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...Maybe it wasn't so lifeless. You shuddered as your stomach boiled uncomfortably. The animal wasn't skinned, it had plenty of that. But it was hairless. Or featherless. And the stubs of wings that reminded you of last night's dinner suggested it wasn't supposed to be so bare. You tried to imagine a brilliant plume of feathers over its pink, leathery body but the image only made your stomach churn more. Groaning with disgust you turned your back on the thing on the wall. Lava in the lamp at the base of the fireplace jumped and leaped excitedly. It had been on for a while. But there was no one in the room. You gazed across to the far wall. Bookshelves, bursting with books, papers and files, framed a rickety sliding glass door. In the reflection of the glass you could clearly see a human shape: you. The light from the lamp outlined your form perfectly. It even captured the chair beside you and the shining plaque on the wall.
Your heart stopped, just for a beat.
You didn't want to. There was absolutely no power on Neopia that would make you turn around. But your shoulders slowly swung to the right, and your hips followed. Then your feet. Out of the corner of your eye you looked for it, but it was completely out of sight.
Glued to the shag carpet, horrified, you stared at the taxidermy plaque. Empty. The ashtray sat on the floor. Cigarette smoke poured from it and drifted toward the wood panel door. It stood ajar. The sound of two pairs of feet pattering resonated down the empty hall.

...Well I certainly hope I have your attention.
Please allow me to introduce myself. My name is Natasha but I'm known throughout Neopets as Abra. Off Neopets I live a fairly basic life. I am currently a college sophomore at nineteen years old. Drawing has always been a hobby of mine and I may study it further as my major before going on to Vet School. While I have been playing Neopets since fifth grade, I don't allow it to rule my life. I go out with my boyfriend of two and a half years regularly, I hang out with my friends whenever they are available. Neopets has become more of a late-night thing when I'm not reading Stephen King or watching what's interesting on TLC or the Discovery Channel. And while I am lead to believe that I am musically challenged, I really do love to sing. I haven't been involved in many sports in my life as I am not exactly athletic. But I have taken part in the typical little-kid soccer, four autumns of gymnastics, a summer of Little League, and two weeks of being a coxswain for a local rowing team. I'm not terribly intelligent person regarding obscure facts but I do know the basics and I guess I would call myself level-headed. Like I said, fairly basic.
As I mentioned I've been playing Neopets since I was ten or eleven years old. Since that time I've only been frozen once: cheating in the Beauty Contest. I voted for myself on multiple accounts. Whoopsie! That got my first account luvkity33, and main account kaitou_odoriko and about... twenty of my sides frozen. Yeah. That was back when you didn't need an activation code. Lots of fun. Nowadays I know better and cherish the time I put into my main and sides. I have four side accounts, most of which (like this) I use to store pets (characters) I plan on developing further, and making petpages. I enjoy planning out pages for my pets' on other pets' pages... that way, when it's done I can put it up in its complete stage. None of that 'under construction' nonsense!
Kularro, my most active side, is made so by the production of the pets pages on that account. That is to say, the characters on that account are perhaps most my notorious. Kularro is also my Premium alias, meaning I get (most) Premium features on that account as well as my main. On that account I am currently enrolled in Neopalette, an active artist guild for Neopounders. I typically log in every day to every other day for at least an hour, advertising for the beauty contest or chatting on the guild message board. The future pet line-up will (hopefully) be: Ayye, 'Feather', Sehu, and Ubuuroi: all boys, all antagonists. Ironic, no?
Flagge is still in the works. Flagge is my 'female pet' account, and as soon as I hoist up the boys' petpages, I'll move on to the girls'. I have yet to do some character development on all but Vihrea (and Quoxwood I suppose).
Heilde is sort of an everything-else purpose account. I log on a couple of times a week to re-arrange and update my wish list. Scullers and Moulders, for now, are extra petpages to either hold role-play character information, or applications and/or petpages.
My main account may not be my oldest ever created, but it is certainly the most active I've ever had. I enter all contests strictly on that account, excluding the BC. I have entered numerous comics into the Neopian Times and recently had my first-ever series published entitled Taking Care of Us.
I participate in every single plot (as seen by the souvenirs in my trophy cabinet), no matter how mediocre or benign they appear to be. Plots are entertaining, time-consuming, and most importantly, rewarding. You may have guessed by my avatar count that I'm a collector. I never miss a plot for fear of missing an avatar. Apart from avatars though I enjoy working towards game trophies, furnishing my (classic) Neohome, training Paarlei, and investing some potentially worthwhile purchases.
I will tell you here and now that I have never taken a hiatus from Neopets. That's not to say I took little breaks for vacations and the occasional sleep-over or overnight camping trip, but I have not once announced my leave from Neo or considered quitting. I highly doubt that, after all of the time and effort I put into my account, pets, and this application especially, I would require some sort of long-term break. Inflicts will not rot, I can assure you of that. I don't know that the Beauty Contest judge will accept his particular design but I will certainly enter him relentlessly until gold-banned. As for my Neopian Times comic series Pint-Sized I'm sorry to say Inflicts would not be a part of it. (Well, maybe on Halloween.) His character is unfortunately too vile to co-exist in the humorous world of Emsohl and Ubuuroi from a day to day basis.
This short story will serve as the beginning of Inflicts' unfortunate life. It is a counterpart to Atrocita's (Toughwing's). Enjoy.

The creature's story is tragic. More tragic than others some might say. But it all started in one place... in one commonplace. A Limited Edition Pet, or L.E.P., Mill. He was happy enough as a young Draik. He had food, he had a home... and most importantly of all, he had the best of friends. Day in and day out they stayed in their cage on the top shelf. Some days were boring, others could be fun. They loved to tell stories to one another; made up stories of course, none of them had ever been outside their pathetic living area.
In the mill the little pink Draik was known only as Feather. His chums Stripelegs and Roughskin called him that because of his beautiful pink feathers with the green and yellow tips around his head and on his wings. His best friend, Toughwing, wanted to call him Pinky. Feather didn't mind the feminine name but Stripelegs and Roughskin had laughed so hard the entire wall of cages rattled as they rolled and held their bellies. Pinky! Stripelegs exploded with giggles and fell onto his back.
Hey, watch it! a grouchy Krawk hissed from the cage below as he stuck his sharp claws through the bottom of their mesh cage. Toughwing and Roughskin dodged the ivory colored needles gingerly.
Knock it off, babies! An adolescent Cybunny was busy grooming her furry collar and looked clearly disturbed by the racket across the narrow aisle. Her floppy ears folded back in disgust, or maybe even jealousy. She was alone in her cage. Entirely alone. But Feather, oh, Feather was lucky enough to have three companions! Three best friends. Feather remembered early in their days, they promised that when they were all adopted and belonged to new families, they would ask their owners if they could all see each other. And so they would have a best-friend reunion when they were full grown. Feather could just imagine how huge Toughwing's wings would be by then. And Roughskin's little knobs of spikes he adorned now would grow into huge, glistening spears. And Stripelges would have millions of beautiful, pink and blue stripes all over his body like a Kougra.
Feather couldn't help growing a little jealous of Stripleges. While he himself was very colorful, no one quite compared to Stripelegs luxurious hues. The little feathered Draik's envy swelled even more when his plumes started dropping to the floor of the cage one week.
Feather, you're probably just molting. You know, when you lose your feathers and grow bigger feathers! Toughwing tried to console him.
Yeah Pinky, Stripelegs chimed in jokingly, no worries, you'll just be bald as Toughwing by the end of the month is all! He and Toughwing laughed at that. Feather's cheeks reddened and he ground his flat teeth together.
It was dinner time at the kennel. The mill runner had finished dishing out food to the cages across the aisle. Lutaris and Krawks greedily stuffed their faces, each munching on the same brand of kibble and scraps. Every time the man passed Feather's cage he paused to look at the pink Draik who looked back at him hungrily. But the mill runner's gaze sent shivers down Feather's little spine. He responded with a quick kick of scratching behind his ears or under his chin. With every scratch a foot-full of feathers pulled from his plumes and drifted to the floor of the cage. After, the mill runner would continue on feeding the other pets. Until he reached Feather's cage.
Toughwing!! Feather squealed the moment he saw the latex gloves open the cage. The mill never fed his stock with gloves: he only used them handle the ones that went into the back room.
Before the other three even had time to turn around, Feather was plucked from the cage. Stripelegs leaped after him but not soon enough. The cage door came crashing in, pinching one of Stripelegs' candy-striped paws. He let out a pathetic yelp and Toughwing quickly pulled him aside to the back of the cage. Feather watched as he was taken down the aisle to the point of no return: the back door. Only Roughskin was there at the front of the cage to wave Feather goodbye.
Toughwing, Feather cried out hoarsely but he knew his best friend couldn't hear him. Roughskin clung to the front of the cage and seemed to droop in his own depression. A twang of guilt plucked at his heart for teasing the other boys in the cage with scary stories about the back room. The mysterious back room: where the sickly-looking and downtrodden Neopets went... and never returned.
Don't you worry, Pinky, Feather's ears (if you could call them ears) perked up. He looked around for whoever was talking, but they were already heading through the back doorway. We'll take good care of you. It was the mill owner. He looked down at Feather and smiled almost sadly. Confused and feeling a little drowsy, Feather didn't bother to struggle as the large man shut the door behind them. As they walked down the skinny aisle in the second room that appeared identical to the first, Feather tried to catch a glimpse of the Neopets in their cages. But they were moving so quickly he never got a good look. All he could tell was that each Neopet had a cage all to himself. Feather thought that might be rather pleasant... until the man carrying Feather pushed past another back door.
The third room was slightly larger because there were no cages lined against the walls, except for a couple stacked in a corner. In the middle of the room were four small operating tables, big machines and tools on rolling tables. The mill runner stepped to the nearest table and chained Feather to it by the neck before the poor Draik knew what was coming. Feather sat, too afraid to move, too confused to call for help. He shivered a little. The table was cold.
I've heard about this place, a small voice invaded the room, sending off all of Feather's senses. His body went into code red and he scampered helplessly on the table, slipping on its shiny surface. Feathers flew everywhere. It's me! the voice came again, more distinguished. It was a girl's voice, a young girl. Feather's heart pounded in his tiny chest as he stopped thrashing. I'm over here, the voice whined sadly. Feather saw no one else in the room. His magnificent purple eyes scanned the walls and the floors until his gaze fell upon the stack of cages in the corner. A small, scaly, violet wing poked out from the darkness behind the bars of the topmost carrier.
Who are you? Feather asked breathlessly. The wing, though clearly an appendage for flight, looked more like a swollen hand; it had four distinct fingers and a thumb to grasp onto the gaping mesh of the cage door. Even Toughwing's wings couldn't do that.
My mom called me Annabelle, she squeaked, I don't know my full name. Withdrawing her hand-like wing, she pressed her round face against the door of her trap. She was certainly reptilian and almost looked a little bit like Toughwing... but she didn't have any ears. And instead of a normal body, she appeared to only have one long neck and tail. Feather had never seen anything quite like her. This is the bad place? Where bad pets go?
The chain around Feather's neck was terribly uncomfortable. More so because it was still pulled taught from when he freaked out. He lay down as to loosen the chain's grip a little, and also for a better view inside Annabelle's cage. This isn't a bad place, Feather replied, troubled. He loved living there, it was the only home he had ever known. Mom, you said? You had a mom? Was she anything like my mom? Feather's question was dearly sincere: he didn't remember his mother. All he knew was that she was in a different cage, in a different trailer, with all the other moms of the pets in the mill.
Annabelle looked concerned. No, my mom was human.
The pink, ragged Draik thought a moment. Human... his thoughts targeted on the unshaven face of the overweight mill owner. Oh, my mom's human too.
My mom says this is where pets go when they are bad. I didn't know I was being bad, she sniffled and coughed a little. She was about the same size as Feather and the rest of the gang, maybe a little older.
I've been here all my life, Feather offered gently, and I'm not bad... at least he didn't think he was. Why did your mom say those things?
I don't know! Annabelle was crying now, sobbing in fact. Two clear rivers of salty tears spilled down her round cheeks. My mom talked to a man outside-- (Outside'? thought Feather,) --and just GAVE me to him for a bag of neopoints in return! Annabelle absolutely wailed. She threw herself to the floor of her lonely trap and exploded into fits, banging against the wall of her cage with her muscular tail.
The back door opened, sending Feather's train of thought into panic. He scrambled on the table, strangling himself with the chain again. The mill owner rushed over, hushing him softly. Now, now Pinky, settle down, he loosened Feather's chain a bit so he had more room to move around, but was still limited to the table. Feather peered up at his captor with almond-shaped purple eyes. The man smiled down at him. Didn't mean for you to get sick too, buddy. Creases around the man's mouth melted his face into sorrow. We're going to get you all better now.
Feather wished he wouldn't the moment he saw the needle. How many injections he received, the Draik had absolutely no idea. But when it was all over, he felt dizzy and listless, numb at his hips from the punctures. And before he knew it, he had been stuffed back into a cage, very similar to his first one. But he was on the bottom row and his only companions were the stray feathers that littered the cold floor like soft snow. Pink snow.
But ohhh... how he itched!
It was a terrible, relentless itching that he'd subconsciously scratch at with his hind feet. The annoyance was significantly less important than the shedding of his beautiful feathers. He hadn't bothered to count how many times he scratched himself in the cage, in the laboratory, even when he was still with Toughwing and the others in the front room he scratched and scratched, kicking out plumes and downy. And all that scratching only made the itching worse.
The man returned every day to pluck Feather from his cage and feed him another slew of injections. Feather wasn't sure what the medicine was supposed to do for him because he felt no different after: just tired and woozy. His skin still itched all over and his feathers still fell out.
It wasn't long before the little Draik resigned from struggling. What was the point? He was totally and utterly bald. Not a feather to speak of. Ironically, no one called him Feather anymore. There was no one around to call him that. Only the mill owner talked to and about him, piddling around in the laboratory is he fished through boxes for the small vials of medicine to inject him with. Instead he was called Pinky. And Pinky greatly resented the humiliation.
Perhaps one of the biggest questions one could ask about this application is Why? Why would I choose Inflicts, not only over other Draiks but over other dragon-like species? Let's start out with generality and then zoom in on the specifics.
Inflicts or, rather, Feather was a secondary character to my Draik Atrocitas plot. If you would, imagine a puppy mill of sorts... a very bad place indeed. Now center that main idea around Neopets and what have you got? A mill for those hard-to-get pets, limited edition pets. Which is why my Feather is not a Scorchio, Skeith, or other dragon-like Neopet. In all honesty I never intended to create a real Feather in the first place. But while I was applying for the Draik Alademuerte (the original inspiration for my 'Toughwing' character,) people who had read my story wanted to know just what happened to Feather. They asked for a Feather and so I made the serious choice to deliver. We all know applying for a limited edition pet isn't easy, let alone for a Draik. But why a Draik indeed? Couldn't Feather have easily been a Krawk or Cybunny or Lutari (should I have stopped zapping my lab rat after he turned into one twice)? Easily answered, yes, it would have been possible. But regrettably.
Since I hatched Atrocita not long ago I was able to get to know the Draik species a little better, inspecting different paint colors, customization, petpet pairings, etc. I'll admit, Draiks have certainly grown on me as a species. Their head/body proportion is particularly appealing, though I am unable to put my finger on exactly why... Draiks have something that Krawks (and especially Cybunnies) lack. Perhaps its the openness of their stature or their decorative symmetry? Either way, hands down, Draiks are, in my opinion, the most beautiful of the limited edition species, hands down. ...And I am a little ashamed that twisting beauty into vulgar morbidity is a bit of a pastime for me. If you don't believe me, snoop around my account. Read my series "Taking Care of Us"; there's a bit of a morbid twist in the third and final part. Atrocita's name means 'Atrocity', and for clear reasons. I don't know what it's called exactly, but I have a certain pride in taking beautiful things and turning them plain or ugly--just as I've done with Feather, both for his character and his species.
Now, of course there are other Draiks out there. Why Inflicts, exactly? I will be happy to let you know that there is a distinct reason why your handsome Draik caught my eye. Part of it is all thanks to you. Curious for his name, I went to check out your rules page. The first item I noticed was your art. It expressed clear dedication to a significant purpose, to turn Inflicts from a pet into a character. I thought perhaps I could. No, I knew I could! Heck, I had a character on-hand. All he needed was a little bit of development... So this application is more or less a sort of gift for you (in an obscure way). I propose my character of Feather to you for your peace of mind; Inflicts will not go to waste. Secondly, as mentioned previously, Inflicts' name was what caught my eye in the first place. Not for its value as a real word, and I apologize if that offends you? But certain words in the English language (and any other language for that matter) possess their meaning within their inscription, much like a visual onomatopoeia_ The word inflict is painful in itself both to the ears and eyes. Let's face it, inflict is not a pretty word: it brings not-so-pretty images to mind. The auditory sound 'ict' does not flow and is simply a severe break like a harsh and sudden stop. Written, the mostly narrow and vertical letters point like knives, needles, and other painful objects one might 'inflict' upon another person. The name 'Inflicts' is nearly too perfect to fit Feather's darker, modernized side. And such a fitting name could not be passed over. That is why I chose Inflicts.
Inflicts is not what you would call a sight for sore eyes. In fact, quite the opposite as you can clearly see for yourself. The poor Draik, barely half a year old, was stripped of his feathers thanks to the fatal disease he contracted from the L.E.P. mill. Despite his declining health, because he was the mill owner's favorite Draik, Feather was put on life-support until his right lung burst. A black 'X' was painted between his shoulder blades to signify his death, as were all fatalities at the mill. It dried, staining his pink skin, and can never come off.
After death, Inflicts' body was stuffed for preservation. The taxidermist positioned his body to look as though he were climbing something, and stiffly coiled his tail around an ashtray. Inflicts' beautiful purple eyes were replaced with plastic orange peepers that never change or blink. On his hands and feet are long iron nails he is able to pull out of his plaque when active. And his cheeks are stitched into a beaming smile, but he is very free to move his lips as he pleases...
Inflict is a jealous demon. He takes what he wants and craves what he can't have, including intangible friendship. He is confused about who he has become, and why he ended up in this way. He does not so much regret being an ashtray as he does being featherless. Always assuming he can do nothing but revolt the other beings he comes in contact with, he is terribly bitter and full of animosity. Above everything else he craves to see Toughwing again--to take him out. Toughwing didn't say goodbye. Toughwing didn't help him. Even when he was lying cold and dead on the operating table, hooked up to machines and gizmos like a computer... Toughwing passed him by to save himself. And for that Inflicts means to--inflict every ounce of pain unto him as was to me.

Name: Inflicts
Moniker: Feather
Species: Draik
Gender: Male
Age: Six months
Post-Lifespan: 74 years
Brush: Tyrannian? Halloween? Plushie?
Skin: Dull, brown-pink
Eyes: Plastic, orange
Ears: Two thin stalks
Wings: Featherless
Figure: Stuffed
Tail: Short
Type: Taxidermy
Temperament: Confused, vengeful, detached
Faults: Featherless, ugly
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As an example of my devotion to Inflicts, I intend to prove to you, just as you asked, my abilities and plans for the unfortunate Draik once known as Feather. This section will be the end of the actual application: the rest would fit into Inflicts' petpage, another leap of my dedication. Until next time, adieu...
[These short paragraphs serve as a typical example of a role-play introduction. All interactions will strictly be between Inflicts and a character of my guildmates', but not without their permission. After all, Inflicts guests don't usually ever leave him.]
But those were just stories. Children's nightmares used to scare each other during slumber parties and camping trips. The sensible, reasonable adults knew for a fact that Mr. Larrimoor, the old mill owner still lived in that house... or at least it appeared so. He'd be reaching 100 soon, if that really was him behind those walls... No one could say for sure. He never came in. And he never went out. But every now and then a porch light would flicker on, and the front door stood open invitingly--just as it did now. A sweet aroma wafted from the doorway. Cookies, home-baked cookies... the tantalizing odor dominated the street and sidewalk. But they didn't smell quite right... perhaps a secret ingredient was added? More baking soda? Hazelnuts? Something. Whatever it was, the smell stuck to the back of the throat. It tasted like formaldehyde.
Should I actually engage in role-play during the application process, I will happy post every response, word for word, in chronological order.
[Alongside role-playing are Inflicts' victims...]
Heh, now you didn't think I actually lived here all by my lonesome? Oh, no no. Just like you, I do have the occasional... 'visitor'. Snoopers. That's what they are. Every last one of them. When I hear them opening and closing doors or creaking down the hall, they stir my slumber. And I let them know it.
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I was particularly fond of one, mm, visitor, my very first. I don't know his name or anything, I didn't care to learn it. I caught him skulking in the attic, in the make-shift attic. You see, my roof had a bit of a leak in the stormy weather... it seemed that this Pteri decided to take refuge--WITHOUT my permission--in the crawlspace, through the hole. It didn't take long for me to get up there myself. But I didn't say hello. Hee hee hee, not at first. I suppose, while he was drying off in one of those silly corners he smelled something foul... something hmm inorganic. Being the little chicken that he was, he went for the hole--only to find it boarded up. Strange the hole might conceal itself silently... almost as though he was lead into a trap... heeheeeeee... Now, I don't mind having visitors as much as you might think. After all, I let him stay for as long as he wanted... Though the hole is still boarded up. And I suppose he couldn't get away if he wanted to. You see, taxidermy is a very distinct form of art. And I consider myself an artist. Oh, yes, he's still up there... They're all still up there... |
The papers...
A meeting...
Ah, my trophies... my beautiful, beautiful trophies. Don't touch! That's real Draik, it is! And look, I've got one in every color... are you jealous? Don't you wish you had nice wall hangings like these? I suppose I could share... but you had better not touch anything but the plaque.


Blue

Brown

Camouflage

Checkered

Christmas

Cloud

Darigan

Desert

Disco

Electric

Faerie

Fire

Ghost

Glowing

Green

Halloween

Ice

Island

Maraquan

Mutant

Orange

Pink

Pirate

Plushie

Purple

Rainbow

Red

Robot

Royal Boy

Royal Girl

Shadow

Silver

Skunk

Speckled

Split

Spotted

Starry

Striped

Tyrannian

White

Yellow
CUSTOMS.

Inflicts

Alademuerte

Vosket

Seto_Samu

Caslean

Arquiro

Layenni

Alathafar
You wonder what these are? Curious, you have absolutely naught an eye for art. These are images of... myself. See the resemblance? Now now, don't be shy. Take a closer look. You'll see it.
Come with me, I said, and no one knew
where, or how my pain throbbed,
no carnations or barcaroles for me,
only a wound that love had opened.
I said it again: Come with me, as if I were dying,
and no one saw the moon that bled in my mouth
or the blood that rose into the silence.
O Love, now we can forget the star that has such thorns!
That is why when I heard your voice repeat
Come with me, it was as if you had let loose
the grief, the love, the fury of a cork-trapped wine
the geysers flooding from deep in its vault:
in my mouth I felt the taste of fire again,
of blood and carnations, of rock and scald.
Come With Me, I Said, And No One Knew (VII), by Pablo Neruda


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