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We will be on a Hiatus starting on July 14th to August 19th.
Due to the fact I'm going on vacation. I'm very sorry for the inconvience.
I will be reviewing right after I come back.
Sorry for the long, long, long wait!

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Welcome to Scream.

Welcome to Scream Reviews, guest. I'm Sandy, I own all the Scream sites: Scream Screenies, Scream Reviews and Scream Buttons(coming soon!). I also own Polaroids which is also coming soon! [: Unfortunately this is only 1 of the 3 sites. Be sure to request a review or be affiliated here! Just make sure the requests are open! So what are you waiting for? Go take a poke around, just remember to request a review!

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First Impression(20)
This is the most important thing to be judged on. This means when I first see it: What do I think of it. First Impressions also make a person want to stay and poke around or leave.

Content(15)
There are 2 things here that can go wrong with content. You can have too much content; making me not want to read it at all. And, having too less content. You get marked down for both. And if you stole the content(I poke around petpages a lot. So I'd know if you stole it) you'll get a total 0. Even if it's a little section.

Organization(15)
Are there meaningless graphics? Are there sections to divide things up? Is everything in it's proper place? Can I find everything easily?

Spelling and Grammar(10)
No chatspeak(pls, thnx, bai, etc.). And no spelling or grammar mistakes.

Layout(20)
A layout needs to be judged on a lot of things. Which includes the fonts, texts and color choices. Some examples are: the fonts are too complex to read, the text is too small or too big, I can't read everything, the colours go well together, the text is too small and I can't read, it's too big, making it really unnessary. I'll mark all of those down. I also love music so if your site has music I'd love to mark that. Is the music appropriate for the site? Is it too loud? Does it make me want to turn it off when I go on the site? If you don't have music on your site, I won't mark it down.

Important Site Features(10)
Having an updates section(will not be marked down if you don't have one because some sites don't require any). Have it organized: divide each update so it won't get mixed up. And have them in order from newest to oldest. Having a credits section is always good. If you created everything by yourself; credit yourself. It just shows how great you are at making CSS or buttons, etc. You need a link back or a link to neomail you. For questions, comments, requests, etc. You don't need a 88x31 or an icon. A simple text link also works. Having a site counter is also a very good idea. It makes it look professional(and you can show off how many hits you've gotten).
You will get marked down for all unless indicated.

Overall(10)
Overall how do I think your site is. Is it a 1 or a 10(10 being the greatest)? Would I want to request a button or be listed there?

= 100%

Reviews

Newest on top

Neopians Retreat


First Impression: 20/20
The banner totally caught my attention. Great job! [:
Content: 15/15
Just enough, great job. [:
Organization: 0/15
You made your site so that people would request stuff and you can make it for them right? Well, they won't request if they don't see the right thing. Like where the forms are and more info. Look at some other sites. They put their most important things at the top where the audience can see once they get on the site.
Spelling and Grammar: 0/10
I found multiple spelling mistakes.Please read over your work.
Layout: 16/20
Unfortunately I can't see links and some words because the colour is too light.
Important Site Features: 8/10
You have a lot of site features but you need to put a navigation in so that your audience can access to what they need easily.
Overall: 4/10
Honesty, this sites needs some improvements. Fix it some more and we can talk. :P

= 55%
Good job! Unfortunately there's not award for your score.
You can get a re-review in a week.

Richie's Ads


First Impression: 20/20
The banner totally caught my attention. Great job! [:
Content: 10/15
You should clean out your Updates once in a while because it makes me feel like that it's a lot to read.
Organization: 0/15
Whoa. :O That's a large Navigation. It makes me kind of confused. The part on the side bar that says Notes and News. You shouldn't put news there. You should put it in the Introduction or the Updates. You use your Ad site for a lot of different things, which can get people confused. You either change the name of your site or make another site for those pixels and backgrounds. I don't get what the Coming Soon on this very page... section. You don't need to put the Crediting section. You need to put the Key section near the top. I don't get the Listed... section. You can only get Listed at Directories, not button request sites. In the FAQ section, you need to put a link under the text area so that people can neomail you questions. For the How to get on section, you should put How to Get Page Hits.
Spelling and Grammar: 0/10
SOTM(plural) is not spelt SOTM's. It's just SOTMs. Where you wrote Avie, you should write the whole word. It helps a lot of people. Directory(plural) is not spelt Directorys, it's Directories. Extra(plural) is not spelt Extra's, it's spelt Extras. Where you wrote under the SOTM buttons: "See RA at Wolf..." You should write the whole word for RA. Here's another mistake: "...on nice snowy..." It should be "...one, nice, snowy day." Another mistake: "...made this here site to..." It should be "...made this site here to..." It's Navigation not Navagation. It should be Awards for Me not Awards to Me. And don't type stuff. It's a lack of vocabulary. It makes me think that you're too lazy to type up what the "stuff" really is. Yay! (Again) should be Yay(again)! When you type brackets: "( Must sa..." You don't need the space to seperate the words with the brackets. It should be: (Must sa...
Layout: 20/20
The colours look great together and I can read everything. [:
Important Site Features -8/10
For the Link Back section, you need to put links for the userlookups.
Overall: 3/10
Honesty, this isn't the best site ever, and you could use a lot more effort on it by reading over what you type and when you organize your sections, be sure to check if it's important enough to put near the top.

= 53%
Good job! Unfortunately there's no award for your score.
You can get a re-review in a week.

Clo's Pet UFA


First Impression: 17/20
My first impression was... "wow, it's plain." But that's the point of the look up I think. And the peas really caught my attention. :P
Content: 15/15
Just enough, great job. [:
Organization: 13/15
It's great that you put your name to request but please put a link there. I see your link in the Navigation but it's easier if you put it right on Neomail me.
Spelling and Grammar: 8/10
Found 2! The underlined part is the part with the is mistake. You have to read the whole sentence to understand why it's wrong.
...got everything a bit more orginised.
and...
...make sure you but ALOT of effort into...
Layout: 20/20
The colours look great together but the background is really plain.
Important Site Features: 10/10
Love your site!
Overall: 10/10
Did I mention, I love your site? :P Especially the back to top button. Very creative.

= 93%
Awesome job! Go pick your award up now!

Faboo Links


First Impression: 20/20
The banner totally caught my attention.
Content: 15/15
Just enough, great job. [:
Organization: 13/15
It's great that you put your name to request but please put a link there. I see your link in the Navigation but it's easier if you put it right on Neomail me.
Spelling and Grammar: 10/10
No spelling mistakes! [:
Layout: 20/20
The colours look great together!
Important Site Features: 8/10
Love your Updates but you should write the dates in ordered in. Like: DD/MM/YYYY.
Overall: 10/10
You're very creative, I love how you came up with commenting on each listed link. :D I think I want to be listed there. :O

= 96%
Awesome job! Go pick your award up now!

Captains


First Impression: 20/20
The banner totally caught my attention. Great job! [:
Content: 15/15
Just enough, great job. [:
Organization: 10/15
Great use of your navigation system! :D I know you used your Extras section for two things, but I think you should split it. Like a Reviewed By and a Credits. Even though it's very less credit, it could come in handy!
Spelling and Grammar: 10/10
No spelling mistakes! [:
Layout: 20/20
All the colours look great together and I can read everything! :D I love your choice of colours. :P
Important Site Features: 8/10
I was looking for your counter and it's hidden! When you split up your Extras section, put your counter in the credits section, or just make a new one.
Overall: 10/10
I love your site. Althought I don't participate in Caption Contests, this is very handy, I might considerate one day. [:

= 93%
Awesome job! Go pick your award up now!

Jackiiee's Reviews


First Impression: 10/20
It looked like the ocean... in a way. :/ It's really plain.
Content: 15/15
Just enough, great job. [:
Organization: 7/15
In your navigation section. There's a small cluster, really un-organized. :/ And the Criteria section is also a cluster.
Spelling and Grammar: 1/10
I found 9 spelling mistake! You've got to read over your work!
Layout: 20/20
All the colours go great together! Blue, black, white all match the Cookie Monster banner. [:
Important Site Features: 10/10
You've got everything! :D Great job!
Overall: 4/10
I hate to say it, this isn't the best site ever. It could use a lot of improvments. Keep trying!

= 67%
Awesome job! Go pick up your award now!

Defying Gravity Reviews


First Impression: 17/20
I love your layout. But I think it's a bit plain. Although I love the banner. It really draws my attention.
Content: 9/15
There's a lot of content. I think it would help if you got rid of some sections on your sidebar. And shorten your Updates. Clean it out like once a month.
Organization: 7/15
Very organized! Great job. But I think the problem is that you have 2 places where you put the reviews. Which is kind of stupid. No offence! But I think(I got to quit saying that!)... your audience will know where to check for their score. You don't need to re-write it! I also think you should put the Contact section near the top, because it's very important for people to neomail you.
Spelling and Grammar: 9/10
I found 1 spelling mistake! Fix it!
Layout: 18/20
All the colours go well together. Great job. [:
Important Site Features: 5/10
I think the thing about your Updates is that you need to organize it more properly. Put a dash in between every update or use some fancy symbol to divide. The reason I'm saying this is because it looks like it's a lot to read. Other than that, it's pretty good. [:
Overall: 10/10
I love your site. I wish my site could be as good as your site.

= 75%
Awesome job! Go pick up your award now!

Connie's Fake Avs


First Impression: 7/20
I thought the background was really plain and the glittery header is really distracting but without it, it would be really plain and i wouldn't want to stay.
Content: 15/15
There was enough content. Good job. [:
Organization: 9/15
I found everything easily.
Spelling and Grammar: 4/10
I found a couple of spelling and grammar mistakes. Try to fix them!
Layout: 18/20
The colours look great together. It's just too plain.
Important Site Features: 10/10
Everything is good. [:
Overall: 6/10
Other than a few flaws it was really good! :D

= 69%
Awesome job! Go pick up your award now!

Stormy Graphics


First Impression: 2/20
I thought the background was really plain and the banner didn't catch my attention. I wouldn't stay if I were there.
Content: 15/15
There was enough content. Good job.
Organization: 9/15
I found everything easily except the credits section. I've said this to someone else before that you should make another section for it. And create a navigation section so it can be a lot more easier because everyone these days are so lazy.
Spelling and Grammar: 7/10
I found a couple of spelling and grammar mistakes. Try to fix them!
Layout: 20/20
The colours look great together. Great job!
Important Site Features: 5/10
I was trying to neomail you telling you that I finished your review and I noticed you don't have a link to your neomail or look up. Fix that![:
Overall: 7/10
Other than a few flaws it was really good! :D

= 64%
Awesome job! Go pick up your award now!

Converse AllStarz


First Impression: 16/20
I'd definitely would want to stay. Not because I love Converse. [x But your background is too plain.
Content: 15/15
Nice job!
Organization: 14/15
I found everything except a link to your user look up. You written it but it's easier for your audience to click it.
Spelling and Grammar: 3/10
I found a couple of spelling and grammar mistakes. Try to fix them!
Layout: 20/20
Love it!
Important Site Features: 10/10
You have everything! And you did it all very organized! Great job!
Overall: 7/10
Other than a few flaws it was really good! :D

= 85%
Awesome job! Go pick up your award now!

Ace


First Impression: 20/20
Awesome banner; it really caught my attention. [x
Content: 15/15
You have just the right amount of content for the site.
Organization: 10/15
Everything is organized too well. You're a neat-freak... in a good way. [x I'll give 'props' to that. I think the hard thing is to find the right thing in the right rection because you had so less sections and you had sections for sections.
Spelling and Grammar: 10/10
I read everything and I found no grammar or spelling mistakes. I skipped the blog part because I didn't find any in the other ones and obviously there was a lot to read. xx.
Layout: 20/20
I just love your site too much! [: The colours went well together. But I think there was too much blue, it was too plain.
Important Site Features: 10/10
You have everything you need; great job!
Overall: 10/10
I think you did a great job

= 95%
Awesome job! Go pick up your award now!

The Button Maker


First Impression: 19/20
I love the background. It's very original; which is good. [: It's sort of plain but other than that, it's very good.
Content: 15/15
You have too less writing but it's just enough information for the audience.
Organization: 14/15
I couldn't find the credits section so if you put a link in your navigation or have another section for it. It'd be easier to find. [:
Spelling and Grammar: 10/10
No chatspeak, grammar mistakes or spelling mistakes. Nice! [:
Layout: 15/20
Everything was great except for parts where there where links. The pink was too light to read. Since there was a lot of them scattered all over the site, I took off a lot of points for that. Because it's very important.
Important Site Features: 9/10
Awesome! Your updates section is ordered from newest to oldest. [: You have a mini credits section attached to the end of another section; which made it hard to find. But other than that, everything else is great. [:
Overall: 10/10
I thought your site was awesome; I'd definetly want to request a button! :D

= 92%
Awesome job! Go pick up your award now!

Vitamin B


First Impression: 18/20
The scribbles at the beginning caught my attention & are so cute. [x And it was sort of plain.
Content: 15/15
Awesome buttons. :D
Organization: 15/15
The scribbles at the begginning are meaningless but it makes a great first impression so I'll let it slide. [x I see you've divided everything and I can find everything very easily.
Spelling and Grammar: 7/10
I found a couple of spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes but other than that, it's pretty good. [:
Layout: 20/20
I can see everything, the colours go great together. Mostly because the background is white. [x Everything goes with white. There was no music so music was not marked down.
Important Site Features: 9/10
You didn't have a section for credit but you did have a mini part where there was a little bit of credit. You have a link back button and you have a small icon to neomail to and a text link to your look up.
Overall: 9/10
Other than a couple of flaws, it was really good. Great job! Keep up the good work.

= 93%
Awesome job! Go pick up your award now!

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