------------Hello?....Hm...echo! ok this is for Revives hello and welcome! I hope you stay as long as you wish!------------
WARNING! [CURRENTLY BEING WORKD ON] By what I know this works best in I think IE, I am told FF too, and full screen: F11. I have added music, to stop it hit the Esc button once eceryting is loaded =3. And I am not fully finished with this application. Nor the background. ^-^
Ooo goes dere!?
Written by Revives
In my ears, I hear the calls,
Of a kingdom's wishes large, and small.
In their tower I'm stationary,
Yet I'm content and quite merry.
Every wish I'm bound to grant
Is the start of my rant, to grant, to chant.
I happily do what I am told,
For each wish makes me larger and bold.
For there ignorance is my benefit
For all greed is by my deed,
The more wishes given, the more I get to feed.
They no my price for what I do,
Yet my words go by so they continue.
A curse I am that's relevant,
But to these people I am a benefit.
A price to pay without a cent,
But a punishment comes to all wishes sent.
Now a kingdom rests in the skies,
High above the normal's eyes
Yet I still remain their prize.
The tower I stay is getting small
As now I am becoming large and tall.
If I stay put its bound to fall
But then I must face the eyes of all who call.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Now the kingdoms truly seen
What has been answering their wishing.
Phew! This was pretty moody for me so I'm happy to let it all pass.
Okay okay…enough with that.
Greetings and Welcome! I am Revives, pleasure to meet you! So guest ,
How have you been recently?…
guest :… So how'd you know my name?
Revives: Huh? I don't understand?…
guest : I haven't mentioned my name in this whole story
Revives:…um…your-your nametag yea! I read your name tag. He eheh.
guest : I'm not wearing a name tag.
Revives: ….*cough*…um anywho! Welcome dear friend! :D
Story (Past)
Chapter 1
Castle Majestic
*~*~ Revives was a curse that had been sent upon the king by an elderly gypsy lupe. The gypsy had done what the king had asked and made the castle safe from harm, but he had disliked the result and banished her from the kingdom. None would be spared from her vengence, she made sure of that. For It was not her fault that the castle was cast to the skies, It was what they wished to be away from harm. But the king was not pleased in the results and wished not to even have her in the kingdom's dungeons! So cast away she was, never to be let in again. Because of this, the gypsy decided to cast a final spell before being band from the kingdom.
~*~* Outside the castle near the high watchtower she sat down to think. Under her velvet cloak she pulled out a crystal ball. Bright and light blue she pulled close and whispered a few words to the crystal sphere. It was glowing a radiant deem purple and then in a sudden went dormant. As she continued to chant, a set of 3 guards marched out of the kingdom to be sure that the gypsy didn't return. She quickly threw the orb into the tower windows, smashing the glass to pieces. "What was that"? A guard yells as they turn to run towards the source of the smash. The elderly gypsy quickly stood and ran to a nearby castle wall. "She's escaping!" They yelled but as they got to the outside wall she was gone. The guards searched up and down the border kingdom walls. "Nothing no sign of her." Says one "she would never have made the jump" answers another "the jump down is too high. Not to mention the fact that we are in air." They surveyed the area but could not find the gypsy. Though, the last words she said before jumping to the nearby mountain was "Dear king, your Wishes shall be granted ".
Wh00t! Finally part of Chapter 1 is cleared! more will come later! :3
A petpet?
Ok guest, I wanted to get little someone that is quite like Revives, (Sweet, unique, adventurous etcetera.) but, I couldn't pick a petpet like a Cyodrake, a Darigan Kimbi or a Dragolyle because I just recently started, and so I couldn't get afford one. But because I wanted something with a big reputation (and mouth) like her, I decided a(n) X_____ would be perfect! I picked a(n) X_____ because they seem to be quite the lively petpet. Able to keep Revives entertained and welcomed. And different from all other petpets like them. Like Revives! Cool huh?
What's that? I did not tell you the name? No, I did not. But I will give you a hint, ya in for it? Ok!
He has a big beak for a pet his size, not to sharp but is pro to the neopian language. Before all he new was arr!
Well, in shorter terms, He's small but has a big brain. Without him Revives would be lost if it was not for his knowledge of the planet.
Hmm. well, he is not much of a walker since he has such small feet. But that is why Revives...makes him walk! Ha ha! Stretch out them legs! She would say. :P
Woosk! He uses his wings for mostly flight and polishing his spectacles. But Revives thinks that his wings would make a good night snack :K...she is kidding though...right?
Ok ok! I lied about the petpets name. :P And I really do not think that would have helped much in telling you what petpet I had picked out for her. So instead, guest, I would like you to meet what…well who would like to be Revives petpet!
Ohsentreken!
Ello guest. It's a pleasure to make your aquaintance.
About him:
He remembers very little about his past to keep in knowledge of what is now. All he can remember is being trapped on a pirate ship, fighting an underwater Maraquan kingdom. He remembers being captured form his original Master and taken aboard beyond his will. Not he was trapped probably to be food to the savages. So he escaped and decided not to turn back, no matter the consequences. He began learning to read and write when on day he came across a talking parrot....
Personality:
Ohsentreken, or Otis as he tends to be called, is quiet and prefers to do all the talking. (Which can get him and at times Vivii in trouble). He can be stingy and sometimes demanding on if he wants to go one way,while Vivii wants to go another. That can often frustrate him. So in a way, he wants to call all of the shots alot. But because brains don't beat bronze in Vivii's book, he normally approves to much of what she says. While also adding in his two neopoints.
DESIGN
Arms: Her arms are slightly longer than a regular Krawks because she's now adapted to lifting and moving heavy things. She has small patches of fur hanging off her elbows for randome reasons. She has some type of webbing between her arm conecting to her sides of her body, She uses them to help her glid across the sky or float down easily.
Hands: Her hands, or more to it claws are sharp and long. She has nor real fingers, inreplace of them are claws. She has 3 claws and 1 thumb claw.
Eyes, scales and her tail
Eyes:
Hmmm.. yes, I am aware that Vivii's cornia has
no color, but she's well used to it. I guess you can say she adapted to the darkness in the hightower, and bacause she was created, she do not have some things others do. Her eyes are quite large and a little scencitive.
Scales: Vivii has scales along har body liek other Krawks, but on her chest and tummy there are special scales. On her chest her scale tips point up (like this ^), those are some of her special scales. She has over 117 magical scales all over her body. But the 12 on her chest and 6 along her tail are special. 81 are good purposes, and 36 are negative uses. These are the few reasons Vivii grants wishes.
Tail:Vivii has a kina normal tail yes? Long with a Darigan putple fur going down it, from start of tail to tip. At the close tip area of her tail she has a bald spot. No fur, not even scales her skin is open to see, never to heal over. Above that is agold brace keeping thehair left still intact down. It stays completely attached to vivii's tail.
Personalitized!:
Whoot! ^^
Likes ?
Buzz Honey!
Cooking
Dancing
Comic books
Getting even
Loud music
Happy Endings
Cleches
Being herself (unique)
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Dislikes x.x
Books
Castles
Condrums
scilence
Bullies
Buckets
catches (twists in a story kind of thing)
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Worries over o.0
Dips
trees comin outta nowplace
unexpected hill drops
spazzers
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*~All descriptions of Family is by Revives's (Vivii's) Opinion, Blur's will be in here soon and maybe a backround to how they all met. (Revives and friends I mean).
(Remind Blur (me) to update friend/family pictures).~*
Blur's Family:
Chukuba Illusionist
Chukuba is Blur's first pet, and by the way he acts towards us, he wishes he were the only one. Chukuba's overprotective with Blur...That's what you get when you create a guardian Dragara. He tends to act real rough and just as well tough around other pets when Blur is looking for another member to the family. He's bound himself to silence ever since Wishes moved in. Now he only uses signs when having a conversation with anyone. But he does speak out every now-and-then.
MagicalWishes Illusionist(Wishes)
Introducing himself in the sweetest way I no is this Meerca. MagicalWishes or Wishes as he prefers to be called, is fairly kind to all he meets. He tries his best to get at least a little respect from Chukuba as he has given to him. He's very spiritual and is quite a charitable Meerca. He has his own needs, but prefers to help others before helping himself. I noticed that Chukuba do watch over Wishes, but he prefer to keep it in secrecy.
Optical Illusionist
...?! Well now. So this is the owner of mean ol' Chukuba and good Wishes. This little Faerie Techo is ladies and gentlemen, the owner of the Illusionists. Her full name is "Optical Visionary M. Illusionist". (No idea what the M stands for but I really think I rather not ask). My...gosh. The poor dear has such a long name she prefers to be called Blur. She's by far the smallest in the family but has control over them. She can be a little random (like her Neohome) but is lots of fun. They play music really loud in there home and I really enjoy that.
Friends I have met:
MmmM! Tootie Fruity! :K Just kidding Kyra is one of my closest friends and would never even dare take a bite out of her...would I? She has some crazy family members but is all family. Still getting used to them though.
Slip slat look at that! Heh :3. Elliree is an interesting Zaffy. She's known for hunting down open customs and meeting lots of neopians. Now. Wherever I go I see her, my gosh she travels! She's a bit tewaky at times constantly switching her moods and such. The lab ray has zapped her too many times if you know what I mean. But none the less is a great pal she enjoys Crumpets like nobodies business and the occasional rice ball. :P
Heh, talk about crazy. Rambie is two neopians in one. (Multi-personality?). He despises Thieve and n00bs to the core and will do whatever in his hard horns to stomp them to the ground! And you know what? I agree with him! Heck, I'll eat a n00b or two to get it through their think skulls that stealing is wrong! But other than that, he's awesome to be with!
Well, he thinks he all that! But doesn't rub it in (cause he knows I'll slug em!) Griffondor is a swordsman and a friendly rival of mine. I would gladly battle the chap, but he possesses some kind of magical armor that wields an unnatural power that I dare not try and face till the time is right. I fear that the more he uses the weapons, the more he is taken over. I see a creepy ol coger in his dead glare when he's wielding his weapons. So I do what's smart and avoid it all, I just see him. Outside the battledome.
K00sh Isn't what he sounds like. When I first herd his name I thought Plushie? But NO! Wasn't what I expected XD. K00sh is a very laid-back krawk (kinda like Me). He's quite gentle with talking but for some reason he hasn't made alot of friends. Only because he can be a bit quiet. He always by his Tyrannian Angelpuss, Pika. He was hand painted and morphed by his owner (Cool!). But He lost his best friend and only girl he loved to a iced incident. I feel awful when I hear about that kind of thing. So I pop in occasionaly to rise his spirits and liven him up everynow and then.
As you can see, I do not have many friends..(kinda). So if you would like we can be friends! Just talk to Opticalxillusionist she would love to meet you. But of corse we gotta talk it over too ^-^.
Story is constantly being added on so keep watching! For more of Revives… Wait, I have not even started putting the story in! ;-; boo hoo.
The Journal
Revives will be represented as she is now, not what I have in store for her later (design, petpet, maybe not personality, yadda yadda) so even though in my story She has a different background. That does not apply for this journal. Because like I said Revives do not belong to me so I have to write it as if she was just a visitor. (This is fun ^-^)
The orange writing is the narrator (petpet) regular constant writing is Revives (Vivii), and notes usually are extra thngs (sticky notes) that she forgot to add. :P
Entry 1
The Illusionists
Well, being up for adoption can be quite tiresome...Michi's been busy all day reading and writing to people about their applications. While the rest just drool over
Esabella,
R'nei,
Xaidao
and I e.e.
You know the drill how things go when it comes to adoptions. Many upon many of Neopians do what they can to try and convince my owner Michi that we would be cared for and loved. Recently tho Michi had gotten an invite, on asking if it twas okay if I was a guest as part of a specific user's application. Every now and then she smiled and laghed to herself (Obiously amused by what was written.) and wrote "Ok" on the back of the neomail before sending.
Day 1 (7:40:36am NST)
The next day we were given the address to what is an applicants Neohome.
Time: (0:00:00am/pm NST)
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(end of day #.)
Note (0:00:00am/pm NST)
Note (0:00:00## NST)
Adoptables.
Well will ya look at that...I guess I'm doing adoptables after all. But I may just be doing customs only, but if enough people ask I will be doing regulars too =3.
Requests=Closed
Trades= at the second not ready.
Customs
Adopted
Ah cool! Now thses are spiffy!...Watch the mini me's take over the page!!
Art by Blur
(and occasionaly Revives)
Drag pictures to address bar to get full version.
Most pictures of Revives by me may be in pencil, or not finished if in color. Reason is because in my paragraph on time, I have little chance to do stuff sept on weekends.(And then I am slow) Sorry ;-;.
Fan art
Poem
By: Inca
~*~Revives~*~
Beat of the rhythm,
Flow of the tune,
Don't let the song,
Be over soon,
Let it linger,
As long as I please,
The music puts,
My heart at ease,
It's who I am,
No need to hide,
For with me,
There's no 'other side',
I am who I am,
Just as the music plays true,
If I say I will,
I'll always come back to you.
Thank you!
and a fan ^-^
Hey they wanted to be screnied XD
**Conclusion**
Vivii: Wow! will ya look it dat! Tis morning alrady! "Revives streatches and sits down in the fog hope this was good enough for ya Michi...guest , and who else may have been lurking".
I dedicate this for Vivii!
Here is where I have dedicated certain things to Vivii. But as well asthings I have in store for her if I am to get her. Keep in mind tho that 3 of my dedication have been listed at the vary top before the appliction but I will post them here too.
the neohome bit is still at work and because Vivii isn't mine she is staying in our guest room. (That is how Journal is setting it all up).
- {shop} Lanturn down the path
- {Gallery} [INACTIVE] Krawk Pockets
- {Neohome}Revives's room [INACTIVE] (The guest room at moment)
- {Music petpage} Revives Ravin' Dance Music
- {Pet lookup} petlookup..then down XP
Reviews
{May 31 2007, 06:32 AM }
My second board, and most recent. ^-^
{May 17 2007, 07:37 PM}
My first Board on rating this :3
More of Monty's tho (but I was there so yes) ^w^.
~*Holla at Blur now*~
(Not really silly.) But if you need to talk to meh about anyting just you can contact me ere:
- Neopets-(Neomail) This account
- Neopets-(Neomail)Visionsxmagician =(Kiro)
- D.A.-(Diviantart) Tis Neonstardust (mostly Star's tho x.x)*
- Neopound-(PM) Opticalxillusionist ^-^
(*) Further access past Neopets & Neopound to other ways such as yahoo, hotmail, AIM, ICQ (not sure what that is ^-^'), MSN, or any other type of commnication is forbidden to Blur by Mothers rules and risk of a tattle tale Kiro. All mail may only be sent to these accounts...cause they are the only accounts :P. (end of infomercial) ^u^
F.A.Q.
Wow! I was actually asked some questions. 0.o I guess I should put them here so you all may no as well ='u'=.
Also all names will not be shown for who asked the question because they said not to host them but if you do not mind that then the name will show.
Q.Hello. What inspired you to create the design and personallity you currently have for Revives? ~ Myth
A. Well, I think I based some of her Personality and design off of my step brother Kiro... ^-^ He likes to wear headphones, hates to read much and has his hail everywhere :P And I like to draw my pets differently. To give them a cool look but kepp they silly personality and moods. I like to read stories about Castles and Dragons =^w^=. So I guess based on the both of us! :D.
Links!
Vivii: I am going to miss you guest. BUt if you ever have the feeling to come back just take this here:
So the you can visit again!
BYEEEE!
Me Scarf
Here is me Scarf, it twas woven together with stories in each and every stitch. Please guest, I hope you enjoyed your stay here and I hope you enjoy everymoment it has in store for you.
Visit me Rockin music page if ya want to have some of the song I have gathers and given while a guest at the Illusionists. (link below)
Credits
...Neopounders-correcting every bit of bad bad spelling and giving me opinions and critiquing this.
Swift- For being so nice and recomending me.
Paris- For helping me reorganize my app. and story. (that I have not added yet x.x)
Monty- For being a great pal and friendly rival! Making me want to do more and help along side of that. ^-^
Anyone I forgt?
That was nice ^-^
P.S. Do not steal my idea for the journal visit. By what I know I am the only one who came up with this and if you are to do this as well please ask and give credit Thank you.
