The Dark Chamber
It was day time in the Lost Desert. And as the name suggested, you are in fact, lost. It all started when you left the shrine after visiting it for the day. Your pets were hungry so you thought you'd stop by Sakhmet's Food Stall for some food, until you saw something weird in the sand. Foot steps left behind. That's normal, sure, but these foot steps looked like it belonged to a Zafara. But the shapes slowly started to turn into Scorchio foot steps, then Ruki, then Lupe, then Gelert, then Lenny, and so on. There was no other foot steps next to them, so it could only mean one being walking. Curious, you decided to follow it. Oh, your pets? You figured you'll feed them omellete later. The prints in the sand lead down the curving lake of the desert, past the few plants, past the Tug-o-War, and past the small bridge and Swarm. You really had no idea where you were going, but you did know you were heading South. If you get lost, you can just head up North again. After all, you were being witty for once and brought a compass with you.
It felt like forever, following these tracks. As you got nearer and nearer to what ever it is, the tracks seemed to have gone from Neopet species to petpets. Now why would it do that? You'll have to remember to ask why later.
More time past. When the foot steps seem to have stopped suddenly, you finally decided to give up. You figured you'd follow the trail back from where you came from, but by now, they were gone. Wiped out completely by a strong gust of wind. You took out your compass to see where North was, but wait... I think it's broken. The needle seems to be pointing a different way. You walked around in circles, shaking the small trinket in hopes of it working again. But no matter where you are, it keeps pointing to a small flat rock you were near to. Giving in, you stepped on the rock, the needle stopped moving instantly. Now what, there's a raging sandstorm coming up soon and you're completely lost.
But wait...

h-helllloo-o...

A voice? It sounded very faint.
Hello?! Is anyone out there?! You called out. No response.
I said HELLO?!?
Are you scared?
Why would I be?
Well, you ARE talking to something, which you don't know what it is exactly.
True. But why would I be scared of that?
Hmm... Is it possible for humans and neopets not to be scared of what they don't know anymore?
Of coarse. We'd want to figure out what it is, not exactly fear it.
... You're weird. But I guess that makes you ok!

You felt a small quake. The rock you were standing on was shaking. Suddenly, it went down like an elevator, bringing you along with it. After several flights, the rock crashed into a very dark room. When you got up, the only light source was the small hole waaaay above your head with a few particles of sand pouring in. The opening closed, and as if it was a switch, a red-ish light filled the room. The light was coming from many stained glass windows of the large chamber, it was very pretty looking. It'd be a lot prettier if these glowing red eyes weren't staring at you from a distance. The figure leapt closer, right in front of you were the light was bright enough to see what that thing was.

You could've sworn it was a Hissi at first, but right before your very eyes, you can see it morphing. The creature now looked like some kind of red lutari wearing a Winter Blechy Hat. Although, that hat was missing an eye, and the puff ball at the end was replaced with a sharp blade. It also wore golden bangles on both its arms and one as a collar. The lutari itself, however, had white hair that went down to its shoulders. Its eyes were completely shaded in red with piercing gold pupils and a strange black marking under its left eye. It have visible fangs, a dark crimson pelt, white muzzle and under belly that goes to the tip of its tail. Most lutaris would have a dark shade of its original color splashed about on its arms, legs, and tail. But this one, it was a dark grey color. Its ears didn't look like lutari ears, it looked more like a Zafara's, although you'd think it was a Blumaroo's because of the markings. Red stripes were on its back and went down to its tail like a skunk pets'. Very dark red curling wings and black spikes were also on its back.
Hello. It spoke. Surprisingly, this weird beast's voice sounded pretty young and childish.
H-Hello... You said, stepping back a bit. Whatever it was, it was smiling back at you. But when you smiled back, it frowned.
So, is this what I'm supposed to be scared of?
Well you're no fun! I should throw you back in that sand storm! It whined and flailed. This made you laugh a bit, but then you saw it was serious.
Please don't, I'll be scared if you want me to be! You pleaded. It raised a brow at you.
... Aaarrrgghh, a weird shape-shifting beast!
Yaaaaay, that's better!
So uh, who are you?
Name's Zackorie. And don't you forget it, guest!


Story of the Beast
How are you able to shape-shift like that? You asked to break the silence and boredom.
Because I can! Zackorie blurted out. You stared for a bit, finally he began again. Thanks to my older brother.
Older brother?
He's strong! Very strong! And the best! If you don't do what he wants, then you'll be sorry!
How was he able to give you powers?
Fine, I'll tell you all of it. But if you fall asleep or didn't hear me right, I'm not repeating!

It's a long story. After all, Zackorie IS pretty old here on neopets. ~Owner



Special Abilities
Get it? Got it? Doubt it.
Ah.... Hah...
Now I shall tell you more about me and my powers, because it looks like you have nothing else to do!

He was right. The exit was still blocked off. Well, you guess you can try and listen to this thing...

Name: Zackorie
Nickname: Zack
Gender: Male
D.O.B.: N/A
Birth Place: Neopia Central
Age: 58976 hours old
Human Age: Around 13?
Height: 3,1
Weight: 47 lbs
Species: Lutari
Color: Red
Markings:
-Flame-like markings on his limbs and tail tip
-Red stripes on his back and goes down his tail
-Very dark red tipped eyes and around eyes
-Black marking under left eye that curves forward a bit, then down
Martial Status: Single
Abilities:
-Shape-Shifting
-Flight
-Hide his true form
Level: 12
Strength: 13
Defence: 18
HP: 55/55
IQ: 38

BD Played: 1
BD Won: 0
BD Lost: 1
BD Drawn: 0
BD Score: 0




Likes - Dislikes


  • -Dark Places
  • -Random things
  • -Pretty/Shiny things
  • -His hat
  • -Scaring People
  • -RianKaylor
  • -Sweets

  • -People knowing his True Form
  • -People that are not scared
  • -Storms
  • -Girly Things
  • -Being Too Lonely
  • -Heavy Work
  • -Losing


Family Members
Well, I know you have an older brother. What about sisters? Cousins? You asked, trying to kill the boredom.
Of course I have sisters! Zackorie said annoyingly. What, you thought I was an only child?






Older Sister
I have not seen my older sister for a loooooong time. She used to be very nice to me, and played with me every day. But now she's trying to stay away from me. She told me it was because of my brother, but hahah. She's crazy not to accept my brother's offer! I mean, look at how strong I am now! But I wish we could stop fighting...

Older Sister
She's even crazier, trying to seal older brother away! Even when she knew she was weaker, she still tried to fight. Her foolishness had lead her to her downfall, now she's the one sealed away! She was always so mean to me, always! Telling me I'm annoying and how everyone would be better off without me. If only I could've given her a piece of my mind before she was sealed.

Adopted Older Brother
The most awesomest older brother there is! Yes, even better than yours. And if you don't have one, oh well! He's strong, smart, everything I would to be like when I'm older. Thanks to him, my life has been much better! Yes yes, very much better! He's so nice to me, before and after. He even shares his bomberries with me. Isn't that awesome?


Best Friends
And before you ask, I do have friends! Zackorie stomped. Oh great, more talking.


Scarlet Devil
Flandre Rain is awesome, she can fly around faster than me and makes things explode just by crushing her fist! She's younger than me too, so it's like I have my own younger sister to play with! Although, her older sister and maid keeps her locked in the basement so I don't get to see her much. Then again, I could just happen to be by the door, and the lock just happens to get destroyed...


Little Snack
You were so bored, you could fall asleep any minute. But you don't trust this thing enough to let it even near you while sleeping. Might as well have that annoying voice of his keep you awake.

Do you have a petpet?
Eh?
You know, a petpet. A neopet's pet.
Yes. Yes I do.
May I see him?
Fine, but if you eat him, I'll eat you.
Eh!?

Zackorie scampered around for a bit, looking for his pet. After a while, the lutari came right back up to you, empty handed. Wait, looks like he's staking off it hat? Yep, he did. Sitting on his head seemed to be a chocolate Symol statue. You were about to tell him that that thing wasn't a pet, until it sneezed.

This is Spiffy! Zackorie said proudly. He's been with me for a loooooooooooooong time! very long time! But thanks to my older brother's powers, he can change shape too! But only if he stays chocolate.
Great...


Nonsense
AHAHAHAHAHAHAA- No. Is a waste of time.


Adopted Clones
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Good Bye
You couldn't take it anymore, the darkness finally had gotten to you.

When will the sand storm subside?! You shouted.
It ended.
When?!
When I was telling you about my friends.
Great, may I leave now?
Fiiine.

With that, one of the stained glass windows slide open like an automatic door. Wow, nifty. You hurried your way to the exit, but right before you got out, a claw reached out and grabbed your shoulder.

Ooooh yeeaaah, I remembered. Zackorie hissed. You're not going to tell anyone about me, or anything about my forms, are you?
Maybe, why?

The lutari smirked.

Just so you know, this isn't my true form.

Before you could say anything else, you were shoved right on out of the room. The next thing you know, you were right in front of the Sakhmet Food Stall, Kreludar was hanging in the Neopian Sky. You scrambled onto your feet and looked behind you. The exit was no more than shattered glass on the sandy ground.



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