand the whole "Story Reviews" thing. Maybe if you explain it more in depth, people would understand it better. But it seems like a really good idea. Overall, you have quite an amount of reviews done. Most of them are pretty good, but most of them are a little... odd, and biased.
Other- 9.5 You have listers, affiliates (though not very many, try to send affiliate requests to more sites! :3), a variety of link back buttons, reviews, awards, a counter, and navigation. Good job!
Layout- 9 Your layout is very pretty, with a very nice color scheme. It is premade, but it is edited by one of your friends. The only objection I have is that it is off to the left ... please center it! :D
Originality/Effort- 7 Hmm... well, I can see your effort, but it seems you aren't trying hard enough. You can try to get more affiliates and listers so you could get more popular. Also, I don't see anything that original with your site. The name is okay, but the reviews and the criteria isn't very original. You're story reviewing seems very interesting, but it is not that popular. If you advertise that part of the site more, you are bound to get more "story review requests".
Total: 61%
Comments: Hmm... your site could definitely use some work. You have the potential but you need to show it even more. The only thing that you REALLY need to work on it your reviews and your SPELLING. Try to look at reviews in a different way, and FIX ALL OF YOUR SPELLING MISTAKES. Look through all of your text and please fix it! Just keep working at it, and try to take my advice. You're on your way! ;D

The Florist

First Impression- 15 I love your layout! It goes with your theme very well. Your navigation text is very creative as well; and works very well with your theme! I don't know what else to say! xD Your site has impressed me already! :D
Organization&Neatness- 10 Everything seems to be in order; your text, and headers are neat. I can find everything great. All I have to say is that you should have
Updates/Blog- 5 Yay! You update almost everyday. I also love how your updates are not just little brief notes. Good job!
Spelling&Grammar- 5 Don't see any spelling errors! (:
Content&Quality- 20 Your buttons are very nice! But some are MUCH better than others. For example, Foomanshu's button much better than The Audit's button. The Audit Button's text is very hard to read, unlike Foomanshu's button. Also, you don't give your "costumers" any say in what kind of animation they would like. Some people may not like the kind of animation that you put on their button. But you have a wide variety of borders and text that your costumer can choose from; which is very good. I also love your "Limited edition" Button bases, where someone can "grab" a button base. Very unique! Your icons are also very well made; very nice! Your button bases are also very nice and unique, I've seen nothing like them! :D Overall, most of your buttons are very nice, just try to put the same effort all of them! ;)
Other- 10 Your site has a counter, affiliates, listers, a variety of link back buttons, a sister site, reviews, and awards. Good job! :)
Layout- 10 Your layout is flawless, it shows off your theme very nicely. It was also made by you! Your layout is also very calming, with flowers and such. I also like the text at the bottom of the flowers in your layout. Very nice!
Originality/Effort- 13 Something that I haven't seen in a button site before is icons and a "Limited Edition buttons", which is really cool. Your button styles are also really cool and it seems like you put a lot of effort into your site! Except for a few buttons, but overall, you have a really original site! :)
Total: 88%
Comments: You really have a fantastic site! I love your layout, and your buttons. You also make your site your own; which is one of the reasons I love your site! All I recommend is adding a choice to what your costumers want as an animation. You also need to put more effort into some of your buttons that didn't turn out so well. You have a really great site! You may go get your award! :)

Innocent Words

First Impression- /15 First Impressions are VERY important. What do I think when I first look at your site? Do I think 'WOW' or 'BLEH'.
Organization&Neatness- /10 Is your text legible? Are your headers neat? Is everything where its supposed to be? Can I find everything fine?
Updates/Blog- /5 Do you update every so often? Everyday? Do you have a blog?
Spelling&Grammar- /5 Can you spell?
Content&Quality- /30 Does your content make my eyes bleed? If they're reviews; are they fair? If they're graphics; are they in good quality? Is there a good variety? Content and its quality makes a site what it is.
Other- /10 Does your site have a counter? Multiple link back buttons? How about a 'about you' section? Or a 'about the site' section?
Layout- /10 Is your layout premade? Is it 'blah'? Or is it AMAZING?
Originality/Effort- /15 Is the idea original? Is your site's name original? Are you reviews/graphics original? Is it obvious that you put a lot of effort into your site?
Total: ?%
Comments: My extra comments here