I see a doll way up high with big blue porcelain eyes
She does not speak she does not sigh but there she sits shedding tears from her eyes
I try not to notice
I try not to care for how can I help her way up there
I am but one man one being like her
Empty and soulless wandering this god forsaken earth
Hello and welcome to my application for UnforgivingSin, or Sin as I will be calling him for the remainder of this application.
No one threw rubber chickens at me to make me make this app or forced me to dress like a clown. This was all me, and only me. Thank you.^^ *honk honk*
Title: Fallen Brother's Grimm
Name: Sin
Gender: Male
Species: Lupe
Age: immortal, appears 20 years old
Height: 5 ft 6 in
Weight: 160 pounds
Home: Where ever he hangs his katana that day
Brother: Cuel
Master: Tosea, the Doll Child
Prologue
There is nothing more thrilling then the battlefield. A world drenched in pain and I not the cause of it. The sound of the crying souls of the wounded and dying echo around you. And to a mortal's eye it is a gruesome view but to the eyes of a demon it is a feast unlike any other. The wispy blue flames of souls float in the air wishing to return to their hosts bodies are like fireflies that light up the night sky making the world glow. Then out of their shadows rise the servants of the Underworld to ferry the lost souls home. However, my kind rarely make it in time. Since, they would never expected one of their own would be hiding in the mists of the fallen.
For years I hid in these shadows and was one of the servants. With the aid of my brother Cuel we hunted down lost souls, and were given the title the Brothers Grimm.
Our world was dark, it had started out that way. Since the day of our birth we were dead. We were a motionless soul without even a heart beat, or any idea what emotions truly were. From that soul Cuel and I were created. Cuel was a kougra, with a fiery determination to serve, while I was more a shadow being.
Together with my brother I felt we could do no wrong. I was sure this was all I ever wanted. Yet something tore at me night after night. It was a taste I could not wash from my mouth, a yearning that could not be full filled until done. I craved a food I could not have. I wanted it! Every fiber of my being wanted to devour the souls of those pathetic mortals, who wandered the mortal world. They were worthless, and even my bother could see this. Yet, being a Grim we were given one order, never to take another's life. The day I did is one I will never forget.
The feeling of power that surged through my body was too much and in the end it destroyed me. My bother tried to stop me by plunging a demon slaying blame into my heart but even though they were orders from our father my brother was too weak with love for me to do it. Yes, in the end it was too late I had been reborn. From that one soul power and hunger was all that consumed me, and not even Cuel or my Father were strong enough to cut me down.
For the rest of my days I was drawn to the taste of a mortals soul, like a cat to a saucer of milk. I ran to the mortal world, it was the only thing I could do. I craved a food that could not be obtained in my home of demons, so there was no option. Cuel tried to stop me but the moment he got in my way I plunged my fangs into his left arm and ferried it away with me to the mortal world.
I could feel the small shreds of humanity that I had gotten from my creator, the God of the Underworld, were vanishing. Every time I fed a little more of my former self vanished. I was lost in a limbo of hunger and acceptance. For the rest of my days I would yearn to find myself again.
To be Continued…
Hi there, so did you enjoy that story. I sure hope so since it is only a pilot of whats to come. Anyways, my name is Aly. I have been on neo for almost 8 or is it 7 years now? Honestly, I have been here so long its hard to count the years any more. I am 23 years old and an animation major at a wonderful art school in the south east.
As for a little about me. I would have to say my strong points are my obsession on creating characters. I am not just saying this because its something you would want to hear it is very true. I mean if anyone is unable to tell just have them look at my pets. I adore drawing, and if I did not I would have a problem since animation involves drawing 12 pictures every second of animation.
I really love animals and some of my friends at school actually pick on me when it comes to my furry art, but honestly anyone can draw people. But anthropomorphic dogs and cats are just too cool. They involve so much anatomy, fur and texture. Ok, lets stray away from my real life stuff and move over to my life on neopets.
I have five accounts and here they are.
actiniaalycat171188alypwnskmafiaartimis
Each one of these accounts holds very dear pets, or maybe I should say characters, more to come about this later.^^
On neo I buy way too many NC cards and don't play enough games. I use to play KQ a good bit and even had some neat tokens but after finding Habitarium I cant balance my time between the two. In the end the p3s won.
I enjoy coding pet pages and drawing pictures of my pets. I have been doing this since I can remember. I also enter my pets in the beauty contest. You can see my BC log
here.
Lastly and more importantly, during my time here I have created a world where all my pets live and reside. Here is what the map looks like:
Basically dictatorships and monarchy's are the only governments here in the Isles, unless the military chooses to hold a cue. Any ways, I think the best way to show you what my plans are for Sin is by letting you see the characters I have made.
Cuel died when he was born and his soul transformed into who he is now along with his brother, Sin. Cuel and Sin are terrifying demons and soul wranglers. One night Sin killed a mortal and Cuel tried to cover the act. In doing so his father ordered him to be the one to kill his bother. Yet, Sin does not give Cuel the chance and ran to the mortal world but made sure to take Cuel's left arm with him as a memento. Wounded and broken Cuel is sent to the mortal world to find his brother and do what must be done. Yet, when he finds out Sin has taken up residence in the shadow of Lestia, his friend and love he does not know if he can bring himself to cut down the only thing he has truly had feelings for.
Lestia was born in Nor in a wealthy aristocratic family. She should have had a wonderful life, full of ball gowns, and parties, but that was not what happened. The moment she was born the evil demon Sin took over her shadow and when ever she fell in love with an animal or something Sin would choke it to death. Now, she lives in constant fear that one day she will fall in love with a boy and he too will die a slow painful death like the pets she loved as a child.
Birzu is the prince of a land called Nor. On the day of his birth odd spots appeared on his light golden tan coat when he was placed in the sun. The priests knew at once he was the Chosen One from the prophecy:
A child of light shall be born and his coat will be dappled by the sun's rays. This child will be able to awaken the earth and allow Nor to always be bathed in sunshine and light. Wars will no longer harm her borders and winter shall never come. Yet, Birzu could care less about any of this since at night he is haunted by the faces of three nameless girls calling for him death, love, and protection.
Kosma is a small witch child. When she was only 7 years old she lost her family in a fire her brother started and ever since his arrest she has been living in Novela with Arth, the God of Time. She is 10 now and has made a name for herself as the youngest Star Caster in the council of the Gods. Yet, the only title she cares about is Arth's little sister.
Kitrenna was a 12 year old Duchess on a small island on the outskirts of Nor. But everything changed when she met Arth and Kosma. Yet, when Arth reveals to her that he is the God of Time and that her soul is in danger because of a game he and his brother are playing he tells her his true name so she can become immortal. However, this causes him to died and be reborn somewhere. Kosma is so upset she makes a betting game with Cuel, the God of the Underworlds son, and with Kitrenna saying that whoever fails to capture Arth's, reincarnation's, heart in a years time will be forced to serve Cuel in the Underworld. Now Kitrenna has all the time in the world to find Arth's reincarnation but being 12 years forever and fighting a powerful witch, like Kosma, is going to be a race challenging race wiht time.
Greuno is the young Duke of Milt, one of the main cities in Nor. Greuno or Uno as he is called is the only son and heir to one of the most famous toy companies on the Isles. However, Greuno is on the greatest toy makers that has ever been born into his family, but this is not because of skill with his hands. No, instead Greuno holds a frightening secret, if he concentrates too much on things they turn into figurines or toys. Now, children are missing in his town and his doll collection is getting bigger by the day. Will he ever be able to control his power? Or does he really want to?
Bob wanted only one thing, to save his little sisters life, what he got was something else. When Lo, an ice spirit came to Bob with a proposition Bob said yes to the deal and watched his little sister's life be spared, while he had to become the new god of winter. Little did he know that Lo had other plans, for he wanted to make Bob a King over the gods. But when Bob finds out Lo's evil plan he must choose to either take up arms against the one that saved his sister or sit back and become king of the world.
Bob does not exist right now but I am saving for a draik so I can trade for an UC faerie kougra to make him a reality.
Found sitting on a silver throne, detailed with vines and actual stars is
Goddess Hiazel. Hiazel was a zafara, who was once the princess of an enchanted island called Luni. The island had strange powers to make everything such as the plants and animals that lived on the island, even the rain massive in size. While the Lunights, the people of the island, stayed normal sized. Hiazel rules over the Moon and Luni and always has strange animals by her side. She is said to be Articoal's bride to be, but it is clear by the way she looks at him this is not the case.
Jerimiias is the son of the Sultan and is a Casanova is ever there was one. He has many girls after him but their is only one mistress for him and that is power. Yet, he comes by this naturally for his family is said to have stolen something very precious from the Gods. A flame, or a fire that holds the essence of hope, love and understanding in it. Yet, over the years it has warped and twisted into an evil blue flame that Jerimiias can call on command. Yet, now that the Sun Gods Daughter has been found and is giving the order to bring back the flame can he use his charms to win her over or will her face be the last thing he sees as she kills him to take back the flame?
Articoal Is the God of the Sun and the God of all the Gods as well as Arth and Zeshor's father. However he also has a daughter that he lost when she was younger. He is a old king, pained by lose and wanting nothing more then to bring his child home. He is the holder of the Library of Time and watches over all the books that tell the gods stories but also he keeps a careful eye on the portal to the mortal world. Hoping that one day his daughter will return to him.
Zuzu is a young actress growing up in the crazy world of the 1920's. Along with her mob bosses, money and prohibition her life is pretty crazy. The last thing she needed was a power to see how old she would be when she died. Yes, she has death god eyes which allow her to see the age a person will die floating over their head. Now she is getting roped into a detectives twisted plot to catch her honey and maybe take over the town.
The answer if really very simple. I need a brother for Cuel, my UC darigan kougra. For a time now I have been looking for the perfect pet to be his brother and many have come along. UC Halloween zaffies, UC darigan yurbles and even another UC darigan kougra but the end result is always the same, the names never fit with what I am looking for. Once I saw Sin, I knew Cuel and Sin were meant for each other. Like brothers in the womb, their names fit perfectly. Cuel sounds like Cruel and Sin, well enough said.
The second reason is Sin is an UC Halloween Lupe and frankly I adore UC lupes and am sad there are not that many of them left. I think Halloween lupes are one of the most underrated pets and I don't understand why when there are so many amazing ways you can design a character for them.
Lastly, I make characters like they are going out of fashion and the one I have created for Sin is perfect. It is not the average lupe tale of one who goes crazy and turns into a werewolf, that's just too clishay for my taste. No, Sin is something much darker and sinister. He is a soulless creature that's craves the souls or life force of man kind. He feeds on it continuously but the food is a cursed one, for even a demon, and so he looses bit of his humanity in the processes.
As his tale unfolds he hurts many counting his brother and a young girl but the one he hurts the most is a little mynci girl named Tosea. Sin is contracted by the military to kill the Emperor and the imperial family. He does just this but when he is getting ready to clean his katana and move on to another place the guards rush in to take him hostage and kill him for his crimes against the state. He takes off through the woods only to collapse from exhaustion and when he wakes he realizes he is tied and bound to a little mynci girl in a kimono.
Through a few tricks of witch craft she forces Sin to take her to the underworld to ferry back the souls of her family. For she is the child Sin missed to kill in the imperial family and now he is forced to go back to a home and to a father and brother that would like nothing more them to kill him on the spot.
Being a writer and artist I will make sure that Sin has a lot of art on his page. I cant find any other way to show my dedication to a pet or its character other then drawing them a good many times. Sin will also be given a pet page that is completely dedicated to him. This is honestly not even a taste of what would come if I was lucky enough to adopt him. He will also be given a pet look up that shows a design and a quick summery of who Sin is as a character and villain.
For over two years now I have been collecting codestones waiting for Cuel to get his brother so I could train the two of them into mammoth battledome champions. But, they would never actually get enter into the arena, just trained up. I don't like hurting my pets, even if they are pixels, but there is nothing wrong with training Sin just in case I ever change my mind. Right now I have 125 codestones and 12 dubloons all ready to train Cuel and Sin with.
I also plan on entering Sin in the beauty contest. The BC is pretty important to me since I enjoy getting trophies for my pets. I feel that it shows dedication and lets people see what I am up to.
As for Sin's petpet, I will be giving him a Primella, why a primella? Well, they are cute and the story I wrote for him involves him trying to eat a fish out of a koi pond and Tosea hitting him on the head with a frying pan because the fish belonged to her mother. This is how Sin gets caught. However, the Fire WerHound will be added to my petpet gallery. You can see it
here.
Last but not least Sin will be customized. I could hit myself for my over all love and obsession with buying Neopian Cash cards. It is sad how many items I have collected over the years but if I were to get Sin he would be customized. Here is an idea of what he would look like. I already own all these items so it would be no problem getting them off side accounts for Sin.
Now, I am sure you are wondering where would Sin go. Honestly it is pretty simple, he would be placed on a very very active side account, kmafia. I cant think of a place more suited for him since he will be next to his little master Tosea. If this is a problem, I can have him live on my main account, but since I like to put pets next to the characters that are important to their story I feel having here by Tosea is the best choice. Also, Cuel hates him.xD
Thus you have reached the end of your journey and I hope you were interested and at least not bored by what you saw. Over all, I have no idea what fosters are looking for, for there pets. Weather they be into characters, art, story, or coding it is all up in the air to me. So if I am not chosen for Sin I will completely understand. The choice is always yours and I respect that.
However, if I am lucky enough to adopt Sin I can promise you he will be treated just like all my pets. That is honestly all I can promise. Thank you again for your time and I wish you luck adopting out all your wonderful pets.
Aly
Please take a peek at my pets pages to see what Sin's would look like if he were to come home with me.
