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Simple And Clean by Utada Hikaru (Kingdom Hearts)

You never know
What you can accomplish
Until you try

The Legend

It is said that on a rainy night, twins were born. They were absolutely identical, although as they grew up, one preferred to race, the other play. And when the daughter was killed and revived as a vampire, the twins grew apart. Legend has it that the stallion and mare can be seen at certain times visiting each other.

Introduction

You stumble forward through the forest, black patches clouding your vision. You don't know where you are. You can't remember how you got here. You can't remember when you last ate and drank something, and you don't even know the time of day. Worst of all, you don't know where anyone else is, or if this forest will ever end.
You collapse from exhaustion, curling up and closing your eyes. You're too tired to go on any longer, and all you want to do is sleep.
There was a snort above you and you snapped your eyes open, blinking groggily, wondering how long you had been out. You focus, your eyes coming to meet a pair of silver eyes with slits.
Ah!" You scramble backwards.
The farther back you go, the more to realize about the creature. It's an equine, with a golden horn and large wings with black-tipped feathers. The stallion looks at you quizzically; you've stopped moving now because you've backed up against a tree.
Why do you surrender?" he inquires, his voice peaceful, pleasant, laced with velvet. "Is there not more in life that you wish for?" He seems confused, puzzlement playing across his face.
You can't say anything, too stunned that a horse is talking to you. He eyes you calmly. There's a small smile on his face now, a smile of amusement.
Do you not even know why you surrender? Is this world as confusing to you as it is for me? Do you know why through the pain we continue to live?" he questions softly, regarding you carefully.
What do you mean?" You've managed to regain your voice back, and he strikes your curiosity.
He seems even more confused by this. "Why, do I even know the answers; is that what you ask?" he askes after a short while.
No. That's not what I ask," you murmur. "I want to know what you mean about surrendering.
He nods slowly, his smile fading. His face is unreadable as it watches you.
Well, when I found you, it looked like you had given up. I want to know why," he answers calmly.
Oh." You try to think back to why you passed out. "I didn't give up. I was just... tired. I needed rest.
He nods again. "Might I ask of your calling? It would be useful," he comments carefully.
guest," you respond automatically, surprised at how easily it was to say your name.
Pleased to meet you, guest. My name is No Sweet Surrenders, but you may call me Surrender, if you please," he replies, bowing to you slowly, a smile returning.
So that's where he got his question about surrending, you think to yourself. You smile back at him softly.
Are you thirsty? I would offer food, but I have nothing that would please Two-legs." He grimaced at this.
Two-legs?" You wince at this.
Yes. That is what my herd elders used to call your kind. What else are you known as, if Two-legs does not suit you?" he replies calmly.
Human.
All right. Useful indeed. Now, are you thirsty?" he comments slowly.
You nod.
Well then, are you well enough to walk a short distance?" he inquires.
You nod again, certain you can do it, but as soon as you stand up, you collapse. He winces at this, lowering his head to pick you up, lifting his neck so you slide onto his back. You hang over his shoulders before you fix yourself carefully, not wanting to fall off. He was higher up than you'd like to fall head-first.
As soon as you're ready, he walks forward, a smooth, easy pace. His wings spread out behind you, and you admire then slowly. You brush your fingertips along a satiny-smooth feather, and he flinches, making you retract your hand.
Sorry," he apologizes. "I'm not used to humans touching me. In fact, you're the first human I've ever met. You seem nice enough, though.
What do you mean, nice enough?" you snap sharply, ignoring how he says 'human.
He glances back at you. "My herd elders said that Two-humans were cruel to our kind, and that we should never come face-to-face with one." He shrugged lightly at this, making you almost fall off. "Sorry.
Cruel? Oh..." You scowl at this.
He stops carefully just before a river, and you dismount, glancing at a waterfall just a bit farther down you. The river winds its way to it, and below is a large pool.
Wow," you breath, amazed at this.
You like it?" he inquires as you take thristy gulps from the river before you.
Like it?" you gasp between gulps. "I love it.
I'm pleased." He watches you patiently until you turn towards him.
Do you mind if I stay here until I regain my energy?" you question.
He shakes his head. "Certainly not. Would you like it if I passed the time for you faster?" he offers.
Sure. Just one thing - how do you get out of here?
He grimaces considerably. "The forest, you mean? I don't know. I'll help you, though.
Sounds fair." You lie down on the grass as he clears his throat, preparing to begin.

Facts

|¤» Name: No Sweet Surrenders
|¤» Alias: Surrender
|¤» Translation: "Difficult
|¤» Language: English
|¤» Accent: None
|¤» Birthday: November 03
|¤» Zodiac Sign: Scorpio
|¤» Birthstone: Topaz
|¤» Current Mood: Flirtatious
|¤» Species: Equine/Uni
|¤» Brush: None
|¤» Gender: Male
|¤» Age: Four
|¤» Vitals: Alive
|¤» Pelt: Dark Brown
|¤» Eyes: Silver
|¤» Height: 15.3 hands
|¤» Weight: 801 lbs.
|¤» Figure: Muscular, sleek, thin
|¤» Markings: White blaze, black stockings on left foreleg, right hindleg, two black stripes on left hindleg, right foreleg, black tipped ears, black tipped wings
|¤» Accessories: Silver chain on neck, silver chain on right hindleg
|¤» Personality: Mysterious, Indifferent, Exquisite, Eloquent, Sympathetic, Compassionate, Flirtatious

|¤» Guardian: Burnt Out Souls
|¤» Father: Deceased
|¤» Mother: Deceased
|¤» Siblings: Blood
|¤» Temptor: None
|¤» Love: None
|¤» Together Since: None
|¤» Foals: None
|¤» Best Friend: Tanre
|¤» Friends: Tanre
|¤» Enemies: None
|¤» Herd: None
|¤» Ranking: None
|¤» Quote: This is real, I'm afraid; this time there is no hiding
|¤» Power: Ice, able to make everyone around him calmer and feel their emotions
|¤» Traits: None
|¤» Breed: Quarter Horse
|¤» Desire: To help his sister

|¤» Level: 1
|¤» Height: 123 cms.
|¤» Weight: 103 lbs.
|¤» Strength: 8
|¤» Defence: 6
|¤» Speed: 9
|¤» Health: 7/7
|¤» Intelligence: 10

Prophecy

Love, racing, freedom
He lives to run
And freedom is his thing
Twins - daughter and son
Born together
Yet so apart
A silent daughter
A son with a heart
They've drawn away
Vampire siblings aren't the best
So she went east
And he west
All he wants
Is to help her faster
But when she falls
Can he catch her

History

Coming soon.

Journal

Coming soon.

Love

Love... I... I don't know... It's a possibility that I'm in love, but I don't know if I am. I mean... I've never felt this before. And she's my best friend.
I mean, around her, I feel like I have a heart, but does that mean that I love her? I couldn't tell you. But no matter what, she must never find out. No. She can't. And she won't. I'll make sure of that.

Friends

Tanre
Ah, what a wonderful mare! And very beautiful, if I might add. We met in a forest one day that I had been wandering for a long while now, and my, why she a sight for my eyes! I think that she thinks that I'm better than what I am. Too bad I'm not.

Rivals

Hate is a very strong emotion - a passionate emotion, if that is what you please. I doubt that I am capable of hating someone, therefore I have no rivals. Besides, I just can't not like someone. I like a vampire, don't I? And I don't mind Satan's minions, now do I?

Family

Blood
My poor sister. She was cursed with vampirism when we were younger. She was killed by a lion - who made her blind - and so we buried her. She made a deal with Satan that she would kill someone to come back alive, but he fooled her and made her a vampire. Now she hates everybody, especially the followers of Satan.


Starstruck
Not entirely my brother, but he is indeed my adopted brother. He leads a hard life, and weaves many tangled webs, looking for somewhere he belongs, though he doesn't admit it because he doesn't know it. He's stubborn enough that he thinks that he's happy with working for Satan. Tell it to someone who can't feel other's emotions. He and my sister hate each other, and he was the mentor of Breath a while ago.


Breath
A poor soul, trying to find the meaning of life and who he is. He says that he's someone different, and that Breath died long ago. He says that the form he takes now is merely the 'manipulator.' I actually find him quite nice and intriguing, actually! Although his demon side is very powerful, and he has trouble controlling it... Anyways, he had his heart broken before, and I pity him. It must be hard, living his life. I only hope the best for him.

Cherishes/Loathes


• c h e r i s h e s •
· love
· friends
· friendship
· loyalty
· life
· controlling ice
· visitors
· girls ;)

• l o a t h e s •
· surrenders
· thieves
· liars
· enemies
· hatred
· death
· killers
· vampires

Awards

None.

Toy Box


Fan Art

None.

Wall of Shame

Here is where the people who stole ANYTHING from this page will be recorded and placed. Here me out: you will never be taken down, even if you have sent an apology. I just plainly loathe thieves.

Here remains empty; no one has dared to take anything here, not even his design or layout.

F.A.Q.

Q: Can my pet be Surrender's mate?
A: Perhaps, although we'd have to roleplay first, and they'd have to become friends first. I can't guarentee he'll like your pet, though.

Q: Can my pet be Surrender's friend?
A: Well, sure! He loves making friends, especially mares. ;)

Q: Can (insert pet name here) roleplay with NoSweetSurrenders/Surrender?
A: Possibly. If his roleplay section says open, and you're not going to use an anthro form, then yes, as long as your pet is appealing.

Q: How do I know if my pet's appealing?
A: Well, your pet must be unique, for starters. No stealing any ideas from someone else. Your pet also has to have a personality that could match up with Surrender's, or else he probably won't like your pet. And your pet has to have a web page that is at least 70% complete so that I can read up on how literate you are, and if it's worth it to roleplay.

Q: How literate do I have to be to roleplay with you?
A: Well, you have to at least be semi-literate. This means that you use no chatspeak and such because I do not understand chatspeak very well. It's hard enough roleplaying with people who have poor spelling and/or grammar.

Q: (Insert name here) is carrying Surrender's foals! That means they're mates, now, right?!
A: o.O
No. If we've never roleplayed before, how could he have mated with (insert name here)? And even if we have roleplayed, if he doesn't even like your pet, then he wouldn't have mated with them.

Q: Can I lyke b ur nf? 111
A: Umm... -looks in chatspeak dictionary- AH! Lyke, totally! 11

Q: Relly? 11
A: No. -.-

Q: Can I copy the prophecy?
A: No. I made it up, and if you want one so bad, then you should make one yourself... or if you ask nicely, I might make one for you.

Q: Can my uni/equine be able to make everyone around them calmer?
A: You may not. This was my idea, and not yours, so please respect that and do not steal it. Theft is against the law, and is not cool.

Q: Can I copy having my uni/equine go through the tragedies?
A: Again, you may not do such a thing. It is my idea and my plot for Surrender's story. Please think of your own ideas and plots, since stealing is against the law.

Q: Can I copy his design?
A: Again, this is theft, so please do not. Surrender's design is © I, Burnt Out Souls. If you do so, I will hunt you down. Rawr.

Q: Can (insert name here) be Surrender's sibling?
A: Possibly. If they were older than him, and they had the traits of bay parents, then perhaps. You wouldn't be able to use my storyline, though.

Q: Can I copy the music?
A: Feel free to!

Q: Can I copy your pictures?
A: Please do not. I spend time and effort drawing my pictures, and I don't want to be ripped off of my effort.

Q: Can I borrow/steal your art?
A: Well, that's a stupid question. Should you not know that I will refuse?

Q: Can I draw a picture of Surrender?
A: Why, of course! You don't have to ask! I love fan art!

Q: Can I use the HTML?
A: No. It is mine and mine only.

Q: Can you teach me HTML/how to draw?
A: Drawing is too hard to teach over the internet, and if you want HTML/CSS coding, go to here.

Q: So-and-so stole from you.
A: Oh dear, that's not very nice, now is it. Thank you for telling me, and I shall deal with this is an appropriate manner. And you shall remain anonymous.

Q: Will you make something for me?
A: Dependable on who you are and such.

Farewell

Coming soon.

Never surrender

Lyrics

Simple And Clean - Utada Hikaru (Kingdom Hearts)

When you walk away
You don't hear me say please
Oh baby, don't go
Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight
It's hard to let it go

You're giving me too many things
Lately you're all I need
You smiled at me and said,

Don't get me wrong I love you
But does that mean I have to meet your father?
When we are older you'll understand
What I meant when I said "No
I don't think life is quite that simple

When you walk away
You don't hear me say please
Oh baby, don't go
Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight
It's hard to let it go

The daily things
That keep us all busy
Are confusing me
Thats when you came to me
And said

Wish I could prove I love you
But does that mean I have to walk on water?
When we are older you'll understand
It's enough when I say so
And maybe somethings are that simple

When you walk away
You don't hear me say please
Oh baby, don't go
Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight
It's hard to let it go

Hold me
Whatever lies beyond this morning
Is a little later on
Regardless of warnings the future doesn't scare me at all
Nothing's like before

When you walk away
You don't hear me say please
Oh baby, don't go
Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight
It's hard to let it go

Hold me
Whatever lies beyond this morning
Is a little later on
Regardless of warnings the future doesn't scare me at all
Nothing's like before

Hold me
Whatever lies beyond this morning
Is a little later on
Regardless of warnings the future doesn't scare me at all
Nothing's like before

NAVIGATION
{~x~} The Legend
{~x~} Introduction
{~x~} Facts
{~x~} Prophecy
{~x~} History
{~x~} Journal
{~x~} Love
{~x~} Friends
{~x~} Rivals
{~x~} Family
{~x~} Cherishes/Loathes
{~x~} Awards
{~x~} Toy Box
{~x~} Fan Art
{~x~} Wall of Shame
{~x~} F.A.Q.
{~x~} Farewell
{~x~} Lyrics




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