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Hiya, guest! Welcome to Temper. Temper was founded on November 1st, 2009 by Tiffany. Several of you know that I used to own another site, Splendor. It offered graphics and even took requests. However, I've closed it - I felt that my graphic skills weren't great and needed some improvement. Therefore, I decided to create Temper! I love to give advice, so I decided to create a review site. Temper aims to give constructive criticism, helpful advice, and an in - depth overview of your site. Feel free to look around or request a review. ^^

rules

don't play with fire

1) Please understand I have a life outside of Neo. By reviewing your site, I am doing you a favor.
2) Do not send in a request if they are closed. If you do, I will simply ignore your request.
3) I will not respond to forms that are not completely filled out.
4) I don't want to review sites that don't have an actual layout, any affies, or content. I will not review About Me pages, guild/guild webbies, or photography. I also review on - neo sites only.
5) I will not review sites with stolen content.
6) You may qualify for a re - review if you score lower than a 70%.
7) Please do not send hatemail. Again, I am doing a favor for you. Respect this, and do not argue with my opinion.
8) Please link to my site somewhere if I do a review for you. (: You don't have to note the score, but put up a link. ^^
9) I don't review sites that are "under construction" or "on hiatus".
If you've read all the rules, please put Flaming somewhere in your request.

Note: I don't mind if the layout is premade, just as long as it looks nice and organized.

I am a harsh reviewer; don't take it personally. ;)

rubric

how it works


First Impression: What is the first thing that pops into my mind when I enter your site? Am I encouraged to stay or provoked to run away? ?/15
Layout/Organization: Is the layout organized? Do the colors coordinate nicely? ?/20
Content: Content is the most important part of your site. Does your site have a lot to offer? Does effort shine through your work? As always, quality comes before quantity - but I don't want to see a huge blank space. ?/30
Sitely: Do you have a good number of high quality affiliates? Are you listed anywhere? Do you have an updates section? Are your link backs high quality? ?/20
Spelling/Grammar: Are your sentences punctuated correctly? Do you typ3 lyk dis? ?/5
Originality: Is the name of your site original? Is the site itself original? ?/10
Final thoughts: Overall, what do I think of your site?

Total: ?/100
Extra points may be awarded for creativity, humor, and such ^^

Note: I don't mind if the layout is premade, just as long as it looks nice and organized.

the form

let's hope it doesn't get lost in the mail

Reviews are:

I'd like to be reviewed at Temper, Tiffany!
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Thanks Tiffany!




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Reviews will be somewhat fast

Waiting List:
Patrick at The Happy Neopian Directory
Ally at Choco

the reviews

your evaluation

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Who:

Nov. 21st, 2009
First Impression: I'm greeted by a serene layout that calms me, but the background is plain. Maybe make it a pale shade of blue? 14/15
Layout/Organization: Your site's theme is lovely. As I mentioned above, the layout is soothing – although the background is a simple, boring shade of white. Try a color that matches with the color scheme. The text boxes are a bit bright - use a shade of blue that's slightly paler. I love the colors you used – but the blue used when you hover over the navigation is a bit dark. Lighten it up a bit. Finally, I think you should have a link on the navigation to your welcome page. Either that, or make your "Back to the Florist" button a bit more noticeable. I had trouble redirecting back to your welcome page until I discovered that pixel. 16/20
Content: Your buttons have certainly improved since you first started your site. The older ones don't look the best, but your newer ones look nice. Your site is a perfect example of how practice makes perfect. I love the buttons you made for Amnesia and Hush. The idea of naming your button borders after flowers is very original. You have a nice selection of button bases as well. I like how you can "grab" button bases – that idea is very creative. Your icons look great – although some of the text on them is a bit too small. 30/30
Sitely: Ooh, you have a sister site! All your affies are high – quality, and you have a good number of them. You're listed at many directories, and you've been reviewed at quite a few sites. All your link backs look great – and I'm happy to see you have made all of them. My only complaint is of the counter – the border used on it doesn't cover the entire background image. That's not very major though – so I won't take off any points for that. 20/20
Spelling/Grammar: At first glance, I didn't see any errors. However, when I looked a bit deeper into your site, I found some minor capitalization and punctuation mistakes. For example - This concept sprung into my head one day and I thought, let's put it into action! should be This concept sprung into my head one day and I thought, "Let's put it into action!" There are a small amount of capitalization errors – try going through your entire site and clearing any mistakes. However, I couldn't find any spelling errors, and all your sentences made sense. 4/5
Originality: The Florist – I love the theme and idea. Heh, I think I've seen too many button request sites. Your buttons do look pretty nice though, so I won't take points off for that. Many of your ideas are creative and original. 10/10
Final Thoughts: Your site has the potential to be a great one – keep at it! There's room for improvement, but your site has definitely progressed since it first began. I suggest going through and cleaning up the minor grammar errors and layout. Overall, though, your site is lovely. I'm sure I'll be returning to your site soon!
Total: 94/100 – a 94%. Great job, Sophia! Go claim your award under the "awards" section!


Who:

Nov. 21st, 2009
First Impression: Your site appears to be very detailed and in – depth, and I'm provoked to look on. The beautiful banner certainly caught my eye. You may want to make your welcome message a bit more descriptive. 15/15
Layout/Organization: The banner is absolutely gorgeous – Cass really has outdone herself! Your layout is very organized and looks pretty nice. It's easy to navigate. Maybe tone down the background just a bit – it's a tad bright. Also, the red on your italics clashes with the color scheme. The "news" box isn't aligned that well, although it could be my browser. It's a bit of a pain to scroll through all your items. Finally, the "Landmarks" section doesn't fit what the category holds that well. I can see how it ties in with the content in that section, but it seems slightly misleading. 17/20
Content: Your guide is extremely helpful and informative. I remember when you first started your guide – it's definitely improved since then. You may want to include a little map of Faerieland to show where the Plushie can be found. I do like how you include "avvie item" and "wearable" next to some of the items. Otherwise, great job! Keep adding more items to your guide! 30/30
Sitely: Your affies certainly matches the quality of your site, although you don't have too many. Good quality affiliates aren't too easy to find these days though. You're listed in quite a lot of directories. You are a frequent updater, and most of your link backs look great. I don't see a counter though – "Poogle" boingdragon to get your own. 19/20
Spelling/Grammar: Nope, no mistakes as far as I can see. Good job! 5/5
Originality: Hush – simple, but doesn't exactly relate to the site. Your guide is very creative – it sprung up not too long after the debut of the Plushie. I haven't really seen many guides on the Discarded Grundo Plushie, so extra points for that. 9/10
Final Thoughts: Your site is very useful, and it's a great resource to all Neopians. I really don't see any major problems – keep up the good work!
Total: 95/100 – a 95%! Great job! Go pick up your award!


Who:

Nov. 17th, 2009

First Impression: The clever pirate theme and attention – grabbing banner certainly caught my eye. ;) You seem to have listed a great number of sites, and I'm tempted to look further into your directory. 15/15
Layout/Organization: The layout is very spiffy and neat, and you organized your site very well. It's very easy to navigate, and the pirate theme is very original. The colors come together nicely. I can easily find what I'm looking for – well done! 20/20
Content: Your directory has a large number of sites listed. You provide a featured site and even include a "newest sailor". It's obvious you try hard to maintain your site - you check broken links often and even ask others if they want their site listed. Effort shines throughout your directory. I really can't think of anything to suggest– it's perfect the way it is. Keep up the good work, and continue listing sites! 30/30
Sitely: All your affies are high – quality, and you seem to have a good number of them. You're listed in many directories, and you update daily. All your link backs look great – you have quite a lot of spiffy buttons to choose from! 20/20
Spelling/Grammar: You are a very literate person – I couldn't find any mistakes. You refrain from overusing smileys, and hardly used any chatspeak. Great job! 5/5
Originality: Soroptimist Directory. I love its inspiration – it fits your site perfectly. Although I've seen many directories, yours is definitely one of the best out there. The number of sites you have listed certainly sets you apart from other directories. 10/10
Final Thoughts: To be honest, I couldn't find anything needing improvement with your directory. You try hard to maintain it, and it shows. I've always loved your site, and I even have it bookmarked. Keep up the great work, Cass! I've added two extra points, just because your directory is so helpful and awesome. ^^
Total: 102/100 – a perfect 100% with 2 extra points! Go claim your award!


Who:

Nov. 8th, 2009
First Impression: The layout appears organized, but the background image doesn't stretch to cover my entire screen. The colors match nicely, and the slogan is cute and clever. ^^ 14/15
Layout/Organization: I'll begin with the good parts. The layout is adorable, yet the background image doesn't cover the entire screen. I may be a bit picky about this, but the main scrollbox seems slightly larger than it should be. The scrollbar is sticking out of the table. There is no navigation to each of the categories. The sidebar should be wider. I can't see the links clearly – lighten the color up a bit. 13/20
Content: You have an acceptable number of sites listed – but there could be more. Here's a tip – try to find sites and ask if they'd like to be listed at your directory. Don't wait for others to come ask you – ask! Also, another suggestion is to have all your links open up in a new window. Add target="_blank" after the link. This way, others won't have to click the "back" button to return to your directory. 27/30
Sitely: First of all, you don't have an updates section. Every site should have an update box. In an update box, visitors will know when something major happens to your site, when you add a new affie, etc. Also, get a counter that shows how many visitors are online_ "Poogle" Whos Amung Us to get one.You don't have a lot of affies, although most of them are high – quality. You're listed in many sites – great job! Most of your link backs look nice. 17/20
Spelling/Grammar: I see several spelling mistakes and a few grammatical errors as well. To begin with, "Welcome to Starlight Directory daybirth!" should be "Welcome to Starlight Directory, daybirth!" "We moved over here because its IMPOSSIBLE for me to update my hissi page, if you would like to see why click here." should be "We moved over to Kaciama's petpage because I can't update my Hissi's page anymore. If you would like to see why, click here." On your rules, you spelled "please" "plz". Never use chatspeak on sites – it can be aggravating to visitors. Some of your rules don't have periods at the end. 2/5
Originality: Starlight Directory – simple yet sweet. It's a little boring though. I've seen many directories, and nothing about yours sets it apart from the rest of them. 7/10
Final Thoughts: Your site could use some improvements. Work on getting more sites listed, and improve your layout a bit. Do a spelling/grammar check. Remember to look through a visitor's perspective!
Total: 80/100, or an 80%. Good job! There's room for improvement, but your site has the potential to become a great one. Go pick up your award! ^-^


Who:

Nov. 7th, 2009
First Impression: The blue used on the tables and doesn't match with the banner. :( Your site appears in – depth though, and looks very professional. 12/15
Layout/Organization: The layout is very organized, yet it could use some work. First of all, the banner doesn't go with the blue on the table color. Try making the blue slightly darker. Your updates are difficult to read because of the background on the blog. Change the text to bold or simply make a div box. Put your affies/listed at into a scrollbox. The credit should come last, after all your affies, listed at, reviews, and awards. 15/20
Content: Your site is one of the best dailies sites I've ever seen. It's detailed, helpful, and very in – depth. I love how you give the answer to the Faerie Crossword and Daily Puzzle. Your site seems to be going great, keep up the good work! Only suggestion - have all your links open up in a new window. Add target="_blank" after your URL. 30/30
Sitely: Most of your link backs look nice. You're listed in quite a number of directories. You have a good number of affies, but not all of them are high quality. You also update very frequently. ^^ I don't see a counter anywhere – I suggest searching BoingDragon with your search engine. 17/20
Spelling/Grammar: I couldn't find any mistakes at all. Great job! 5/5
Originality: There aren't that many good dailies sites anymore. I'm pretty shocked – your content amazed me! The name of your site isn't the best, but then again I see many sites named ______ Screenies, ______ Graphics, etc. 10/10
Final Thoughts: I love your site! I haven't come across many good dailies sites anymore. I'd suggest cleaning up the layout a bit. Keep up the good work! I award you 2 extra points for great content. (:
Total: 91/100, or a 91%. Great job! Pick up your award!


Who:

Nov. 6th, 2009
First Impression: The banner is eye - catching, and the colors match well with it. It's a bit bright though. ;) 14/15
Layout/Organization: Overall, the layout seems very organized and neat. As I mentioned earlier, the banner is very attractive, but some may find it bright. The black on your layout clashes with the blue a bit. Some people prefer to have their updates in the sidebar (like me) but having it in the main column is acceptable. I'd also suggest making a separate section for requests, and not squeezing them into your welcome page. The blogs would be better off under "graphics". 17/20
Content: Your site has quite a lot to offer! Your userlookups are lovely. I love the Blue Xweetok one! You don't have too many petpages, but the ones you have up look really nice. ^^ The blogs are gorgeous, but try using different images. Most of your icons look decent. Your adoptables are pretty cute – work on adding more species. 29/30
Sitely: You only have one link back to offer, and it doesn't look that great. Try requesting a button from Buttoness, TGB, or In This Moment. You don't have too many affies, and some of them are low – quality. Try getting listed at more sites - Soroptimist Directory is a great directory. You don't update much – I understand real life is far more important than Neopets, but you should update each time you complete a request, add another affie, etc. 13/20
Spelling/Grammar: You are fairly literate, and I couldn't find many mistakes. The only thing that bugged me was this sentence – "Because sadly "STUDY FOR EXAMS" comes before Neopets." It should be "Sadly, studying for exams comes before Neopets." But that's just me being picky, so I won't take points off for that. You overuse smileys a bit. Smileys are fine in conversations, but shouldn't be used too often in sites and such. 4/5
Originality: Spark… simple, yet attention – grabbing. I also like how you incorporated "Sienetta's Premades" into the site name. Your userlookups are very original – I hardly ever see such high – quality premades these days. 10/10
Final Thoughts: Overall, your site is very nice. You may want to go through an affie sweep, get a few more link backs, and try to be a bit more active.
Total: 88/100. An 88%! Great job… go pick up your spiffy award! ^^


Who:

Nov. 5th, 2009
First Impression: Your layout appears to be organized, although it's a tad bit plain. Nothing strange pops out at me. 14/15
Layout/Organization: As I mentioned earlier, the layout is very organized. I also love the background. ^^ However, the layout in general is rather plain. Maybe incorporate your site's name into the background, since there isn't room for a banner? You also might want to provide a preview for your userlookups, so users won't have to try out all the codes trying to find what they want. 17/20
Content: I tried out the two lookups you currently have up. ^^ They both look great, although I think the brown used when you hover over the navigation on the Springtime one should be a little paler. Also, the navigation isn't aligned correctly. You don't have too many lookups, but that's fine as your site is still pretty new. Overall, though, they look pretty nice. Keep adding more! (: 27/30
Sitely: You have a good number of link backs, and all of them look very nice. You don't have too many affies, but most of them are high – quality sites. Also, try getting listed at other sites – The Faerie Compass is a great directory. Try getting a counter - "poogle" BoingDragon. 18/20
Spelling/Grammar: You are a very literate person, and I couldn't find any errors. Great job! 5/5
Originality: The Fantasy of Lapis Lazulli. It's a bit long and hard to remember. I've seen other premade sites, and yours isn't too different from the others. However, I don't really see any sites that take userlookup requests anymore, so extra points for that. ^^ 7/10
Final Thoughts: Your layouts are fantastic, and I think your site will be a hit! Keep adding more userlookups, and work on improving them!
Total: 89/100 – an 89%. Great work! Go pick up your award – you deserve it! ^^


Who:

Nov. 3rd, 2009
First Impression: Your layout appears to be organized. The banner at the top matches well with the layout, but it's a little plain. The background is eye – catching but not distracting. I see a good number of adoptables. 15/15
Layout/Organization: Ah, two columned layouts! It makes everything look so much neater. And look – there's a navigation! However, the sidebar is a bit large. Stretch the main table a little. I like the color scheme, but you should include a little more green in it. I did notice that your request form is rather hard to find. The sidebar is also a bit disorganized. The updates should be after the navigation. Link backs should be placed under where the updates are supposed to go. THEN come to affies/listed and "My Sites". Because of your high number of affies, you should make a separate div box for listed ats. Updates should be in a scrollbox. Finally, your rules should be in a separate section. 14/20
Content: Your adoptables are absolutely adorable! I can tell you worked hard on them. You may want to make them transparent so that a white space doesn't show up behind the adoptable when you place them on a colored background. 29/30
Sitely: Some of your affies are not very high quality. I recommend limiting your affies to high quality sites in the future. A few of your link backs only say "Adoptables". Anyone using that link back would not know the name of the site. In addition, some of your link backs don't look that great.You should also add a counter. "Poogle" boingdragon to get your own. 16/20
Spelling/Grammar: There are a few minor mistakes. For example, under the rules you wrote As all of you know, no copying my adoptables.. Instead of that, you should put Please do not copy my adoptables or claim them as your own. A few of your updates are not capitalized. 3/5
Originality: The name isn't all that original. I've seen many sites with the name _______ Screenies, _______ Graphics, and such. Your adoptables are amazing and much more high quality than many I've seen, but you should add something to jazz it up a bit and make them stand out. 7/10
Final Thoughts: Your adoptables are cute, but the sidebar needs to be cleaned up a bit. Go through your site and fix any spelling/grammar errors. I'd also go through an affie sweep and clear the sites that aren't as high quality as yours.
Total: 84/100. That's an 84%. Good job! There's room for improvement, but you still earned a great score. Go pick up your award under the "awards" section.


sotw

who will win?

Hey, Temper's not only a review site. We have a little SOTW as well! x3
What is a SOTW, you may ask? SOTW stands for Site of the Week. SOTMs are contests of some sort that do not violate TNT's rules. If you win the SOTW, you receive a little spiffy banner made by Cass. Which, of course, you may proudly display on your site. Anyways, site owners can enter their sites into the SOTW. When 10 sites are entered, voting begins. Voting lasts for a week. After this time period, I will choose the site with the most votes. The winner will receive a lovely award and bragging rights. c:

All entrants are accepted, but your site must help Neopians somehow. Graphic sites, review sites, directories, guides, untaken names, and such qualify, while artwork (unless you take requests) and photography do not. Still unsure? Neomail me.

To enter/vote, fill out the form below!

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Entries
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awards

a little gift


If you are eligible for one of these, take it! ^-^





If you scored a 90 - 100 on your review, take the spiffy award above ^^





If you scored a 80 - 89 on your review, take the spiffy award above ^^





If you scored a 70 - 79 on your review, take the spiffy award above ^^



If you were the SOTW, take the award above!

extras

quick jump

updates


November 22nd: Removed one person from the waiting list because their site closed. +0 reviews finished. Sorry - no time! Why? I just started a SOTW. Check it out!

Oh, by the way - I'm planning a little holiday special. Keep checking back. ;D
November 21st (later in the day): Finished one review. Woah, two more requests! I've closed reviews for now - they will be open after I finish three reviews. Also, I'm planning a SOTW - keep your eyes out for that! I tested my layout in Chrome, and it turns out it doesn't work. So I've added a little button at the top (courtesy of Amber's Pixels) that says "Best Viewed in Firefox".
November 21st: Finished one review and received two spiffy link back buttons. ^^
November 20th: Three new requests. c: Now listed at New Acacia!
November 19th: Sorry I didn't update - I was busy advertising Temper. c: No new reviews have come in yet.
November 17th: Reviewed Soroptimist Directory!
November 16th: I am so sorry for the lack of updates - no reviews have come in, so I didn't see a reason to update. I received a spiffy link back from Sparks of Magic! Reviews are still open! I don't bite... much. ;)
November 13th: Ooh, Friday the 13th. -cackles- Listed at Angel's Palace! -hopes more reviews will come in-
November 12th: I'm sick again. D: No requests so far, unfortunately. -runs to advertise- Now listed at Al - Dalil!
November 11th: No school for me today... so I've been out shopping all day. ^-^ Now listed at Paper Thin!
November 10th: My legs are insanely sore. D: Added a new affie - Extravagance!
November 9th: Visitors - remember that reviews are OPEN if you are seeking honest, constructive criticism for your site. ^^ Now listed at Turn Right.
November 8th (later in the day): Yes, I updated TWICE in one day. xD Finished the review I got this morning. One new affie - Get School'd!
November 8th: Opened up reviews - got one request. ^^
November 7th: Finished one review! Too lazy to open up reviews. :K
November 6th: Finished a review. Added one affie - Diamonds!
November 5th: I'm feeling a bit tired today. -eats cookie- Finished one review.
November 4th: Finished one review, but didn't put it up. D: Also got two spiffy link backs from In This Moment and Paprika!
November 3rd: Got some awards up for anyone who deserves it. Also finished one review.
November 2nd: Hiya! This is Tiffany, reporting from the set of her newest site, Temper. It's a review site aiming to give constructive criticism. We're under construction at the moment, but reviews are open!

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Hiya! I'm Tiffany, or Tiff, if you prefer. I'm in high school and have been playing Neopets for roughly four years. I enjoy reading and writing in my spare time, and love to surf and dance. I play the flute and piano and know how to work the violin. =3
Some things you may/may not want to know about me: I am a lazy, hyper, picky person, I adore Vitamin Water and everything chocolate, and I love to shop. x3
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Layout & Coding by srawasfrozen @ KillTheLights CSS, Banner by Caught In the Headlights. Button #1 by Sparks of Magic, Button #2 and SOTW award by Joggly, Button #3 by Circus, Button #4 by In This Moment, Button #5 by Paprika, Button #6 by Sugar Coated, and Button #7 by Buttonlicious. Star pixels from SmileyHelper. Neomail and open/closed signs from TGB. Thanks to all who have helped this site.

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