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Chip is back again with her new review site!
She started her career with Jellylicious Jellies, which was also hosted on this page. Her graphics skills were...not the best, and though she put forth all her skills to harness the best jelly knowledge, her quest came to an end. She then started Bee's, a graphics request site with her new idea, blog layouts. They were very popular among the neopians that stumbled across her page, but because of less traffic through her site, she has let Bee's sit for the time being. A couple weeks or a week or so ago, Chip found her friends site, Sneeze, and loved the idea. She created Panda, a site for all lovable facts about animals, very unique ones. This site is an active one, and she is still updating it. She then decided to look into pixeling, which she now does for fun, and combines it with what she loves to do, review people!
requirements1.0- Your site must be a site. No about me's, adoption centers, or about-our-guild pages.1.1- Your site must be ready when you apply. You can't be in the middle of a revamp or hiatus, and you can't tear down your site before I review you. 1.2- I will review once. I will re-review only if you completely changed your site, not just in layouts, but the way you operate. 1.3- You must link back. We have a button for a reason, its that simple. 1.4- Don't argue. Its my opinion, I'm just trying to help you improve your site! If you disagree strongly, you might want to get a different review from someone else! 1.5- Please fill out a form if you would like to be reviewed! It makes it easier! c:
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First Exploration; /20
Will our kingdom settle here? In other words, does your site appeal to the eye? Or does it scare off our settlers? Look at the island; /50 Is the content high quality information? Do the graphics look nice and well made? Does your site have all of the sections a site should have? Is your site creative, and sticks out of the crowd? The turning point. This is basically it. Do you have a page people will come back to day after day? Magic; /10 Are you creative? Even if your site is one of many graphics sites, there is always a way to make yours stand out. Spells; /10 Updates. Do you do that often? When updating, is it neat and easy to read, and quick notes of what you did that day? Flowers; /10 Is your spelling and grammar correct? Are your link back buttons neat and catching to the eye? Is your site neat as a whole? Do you have no stolen items, or did you just forget to credit? All of this plays into your final score, and things like these can mean a lot. Moral; NG My comments will go here. Of course this section is not graded (NG) because this is just my ideas after looking at the whole sha-bang. Total: /100 If you get a 90-95, you will qualify for an award! 96-100 will get a bigger and better award! {may not necessarily be bigger XD}
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![]() First Exploration; 15/20 First off, it's a premade. BUT-that's not what's wrong, the fact is, the colors don't match the name of your site, and there's a big box in the middle that has to scroll up and down and SIDEWAYS. Get a new layout that has enough SPACE for your site. Look at the island; 35/50 You have a good start on graphics, but you need to work on saving them RIGHT. You are probably saving them as a JPG or BMP, try saving them as a PNG. You will get a much clearer image. Also, when making buttons, try to use a font that is small and CLEAR enough to fit on a button. You might also want to have a spot on your layout with forms that people can neomail to you to get a button or graphic. You should also show different options and such. Magic; 5/10 Right now your site looks like any other site. B-O-R-I-N-G. Make it your own, change the colors, make it recognizable. Spells;0/10 Make an updates box! You don't have any right now! Flowers; 5/10 No spelling issues but you need to capitalize letters at the front of every sentence! Also, your grammar is "iffy". Moral; Get a new layout, start making quality graphics, and try to make yourself known and able to be remembered. Total: 60/100
![]() First Exploration; 19/20 Wow, the layout is BEAUTIFUL! The only thing right now that is bugging me is the color of your bolded words. Brown is good, but its just a bit too brown, and a bit too dark. And try to bring in the lavender from your main image to the left of your text. Look at the island; 49/50 I REALLY like your buttons, your button borders are creative, and so are their names! I've definitely seen improvement in the making of your buttons, since Buttons Biscotti and the beginning of The Florist. (that's a plus!) I like how you organize your button bases, in different series, very neat. Your limited editions--what can I say? It's a great idea! And I sure hope, just like you do, that nobody steals it. Your add on resources, good idea, but maybe instead of those signs, "home", "new", "updated", you could provide little charms that could go onto a button, that would be neat. Magic; 10/10 Very creative, good ideas. Spells;10/10 Good updating. Keep it up! Flowers; 10/10 Haven't seen any errors at all! Moral; Keep up the good work, there isn't much to change! Maybe you could create a new layout, and add some things here in there but your site is practically perfect! ;) Total: 98/100
![]() First Exploration; 13/20 The layout is....okay, but its way too orange for my taste. It's also very plain, and doesn't look very....professional. Look at the island; 10/50 There is no content. If you are a graphics request site, FIRST: you should at least have some examples. I see none. ALSO: you need to advertise and make some! I think it wasn't such a great idea for you to get reviewed when you have no content. I want to give you 10 points for at least having different "sections" and sort of explaining what your site is about. Magic; 5/10 Not really any different from any other sites, but graphic sites are popular so you get 5 points. Spells; 0/10 No updates....hm..... Flowers; 5/10 A few errors in normal writing. AFTER every punctuation mark, there's a space. SOOOOOO..... HELLO! (space) more text. Got it? Moral; I'd suggest to make some graphics, fix up that writing issue, and get advertising, you need content. Total: 33/100
![]() First Exploration; 19/20 I really like the layout, it's bright and cheery and toned down. One of the things I noticed is that the header words "Haengbok-graphics site; layouts, banners, icons, pixels, etc" the colors are nice, but the fact that the tones are so close together makes it a bit hard to read. Or is it because they overlap too much? The hover effect on that text box is really cool! Also, the header neopets link is showing (well, half of it is showing) so if you know how to get rid of that, that would work nicely. Unfortunately, I still don't know how so I can't provide a code. D: Look at the island; 52/50 First, before I go too much into content, the sidebar links are a bit confusing in the order they are placed. My suggestion is: Home, Blog, Premades, Requests, Affies, Awards, Credits, Leave. And the link "affies" should be changed to "sitely" because you have more than just affies on that div box. The petpage layout is very neat, and I like how you made that icon, the color on it is just nice with the picture. I also think your pixels are pretty spiffy, keep making more of those! I like how you offer requests, but keep that page neat. For your waiting list, instead of showing everybody's requests, have a quick link to their userlookup, and just save their neomail. OR, if you prefer keeping them on there, have a nice and neat text area underneath for storage (with their username above). Magic; 10/10 I think your site IS pretty unique, and you have much more content then expected for a new site. Spells; 9/10 Your updating was flawless considering you have been open for three days. ;D One thing I noticed, on your September 18th AGAIN you said that FDDesigns recieved the Oustanding Site Award, why not list her on your awards page? Just list all the sites the DO get the award so you can keep track and also so that people can tell you if a site stole the award or not. Flowers; 10/10 No spelling errors. ;D Don't forget to add my button! Moral; Keep up the great work on your site, and follow through on what I said, I think it will make a difference. I would definitely come back and utilize your resources! Total: 100/100
![]() First Exploration; 21/20 I love the layout. Its cute and simple, and so easy to navigate. Look at the island; 50/50 Your shields are "fresh" and "unique". I absolutely love your shields, they are among the BEST out there! Magic; 10/10 Of course it's unique! Spells; 10/10 You've updated a lot, that's really nice! Flowers; 10/10
No errors, but if you want a image link not to have the border, just add Moral; Keep up the great work! There is so little to say to such a great site... Total: 101/100
First Exploration; 17/20 I like the layout, but the sidebar is too hard to navigate. Look at the island; 49/50 You put great effort into your reviews, and I like how you put your true opinion into the review. Just organize your information a bit more neatly, it sort of gets confusing. Magic; 10/10 Very creative, I like how you offer two different grading scales, the chat one is very creative, but I haven't seen anyone choose that one yet. Spells; 9/10 You haven't really updated that much, but good explanation for it! Flowers; 10/10 No errors here! Moral; Clean it up a bit, and make it more organized. And open up reviews if you can, you are a great reviewer! Total: 95/100
First Exploration; 15/20 First of all, the color is really, really bright. At least tone the stripes down a bit. Just a tad. Also, your nav links should have a line break after each link. The marquees are a pretty neat idea for a site like this, just make them longer so people have more time to read the text on the marquee. Look at the island; 48/50 Neat idea, the forms have detail I think actually does matter, so that's great! One thing, advertise as much as possible so you can start the program full swing. Magic; 9/10 Pretty unique, but like I said before, you should advertise to get more content. Spells; 8/10 You just opened, great thing you updated that! XD Flowers; 8/10
No spelling errors, BUT, I suggest to put your forms inside a text area. That code should be inside your style tags. ^_^ Moral; I like your idea of making a newbie help site, and especially your "handy links" in case the mentor does not know the answer. Just fix up what I said above, and you'll be set for business! Total: 88/100
First Exploration; 15/20
Nice header image! It really strikes out nicely. You might want to get rid of the Neopets top link, but no points taken off for that because I don't know how to do that either! XD Look at the island; 50/50 You have so many icons and graphics I have never seen before, and the largest amount of music related ones on a neopets site. Magic; 9/10 I think your site is pretty creative. I haven't seen a site on neo dedicated just to music icons. The only thing is its just a bit limited. Add more content, icons, banners, music even. Spells; 8/10 You don't "really" have an updates box BUT you have a news section. So, I suggest you date your updates there, and possible put in a scrolling div box to make it neater. Flowers; 10/10 No spelling errors, other than the neatness fact, there is not to much to say here. Moral; What I suggest is that you get a premade layout to start with, edit it to your taste, but keep your header image. I would divide up the images a bit more, based on size maybe, and have a seperate section for updates, affies, and credits. I would also either make your buttons transparent, or have somebody who can do that make them transparent for you. Total: 92/100
First Exploration; 18/20 Nice color scheme going on, the header image is very nice, but a bit big. Look at the island; 71/70 I really like your suggestions in making a site. I think all of those are very helpful, especially about the images "quality over quantity". I'm a big believer in taking good time and effort into such things. You have a lot of information, I don't know how you would add more! Flowers; 9/10 You have two broken images, both for Flare (/~sakuya_nahara) No spelling errors.
Total: 98/100
First Exploration; 20/20 I really like the color scheme of your layout. And wow, the introduction is really nice and sets the tone of your site, its very creative. Look at the island; 66/70 You have listed so many people (including me!) I found two deleted sites, Stripes and Fuzz and Sweet and Sour, so you'll probably want to get rid of those. I did not click all of your links, because that would be very time consuming, but most of the links I clicked, with the exceptions of those two, were not broken, and still running. One, why would you close off listing? I can understand time issues, but it doesn't take that long to link a page. Plus, if you are a directory you should try to get as many pages as possible. Flowers; 9/10 No spelling mistakes, credit is very visible. ^^ The nav links are a tad annoying, the font goes a bit too big when you hover.
Total: 95/100
First Exploration; 20/20 Nice layout. Neat, nice color scheme, title and nav. visible, perfect. One thing is, your header image cover the middle of the neopets link on the top, but not the sides. Maybe you could make it so its flushed gray all over and the link isn't visible at all? No points taken because quite frankly I don't know how to do that either. XD Look at the island; 70/70 Your screenies are hilarious! I did miss something at the boards! I like how you colored them, pretty cool. Flowers; 10/10 No errors, great job!
Total: 100/100
First Exploration; 19/20 Very cute, I love the colors. BUT, the sign is a bit dark for the bright colorful atmosphere around it. Try to lighten it up a bit? Look at the island; 67/70 First, make sure everything from "reviews are open" on down are ABOVE your listed ats and reviews. Also, make sure when you review you are specific. When you say it needs improvements, make sure you list them. And make sure that the reviews that are finished are all clumped together in one area, without a waiting review in the midst of them all. (move snapple reviews down to the rest of the waiting list) Also, center your review box, makes it easier to read. Flowers; 8/10 I like how you clearly credited everybody, just make sure to improve on your spelling. ("inprovementes", "coloumns", etc) You should proofread your writing AGAIN before publishing.
Total: 94/100 ![]() First Exploration; 16/20 The layout is nice, but the fact that so many people use the same base from Square One it gets a little boring and unoriginal. How about changing it a bit more, or trying a new custom layout? Also, make sure to get a FF compatible layout so people don't get turned off when they see a messed up page. Look at the island; 65/70 The icons are pretty nice, but why not dividing them up based on what they are, like food, icons, twilight, celeb, etc.etc. The banners are also pretty cool, but why not feature some banners with "welcome", "hiatus", "site closed", to use as resources? I haven't seen some of the layout styles you have there, which is a plus! One thing, instead of having a huge button as credit, why not a text link, or a very small text button, one that "blends" into the background? Also, keep the font on those layouts readible, some of that "papyrus" font was too small to see. Also, icon gradients. I don't think those are icon gradients, but you could put them as icon tools/bases. Also, under waiting list be sure to just delete the people you have finished instead of striking them "off". Flowers; 9/10 You spelled gradients wrong on your header, but other than that I don't see anything wrong.Just remember to keep the text on your graphics and layouts readible, and be sure to get an FF compatible layout.
Total: 90/100 ![]()
First Exploration; 15/20
Wow, its very neon, and hurts my eyes. Why not have a color scheme more...calm? How about some light greys mixed in with your bright neon colors? Also, your updates box is slightly out of your sidebar, make it a little smaller in width. Also, make sure all of the buttons on your page do not have a border. Look at the island; 67/70 Can you animated text? If you can, you might want to add that option below borders. (: You haven't made many buttons, but the one you made is pretty cool. I love how it glitters! Also, your button bases are pretty neat, expecially the animated ones, but you should add a bit more content. Its cool you have icons, but since you are a request site, why not make requests for icons too? Flowers; 10/10 No spelling errors visible, other than the update box error stated above, it looks pretty fine.
Total: 92/100 ![]() First Exploration; 19/20 Wow, they layout is pretty neat, and the header image is adorable! (I'm partial to cats and Warriors) First thing first, you should probably have a navigation up top to all the sections of your directory.
Look at the island; 68/70
You have quite a lot sites listed, but since they don't have equally sized buttons, you have two choices. Flowers; 8/10 A few spelling errors: Under the SOTMs, you spelled that SOMT. Under credits you said "counter form:" you might want to change that to from. And under reviews you put "Fininshed". And near the get listed form, you might want to put your cats name under the Rules, so that way you know they've read the rules first. ;D
Total: 97/100 ![]() First Exploration; 14/20 It's a pretty neat layout, but there are a few issues. What I am now going to say is going to help with the flow of your site. First of all, wall of shame and credit should be at the very bottom of the page. Also, back up links. Keep those right above your wos and credit, but remove your sister site icon requests, name banners, and affie request forms from the middle section. Those aren't needed, since you have them already on your site. Move those forms from the right sidebar to your middle column in the section "name banners". Your link back can be moved to the right column above Affies. You can also put your "waiting for review on" over to your right column, and change that title to "pending" or "pending reviews". Pickups and icons should be moved to the center column, undername banners" and icons should be above pickups. Look at the island; 67/70 You have some nice banners and icons, but they are a bit fuzzy. Its not appealing, so I suggest if you are using paint to make them, then save as a PNG file. If you are using photoshop, save as a GIF. You have some pretty good content, just try to expand what you have on your site by adding more graphics.
Flowers; 8/10
Your waiting list should not have people striked (
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Total: 89/100
First Exploration; 20/20 Very neat layout, and is a very nice green. I like how your top graphic blends into your page.
Look at the island; 68/70
You have very good quality content, the easy "dailies" links are very helpful, I like how you put the "score to send" and "ratios" on your game section. Its very helpful, and to look at what you made on those games is a good motivation. XD
Flowers; 9/10
No spelling mistakes, and I really like your divider images, but remember to credit me on that button!
Total: 97/100
First Exploration; 19/20 I immediately recognized the princess from Amber's Pixels and the layout from The Pixel Field, and you did credit them, but did you ask for permission before using both? That is verrryyy important. Not only that, but the image has a jagged outline, and just doesn't really look nice in this case. The actual picture matches, but you really need to smooth out the edges of that. Other than that, its pretty neat and looks alright.
Look at the island; 68/70
Cute pixels, but you don't have many of them. Maybe you could post on Flare to get inspiration? There isn't really much here, though your Freedom Wall is a nice touch. (I am very sorry about your friend's dad) I think that Flare or the HC will definitely help you find more inspiration to stop that Pixel Block. Flowers; 10/10 No spelling mistakes, it looks pretty (neo)nice. ^^
Total: 97/100 ![]() First Exploration; 20/20 Your layout is very, very cool! It's neat and professional, and definitely makes me interested in the content. Wow.
Look at the island; 72/70
Your layouts are really nice and neat, and pretty original as css goes. I tried a few, and I had to keep stopping myself from pressing "save changes" because I had a whole site there already! XD Your website templates are very helpful, and they are layouts people love! Your graphics are also very nice and high quality. I learned one thing, you LOVE harry potter. So do I! ;) *I later noticed you said that in your owner info. ^^ Flowers; 9/10 You have updated regularly, and spelling is not an issue, but rather you put the date in front of your update because it just get really hard to figure out. Just a helpful tip. ;)
Total: 101/100 ![]()
First Exploration; 20/20
Your "best viewed in internet explorer" reminded me to change my form to specify what browser I should use. XD
Look at the island; 75/70
Wow! You have so many songs, I mean, its more than what's on my iPod! XD The organization is nice too, very easy to find stuff. I like how you mark which songs are a little inappropriate, that way people won't mistakenly put them onto a neopets page! I mean, wowza, everything is so neat, there isn't really much to improve on! This is definitely a site one can depend on! Flowers; 10/10 No spelling errors, everything is neat and nice. (nice and neat? ;D)
Total: 105/100 ![]() First Exploration; 19/20 Very cute header and background, but your navigation font is really big, you might want to resize that. Look at the island; 67/70 You have a bunch of screenies, and your characters and cute and very nice drawings! One thing is, How about instead of having the "title" or your comment below the screenie, why not add it on, and just divide each screenie with a simple divider line? That would make it simpler and easier to understand each one. But, you do crack some pretty good jokes, especially with the troll one. Also, divide up your screenies up depending on what it is,(ex. random event, neoboards, item, etc.) and have a navigation link to each section. Flowers; 8/10 The only spelling mistakes I saw were in quite a few screenies, and some of your images quality isn't that good. I suggest saving it as a PNG, those tend to be high quality. Or, if you are in Photoshop I suggest a GIF image.
Total: 94/100 ![]() First Exploration; 19/20 The banner is very pretty, I love it! Its just a bit big, maybe you can cut down a bit of the bottom? Its a very neat layout, and the colors are very calm, nice choice! Look at the island; 72/70 First of all, very unique. I cannot stress that enough!! You've organized it very neatly and I like how you combined both Neoadventures and petpages together. And the quizzes you recommended are above and beyond most others. I mean, this is a great site! How about advertising on Flare, mentioning you are looking for more quizzes? That way you can add more content quick and easy! Flowers; 10/10 No spelling errors, and you update often, and its very, very neat!
Total: 101/100 ![]() First Exploration; 18/20 First of all, I noticed your revamp. (looks nice!) The thing is, there's a lot of yellow, which is not a bad thing at all! But, since in your pictures of taxis in cities, I noticed a bunch of streaks of blue, why not have a dark blue background? You can experiment with that, but it seems like it would tone down the yellow without messing up the style. But that's just an idea. Also, your affie, etc. box is very small. Try not to be "stingy" and make it longer so you can see all of those headers and information there. You have enough room, so why not take advantage of it?
Look at the island; 67/70
Nice welcome paragraph! It sort of reminds me of Cash Cab...don't know what it is, then look it up! ;D Flowers; 10/10 I didn't see any spelling mistakes, you credited everybody and its visible! One thing I won't take points off of is the fact that your awards have a white background. There are ways to make it transparent, if you have photoshop I can provide you with further information, but otherwise you can look it up yourself. It just makes it easier for everyone. (your awards are very spiffy by the way!)
Total: 95/100 ![]() First Exploration; 20/20 My first look at your layout was adorable, and not only that is was neat and organized. The rules were on the main page, people can't miss it. Look at the island; 72/70 Your updates were, well, updated, but you since those fairy pixels are yours, you don't have to link them to the main page, but that's a minor detail. Your latest update about the SOTM linking to the neomail, that really shows your character, and for that, I'm giving you an extra point. Some people notice stuff like that but don't bother to fix it. Great job! Your pixels look like they took a lot of time, and they are creative. I especially love your sandwich pixels! You rating stars were especially creative, I've never seen those in a pixel site before!! Your adoptables are not "awful" as you said, but they are very cute! Your pixel tips are really helpful, and I'm glad you are sharing your knowledge with everyone. Flowers; 9/10 I didn't see any "real" spelling mistakes, but in one pixel (under resources) you spelled remember as remeber in "remember the rules" sign.
Total: 101/100 ![]() First Exploration; 20/20 I was "wow'd" by the layout which was so bright and cheery! The banner definitely fits the site name of "Valley Dreams". Also, the page is organized nicely, and in a way I've never had thought of before! Look at the island; 68/70 I like how you have your little rating system, and comment on each page! It really helps the viewer, and I bet it'll make the person interested in visiting each site! You have a bunch of sites already in there, but how about advertising a bit more, possibly on the HC? That way you'll get a lot of traffic and also more contestants. The extra contest is also a great idea, you might possibly want to have navigation up on the top, below the SOTM? Flowers; 9/10 The updates are regularly updated! Great job on that! Also, your counter isn't working, so you'll probably want to update that.
Total: 97/100 ![]() First Exploration; 19/20 The layout looks pretty neat with the navigation *very* visible which is nice. The header image is also very cute, and, in a way, shows what the site is about. Also, its nice you have two places that say "best viewed in firefox" so its not hard to miss. One thing I noticed though, is that the "new topic" and "reply" are sort of low on the page, but I don't know if that is much of a problem or not. Maybe on the top of the page, below "neopia's only noticeboard site" you could have a quick link down to those. Look at the island; 73/70 First of all, the notice board section is so neatly organized, its amazing. I love how you also added the "reply" link right next to the topic, and when you click it fills in the "topic" section of the neomail, making it easy for both parties. The guide to the neoboards is a neat idea, and I'm sure even the little advice about the HC you have there will help somebody. The suggestion board is also very cool, I mean, these ideas are great! I think if you advertise your site a bit more you'll get more replies to it, but that one idea was quite thoughtful. Also, its neat to have your past blogs archived and not laying around there. The only thing I am confused by is...there is no archive...?(by the way, flare (or flair) are two different words. XD) Flowers; 10/10 I haven't seen any spelling mistakes, and your credits are visible and out there. Great job!
Total: 102/100 ![]() First Exploration; 18/20 When I first looked at the page, it looked a bit hectic. I think you should tone down the borders here, with the striped background (it looks okay) you probably shouldn't have a full dashed border around your headers. Also, instead of your "welcome to lucy's lookups (insert username)!" you should create a nice banner to fit up there, maybe that would match your button from Radiance.
Look at the island; 60/70
The cyan bolded words are kind of hard to read. They made me squint. Also, maybe you should divide the your info into sections on the main box, like STATS and then HOW TO USE THE LOOKUPS and so on. Your layouts are simple and cute, but the second layout is a bit off. (I'm using firefox) If this is just a problem with this browser, maybe it would be affective to put "this layout looks best in ___" next to each layout. Also, make sure your links on your userlookups do not have borders! (ex.]the first faerie userlookup) Flowers; 8/10 You have nice credit very visible to Amber's Pixels and Boingdragon (though I don't know if you need that one). But, if you created the layout yourself, you do not need to put "if you see this, and its yours, gladly neomail me and i will put your credit on here immediately." in your credits. Also, I suggest that you capitalize the first letter of every sentence to make it neat and orderly.
Total: 86/100 ![]() First Exploration; 19/20 What a neat, simple layout! But a header image would do quite nicely! Look at the island; 68/70 OMG these are hilarious! Wow, you've got quite a collection! I can't really say much about them, except they made me really laugh out loud! Maybe you could put them into little mini categories (neoboards, items, etc.) and have a little nav at the top of your page? Also, you would benefit by having a back to the top link after every screenie. Flowers; 10/10 No spelling errors at all. Just make sure to do the things I said above!
Total: 97/100 ![]() First Exploration; 20/20 The layout is nice and neat, and the header image and colors provide a setting immediately. The welcome paragraph is so imaginative and still sends a direct idea of what the site is about! How creative! ;D Look at the island; 63/70 Rules, self explanatory and straight out there. Your updates are up-to-date, and you explained the gap because of a vacation. Good dedication! Your reviews are thorough, especially the guild reviews, and they are pretty detailed. Nothing wrong there, but let the boxes out a bit. They are pretty thin, and it makes it hard to read. You have them at 100px for height, how about make it 150px? Also, since the small review boxes have borders, it gets distracting when the outer box has a dashed border too. Take away the border, you'll see there will be less clutter. Also, with your awards, it sort of stretches out the page the way you lay them out. How about creating a table, with the images on top and codes directly below the images? (a 3x2 table) That will make it much easier. Now for the sidebar. Since your affies are in a box, wouldn't it make sense to put your listers in a box also? Also, you could extend your credits box so that all of them are visible, it wouldn't hurt to do that. Flowers; 9/10 No spelling mistakes visible, but where you said "PLEASE NOTE! Requests are closed because of my long waiting list." I would make that "reviews" just to keep it the same.
Total: 92/100 ![]() First Exploration; 20/20 When I opened up Comet, I saw a very neat layout with a nice header image, the page wasn't extraordinarily long either, and the site was branched into three different petpages, which made navigation easy. Look at the island; 75/70 On the first page, the userlookup and petpage were very well made, and neat. The two buttons were also very unique. As I looked at the rules and disclaimers, they were clearly stated, and in a professional manner, I might add. ;) The archives were organized very neatly, and the hover ability to look at more information was very well done and did provide good detail about a certain item. The request form was very straightforward. I liked how you had a "build your own" section, which adds more traffic flow, if your customs are closed, and you had lots of information of how to edit the layout. Your mini tutorials were so detailed, I am very impressed. Flowers; 9/10 I have seen no spelling errors at all, and the only thing that might be changed is the "back home" link on your navigation, perhaps it should take us back to your main page rather than neopets home page?
Total: 104/100 ![]() First Exploration; 19/20 I see a very plain layout, but its not plain in a bad way, it has a sort of style to it. The banner is pretty unique, and matches the name of the site! Look at the island; 65/70 You have a nice amount of listies, organized in a nice fashion. I suggest you contact some more sites, of various categories to expand your directory. I noticed that you had awards, credits, affies, and reviews at the top of your page. This isn't the best place for them to be, as the confuse or distract the reader. The best place for you to put them is at the bottom, with credits being at the very bottom, so readers can look through the directory before viewing links out.
Flowers; 10/10
No spelling mistakes, but your text areas aren't ideal because they stick out a bunch. This doesn't have to be changed, but here's the code if you would like one.
Total: 94/100 ![]() First Exploration; 18/20 The layout is bright and cheerful, but because of no space at the bottom of the page, its a bit confusing. Maybe you should add another column or make more of the column visible? Look at the island; 70/70 What I see is a graphics and layouts site with a variation of items. Some of the icons are unique, and the layouts are pretty spiffy. The layouts are pretty creative, and its cool how you make customs for people. I love how you have many types of graphics, and all of them are original! I really don't know what to say...your site is awesome! Flowers; 10/10 I see no spelling or grammar mistakes. Your layout is neat, other than the viewing "not-so-issue", your site is on the top of the castle! Good going!
Total: 98/100 ![]() First Exploration; 18/20 I noticed a lot of red, but I mean, what can you expect from "burning"? Hehe. The three columned look is okay, but I wish that somehow the navigation box could be combined right above or below your updates. It just combines the look better. But then again, there is too much stuff in that column already! I suggest you put your "About Me" in the main section, probably at the top or bottom of your page, and your rules should definitely be in the main section near the top. Also, the styles of blinkies should be placed in the main section too. And now it seems the main section is too long, so how about scroll boxes for each individual section of blinkie? Look at the island; 66/70 Your blinkies are very nice and colorful, and you've gotten a bunch of custom requests. The one thing I noticed is that some of them are a bit pixelly. I don't know what software to make them, but if you use paint, the .png file is best, and if you use photoshop, then gif is great for animation. But mostly, I see great blinkies ready for use! One other issue is the header 2 which doesn't fit your div box. Easy fix that I thought I'd mention. Flowers; 9/10 I don't see any spelling errors! Just be sure to capitalize your words, and fix up the link borders around buttons! Just add "border=0" right after the image URL, but put a space in between the two!
Total: 91/100 ![]() First Exploration; 18/20 I normally use Firefox, so when I saw your site I was stunned by how bad it looked. But then I saw the "Best viewed in Internet Explorer" sign, and I switched over, and the layout was much better. Good call. When I first saw it on IE, I noticed it was very gray. The sparks of pink and blue were nice, but I feel for a button request site, it should be a bit more colorful. Also, the top div box is larger than the others, because the div the Best Viewed button is in is larger than the main div. Fix that. Also, since you have many updates, you might want to put those in a scroll box to save space. Look at the island; 65/70 You have many button styles available, with a range of text animation. You also have a few premade button bases. As I look through your past buttons, I can definitely see improvement in various areas of your buttons, and I noticed a wide range of button styles. I also like your idea for the contest, maybe you should advertise it a bit to get people to do it. It seems a clutter to have those "name's button"s laying around, just add them as they come. All your affies seem to be in line, and I noticed that in the credits I see that you credited The Goodie Box for two bases you used, but unfortunately that is considered stealing, quote directly from her site: "You are not permitted to use any of my border options on your site; regardless of whether you give me credit or not!" I suggest you take away those borders immediately, why not create some of your own? Flowers; 9/10 Not many mistakes, but you put "advertize" its spelled "advertise". Also, under your waiting list, if you want to display the guests name, put # VISITOR with no space in between. Your layout is pretty neat, and its a premade but I'm not going to take off points because I have some work to do myself!
Total: 92/100 ![]() First Exploration; 10/20 I see dark black major confusion. I see big black boxes all over, and when I scroll down, I see a whole row of blinking images in two overly large scroll boxes that don't need to even be scrolled. The credits are right below the "information", after that you have affiliates, and then right below that you have referrals, awards, and then icons? The order doesn't make sense. On the other side of the page there is html help, it seems like you are trying to run two separate pages on one petpage. I suggest you break it up, move the html help to another page and still have the same name of Glow in the Dark Layouts. Look at the island; 65/70 The icons are unique, I've never seen them before! Despite the fact I have to scroll what it seems a million miles, it was worth it because of the variety of images. Just like the icons, I see a variety of backgrounds, mostly good quality, but a few are pixely, and the first one is blurry. You also put two of the same background on there. The lookups are pretty neat, but this time I only see celebrities and patterns, and I don't see any neo related layouts. But the bottom half of your last layout image is cut off, and I can't see the code. Flowers; 8/10 There weren't many spelling errors, but I did once find two mistakes in one sentence. :-/ Also, be sure to capitalize the first word in your sentence, it makes all the difference. Your link back buttons were o.k. but you should take away the link borders, and definitely save the buttons at a higher quality. You should also make an 88 x 31 button for others to link back to you easier, because that's the standard.
Total: 83/100
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