Newest at the top.
First Impression-(/15)
Layout- (/15)
Content- (/30)
Organization- (/5)
Updates- (/5)
Creativity- (/5)
Comments-
Total Score: /75
First Impression-(13/15) Whoa, layout is amazing! You are fantastic at blending, I am so jealous. xD The color brown fits your site perfectly. First when I viewed on Safari the content was not in the box, it was below the layout pic, so I switched to IE, and it looked perfect. If you can, you should figure out how to make the layout work in all browsers.
Layout- (14/15) Just simply amazing. (: I couldn't ask for a better layout and I am getting the inspiration to start using gimp! xD Instead of just using the pic of the woman (sorry I dont know who she is xD) you should add like a variety of pictures.
Content- (28/30) Your graphics are SO outstanding. The textures and how they look looks like it's been done by a professional! Your layouts can be a bit better though.. for example a lot of the layouts have black as the background, why not make a cool background using those textures?
Organization- (5/5) Check, you have a navigation.
Updates- (5/5) Awesome, you have a blog. Congrats on 230 page views by they way. ;)
Creativity- (5/5) Your graphics, layouts, etc. are packed with creativity! You are born to be a graphic maker, keep the great work up!
Comments-You are doing a fantastic job with your graphics! I would recommend this site as an high quality site. Your doing a fantastic job!
Total Score: 70/75
You have reviewed an A on your review! Please take the A award!
First Impression-(11/15) The Kristen Stewart banner matches well with the blue color of the layout. My first impression isn't the best with your site, read on and you will see why.
Layout- (13/15) Ehh, so you made this layout? It's pretty, but I think that you should change it every once in a while. Last time I viewed CITR it's been there.
Content- (23/30) Your reviews are very short, and choppy. If I owned a twilight site, I wouldn't want to be reviewed there. Sorry, no offense or anything. (: But you can always change that! In your reviews you are just saying the basic stuff; I love the layout! It's amazing, the colors work well! And for the grammar you gave Bella's Paradise a 9/10 and you said pretty good? Tell the people what and where the spelling mistakes are so they know!
Organization- (3/5) Gahh, the columns of the layout is messed up, or is it suppose to be like that? I'm viewing in FF. Your site is pretty unorganized. It took about 5 seconds to find the link back buttons when it should only take 2. Everything is just all scattered and hard to find!
Updates- (0/5) Updates! Where
are your updates? I don't see any. Updates are really important. They let the people that are viewing your site know if your reivew site is active or not. For example, say if you DO have updates and the last time you updated was 3 weeks ago. People would not want to add you as affies, or even be reviewed by you. See what I mean? Updates are important!
Creativity- (3/5) I enjoyed the layout and the banner, but overall there wasn't any creativity.
Comments- Your doing a fine job with your site. Add more to your reviews, because as far as I can tell, what you are typing for the reviews don't help the people. Your just giving comments and comments on how you love the site, when you are suppose to be helping them get a better site. Good job overall.
Total Score: 53/75
Sorry, no award. Better luck next time.
First Impression-(11/15) Of course, first thing I notice is the site name. Let Them Eat Cake? What an interesting name. But what does that name have to do with a pixel site? Why not, Lucy's Dazzling Pixels? Or Lucy Love Pixels? I'm a bit confused at the moment.
Layout- (9/15) I see you've made your own layout, and coded it yourself. Congrats on doing that! I cannot code or even make a layout. XD So kudos to you! First thing I see a huge yellow ducky. Why a ducky? What does that have to do with Let Them Eat Cake? It seems like nothing is making any sense. But when I saw your rules, you said that you can't make a cake picture, which is why you have a ducky. Why not request a cake pic from someone else? If you don't see what I mean, here's an example: my review site is called Taxi Reviews, and I had a kitty layout. Does that match at all? No, not one bit. Thats how I am seeing your pixel site. I would advise you to change the site name though. =/
Content- (26/30) Your welcoming page seems a bit cramped, and is just a paragraph of plain ol' words. Add some pixels at the top! Fancy your content up! Moving on to pixels.. Your cupcakes and slorg pixels are very good, but you could work on the Gatorade G, and the Edible pixels. They stand out from the rest quite a bit.. but overall I can see you are going to be a fantastic pixel maker!
Organization- (5/5) Nice job, everything seems to be in the right spot, and nothing out of order.
Updates- (4/5) Good, you update often. But you should find a different place for your updates. It looks a bit off if the updates is at the bottom if the Welcome page.
Creativity- (4/5) I put a lot of creativity into your pixels, which is good. I think you can make a better and different layout though. It looks like you made it on MS-Paint.
Comments- Good job over all! I know your pixel site will be better than ever if you just fix a couple things up.
Total Score: 59/75
Sorry no award, better luck next time.
First Impression- (14/15) I like your banner very much. It's cute and simple. But it is a chomby eating some leaves? Since your site is called Somersault you should have a banner of a chomby doing a somersault! It would match your theme better.
Layout- (13/15) Your layout is wonderful, but the background okay. Also, try for a two-columned layout. I see you are out of ideas for CSS, so mix up the layouts.
Content- (30/30) The content is very neat, and well done. I see no sloppy graphics, and I would so want to enter your competitions. XD Well done over all, but keep adding more styles of premade CSS!
Organization- (5/5) Wow, your site is so organized, it is one of the most very well organized of them all! Keep up the great work, and it really helps to have a navigation at the top. But at first, I was like where are the graphics? Buttons? And all of the content? The navigation buttons are really small and are at the top so I didn't really notice it. Possibly make them a tad bigger? So the blind people like me, could see it. XD
Updates- (5/5) Amazing, you are doing a fine job of updating! Even though it is in the middle of the year, you can keep up well with your site! Better than I, because of school. xP
Creativity- (4/5) Your site is awesome, but add in some more creativity! Go crazy on your layout! Or just do whatever. XD
Comments- Your site is fantastic. Keep up the great work, and I can tell Somersault will be so popular in no time.
Total Score: 71/75
You have received a 'A' on your review, please take the A award!
First Impression- (9/15) First thing I see is this big banner of a white scribbly streak. It stands out too much cause the color is darker than your background. The navigation links on it are very hard to read. WetPaint? What does this image of a white streak have anything to do with your site theme? Your should have a big banner with splats of different color paint and shows the navigation on it.
Layout- (12/15) Ehh.. they layout is OK. A bit plain, but instead of the background that you have right now, you should have more of a paint-like background.
Content- (27/30) Hmm.. I see you have much of a variety. That is good! You have plenty of layouts and petpages, why not add more guild layouts? Your buttons are pretty good. Why not make button bases? Can you make shields? Add more variety and your site will be a place everyone would want to go to!
Organization- (5/5) Yay. Great job, it helps to have a navigation.
Updates- (3/5) You update often. You should start updating a bit more. It is important that your site stays active.
Creativity- (4/5) Be creative on the layout for your site. But otherwise all the content is very creative!
Comments- Fantastic job! Keep up the great work.
Total Score: 60/75
You have received an 'B' on your review, please take the B award.
First Impression- (12/15) Cute banner, and the colors work well. But the three columned layout is a bit wacky tacky. Also, the Welcome message is VERY skimpy. Introduce yourself! Talk about why you created your directory, or how did you come up with the name?
Layout- (11/15) The colors of the layout are a bit bland. Add some jazz to it. The updates column should be on the left side, leaving the middle column left for the listees. Did you make the layout yourself? I don't see any credits. You should add a stalker bar, from boingdragon, and also a page viewers bar.
Content- (24/30) Ehh.. only 14 listees? Thats really not much. I wouldn't choose to have my site listed there. Add more listees! Ask people if they would be interested in being added to your directory, instead of letting the people ask you.
Organization- (4/5) Your directory is pretty organized. I like how you have a navigation. But you should put the Report Card lower into your column, cause it doesn't need to be the second thing after the updates. It isn't THAT important.
Updates- (4/5) You have been updating consistently. But the longest that you haven't updates was for a week. I don't blame you, I was also having problems with the filters. ):
Creativity- (3/5) I like your site name, Exit Way. Other wise there was nothing else that went WOW! Be more creative with your directory. Possibly get a different layout?
Comments- You've done a good job. Keep the great work up!
Total Score: 58/75
Sorry, no award. Better luck next time. ^_^
First Impression- (8/15) First thing I noticed was the colors. And WOW they do not match one bit. The light yellow with the blue paper plane background? Thats a no-no. The teal borders hurt my eyes, and how does the background of paper planes match your
cat theme? You wanted your directory to be cat themed, so you stick with the cat theme.
Layout- (7/15) The layout is just too much. Stick with a few colors /that match/ not like yellow, light blue, and teal. I've seen that background everywhere of those paper planes, and I'm tired of seeing it everywhere. Why not get more original? Make a background yourself, or request a custom one. The three columned layout is good, however, I strongly suggest some new colors and a new background.
Content- (24/30) You can only have a cat themed site to be in your directory? Well it sure looks hard to be finding many cat-like sites. I don't think it was such a good idea to make your directory ONLY cat sites. For example, my favorite animals are turtles, so if I made a turtle directory, and I would only let people with turtle-like sites be on my directory, I sure wouldn't find many! Even though cats are more popular.. but it was creative though. I can tell you are a cats fan.
Organization- (5/5) Your directory is pretty organized. I like how you have a navigation.
Updates- (2/5) Good, you update almost everyday. But instead of adding the button of who you got listed, or who applied to be an affie, just write out their site name. For example, on 9/1/09, it says you received an award from The Light House SOTM. Instead of putting the button there, just say; I got an award from The Light House SOTM! You also say; Yay, a lot. Cut back on that.. okay? Also, on 9/6/09, you wrote, I sent a neomail asking to get listed at [button here] Converse Allstarz. Do you think we really need to know that? Um, no. If you do get accepted there, then you can just write, I am listed at Converse Allstarz! Otherwise, it's all good.
Creativity- (4/5) The whole cat theme is pretty creative. I like how you have a COTM. But your site isn't really a WOW. Work on it, and you'll get there.
Comments- Your site is doing good. Just fix up some mistakes that I told you about, and your site should be better than ever!
Total Score: 50/75
Sorry, no award. Better luck next time. ^_^
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First Impression- (14/15) Whoa! When I first say your site, my jaw dropped! The layout suites your site, and I love the navigation on the left side. Kitchen, Feel Fresh, and eating plan, are all very creative names. But for Feel Fresh, I didn't really get it. Once I clicked on it I was like; oh, this is the updates/blog. You should name it more clearer so people, like me, would understand. Otherwise, the Eating Plan, and Bite an Apple are good words to describe the rules and the voting.
Layout- (15/15) Perfect Layout, I don't think it could be an better. The apple in the parachute it so cute. The colors also blend great. Awesome job! :)
Content- (30/30) You have many entries listed, why not have more? And wow you have be listed at many sites!
Organization- (5/5) Your site is very organized. I never got lost or found anything out of place. I can tell your site will be very popular!
Updates- (4/5) Good, you have an updates/blog, and you update every so often. Just a suggestion, you may want to add an apple or fruit-related images to the side of your blog instead of the ones you have right now. I am just sticking to the theme. :)
Creativity- (5/5) I adore the site name, and the layout. Everything is very creative! This is one of the most well done sites I have ever reviewed. You should be proud.
Comments- Your site is doing FANTASTIC! Well done, your site has gone through major improvements since I took a glance at it awhile back. Keep the awesome work up!
Total Score: 73/75
You have received an 'A' on your review, please take the A award.
I have reviewed you with the new grading scale.
First Impression- (12/15) I was using Safari when I first took a look at your site. And EEEEEK! Boy it was messy! But then I saw your Best Viewed in IE sign, so I was like phew that isn't how the site really looks. Maybe try making your layout so that its visible in all browers? Cause if someone wants a music code and they ONLY have Safari, then it will be pretty terrible for them to find what their looking for. The thing that caught my attention was that you were listed at so many places! I can tell your site must be popular. Anyway, I think you could add more of a catchy banner at the top of the page. Cause right now you have Welcome to Emzee's Music Codes! With a small picture of 2 birds sitting on a branch.
Layout- (14/15)I
love the animated background. I don't think I've ever reviewed a site that has an animated background! It really makes your site stand out. But if I were you, I would center the whole 2 columns cause right now they are on the left side, and I would just suggest centering them. Otherwise, the back really suites your site!
Content- (29/30) Awesome, you have a artist navigation. That really makes it easier when finding an artist. You should add some where on your site how many music codes you have made. I would really want to know. Maybe you do have it on your site, but I cant find it. So maybe put it somewhere where the dumb people can see it.x)Anywhoo, I think that many people would use your codes because they are fantastic, I even used one before and they sounded great! Keep adding more codes!
Organization- (5/5)Your site is one of the most organized! Everything is also neat, but you could put your awards in a scroll box.
Updates- (5/5) Your an awesome updater! Just like me, you update like everyday. Thats good though! Keep it up!
Creativity- (3/5) There is a massive song selection to choose from, which is great. But when people first come to your site, you deserve a WOW, but you need to show the wow. Again, add a banner at the top and make it snazzy with musical notes on it or whatever!
Comments- Your site is doing awesome! Keep up the fantastic work. :)
Total Score: 68/75
You have recieved an /A/ on your review! Don't forget to pick up your reward!
I have reviewed you with the new grading scale.
First Impression- (9/15) The first thing I noticed was the green color. The banner at the top is a bit bland, why not request someone to make a banner and add some junk pictures to it? Like an old rotten shoe, or a box of cardboard? That would help the theme of your site stand out A LOT. You may also want to change the background. It's cute, but doesn't match your theme 1 bit. Again, you should add some trashy junk to your background. If you don't know how to make it, just request one. Also, I see you like the whole color of green, so your button is also green. You should request another button, but this time tell the button maker to add some junk to the background of it.
Layout- (8/15) At least you have a background, so I will give you points for that. Seems like you are a green fanatic? I'm okay with that, but you need to understand that the plain green and white background should show your theme more. So just think about changing your layout so it shows more junk cause your site is a Packrat List.
Content- (27/30) Awesome, you have listed a lot of junky things! And its good cause you kept it organized buy adding the 1 nps, 5 nps, etc etc. But how you list it is kinda plain. Do you know what I mean? How about on top of the 1 Np Finds add a rotten shoe picture? And on top of the cheap stuff, why not add a picture of a Scotch Egg? That would make your site a WOW!
Organization- (5/5) Your organization is very good.
Updates- (3/5) I see you update almost every day. But your update list is going down down down the page! Put all the updates in a scroll box (if you don't know the code I can help you so neomail me) and it will make it MUCH easier for someone to read your updates.
Creativity- (3/5) Your site's layout could of been more creative, but otherwise thinking of making a packrat list was creative! It must of been a lot of work finding all the junk things that people can use.
Comments- Your is doing well! I suggested a lot of things, so if you fix that, your site will be popular as ever!
Total Score: 55/75
Sorry, no award. Better luck next time!
I have reviewed you with the new grading scale.
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First Impression- (24/30) Ehh.. the boarders are too big, but the layout suites your site. The welcome to lucy's lookups ___!, is too big. Remember, always capitalize the first letter in each sentence. So if should be
Welcome to
Lucy's
Lookups, ____! You should know that by now. Really. The banner is pretty bland. Why not add some textures to it, or make it sparkle, or request someone to make a custom banner for you! Also, the rules really stand out. I know that you want them to so people can read it, but you don't /NEED/ to make it that big though. The color already stands out, so you don't need to make it bold and a bigger size. I also saw some spelling errors. Instead of capitalized, I, you wrote i. With all these mistakes, your site looks like it just opened yesterday. Although I like how you have some neopets images scattered on your site.
Layout- (12/15) The layout is
okay. I think it can be MUCH better though. The background (stripes) is a bit boring and also the banner. Why not find some other layout sites and get some ideas from them?
Content- (12/15) The layouts that you have made are good. I like how you have different styles, but do you only make neo-related layouts? I understand you make only lookups, but why not try making blogs? Or petpages? Get creative!
Organization- (5/5) I think you should have the Thank you's & Counter with the Credits. Try adding the affies into a scroll box. I like how you have a navigation though. It makes your site more organized.
Updates- (3/5) I reviewed your site on Thursday, the 17th. And I'm seeing that you have updated for
tomorrow already? I don't understand. Maybe you are off with the dates. Anyhoo, you should
bold the dates when you update so it stands out.
Creativity-(3/5) I'll give you some points for creativity cause the lookups that you make are creative. But I want to see more! How about adding non neo-related lookups? Or some patterned layouts? A good site always has a mix of things.
Comments-Your site has gone through a lot. But if you try hard your site just may become popular like other ones.
Total Score: 59/75
Sorry no award. Better luck next time.
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First Impression- (25/30) The first thing I noticed was your Allie's Banners sign. It matches your layout, but I think you could jazz it up a bit more. Also, you could put your form in a textbox so it's easier for people to copy and paste into a neomail. Instead of saying, Neomail me HERE, you can get an envelope pixel from
Amber's Pixels. That would make your site have color.
Layout- (12/15) Your layout suites your site, but I think there is a better one out there. How about requesting a custom layout? I think that would work better, and make your site look more professional with a custom made layout.
Content- (10/15) Your banners are pretty good. I think you can experiment and snazz up your banners more. Also under the neopets related banners, you should put the code in a textbox so it's easier for the people to take the code. A lot of people want what's easier for them so if you don't add the code in the textbox under the banner I don't think many people would want to right click and add all the tags to the beginning and end. If you don't understand just neomail me.
Organization- (5/5) I like how you have a navigation it makes your site more organized.
Updates- (3/5) Always
bold the dates when you update. So that way it stands out. When was your site created? Always include that in the updates.
Creativity- (3/5) Try making your banners more creative! Add some textures in there.
Comments-Keep up the good work! Spice up the banners, then lots of people may want to request a banner!
Total Score: 58/75
Sorry, no award. Better luck next time.
First Impression- (20/30) So you made your layout correct? Well I think you could spice it up more to make it a WOW. Cause I've seen many people use that background that you have before, and it looks just like any other layout. Your a layout maker so you should get more creative and experiment with things! Also, you should add a banner at the top that says Welcome to fearless layouts! That would make your site more catchy. Your affies are all messy where they are. Put the affies in a scroll box, that will keep it more organized. Also, you might want to think about putting your updates in a scroll box also, because every time you update the list will get longer and longer until it will be going down down down the page. You don't want that.
Layout- (8/15) I'll give you some points because you HAVE a layout, though it doesn't suite your site. For some reason it feels as if I've seen that layout before somewhere. It just like looks the same as others. try new things! Add some pixels in there to make it colorful! You see what I mean?
Content- (11/15) Ehh.. your layouts are OK. I think you should do different styles of lookups instead of the same template and different picture and colors. Did you even make those pictures? If not you should give credit to who ever made them. Add more userlookups because you only have three so far! Also why not request to get a custom button done? It looks as if you made those buttons on MS Paint and they aren't the /best/.
Organization- (5/5) Nicely done your site is well organized.
Updates- (4/5) Again, put your updates in a scroll box. I like how you have the date
bold because it stands out a lot.
Creativity- (2/5) Com'on! Get more creative with the layouts that you make. If you take a look at simone's CSS thats a HUGE hit cause she does a different style and many people love her layouts.
Comments- Your site is doing fine. Just made a different layout, spice up the other petpage and userlookup layouts, and your site will be better than ever!
Total Score: 50/75
Sorry, no award. Better luck next time.
First Impression- (25/30) Your blend is catchy. You should have the Welcome at the very top, then Elite Affies, then Affies, and so on. You only have 1 link back button? Why not make more. The Request box should be at the top of the second column, and the Music box at the bottom. You want to make your site at organized as possible so if someone wants to request something they don't need to take 5 minutes searching for it. You should also add a stalker bar so you can see how many people are on your site. You can get one from boingdragon.
Layout- (15/15) The layout really suites your theme! Taylor, the owner of VWF, really does a great job making layouts. I wouldn't change the layout one bit.
Content- (13/15) I know your site is new, but you can also add more stuff, like shields, possibly layouts? Also I don't really like how the text box, which keeps the code for a banner/icon, is upright. It takes up a lot of space and I've never seen anyone use that before. But if you think it's unique you can keep it that way. Your icons and banners have quality in them. I can tell you put some effort into making them.
Organization- (5/5) Well done, your site is one of the most organized.
Updates- (0/5) Where is your updates? How are people suppose to read whats new? Either you HAVE an update section but I can't find it. OR you don't have an updates section at all. It's rare to see a site without unpdates.
Creativity- (4/5) The layout is wonderful, it stands out and the color work well. I think you can add some more creativity to your icons and banners though.
Comments- Your site is doing well! Keep doing what you do, and you site will be getting a lot of hits!
Total Score: 62/75
You have received a B in your review. Please take the /B/ award.
*I have reviewed you with the new grading scale.
First Impression- (26/30) Your blend is a big wow. The 2 columned layout is very unique because it is seperated. I'd suggest to move it closer a bit, because it seems so far away. For some reason I noticed your stalker bar right off the bat, cause the color stood out. Light orange? Why not have it aqua blue-ish green? That color would match your layout more. Also, the Emzee's Music Codes stands out too because it goes up and down. Maybe make the section smaller, cause right now it takes up a lot of space. Your awards also takes up the whole column, so you can make them smaller. If you need help with this code, feel free to neomail me because it will not show it on this petpage.
Layout- (13/15) The layout is fantastic, but the columns might look better if they are closer together. I don't know if you can change it now though. Otherwise Taylor is really awesome at making layouts.
Content- (12/15) I think your site is a HUGE hit. I have never seen a site before where they told what happens after Breaking Dawn. You should add a counter to see how many people have visited your site from boingdragon. Anyway, the text boxes where you hold the chapters, are a bit small. Why not make it wider? As I was reading the chapters, the white mixed with black hurt my eyes. It's very blinding, so maybe have black font, with a white background.
Organization- (5/5) Very well done, your site is very organized and I can tell you put lots of effort.
Updates- (4/5) Your update is long, so you may want to put it in a scroll box, and also make the date, August 13th, bold so it stands out. I also noticed when you started a new sentence you started with lowercase letter, so you should fix that. Also when you wrote, I, you typed it as, i. Sorry, grammar/punctuation freak xD
Creativity- (5/5) Your site name is wonderful, so is the layout and content. Again, I have never reviewed any site where they told stories about what happened after Breaking Dawn, so it was very creative of you to think of that.
Comments-I am very pleased to review your site. Keep the hard work up, get a counter, and your site will have MANY hits!
Total Score: 65/75
You have received a A in your review. Please take the /A/ award.
*I have reviewed you with the new grading scale.
First Impression- (28/30) The first thing I noticed was The Slient Reviewer banner. It's pretty cute. I love your intro by the way, where you yanked off the cloak. That gave me a laugh. Anyway, I wouldn't have that Best Viewed in Firefox button there, because it really stands out cause the color blue, does not fit in. Why not ask someone to make a custom Best Viewed in Firefox (BVIF) button for you? Or you can simply make it yourself. Also, you could have the BVIF on a sign. I think that many people would want to vote for your site.
Layout- (15/15) Your layout works well for your site. Maybe change the theme/layout every few weeks?
Content- (12/15) I like the style in how you reivew. For example Judging the Book By It's Cover, I have never heard of a review site who use that. For the guild reviews, it's good that you inform the applicant. I've noticed, you have only reviewed one site? Or have you reviewed more? You should leave a couple of the sites reviewed from the past, so people who review your site can see them. Now I can't really review much of your content for the site reviews. :/
Organization- (5/5) Great job, your site is very neat, and organized. Why not add one of those counters that say how many people have visited your site? You can get one from boingdragon(dot)com.
Updates- (4/5) Hm.. from August 1st until August 14th you finally updated. I'm going to mark off one point cause you haven't updated for so long.
Creativity- (3/5) I love your site name, The Silent Reviewer. I also love your buttons. However the very last one, the one that you made, isn't the best compared to the other ones that people have made for you. It's a bit fuzzy. Maybe try fixing that up, and get a new base to it, because it stands out and it doesn't really match your theme at all. Otherwise I can tell you have lots of potential in you, so make your site more WOW!
Comments-Nice job overall! Just fix up some small things, and your site is ready to go!
Total Score: 67/75
You have received a A in your review. Please take the /A/ award.
*I have reviewed you with the new grading scale.
First Impression- (5/30) Uhmm.. to be honest I don't like the layout 1 bit. At the very top there is a baby lenny? And it says, ultimate lookup finder. Isn't it suppose to be, Ultimate Lookup Finder. (?) With the caps on the first letters? Com'on?! You always capitalize the FIRST letters. There is no navigation for your site. Like Affies, Reviewed By, Link Back ETC ETC ETC. Its going to be hard, and take a LONG time for people to find what their looking for cause you don't have a navigation. Also, on the "About" section, why don't you put the form in a text box? Go to sunnyneo and find it at the bottom of the html tutorials. That would make it more easier for people to copy the form and send it to you. Why not center all the content? It's all on the left side, and it looks weird. And why is your "Extra and Counter" in the middle of the page? It's suppose to be at the BOTTOM cause its LEAST important.. and the pre-made, custom, and tutorial lookup pages go at the TOP, cause thats what your site is based on!
Layout- (0/15) Find someone that can do a custom layout for you. The layout you have now isn't very professional, and if I had a custom/premade site, I wouldn't want to list it there.
Content- (5/15) You only have 28 people on the list that make userlookups. Its VERY unorganized. Put all the links into sections, like Customs, Premades, and Tutorials. That way it would be MORE organized and better for people to find what they are looking for.
Organization- (2/5) The main content, which is your links to the people that make lookups, is suppose to be at the TOP! And the affies and reviewed by is at the BOTTOM!
Updates- (0/5) What? You don't even have an updates section. How are people suppose to know if you've added any people to the list, or any affies. Seriously every site needs an update section!
Creativity- (1/5) Im going to give you 1 point for creativity because I have never reviewed a Lookup Finder site and thats pretty creative to make up one. Otherwise, there was no creativity what so ever.
Comments- You have LOTS missing, and LOTS to work on. Just fix fix fix and get more people to review your site and by the constructive criticism your site will get better.
Total Score: 13/75
Sorry, no award. Better luck next time.
First Impression- (28/30) The first thing I noticed was your PushPlay banner, and layout. The banner is really cute, and the colors match the layout perfectly. But the background is plain white. I understand that it only works in IE, but I only have Safari.. so I cant see it. Maybe find a background that you can see with all browsers? I'm glad you have a navigation, and otherwise everything is great.
Layout- (13/15) I see that you used the base layout from apartment nine, and you edited it amazingly good! I'm pretty sure that you can probably try and make your own layout out of scratch, so why not try? I can tell that your capable of doing all sorts of things.
Content- (14/15) How you make your buttons is fantastic! Why not add more button bases? A great site has a lot to select from.
Organization- (5/5) Awesome job, your site is one of the very organized sites that I have reviewed! Everything is in perfect place.
Updates- (5/5) Nice job, you update almost every day. Why not add a pixel next to the date when you update? I think that you make it stand out more.
Creativity- (4/5) I can tell that you have lots of potential and I know that your capable of making your site creative. So go for it!
Comments-Your site is turning out wonderful! Keep the awesome work up!
Total Score: 69/75
You have received a A in your review. Please take the /A/ award.
First Impression- (10/30) Oh goodness how can I say this? Erm.. the pink font does not match your layout at all, and looks terrible. Why not ask someone to make you a custom layout? A lot of the sites that I've reviewed has used Impulse's layouts. You should add a banner/blend that would say Welcome to Along The Lines! There is PLENTY of fixing to do. Why is the updates wayyy at the bottom? Its suppose to be at the top. Why not look at some other button sites and get ideas from them? I know you started your site a few days ago, but everything is just so.. UGHH! I've noticed, do you have a Listed At? (Where you are listed in any directories) Well I don't see one.
Layout- (0/15) Again, terrible colors for the layout. Why not request a custom one? There are PLENTYYY of graphic sites. Sorry if I'm being rude about this, you just want my opinion, and I'm giving it to you.
Content- (5/15) Are you just starting to make buttons? Sorry, but.. your buttons aren't exactly the
best. They could look better if you changed the font to them.. let me guess you used MS Paint? How many people have requested you to make a button for them? Only one since you started less than a week ago? If you want to be more popular, you need to be affies with LOTS of people. I have 43 affies. You have.. 5? Just find other sites and be affies with them! It doesn't look like anyone has requested an icon yet.
Organization-(5/5) Nice job, your organization is awesome.
Updates- (3/5) If I were you, I wouldn't have the updates way at the bottom, and I also wouldn't have the updates scrolling. Its pretty hard to read actually.. well for me it is. xD
Creativity-(1/5) I guess your site name, Along the Lines, is pretty creative. Otherwise I dont seen anything else creative about your site /what so ever/.
Comments- You have a lot of fixing to do! Don't get discouraged, every site starts off different from others. Just fix fix fix and get lots more people to review your site and they will tell you things to work on! Well I hope my review for you worked. So, good luck :)
Total Score: 24/75
Sorry no award, better luck next time.
First Impression-(26/30)Fabulous layout. You should put the Updates more at the bottom where the Link Back is, because I don't think many people would notice it up there. Well at least I didn't. xD You can also use more info on your Welcome message. Haha, nice pic of you :) I think it would be better if you have the your awards and reviews at the bottom of the page. Your content should be first.
Layout- (11/15) Your layout is really good! But there's one thing that I noticed about your blend. Why is there this pic of Bella on the left side with her arms up? It kinda random, since your blend matches Edward and Bella's face; but no that pic on the left side. Do you see what I'm saying? If that pic wasn't there, I think it would look much better. Anyway, on your Graphic Portkeys, when I click Requested Petpages, it leads to a different petpage (which is totally fine) but there's no layout to it. Its just a blank petpage with the pick up requests. Why not add VWF-ish layout? It like, all of a sudden WHOOSH it goes from super cool layout, to no layout at all. Hopefully you understand what I mean. x3
Content- (13/15) Your graphics, buttons, petpages, and user lookups are fantastic! I can tell that you put some effort into making them :) Also, where is your Listed At? That tells me that you are not listed in any directories? Well people want to know if you are listed, so you should add a section where your listed at. So I'm going to mark off some points for that.
Organization-(4/5) Good job on your organization, but again, you should put your awards and reviews at the BOTTOM or side of your site.
Updates- (3/5) Erm.. when did you create your site? You should have the date at the bottom of the Updates. It would also be better if for each time you update it use
BOLD for the date. So that way it stands out. And how come you only have updated today? I wanted to see what you would of wrote yesterday, or a few days ago.
Creativity-(5/5) I love your site name; Vampire With Fangs. Thats very unique and creative. Your layout is great, and same with the content.
Comments-Nice job! Your site stands out of all the other Twilight-related sites that I have reviewed. Keep the good work up!
Total Score: 62/75
You have received a B in your review. Please take the /B/ award.
First Impression- (26/30) I like your blend, but I think you can use more color. Your layout is bland, maybe add some pixels? And a flower-ish background would match. Your custom buttons are pretty good, maybe try animating them? Otherwise your site is very organized, and neat.
Layout- (12/15) Why do you have a pic of a lady (sorry I don't know who it is) in your blend? It doesn't really match your theme, of Skylight. Again, find a different layout thats more colorful. It would also help a lot of you have a navigation! Your site has a lot of things in it, why not add a navigation to make it more organized and easier to find what people are looking for? You should also add something like if affies or buttons are opened/closed. That would tell people if your taking requests or not.
Content- (11/15) You only have 3 banners? Why not add 10 more? A good site has plenty to select from. Also try adding lots more brushes. I can tell that you put effort into your icons and layouts (: I noticed that your layouts wont fit on the same site? I don't think that many people would see that little "click here" button to go to the layouts. Why not make a banner that says "Click here to go to my layouts!" That would be more noticeable.
Organization- (4/5) Nice job, your site is very organized. Just add the navigation at the top.
Updates-(5/5) Good job you update almost everyday. Just make sure that you bold your updates, so their noticeable.
Creativity- (4/5) I think you could of made more creative buttons.. maybe one with a dark sky? Or a sunset? That would match your site name, Skylight. How come you don't have a lot of buttons? Your a button maker so you should make a lot for yourself :)
Comments- Good job! Your site is doing well. Just find a different layout and your site would look much better.
Total Score: 62/75
You have received a B in your review. Please take the /B/ award.
First Impression- (10/30) Eh.. terrible layout. The Snapple theme does not match the layout at all! Request someone to make a Snapple-related layout for you. Now that would match. Theres so much rainbow-y in your layout its just too much for a Snapple themed review site. I dont understand your awards. Snapple bottle, and bottle cap? What does that mean? I like the images of snapple things, but where is the content that says You Have Recieved A 70-75 In Snapple Reviews! (?) Where is that? All it is, is just a pic of a bottle. Edit the bottle and add the words.. its suppose to be a award! I honestly dont think you need that Top Affie Navigation so soon.. because you just opened and you only have 1 so far. The Link Me's should not be at the bottom. Thats the hardest place for someone to find the link me's. How about put it in the left column?
Layout- (0/15) Again, request someone to make a custom snapple layout for you, instead of using a rainbow premade one. If you found yourself a snapple themed layout, your site would look more professional. But right now your site looks kidish.
Content- (5/15) Your reviews are so short! Look how all mine are. Im just not writing a sentence under each category. Seriously. Everyone got a 70+ on their reviews? Your so easy on them x) Your mostly writing all comments on how good and wonderful their site is. Their site cant get better if your writing them nice comments. Thats what the whole point of a review site IS. To correct them and tell people things to make their site better. They cant improve from nice comments. Sorry im going to have to take a lot of points off. But the good thing is that you've reviews 11 sites in 4 days? Thats impressive that you people requested you so fast.
Organization- (5/5) Nice job, your site is very organized.
Creativity- (2/5) I wouldnt really say that your site name, Snapples, is creative cause its a name of a drink. I think you could of make Snapples a bit more creative. Like the Sizzling Snapples Reviews! See what I mean? Also, the layout wasnt creative at all. But I like your link back buttons though.
Comments- Its not too bad for a site that started a few days ago. LOTS of improving/fixing/changing to do though. But dont worry, if you correct your mistakes, your site will one day be successful like others.
Total Score: 22/75
Sorry, no award. Better luck next time. If you've made MAJOR improvements, you can have a re-review.
First Impression- (20/30) Hmm.. when I entered When The Day Met The Night, I was planning to enter something dark, with a sun, or a moon. But instead I find a musical layout? That doesnt really match at all. Just imagine.. my review site having a rainbow layout, when my site is based on taxi's? Theres something you may want to change. I like the template of the layout though.. and the navigation in the side. Very organized. Cute buttons, but again, the buttons dont match the THEME of your layout/site name. A smiley faced button? Com'on. It doesnt match.
Layout- (12/15) Again, find a different layout please. The musical layout is cute, but it doesnt suite your site.
Content- (13/15) I like your premade CSS, but their a bit.. boring? Why not add a few neopet related images INTO the petpages/CSS. It would give it a nice shine :) How about instead of saying Style One, Style Two etc etc etc, why not NAME each of your premade CSS? It would be a bit more interesting.
Organization- (5/5) Good job on your organization! I love the tabs on the side, makes it easy for people to find what their looking for.
Updates- (5/5) That concert thing on your updates made me laugh. Awesome, you update almost everyday! Nice job.
Creativity- (4/5) I'll give some credit to you for the layout, even though it doesnt match your theme. But it still looks wonderful :) I think you can make the CSS more creative though! Go for it!
Comments- Excellent job! Just fix the mistakes, and your site will be well on its way!
Total Score: 59/75
Sorry, no award. If you've made MAJOR improvements, you can have a re-review.
*Note, I have graded you on the NEW rubric scale.
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First Impression- (6/10) I like the banner, and your layout is simple. Since the layout is mostly black, you should add a black background to your layout, instead of being white. It would match more this way. I wouldn't have the Important news scrolling up, its kinda hard to read.. plus im using Safari (sorry I dont have IE.) Why is the About Chase down at the bottom, and the About Avery, is on the right column? Your site is a bit scattered.. you may want to have the About ____ close to each other. And you have a review site going too? Wow.. you guys must be busy xD
Layout- (8/10) Again, have the background color of the layout be black.. it would match more that way. Otherwise I think your layout is wonderful.
Content- (8/10) I like how you have another link to the content, so its not all cramped in 1 page. Hmm.. in your content page, you have the same banner. Why not make a different one? That way it would be more interesting. I like your backgrounds and pixels. Your backgrounds are very pixel-y though :) Those site layouts are amazing! I think I may want to use one of those xP The userlookups are a bit plain. They just have an image on it.. thats all. Maybe add a background to the userlookups? On your review site, I think you should add a banner.
Organization- (4/5) Again, your homepage for Sun City Designs, I think it could be more organized.
Neatness- (10/10) However, all of your sites are neat.
Creativity- (4/5) I like your site name, Sun City Designs, & your buttons are creative, but I didnt see much else.
Comments- Great job! Sun City must be getting a lot of requests.. no? Well your content is fabulous so keep the great work up!
Total Score: 40/50
You have received a B in your review. Please take the /B/ award.
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