This is EXTREMELY important! Does your layout make me want to stay and look around? Does it seem welcoming to me or a little offending? Does it attract me or does it give me a feeling of looking through your affies to explore something else? Does it take a long time to load? Is your welcome message inviting or rude? Does your color scheme fit with the picture and connect with other colors.

Do you have a lot of stuff to look at? Are your layouts organized and neat? Do your layouts/ icons attract me/ others? Are they made by you? o_o

*looks up* This is also very important for your site. Is it neat and pretty? Are all your images different sizes and put together like a messy ice cream bowl? Is everything easy to find? (Credits/ Specific Layouts/ Affilates/ Staff/ Awards) Is your site different from others? Does it offer amazing things for the consumer to use?

This one should be easy. :3 I know you know how to use grammar. Is there chatspeak? Are you from a different country and do not know how to spell very well? (Neomail me if you are and I can work something out with you.)

Do you update every day? Do you update every month/ year? Do you update every bit of information you changed? Do you only update on your icons or layouts? Are your updates exciting to read? (I suggest you add a little bit of color in your updates if you can't make your updates exciting.)

Is your content by you? Are your layouts by you? Are your icons by you? If you have a few things that are not by you, did you give them credit? (IMPORTANT:// If you did happen to steal and not give credit, I will not review your site. If you did give them credit, I will only take off a few points.)

What makes your site unique? Do you have a counter and music? Is your music annoying and offensive? o_0 Is there any specific awards you give out? :/

What do I like/ dislike about your site. What could make your site a-m-a-z-i-n-g in my opinion?

Lovely banner at the top. :3 It is very attractive and a nice quality. The only thing I did not really think was nice was the text "Hersheys Island". It is pixelish, and I was wondering why it was not on the banner itself? I usually expect the sites name to be at the very top banner on the banner. Where are your affilates? You really should get some affilates. It is a big part in advertising your adorable site. Your welcome message is short and sweet. It is a little to short too. I suggest you tell make the message a little more descriptive or add the aqua/ blue color to make it look more cute and exciting. *shiny eyes* The picture and the color scheme all connect. Nice job. :) I also feel that a little more could have been done to the main banner. :/

Your adoptables are adorable! Maybe you should add some more customs though. Maybe you should make one darigan. :D You have plenty of stuff to read. ;D

Your site is very neat and pretty. Maybe if you made the navigation aqua it would stand out more to viewers. =D The rules was a little hard to find too. Maybe if it was bigger?

Well, you spelled everything correctly! However, you spelt pretty "pwetty" on purpose. Not a problem though, it might bug some viewers though.

You associate with your viewer in your updates to make them exciting. I think you should bold the dates though, or put an extra space between your updates to focus them apart from all the words.

All of the content you have is by you. This is the stuff I love to see. ;D

A very unique site. ^^ You offer a lot of things. I loved reading about what Hershey likes and dislikes. I do not see many pages that offer great adoptables like yours. Good job! You have a counter too. :D (Pretty shell background image.) Who also offers a quilt?

I love your link back buttons, but one of them does not have your name on it! If you would like, here is a code to hover over the link and show your sites name:

<a href="http://www.neopets.com/~hersheykisses57"><img src="http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb129/icycheese/hersheykisses57adoptablepatch.gif" alt="Hershy's Island" border="0"></a>

How it will look: (Just hover over your link back button.)




Is that cool? ;D The font at the top is something you should definitely fix too.

Great job! You may pick up the award you have earned. If you want to try even better, come back for a re-review. ;3

Your layout does not really invite me in. I really do not like the colors, there is no awesome image to view, and it is not by you. If I saw your directory, I would immediately click on something else. Look at some other directories and see what makes them so special the layout is very important too. Your layout is very fast when it loads. *claps* Your welcome message is nice and inviting, but fix up the *'s. It looks really messy with your large font. Your color scheme reminds me of pudding or coffee which is a nice touch, but as stated above, I think you should make your own layout.

You have a lot of sites to look at. That is definitely a plus, but you focus less on a few other sections. Do not be afraid to ask people if they want to be listed. You have 144 sites listed.

In my opinion, your layout is pretty cluttered. Some of your images (in the awards I give out section) are different sizes, I would fix that. You have navigation which is excellent. I don't really see anything that is different from other directories. -_- It was a little hard to find your credits. On your side column, I would put the credits at the very bottom. I would do this because most people expect credits to be there.

Excellent speller however, I saw a few grammar errors. In your parenthesis, you sometimes forgot to add a period. Also, on some of your links in your little sections, you did not capitalize the full name of the site as you did to others. Sometimes at the end of a sentence instead of ending it with an ending mark, you would end it with a smiley face. Example: "Please notify me if your site closes,or changes its name,It makes life it alot easier:)" You ended it with a smiley face, you did not put a space behid the commas, and alot should be two separate words "a lot". You really need these things to be fixed. You made many mistakes in your rules section and welcome message. If you want to make sure you are not spelling or doing anything wrong, go to Microsoft Word and use spell check. In your updates section, you use numbers for words. Take the time to spell those numbers out, it is considered chatspeak, and literacy is very important for sites.

Your box is a little small though and you did not bold your "dates" a few days back. Take the time to do that or delete them. You sometimes updated once a month. Every two days is necessary to update. You update on everything, so that is a plus. When I was reading one of your updates, it seemed boring and does not really speak out to me that well. (I suggest you add a little bit of color in your updates if you can't make your updates exciting.) Also, using numbers for words as stated in spelling and grammar makes your updates look sloppy.

You used credit for where you got your pet page, but as stated in organization and neatness, your credits were a little hard to find.

Your site is not much different from most directories. You have two counters which is very good. You do give out awards, but they look a little sloppy. They are pixels. Your words are not very clear and clean either. You have a cool stuff section, but none of it is by you. Most of the content on your directory is not by you.

I did not find anything that I enjoyed. That's not a bad thing either. Dx I am not trying to be harsh, but all sites have at least one thing they need to fix. Your site needs a lot of improvement. Make it spiffy and cute, something worth while to view. Look at other directories and see what makes them so spiffy and cute. Inspiration is a major key to art. One thing you should consider changing is your layout.

Beautiful banner at the the top. It is a little small though. I would definetily look around through your directory. Your welcome message introduces me like a real Circus too! What a great way to associate with your viewers. The background is still a little simple, it might be me... but the yellow is popping out to me now. I wont take off points though.

Wow, since the last time... you added so much sites! This is one of the most biggest things to a directory. You have two link back buttons to choose from which is nice to have too.

Very very NEAT! Good job! I see alphebetical order and I see categories to choose from. Even the categories are alphebetical order! You have a navigation too. It was still a little hard finding the navigation, but I eventually found it. Adding some red might help.

Everything is spelled correctly! You did a great job fixing those fragments from last time. You missed a few commas... but you did great!

You update a lot. ^-^ I noticed at January 13th-28th I think you got a little lazy there. Remember to make your updates exciting and associate with your viewer. ;D

You credited everyone. The beautiful banner is by you though. ;D The buttons are not, but they are beautiful. You gave everyone credit so I did not take off all the points.

Your site is really unique! Who sees a directory that relates to a Circus? You even have Circus related music! You have a very very unique directory.

Very nice directory. It is friendly and associates with the viewer. I will definitely look back here. I really think you should fix that banner though. xD

Your layout makes me want to give a peek at what you have, but again it is not by you. 8D Its by me. Its no problem to use someone elses layout though, its just I want to see some creativity that you have done. That is what makes a site unique and everlasting. Your welcome message is inviting and you give out some history of your graphics site which is a nice thing to read. It is not to long nor short. I always come down to your graphics to see new things. (I do that to everyones graphics basically.) I love to see what you have written in your updates. The layout loads very fast and your color scheme matches.

You have a lot of stuff to look at. This can sometimes be a bad thing though. I understand the feeling of adding new things to your site and rushing through your graphics. Take the time to edit and create amazing things. Your lookups have only words written on them and a picture with someone else's css. Take the time to make your graphics amazing. Looking into tutorals can really improve skills. I am sure your lookups will look amazing with a little work. ;D Your icons are very cute. You focus most on comedy. I have noticed that the most popular type of icon is the ones that have a message or give you a little laugh. 8D

^^ Wow! I see a lot of improvement. It looks neater than before, but not completely neat. You have so many link back buttons, and they are so many different sizes. The two boxes for different sizes is also a no-no. I suggest you make link back buttons that are 88 x 31. You can request buttons from other sites too. You only have one button that is 88 x 31 too. The two boxes for old css and new css in your lookups confuses me too. Some of your graphics are not as high of a quality. Your creative blinkies are cool. A lot of your previews, icons, and images are different sizes and make it look clammered. I see you used scrollbars to avoid your graphics looking messy. Backgrounds are a nice touch. It was a little hard to find the affilates too. D: That is a bad thing too. I think you should make an little button that links to your affies to make it look more attractive instead of that white small link. -nods-

Wow! Everything is spelled correctly… however, there are a few grammar errors. I see in your welcome message you have a few errors. "and have a petpage graphic site" You should have put a period at the end of the sentence, and 'graphic' should have been graphics. There are quite a few errors in your updates too.

Nice, you update a lot. Maybe you should bold the dates to make it seem easier to read.

Well, you take a lot of your icons from photobucket, you did not make your layout, and you did not make the css to your lookups. I do see credit though. You credited everyone. Very good! I will have to take off a few points though.

Do I see a fan club with two members? Good job! Keep it up and I bet you will have even more. I also see an award you have. Your counter has gone up since the last time I reviewed you too. It went up by hundreds. Your music is ok. Paramore right? You have an 'other special things' section which is cool. :3 Nice job!!

I think you should work harder on your content. Work your best on every image. If you want to do something to an image, do it!! 8D Do not worry on how much content you have. I would worry if they are nice quality or not. Organization is also something that needs to be worked on. I see your score has gone up from last time, but there is always still work for improvement. Keep going! :D

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Your Total


81.1/100

You did much better than before! However, there is still room for improvment. ;D Not bad though. You may pick up the 80-89/100 award. Keep making your graphics better!

All I can say is your layout is amazing. I love the look of the girl and how mysterious she is. Most black and white layouts do not attract most viewers. I am completely sure that your layout will attract many people into looking through your site. Your welcome message is very sweet and short which makes me even more curious in what you have to offer.

Wow! This is amazing! You have so many things to look at. o_o Your layouts definitely attract me and a lot of my friends. ^-^ You worked very hard on every single lookup you have. ;D You are so amazing. I think I might go use your Konata Chan lookup sometime on my side account. :*

Wow! Everything looks like the tidiest banana split I have ever laid my eyes on. I just can not believe it! See your navigation? I know it is big and everything, but when I first saw Sakuranbo, I did not see your navigation. Maybe if you use red like in some parts of your layout it will attract me. Everything else is very easy to find though. You offer amazing things for everyone to use!

Wow! No grammar or spelling mistakes. Though at the beginning of your intro you see those "&&'s" In my opinion you should try to get rid of those, they distract me from the message in my opinion. xD They are cute though, so its up to you to get rid of them or not. :) Do I see no chat speak! That is very good because I completely hate chats speak! Everyone should take the time to spell things out correctly. :P

Updating is really important in my opinion. You update a lot compared to other sites though. ^-^ I see you slowed down a little in some areas, but you managed to keep updating. I understand that you have a life and other things to take care of so this does not bother me so much.

Everything is by you. *claps*

I see you have a certain award you hand out. :P Very nice. ^-^ You also have many affies to browse through. The About Us section is a plus too! I see a poll too! You have no music, but that is no problem. ;D You also tell a little about your layout. I also see a counter! ~_^

Your sites name really stands out from others. ;D (Seriously, who would think of Sakuranbo as a name?) See your previews on your images? They are a little blurry, but I can manage. ;D I love your icons a lot too! You work very hard on everything. Oh your kawaii lookup is very cute too. :P

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Your Total


99.1/100

Wow! Your site is amazing. ;D This score is a really hard score to get, and you deserve an award for doing so awesome. Pick up the 99-100/100 award. Only amazing sites like yours can get this. :* *huggles*

When I first view your layout, I think wow! It is very inviting to me. I really love your layout css although, the second black border is a little bothering to me. Your scrollbar colors should be fixed too. I think you should keep the darker color as the border and the lighter color as the color of your scroll bar. I also think your main picture could use a little work too. It seems you only put your graphics name on the picture. Don't be afraid to edit your pictures! (I am sure you could do a great job!) Your layout sure does attract me to stay just to see what you offer. Your welcome message is very inviting too. Black and pink is a nice color scheme. The background is a little to pink for me though and busy. Maybe a lighter shade of pink would be lovely.

You have a lot of things to look at, but I think even more would make it better! I like how your lookups are all the same size and you give a little information above each one. Your icons and other graphics are also nice and neat, I think you should add more icons though. Your layouts do attract me, but some of them are a little blurry… you may want to fix that. ^^

Your layout and images make a very neat ice cream bowl. ^-^ I really think your background is very busy though. Every thing is really easy to find, but I think instead of putting neomail me and my lookup in your navigation, make a staff section. :* You offer some nice layouts for your fans to use too. Your link back buttons could use some work too. I am glad you have two sizes to choose from though. ;D Your graphics are very creative, but you could do a little more to make them original.

In the 'about my site' section, I found a few spelling errors. X3 it's no problem, it is very easy to fix too. ;D Here is one error I found- 'and Neo Graphics It has Icons' the "it" is not necessary for that sentence and it is capitalized. Also, sometimes you did not capitalize a letter after your ending mark. Your 'blog' also has a amount of errors. "1/22/09Got some request awesome." What does this mean? :P It would be great to finish up that sentence instead of leaving it as a fragment. If you are not so sure if you are not sure if you are spelling something right, type it up in Microsoft Word and use spell check. *claps* You do not use chat speak! You deserve a round of applause. :*

I am glad you update, but try to update a little more. ;D Remember to fix those grammar errors too.

Every thing is by you except for the music. ^-^ You put where you got your music from in your credits though. You will not lost points for that though because you left the credit on. :3 Very good job!

Your site does not offer anything else that other sites offer, but you do have Hiatus Signs and Moved Signs which most graphic sites do not offer. You also have top affies which allows your viewer to see which graphics you personally like. I think you should add some more stuff. ;D You also have music which is a plus. You should also put in a counter.

I really like your music. :3 It makes me excited and even more excited to look through your stuff. xD Its not annoying and I want to listen to it over and over. You also should get more affies. ^-^ I really love your css for your layout too. :D I believe you could do better with your lookups though, some of them are a little blurry. XD I love your css so much that I think you should also make pet pages for viewers to use. ;D Not many sites offer that so more people would be willing to give a peek at your site. I believe you could have thought of a better name in my opinion though. Try something unique and rare. Adding 'graphics' at the end just does not attract me. ;D It is up to you though.

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Your Total


81/100!

Your site did really well. ^-^ If you want to try even better, come back for a re-review. You may pick up a 80-89/100 award! :P

You have a very pretty picture at the top. :3 Your message is short and sweet. =) You introduce yourselves properly. I took off some points because your layouts columns confuse me a bit. X3 Your colors suit your picture properly. ;D

Wow, you have a lot of stuff to look at. ;D I think you should add some more affies though. I love your icons, I think I might use some of your Death Note ones. I love Death Note. -_- I think you should add some more Mello icons too. :o

Your site is very clean and neat. Your navigation is a little confusing in my opinion though. X3 So many things too click it makes me nervous. Your headers are also a little funky to me. Maybe you should have a darker color for your header and a lighter color for the bottom of your header.

Very nice, no spelling mistakes whatsoever. There are a few grammar mistakes though. ;D Watch out for those.

You update. ;D I understand you are on a semi-hiatus though. :3 That is fine. You developed a habit of updating a lot though. :D

Very nice, everything is by you. On your layouts picture, you gave credits from the site you got your resources from. *3^ It is a little hard to read though. :D I managed to see it so it really is not a problem. :*

Wow, you have so many things to click. xD You have a counter. You also have pretty music. (Is that song from Spirited Away?) You have plenty of affies and spiffy awards to view. ^-^

For IE I think you should change your scroll bar colors. (It would be much prettier.) Maybe the main column on your layout could be a little bigger too. (That is completely your opinion though.) Most of your 'link back' buttons are a little blurry. I really love your L one though. X3 (Go L!!) Lights icon on your 'staff' section is a little blurry. It is up to Light to change it. (By the way Light, nice drawings! I love them.)

Your graphics are very nice. ;D You may pick up the 90-98/100 award!

O_0 Wow, your layout is awesome. Your layout is inviting to me and makes me want to see what you have. Your welcome message is short and sweet. Your color scheme is also very perfect for the picture of Akito.

You have a few things to look at on your site, but I would suggest for you to add more. You are talented, so you should make more. Your layouts are by you but you used a tutorial but gave them credit which is very good. :3 I would suggest you fix some things up on your own on some of the lookups to make them more of your style.

Your graphics are very neat, but the icons are clambered together messily. Your lookups are very neatly done though. Everything is very easy to find too. Maybe a navigation section would not hurt though. :) You offer some unique stuff for neopians too use, but as I said, you should add even more amazing things. There are so many mangas/ animes that you should add. :3 Personally, I would like to see some Death Note layouts. Or Huruhi Suzumiya, Chobits, Pita Ten, ect. There are so many famous shows that people want to use for their lookups.

You had no mistakes in your grammar. :) I noticed some errors where you used "moi" instead of me. =3 In your case, this is not a problem because you can understand what you meant. I would suggest you fix these though because some people might get annoyed. -_-

You do have a update section which is really good, but you barely update. The last update you made was last year. That was a very long time ago. Try to get on and update once or twice a week at least. ^^ I understand you have other things to take care of, but I would love it if you added some more things to your site. ;D

Very good, everything is basically by you. :) Most of your icons are not by you though. I only took off a little points for that because you credited photobucket. You also used a lookup tutorial, but you credited them too. :3 You pretty much credited every place where you get your resources from. ;D

You have a about me section. I see you do have music, but it won't load on my computer. (Try to fix that.) You have what you call 'lists' which is a nice plus to your site. :) You have a 'site review' section which is cool too. :3 I think you should add a lot of more other things to your site though. You only have a few icons and a few lookups. Someone as talented as you should be able to make a lot more amazing things. ;D

I think you should not use a marquee for your affies. Try scrolls or nothing at all. You should also get some more affies too. See your 'link back' button? I think you should make some more. You only have one and it's really big in my opinion. Try the 88 x 33 button. Most people prefer that. ;D I love your main picture of Akito, it is very pretty. See your normal 'links'? I think you should use a different shade of pink for those because they are hard to point out with all of the text you have. :) I think you should also get a counter.