See this image above? Welp, that won't be cannon (canon?) in the future. That's right, folks: we're going through a full-blown retcon. ISN'T THAT EXCITING?
To elaborate further on that: I'm humanizing mah peeps. Yup, people. Humans. No animal-ness attached. I grew away from neopets, but have kept some characters; these guys I count among the few. However, some changes will be made...
This just in. They're now all in uni. YAY. Weird how I've never done uni-aged supes before... they were always either highschool peeps, or like early 30s adults and onwards_
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Guardsman needs new powers; I'm not a fan of the strength + flight trope, and I'm a little sick of considering him as just the physical muscle of the group.
- I was thinking of sheild-type stuff. Barrier warrior trope. Oh! Of course; we can have it akin to Hisako Ichiki ("armor"): more focus on barriers, though, and just pieces, rather than a full form. I see kait's point with needing a strength member in every supergroup, and this way he can still sorta be that, just more interesting to me as a character.
- So, forcefields: can't send them off, but can still use them offensively.
- Need full name: Jay _____ _______
- It's been decided: he has a bf. Just recently.
- Real avian counterpart = ? Not sure yet. Find something.... hawklike?
- Costume pattern/colours = pattern after something in the thrush family; look for yellows?.
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Finch needs new boots. No idea how I'll approach them now... enh, I'll figure something out.
- Oh, and finch completes the basic supergroup by embodying the need for some sort of travel power.
- mom from saudi arabia, dad from... argentina? morocco? ugh, not sure.
- likes peanutbutter & bananas on toast. mmmmm.
- Need full name: Finch _____ ______
- gf? nope. Previously: yeah, but not anymore.
- takes classes; career goals = __________? works part time.
- real avian counterpart = scratch the secretary bird idea. Go for reddish egret.
- Costume pattern/colours = pattern after steller's jay.
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Virulence now has shorter gloves, and more combat-style boots.
- chucks stuff at enemies. I don't even know, man: I had an idea of what exactly she chucks, but I can't remember it now. OH, nevermind: shurikens of some kind.
- Vi now embodies the ranged-attacker role of the basic supergroup.
- weapons attached to cables and stuff. Grappling-hooks galore.
- Has southern drawl. From atlanta, georgia.
- Need full name: Robyn ______ _______
- bf? Welp, might have something for jay, but you know, that's kind of void; all in all chooses to not bother.
- real avian counterpart = dude I don't know, yet.
- Costume pattern/colours = pattern after american goldfinch. It'd work, dude.
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Helga: I'm thinking she probably doesn't keep up the superhero shenanigans anymore. Continued a bit after team dispersal, but not anymore; focus more on job. Still like, a mentor figure to team (not just finch); kind of has a personal investment in them: unwittingly grows attached.
- Law partner = whatshisface faerie lenny I have. Gosh it's been so long, I can't even remember names I've assigned certain characters. DION, that's it. Paha, I'll have to change his last name, though; I'll still use flower (azaleas) and peacock imagery around him, though. Anyways, they work together, and he still has a hand in more shady matters; but I wouldn't particularily call him "corrupt"... not in your bad-cop kind of way. One of those ends justify the means types. Man, azaleas are ugly flowers; standard plastic lilly looking stuff going on.
I want a bit of a Trevor Goodchild vibe with this guy.
- jolt is gone. no jolt. he's not a fun character for me anymore, so I've done away with him. We now have a trio.
- oh goodness, let me list the villains kai and I thought up that I now have to humanize...
- major antagonist, the fuzzinator, atomic a, amplitude, whatsherface invisiblegnorbu, amp's team I never drew: with the ironman kau dude, JP, Dahlia & Kevin, elephante grandma person, that plant yurble dude (make him like, a shlumy creeper dude),
- list of heroes we made up that i have to humanize...
- lutari hero, girl in mecha hero, ERGYBLURGENSTEIN, kurt, jeff?,
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VILLAINS Needless to say, we're uping the anti here. Things will (for the most part) be taking on more sinister hues.
- J P : still the shapeshifting gelatinous blob type character. Let's up the nightmare fuel, though. So yeah, can't, like form blades or anything sharp like that; but you have all that weight at your disposal there, as well as the versatility of a semi-solid material.
- Lessen the obtuse uselessness and randomness of him. Kinda recruited by many, since so useful.
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Ugh, I can't leave out Amp.
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Try to see if you can spot my doodles for sorting out the human versions of Robyn & Finch in this mess... (drag to address bar/select properties to view fullsize)
{both are scribbled with at least their masks/cowls/hoods/whatevers on, as well as their secret identities, profile-view} Bonus : villains Amplitude and Frigid Frost are also doodled in here in pen).
Oh, and the text further below will be made away with too. It's probably best if you ignore it, since the only reason for me saving it would be to remind myself what not to do, and how awful it was. You can see how awful it is too if you like.
The place was cramped; five guys standing around, eyes fixed to the checkered yurble positioned near the largest wall screen, the room's red-hued lighting adding a disturbing shade to this otherwise orderly neopian. A burly lupe spoke up next to one of the control consoles he was leaning on,
You've had more than enough time to do what you've been paid for, _______. Where's that status report you promised us?
Unblinking, the yurble raised his right hand and pressed a button on the remote control he was carrying. His back to the activated wall screens, still facing the neopians in this small room, the yurble calmly started.
Gentlemen -and Raze-, let me assure you that I have collected all the information our mutual employer requires, and then some. Shall I begin, or would you prefer to batter me around first?
This settled the fidgeting in the crowd and increased the lupe's fuming... not that it was diffult to set the neopian off or anything.
Good, let's proceed. You hired me to gather as much information as possible on the hero known as Quantum Surge, and I intend to deliver...
nav 1 ---- nav 2 ---- nav 3 ---- nav 4 ---- nav 5
{maybe links to petlookup & main account, maybe not}
The largest screen finally finished loading, a list rapidly forming on its glossy grey face.
What the hasee is this supposed to be? The lupe, Raze, blurted out.
Bare basics, the checkered yurble stated, Simple statistics for those only interested in a brief overview.
Subject: Quantum Surge Identity: Finch Celeris Pronunciation: {Finch Kell-air-iss} Classification: Superhero Affiliation: Defenders of a Feather, Defenders of Neopia Gender: Male Species: Lenny Brush: Brown Approximate Age: 21 Frequented Area of Influence: Neopia Central Residence: Renting in Virtupets Apartment Relatives: Parents residing in Altador, unknown Abilities: Superspeed & reflexes Strengths: quick reaction/processing time, proficient hand-to-hand combat [assisted by abilities] Weaknesses: hesitant, physically weak, Recommendation: Approach with caution; favouring stealth tactics may pay off. Don't let him make the first move. If surprise fails, resort to physically-powered agent who can multitask well; shapeshifter, elemental, etc. I'd advise sending in JP if you don't mind having a mess to clean up afterwards.
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One of the thugs in the group found himself re-reading the Approximate Age, Wait, he's just a kid-
How did you find all of this out? asked another.
I have my ways. Would you like to continue?
________ took the silence from the group as a "yes".
Over the past few months, I've been collecting data on your subject. It wasn't easy, but after working out his "secret identity", I had surveillance equiptment set up and activated around areas he frequents most. This proved to be fairly easy in the Virtupets Space Station, as my team managed to gain control of pre-existing devices.
I also had moles planted; neopians to make discreet observations in ways cameras could not.
The subject originally hails from a port on the edge of Altador. His father, a blue lenny, continues to contribute to the city's fishing industry and is native to the land. His mother, a desert lenny, apparently has some overseas travel experience at her disposal and still recieves regular mail from Qasala, despite leaving. We are currently uncertain of siblings or distant relatives. However, with a bit more time my team should remedy this minor problem.
Nevertheless, we are certain of the degree of compassion the subject shares for his parents. Something to keep in mind if the need to aquire a bargaining tool arises.
Despite the fact that the subject, one Finch Celeris, patrols the urban streets of Neopia Central, he's currently renting apartment space on the Virtupets Space Station. The most notable reason for this being his average income, which is fairly modest. Inhabiting the Space Station, he has to make his way down past the shuttle bay to the insta-port deck just to get to Neopia. This inconvenience holds potential for us, and we've pinpointed a few prime locations of interception on this daily path; I'll be neomailing them to you later on.
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THEN we move into a bit more detailed info on what the profiler has gathered so far. (start by explaining surveillance equiptment, techniques, etc) 1: what happens in the run of an average day (where he goes, etc), 2: what brought him here, income situation, aliasvsalterego lifestyles. Relatives.
We get into contacts: basic non-super ones, degree of compassion for each.
Petpet (think southern ground hornbill).
And NOW we get into super-character interraction. Profile heroes first: divulge various 'secret' info on all (user-created, non-user-created). Unknown = "Unknown". Atomic Dispersion, 'jeff', beanie-wearing lutari, d.o.a.f, little kacheek in giant robot suit, hydrolance (yay under!), craven (yay ashel!), amphere (yay ashel!),
Next do the villains. Any villain he's ever made contact with. ANY & ALL. We're not trying to build a rogue's gallery here, just a view of the number of random villains out there. So that'd be, fuzzinator, atomic A, nitro-streak, lucidity, luminous (might just scrap this one; not feelin' anything for him), amplitude, JP, all members of amp's new team, crash bang gang (D:), kinetic stint, major antagonist, lerrak (yay under!), doctor renegade, frigid frost, razzledy, and like whoa haiponi (funk! like whoa), granny-aged back-in-the-day villain, creepy doll like villain (even though she's giant-mech-wearing-little-kacheek-girl's villain),
POWERS, there must be a section on his personal powers and how he personally uses them. Personal like.
.... think I used 'personal' enough? Yeah I didn't think so either. Where should I put this section, guest? Every place I feel like smooshing it into doesn't feel right. Well, I'll decide that later, I guess.
We get into the art section: visual recordings of supposed happenings, taken by a one "charybdis7".
Then photographs taken by charybdis7.
Then artistic renderings by various others.
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To paint:
---} Watercoloured spatter/drips with black/inked details/profiles for various characters (eg, meagan, moira, etc)
---} simple movement-studies. various chars.
---} Tidbits from stories you love.
- Poe: king pest, bon bon,
- Lovecraft: flying polyps, wilbur whately (posthumous), the dunwich horror itself, shoggoths,
Creshna Stuffs
- Creshna = last name. Cassie.
- Draw her and Ren grooving out to Janelle Monae musics. No-shame. All-out crazy dancing.
- still shares apartment with finch. roomies. he thinks cass & ren are weird... for obvious reasons.
- her and ren are tight, yo. bros. on and off.
- ninja, yo. rollerblading groovy BRIT mcninja. reverse-grip dual-weilding.
- flash step, dodge the bullet, ninja tropes all up in this place
- Trained with some old guy master. Blind ogrin master? Welp, sure, for the neo version. Temple of mynci; worship some mynci diety. The way of the mynci. I JUST CAN'T HANDLE ALL THESE MYNCIS. STATUES ERRYWHUR!
---} Goals/Wants/Definitely won't get all, because like whoa, that's a lot... just to keep in mind.
    
 Maybe just the colours and stuffs...
BLAH IDEARS
- Prettiness com
- subjects
- usual theme of presenting ugly in pretty... pretty in ugly... yeeah, sure.
- 1: scar showcase. bruises? naw man, naw. {port}
- 2: inverts one {o.f.} (assign?)
- ghost slug, giant pacific octopus, giant clam, tapeworm, leech, lamprey, polycheate (clam worms/ragworms), termite, carpenter ant, squid worm, crown of thorns starfish, giant centipede, camel spider, woodlice, red velvet mite, wolf spider, earwig, silkworm (larvae), velvet worm, spider crab, coconut crab, hagfish (technically a vert), dust mite, mud dauber wasp,
- 3: horror: fears? maybe just give some phobia, let roll with that. {scene} (pick)
- ablutophobia, aichmophobia, atychiphobia, chronophobia, decidophobia, disposophobia, gephyrophobia, gerascophobia, ichthyophobia, nosophobia, ophthalmophobia, somniphobia,
- 4: grufurtyz {scene}
- 5: robotsies: grungy cyborgs y'all. {port}
- 6: another o.f. one revolving around infection/illness/disorders? (pick?)
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skin: warts, eczema, ringworm, cutaneous larva migrans "creeping eruption", stings? (insect, jellyfish),
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symptoms: coughs, nausea, headache, fever, sniffles,
- 6 WILL BE LAST ONE IN THIS SEQUENCE
- 7: if you want infection, make it up.
- infection? possession, parasites and hosts, greys, teef, robotz, fish (big mouthed)
- pxlz? game sprites? but, it's not ugly... like, mspaint is usually thought of as being ugly, but that's being proven wrong all the time. Enh, not sure about this one
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This is the important stuff. My recent (as of Saturday, November 5th, 2011) sketchbook was lost, and no way of reflecting on my work and plans. I must document what I can remember before I forget it forever.
Meagan & Team
- re-doing outfits: more off-the-rack. Zack = hoodie with skull emblem spreading across shoulders. Lauren = wide dude-style shorts, domino mask, reg top. Meg = victorian-esque overcoat, light witch hat, dress, boots, ribbon. Elias = Tight hooded top, goggles, knee/elbowpads, gloves going over sleeves, boot/sneaker things. Noah & Keath weren't done yet; Noah's hair = more stork-ish approach.
- fighter-game sprites. Got meg, flux, done. Wanted to do evo or kait's peeps next.
Supervillains
- Reinventions: foliage to flux; outfit now akin to meg team style. Gravity manip; but affects anything in path of aim. Area-oriented powers, not specific.
- Reinvented Kali: magic user now. Long dark wavey hair, forhead mark, eyebrow-less. Magic effects = call back to previous incarnation by arm/tentacle/things that can form into blades/whathaveyou. 4 of them. Only 4. Dark energy. Gothic lacey style; obnoxiously big combat-like boots
- Reinventions: shapechanger peep from 9th grade, to evo. Emo dude; long hair, like former incarnation. Practicalized outfit; ripped pants, worn boots, ratty white hoodie, etc. Not much here.
- Reinventions: other = wanted to do cat'seye, 3 myth peeps (gorgon, siren, vamp thing = make em magic users), pulse, inferno (another magic user).
- Must scan central-based team with the 2 magic users, limited shapeshifter, robosuit-girl, and lead by that old hero dude. TRY to scan. Need this.
- We did moira's parents, and tried zack's. We can always re-do. Have ref for her dad anyways. Pa = superstrength, Ma = armour, spike projectiles.
- We needed to re-do lauren's sis, claudia, anyways. Keep her affinity towards male speed-skaters. ALSO, keep glub, the ugliest fish in world.
- Keath's sis is 'sadie', she has a hamster.
- Noah's sis needs a new name (cybil isn't cutting it anymore, haha). Slight redhead, freckles, stickler for chandelier earrings, demanding.
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Charybdis (for lookup. View to show below whirlpool; bladder-jellyfish-thing)
Tea self (for ixi page)
Finish Cedric skull profile (for cybil's page)
Wonderland-dream snippets (... not for anything here... really...)
Human top images (for cybil, cedric, bea, surge, creshna, tokuanid {um, maybe just vague and deserty... maybe not bother yet}, dispersion, azaliuh... um yeah)
finish cybil hair meme (not for here)
New banner for cybil's page? (naw)
Nightmare snippets (various nights, order obviously doesn't matter. Amalgamate. Not for here)
Fishy lookup banner for elgol (maybe just keep him as a fish... in a suit)
To Draw:
finish King Pest neovian crowd image, insert corpse of old cerveau-family lenny-friend (not really for here)
lookup images of cerveaus, bea, surge, creshna, dispersion... go from there.
Stories:
Introduction of Cerveaus.
First-time-meeting of cerveaus to swallow & dubois
Tidbits to Sort:
Cerveaus original name. ("servo" {"sair-woe" I preserve/keep/save/guard}, "mentis" {of the mind}, "corpus" {body}, "corporis" {of the body}, )
Random ideas:
AKDJLADS Characters in halloween costumes (not just neo chars, obviously. Try to resist urge to put lauren as bulleteer. RESIST THE URGE. SHE WOULD HATE IT.)
Child-i-fication of characters. (all) (ALL)
Now wailing in fear, we rowed on up those straits,
Scylla to starboard, Charybdis off to port, her horrible whirlpool gulping the sea-surge down, down, but when she spewed it up -like a cauldron over a raging fire- all her churning depths would seethe and heave -exploding spray showering down to splatter the peaks of both crags at once! But when she swallowed the sea-surge down her gaping maw the whole abyss lay bare and the rocks around her roared, terrible, deafening -bedrock showed down deep, boiling black with sand- and ashen terror gripped the men...
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