Kayla @ Prossession

Kayla @ Possession | The Sea Snake | Dec. 3

Your layout is modern and doesn't make a statement. Since your site is a graphic site it needs to be colorful and have a lot of texture. Making a background with more texture would make the layout pop out more. If you would like you could get a new layout all together at Seraphic. They make colorful layouts that would be perfect for your site. If you want to keep your layout I would suggest getting a background from Nienke's Resources. At the bottom of your first page it shows some of your second page. I do not know if it is just my browser (Safari) or if it shows that on all browsers.

In your first paragraph on the first page of your site is says, "Welcome katevp, to Possession. A brand new neopets graphic and recourse site!". It should be, "Welcome katevp, to Possession, a brand new neopets graphic and resource site!". In the sentence following Neopian should be capitalized. On your "About the Owner" page you are missing many punctuation marks. Finally on your waiting list I would suggest deleting all of your crossed out names.

When you hover over the "Plushie Reviews" button your score doesn't show up.

You don't have any forms! You need to add forms to your site so people can send in their requests. Please correct me if I am missing them!

I love all of the texture in your graphics! They make them one of a kind and pop out to a visitor. I love how you make the text on them pop out.

Your layouts are colorful and have great designs! I have no negative comments about them.

Naomi @ Inverno

Jory @ Vintage

Jory @ Vintage | Maraqua | 20/9/22

Score: 7/10


Layout: 10/10

Your layout is gorgeous! It is well-organized and fits the theme of your sites perfectly. However, I would suggest putting the pick-ups page on the same petpage as the rest of your site.

The sentences in rules 1,3, and 4 all need periods at the end. Also, rule number six is kind of awkwardly worded, I would suggest saying something like "I do not make PETPAGE layouts if you request one I will not reply or will tell you to read the rules. I do make userlookups, however. You may submit a user lookup request...", and so on. Everything else looks great!

Your banners are kinda average; they could use a little more work. I do really like your Disco Bruce banner.
I think you should use a less noticeable watermark on the glitters and icons. Your backgrounds are pretty good, though; you have a nice variety.

Once again, I love the layout of your site. It goes great with the name. C: I aslo really like the layouts you make. They are so colorful and bright!

Your banners are sort of... eh. There's notmuch about them that makes them look interesting. I do think with some more practice, you will be able to make amazing banners.

Liz @ Carousel| Blue Reef | 10/2/11

Score: 10/10


Layout: 10/10

I love your site's layout! All the colors fit together nicely and create a very warm feeling. It's well-organized, so one can get around the site very easily. I have one suggestion, though: On your pages where you have your pixels, resources and other content, I think you should have a button on each of those pages that links back to the original content page. Everything looks great here!

Grammer: 10/10

In your first paragraph under Welcome, there should be a comma after the word Carousel. You have great grammer; as I see bad grammer is one of your pet peeves. ^-^

Your pixels are very pretty and are high-quality. I would suggest to have more of a variety in the types of pixels you offer because most pixels sites I have seen don't really have much variety.

Sitely & About Me Sections: 10/10

Looks great and very organized!

Please remember to leave a credit! Reviewed by rainbowfieldsoflove

Genafire @ Genafire's Art | The Blue Reef | October 1

Your layout is very dark. I love the font of the heading. It is very artsy and inviting. I do not understand how the rest of your layout fits your theme though. When I think of an art site I think of a colorful or more modern layout. I would suggest a layout from /~dreamee or/~nienkju.

First off I would make the "Hi!" in the first paragraph more literate because are is a very literate subject. "Hello", "Welcome", or "Greetings" would work a lot better. Under the Info section it says "Hi there katevp!! I'm genafire, but you can call me gena". It should really look more like this: "Greetings katevp! I am Genafire, but you can call me Gena". Along with that the Oops page says "If you got to this page, it's cuz you didn't read the rules!! Please go back and read them, then I'll gladly draw your request :3". I would change it to: "If you got to this page, it is because you didn't read the rules! Please go back and read them, then I'll gladly draw your request." Throughout your site you do not capitalize your name.

I love your art! It looks a lot like the pet itself. You are great at making 3D art.

I would remove the Sitely from the Extras section and make it its own page. Other than that all of your links are fine.

Star @ The Paper Lantern | The Sea Snake | September 30

Your layout fits your theme very well. It invites visitors in and does not have too much going on. If I were to change anything it would be the color of the links. It fits your background but not the layout layout itself. I would change the color to red or another color that you like in your layout. I suggest red because it is the color right next to the links.

The pink text is very creative. It really puts an images in your head of the theme of your site. In the your first paragraph it says "If our owner, msclvr33's Neomail Inbox is full, please send her a Pile of Dung to remind her to clean it out." I would make it "If my mailbox is full, please send me a Pile of Dung to remind mer to clean it out.

Your site is very organized. Everything is spaced out and not crammed into one space. I see no negatives with your content.

All of your links and buttons work fine.

All of your forms have excellent grammar and spelling.

The last one you did was vey bland. The text is just a plain brown and the font is boring. Also the Oasis banner is the same way. The background is colorful but the text is plain. The rest of your banners, however, are great! They are all colorful and the banner text color fits the theme perfectly.

Overall I love the idea of your site. The narration on the pages are creative and embrace the theme of your site. As I said earlier your banners wonderful. Keep it up!

The counter on your home page should probably start from an estimated page view count. Also it is boring. Search "Neopets counters" and click the first link to get some really good counters where you can set an amount for it to start out. You can look at your page views at the same place where you can edit your pet's page. I would round up the amount of page views for the past month or so and make that the starting point.