Welcome

Every strong chord and every thin string
Struck by sadness and plucked with pain
Weaved into darkness and cut by light
Strained by madness and strung with might

Every low pitch and every high note
Hit with accuracy and sung with oath
Vibrates feelings and tells a story
Of the olden days and all their glory

Profile

The Basics

Name: Tompson Achorda

Alias: Tom

Gender: Male

Age: 22

Birthday: December 31st

Classification: Talent (see History section)

Gift: Musical Talent

Petpet: Suzuki the Plushie Mazzew

The Physicals

Height: 6'5"

Weight: Unknown

Hair: Dark burgundy (reddish-purple); long shoulder length hair that is usually tied back.

Eyes: Ruby red

Markings: Dark spots on shoulders and back. +Else??

The Companion

Name: Suzuki

Gender: Female

Species: Mazzew

Age: Unknown

Personality: Quiet, but mischievous. Often helps Tom with his work.

History: ???

History

Family

Portraits

All art is belongs to their respective artists and should not be taken/used under any circumstances. Drag to URL for full view.

Art by Me:

Tom's Ref. Line Art

Tom's Reference

Quad

Tom's Lookup BG

Flea (neo_lover_0510)

Patricia (hell0_bye)

Credits

Layout, coding, and art images belong to Ccr153lucky2 unless otherwise stated. All other original pieces of art belong to their respective artists. All Neo images and indicia belong to Neopets.com

So no stealing. Please test your skills at the nearest local convenience store first for tangible items and tell me how that goes.

OTHER (delete this section later)

I ran out of petpages to use, so I'll use Tom's temporarily until his page is finished.

Therefore, this will be the huge pickup section for everyone :).

W.I.P For Xia and Vixie :)

Huge list of things to do: (In order of priority)
x = completed. o = in progress.

[x] Finish Minusagi Application
[x] Finish Minusagi's new art
[x] Petlookups
[x] Finish Guild layout + coding
[x] Finish Deion's Banner Request
[x] Finish Momo's art for Shattered
[x] Make Lucky a petpage
[o] Lucky's Story
[x] Lucky's Ref
[o] Lucky's other art (Total = 3 now :P)
[x] Make Tom a petpage
[ ] Tom's Story
[o] Tom's Ref
[x] Tom's other art
[ ] Xriene's story + petpage (currently being used for Minu's splash page)
[ ] Petpages + designs for my side pets
[x] Make Cam's whole new drawing thing for Jari
[o] Create a new userlookup (need a cool idea! D:)
[x] Guild Website Layout

For my own use:

Visuals: [ ] Splash Page [ ] Custom Layout { } Image { } Coding [ ] Reference [ ] App art (scattered art that's relevent to different sections of your app) [ ] Other art (what you've done for fun for the pet) [ ] Fan Art (from others) [ ] Custom Lookup for pet (modelled by another pet) [ ] Custom petpage (if different from current you are using) Little Gifts: [ ] Adoptables [ ] Makeables (Like adoptables) [ ] Banners, such as: - Not UFT/UFA - I'm Feeling happy/sad/angry/annoyed/whatever else banner - A simple banner that says the pet's name - Start a RL project about the pet (eg, stitch a plush toy version) [ ] Personal button to link back Content App: [x] Intro (DONT FORGET THE DISCLAIMER) [ ] Something that draws the foster into the app (poem/story exert?) [ ] Conclusion (so that your app doesn't abruptly end) [ ] Credits and Thanks (Thank anyone who's helped you ^^ so you don't get accused of stealing) The Pet: [x] Profile (stats such as gender, age, name, etc) (Includes ref) [x] Physical profile (Looks, markings, eye colour, etc) [x] Personality (Nice, clever, freaky, stalker, etc) - Try and include a few flaws to make her more 'human'. You don't want a Mary-Sue character who's all princessy and nice. Perhaps she's claustrophobic, hot-tempered, someone who doesn't know how to follow directions, or deaf in one ear, etc. [x] Likes and hates [x] History/ Story Summary [ ] How she lives her world [x] Story { } Intro { } Main body (interesting plot plz) { } Conclusion to the story (don't need if you plan to put "To be continued [ ] About the Petpet (incorperate the importance of petpet) { } Petpet's Bio (might include ref) { } Personality { } Importance [ ] Why you want the pet Family: [x] List the family of pets [ ] Each pet - short bio/personality (short, because this isn't about your pets, it's about the one you're applying for, but long enough that you get the idea of what the pet is), & picture. Future: [ ] Customization for pet? List the items. [ ] Going to enter in the BC? Show some proof of past trophies. [ ] Pet spotlight? Neopian times? Show proof. Example futures: "I will... - enter in the BC - make a comic for the NT - draw art for the pet - write stories - create a petpage as shown - lookup - petpet - role playing - userlookup ETC. You: [ ] About yourself { } Hobbies on Neopets { } Hobbies off Neopets { } List your accounts { } Just a little paragraph on you. Do not sound over/under confident. Be yourself. [ ] Why Me (do not be too boastful) [ ] Why not me? (Most do not include this section, but if you do, do not put yourself down too much) [ ] Account History (be honest - have you ever been frozen/warned?) Other: [ ] Recommendations (these often don't do much, since friends always say good things about you, but you can have them anyways) [ ] Random animations [x] Adopted adoptables from others [x] Poems/Quotes/Song lyrics that you made up [x] Dedicate your Gallery/shop to pet [ ] Dedicate Userlookup to pet [ ] Example comics Most of these would go under 'dedication' With what you have: [x] Give current pets a decent lookup + petpet [ ] Give each a character, personality, story and ref [ ] Give each their own petpage [x] Give each pet some customization (shows that you DO something with your own pets instead of just for the pet you're applying for. Shows you're a good owner.) [ ] Spiffy up your account (trophies, avatars, stamps, neodeck, shop, trades, neohome, etc?) New Adoptables :3 Aftermath: [ ] Proofread your app fully. [ ] Get a friend to proof read it and critique. [ ] Have it critiqued by other strangers [ ] Fix and change suggested things. [ ] Hand it in :P [ ] Panic. [ ] App Done :)