Marsh-Mellowz

Welcome! This is Strummit's review site! I wanted to give some advice to some younger sites and to some sites that need help. I also want to see the best of the best sites. If I asked you to do this it doesn't mean I wanted to make fun of you or criticize you. I just want to rate your site! Ok, well read the rules and fill out the form!
Xo, Layne

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Drops Of Jupiter By Train



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Rating Criteria

First Impression /10: A great first impression is a great quality in a site, if I want to go back a page, well... Let's just so you could do better.

Content /35: In order to get a high score on "content" the content has to have good quality, there has to be a varity, and there has to be enough.

Updating/Blogging /15: How in the world are your viewers going to know what you've been doing? Or when your on? You need to update at least once a week. If your on vacation, you need to state so on your site.

Language/Grammer: /5: OMG! Ur site has to hve NO-CHATSPEAK!!! None. You also have to check your spelling and your puntuation.

Site Layout /20: OH. MY. GOSH. This factor is REALLY important when it comes to a site. Your site has to match and the qaulity of the layout has to be good. I would rather it not be premade.

Navagation /10: If I can't find my way around your site, chances are, no one will and then you get very little viewers.

Other /5: Just things I notice around you site that stands out, good or bad.

The Reviews

Chokato Graphics

First Impression 10/10: When I first see your site, I want to stay a while. I also like the music.

Content 32/35: You have ALOT of graphics! There is a varity! But some are from other sites.

Update/Blogging 14/15: You do update! And at least once a week!!! But you should get a marquee, Then it wouldn't be that much busy.

Language/Grammer 3/5: This is really good, but some was kind of...

Site Layout 15/20: Your site is kind of busy and it's hard to find tings. Try to fix the far left table. And use textboxes.

Navagation 9/10: Once again, busy. But It's really nice.

Other 5/5: Over all, nice site! A lot of views!

Total: 88/100

Unbroken Music

First Impression 10/10: I really like the music! Try to get a full version.

Content 31/35: You have very little graphics! I know you just started over so I'm not taking much off. You have a good variety of music!

Update/Blogging 14/15: You do update! Try to keep the other updates up.

Language/Grammer 5/5: No mistakes! Good!

Site Layout 17/20: The layout is kind of off and the font is hard to read.

Navagation 8/10: It's hard to kind the "What's Playing" and the "link back" parts in your site.

Other 3/5: An the affie part, add etheir a marquee or text. A lot of views!

Total: 88/100

Disney Adoption Agency

First Impression 10/10: I really like the music! Nice Layout!

Content 35/35: You should put text boxes on on your graphics. I think they are awsome though.

Update/Blogging 0/15: You don't update =(

Language/Grammer 5/5: No mistakes! Good!

Site Layout 18/20: The layout is kind cut off at the end.

Navagation 8/10: It's tough to find how to credit you & what somethings are.

Other 5/5: Nice job!

Total: 81/100

A Thousand Teardrops

First Impression 9/10: Agian, I really like the music! A problem though, would be that the layout takes a while to laod. ={

Content 33/35: I love the graphics but some aren't very origanal. =(

Update/Blogging 13/15: You do update =) But...=( You don't keep at least four oher news. This is important because if you deleted all of your graphics 8/12/01 and someone hasn't who hasn't visited since 6/29/01 and the visit 9/20/08 would be like: "What the?!

Language/Grammer 5/5: No mistakes! Good!

Site Layout 15/20: The layout, like I said, takes a while to laod and I think it is hard to find the scroll boxes and to scroll.

Navagation 10/10: Good job!

Other 5/5: Nice job!

Total: 90/100

Classic Day

First Impression 10/10: Love the music! Nice Layout! It's so mature.

Content 35/35: AH-MAZ-ING! Your Graphics are really good!

Update/Blogging 15/15: You do update! =)

Language/Grammer 5/5: No mistakes! Good!

Site Layout 18/20: The I don't like how you put rules and rules on the enter and some people have to go back to the first page to see them.

Navagation 10/10: Perfect!

Other 5/5: Nice job!

Total: 98/100

Amy's Graphix

First Impression 10/10: Love the colors!

Content 33/35: Um, well the quality is kinda... Well let's just say they get better as you scroll down.

Update/Blogging 15/15: You do update =D The only thing is, that I would suggest a text box or a marquee. Other then that, it's perfect!

Language/Grammer 5/5: No mistakes! The only thing though, is Graphix, but that is excusable.

Site Layout 15/20: Ok, so... They layout rocks, it just is extremmly busy. I would suggest, instead of haveing a bunch of headers saying theatre, when it colud be anything, use one BIG header saying: USERLOOKUPS. Then make smaller headers saying disney, theatre, etc.. & and Marquees and text boxes =D

Navagation 10/10: Good job! Just, once again, either add a maquee or a text box.

Other 5/5: Nice job!

Total: 92/100

Doll City

First Impression 10/10: When you first enter your site, you think 'OMG! nice site!' This is a good thing.

Content 30/35: I'm sorry, but NONE of the dolls are 100% yours. They are all from the doll place. I know you made the dolls but, at least give the site some credit on YOUR site, & the images. You're very stylish!

Update/Blogging 15/15: You do update! =) And alot too! Like I said in other reviews, you might want to put a text box or a marquee.

Language/Grammer 5/5: No mistakes! Good!

Site Layout 17/20: Good! Accually good! The only thing is that I've seen things VERY close to it in my site hunting days, it's still good though!

Navagation 9/10: Perfect! Try to add navagation for the parts of your city.

Other 5/5: Nice job!

Total: 91/100

Paris Metro

First Impression 10/10: Your site has a very good picture. The only thing is that it's a little to big.

Content 30/35: Ok blend: Not so good, but I give them a 7 out of ten. The site layout is AWSOME! Just try to make more. The petpage layouts are ok. Try to make two colums & three colums for those who aren't to good at graphics.

Update/Blogging 15/15: Ok, so you update, which is good. You make things short and not have a paragraph long entry. Plus, you keep a few from the past, but not to many.

Language/Grammer 5/5: No mistakes! Good!

Site Layout 19/20: REALLY Good! The headers are a little hard to read though.

Navagation 10/10: Whoa. You have great navagation! I mean it's eays to read and you have it on every page!

Other 5/5: Nice job!

Total: 94/100

Kandi Kid

First Impression 10/10: I really was like, WOW, when I came apon your site. I like the way the colors just go together.

Content 31/35: Ok, music. I would suggest getting full versions. Neomial me to get a useable site.The quality is good on your content.

Update/Blogging 15/15: You update! =) You keep some old ones too!

Language/Grammer 5/5: No mistakes! Good!

Site Layout 15/20: The layout obviously wasn't made by you. & The mini-headers aren't matching.

Navagation 0/10: You have no navagation! And 'neomail me!' 'Befriend me' don't count.

Other 5/5: Nice job!

Total: 86/100

Blow A Kiss Designs

First Impression 10/10: The picture takes a while to load s all you can see is the top of the site. It looks slick.

Content 35/35: Graphics are relly good! you haave alot of them too!

Update/Blogging 15/15: Ok, so you update, which is good. You keep some old ones too.

Language/Grammer 3/5: Huh, you don't capitilize! THIS IS IMPORTANT!!!;)

Site Layout 19/20: Your layut is cool. The picture on top need to not be so square though. I mean like, smooth the edges, just make it fit it! Make some cool shape around it!

Navagation 0/10: OMG! You have no navagation! NO WAY!

Other 5/5: Nice job!

Total: 87/100

Yummy Lullaby

First Impression 8/10: Ok, When I first saw your site, I kind of thought the site had aa cool Bledel Picture but will be flawfull(word?).

Content 31/35: Ok, music. I would suggest getting full versions. Neomial me to get a useable site.The quality is good on your content.

Update/Blogging 15/15: You do update! =)Good job!

Language/Grammer 5/5: No mistakes! Good!

Site Layout 17/20: The layout was made by you! Yay you! The only thing is that the font is real small & the headers are messed up.

Navagation 9/10: Your navagation is small! Make the text bigger!.

Other 5/5: Nice job!

Total: 89/100

Wunderbar

First Impression 10/10: It's cool.

Content 30/35: backgrounds on the pages aren't made by you. The icons and the site namers are really good though!

Update/Blogging 0/15: You don't update! =(

Language/Grammer 5/5: No mistakes but, there are spme things that were probably misspelled on purpose.

Site Layout 10/20: The layout isn't made by ypu, nor is it requested. I like it still, though.

Navagation 10/10: No navagation but I don't think you need it.

Other 5/5: Nice job!

Total: 70/100

Sakuranbo

First Impression 10/10: I love the top picture! It's so good!

Content 35/35: Your graphics are really good!

Update/Blogging 0/15: You don't update! =(

Language/Grammer 5/5: No mistakes!

Site Layout 20/20: The layout Is great! I love your style!

Navagation 10/10: You have it!

Other 5/5: Nice job!

Total: 85/100

Simple

First Impression 8/10: When I first come, i think that the site won't be very good.

Content 35/35: Your graphics are good!

Update/Blogging 15/15: You update! =)

Language/Grammer 5/5: No mistakes!

Site Layout 15/20: The layout Is ok! It looks like it was easyily made.

Navagation 5/10: You have somewhat of a navagation, but not really.

Other 5/5: Nice job!

Total: 88/100

Sunset Blvd

First Impression 6/10: When I firstlooked at your site I thought the pictures alittle off.

Content 30/35: Your graphics are really nice! BGut some are iffy. Then some I think are really cool!

Update/Blogging 15/15: You Blog! God job!

Language/Grammer 5/5: Really Good!

Site Layout 16/20: The layout Is Good, but it could be better. The background, headers, etc. are REALLY good. But the picture is alittle low quality.

Navagation 5/10: You don't have navigation, but it isn't as needed as some other sites.

Other 5/5: Great job!

Total: 87/100

Turbulence

First Impression 10/10: When I came across your site, I wasw amazed. Your Picture is great!

Content 35/35: Your graphics good quality and you also have alot, and you have diversity!

Update/Blogging 15/15: You are a good blogger!

Language/Grammer 5/5: Great! No gramtical errors!

Site Layout 20/20: The layout Is absolutely FLAWLESS! GREAt job!

Navagation 10/10: You have navigation!

Other 5/5: AWESOME!!!

Total: 100/100

SLT Graphics

First Impression 9/10: Ok the first thing I saw was the main picture, it is good. I like the font and the only thing is that the updates thing and the rest of your site is to far apart.

Content 30/35: The quality of your graphics is sometimes really good and then sometimes Okay. Your moderately diverse, Biut you have a good quantity

Update/Blogging 15/15: You both bllog and update! Good for you!

Language/Grammer 4/5: You use some chatspeak. I would not suggest to use chatspeak because some people hate this.

Site Layout 17/20: The layout is good but it's like you have split the bottom and top for two diffrent things.

Navagation 10/10: You have navigation!

Other 5/5: There's nothing else.

Total: 90/100

Emily's Graphics

First Impression 5/10: The picture is alittle blurry and tha font is ok.

Content 30/35: The quality of the graphics on your page is iiffy. The blends and glitters are really nioce but the layouts aren't as great.

Update/Blogging 15/15: You update! Good job!

Language/Grammer 4/5: No chatspeak! No spelling errors, etc. Good Job!

Site Layout 17/20: The picture again, is blurry, but the Headers, background, etc. is GREAT!

Navagation 7/10: You don't have navigatioin but it isn't really needed on your site.

Other 5/5: There is nothing else to say.

Total: 83/100

Precious Dreams

First Impression 5/10: IT took a REALLY long time for your site to load.

Content 30/35: The quantity and diversity of your graphics is amazingly great! The quality is alright. Some graphics are extremo awesome. The some are okay.

Update/Blogging 15/15: You update! Good job!

Language/Grammer 5/5: No errors, great!

Site Layout 15/20: I like the green theme! The words and scrollbars are not fitting in the sidebars, though.

Navagation 10/10: You have navagation, which is good for your site!

Other 5/5: Everything else is good.

Total: 90/100

Disney Animations & More

First Impression 0/10: I first though that this was going to be one of those heapy sites. That is not good.

Content 35/35: Your graphics are great. I lie how you made them yourself! You also have alot of graphics! Good quantity too.

Update/Blogging 15/15: Good, you update!

Language/Grammer 5/5: No errors, great!

Site Layout 15/20: The picture is good, but the background is not as great. The font is pretty too.

Navagation 10/10: You have navagation, which is great for your site!

Other 5/5: I was proved wrong. Your site is good!

Total: 85/100

Splashout Designs

First Impression 10/10: My first impression on your site was that the site would be REALLY GOOD!

Content 35/35: Your graphics are great. I like how you made them yourself! You also have alot of graphics! Good quantity too.

Update/Blogging 15/15: Great, you blog!

Language/Grammer 5/5: No errors found!

Site Layout 20/20: I like your layout!

Navagation 10/10: Navagation, check! Good!

Other 5/5: Your site name is great!

Total: 100/100

Hollywood Graphix

First Impression 10/10: The thing I thought was that that this would be a great site!

Content 35/35: Your graphics are suiperb! They're awesome!

Update/Blogging 15/15: Superb! You are a updater!

Language/Grammer 5/5: No spelling mistakes!

Site Layout 20/20: Your layout is too busy. abut all other is.

Navagation 10/10: You have navagation!!

Other 3/5: The song on your site skips a little.

Total: 98/100

Kandy Crush

First Impression 9/10: The first thing I thought when I came across your site was that I recegnized(pretty sure thats not how you spell that) the layout. This isn't that great but it's not that big of a deal.

Content 30/35: Your graphics are great but you need more that are by you. You also have diversity and good quantity.

Update/Blogging 15/15: Awesome, you blog!

Language/Grammer 5/5: Nice spelling!

Site Layout 20/20: Your layout is good. I love your title picture!

Navagation 5/10: You have no site-navagation. You don't really need it though.

Other 5/5: Nothing further!!!

Total: 89/100

Insperable Music and Layouts

First Impression 10/10: My first impression on your site was that the siter would be REALLY GOOD!

Content 30/35: Your graphics are not the best in the world but the're better then some.

Update/Blogging 15/15: Woah! You blog and update!!!

Language/Grammer 5/5: You have no mistakes!

Site Layout 15/20: YOur layout is kind of busy!

Navagation 10/10: You have great navagation

Other 5/5: I like your site!

Total: 90/100

Lightning's Graphics

First Impression 10/10: The first thing I thought when I saw your site was that everything would be REALLY GREAT!

Content 20/35: It looks like you didn't try hard enough on the graphics. Try harder! The Backgrounds and pictures are beutiful

Update/Blogging 15/15: Woah! You blog and update!!!

Language/Grammer 4/5: I found a few tiny mistakes.

Site Layout 20/20: Your layout is BEAUTIFUL!!!!

Navagation 10/10: Your navagation is good!

Other 5/5: Love the songs I heard when I looked at your guild layouts. What's my age again? Signs that caution, "Sixteen's Unsafe".We really need to see this through. GO BLINK!!! Also Seven minutes in Heaven?! OMG! Shake it? Everytime we touch?! Viva la Vida?! WOAH you have good taste!

Total: 84/100

Toxique Outburst

First Impression 10/10: The thing I first thought was that the site was amazing looking!

Content 30/35: Your Picture things are beautiful!!! Amazing! The only thing is that the headers in your layouts are not so great. Work on that!

Update/Blogging 15/15: YOu blog! Cool!

Language/Grammer 2/5: You have some mistakes.

Site Layout 20/20: Your layout is awesome!!!!! Congratz! You've uncoverd Layne secret #588(!): Layne has all the Hilary Duff CDs from when she was younger.

Navagation 10/10: I love how you have the navagation wherever you go on your site!

Other 5/5: Great Site!!

Total: 92/100

Brilliance

First Impression 10/10: When I copied the link on the adress bar and cicked the "Go" button I tought "Good! She knows how to blend!!!

Content 20/35:Your site is great but some of your icons are blurry and look like you just added text to a picture and saved it. Try adding more Pizazz! Like extra designs. Also when I was looking at your layouts, I saw that your fonts in the pictures were boring! I saw some pretty cool ones. Try adding colors! Your guild layout pictures are cool but the text and textboxes are plain! =( I know you can do better.

Update/Blogging 15/15: You have a blog and an update section!! Good for you!

Language/Grammer 5/5: No mistakes.

Site Layout 20/20: The layout is cool! I like how all the pictures "go".

Navagation 10/10: Yup! You have navagation!

Other 5/5: Cool Site!

Total: 85/100

Forced-Love

First Impression 10/10: I came across your site in awe. The Neo-page and your layout blew me away! Your VERY talented!

Content 32/35: Your Myspace things are Extremely well done! You need more graphics though.

Update/Blogging 15/15: You blog! Yay!!

Language/Grammer 0/5: You have alot of gramatical mistakes, AND I found an ugly word and that isn't good help to promote your site.

Site Layout 20/20: The layout is genius!!! Good job!

Navagation 10/10: You have navagation!

Other 0/5: You have NO link-back buttons! You need theese ASAP! I had to make you one!!!Of course it was a five-minute no time taken to do it, so it's not so great.

Total: 89/100

Year of the Rat

First Impression 8/10: The layout took a while to load. =( BUT! While I was waiting I saw the background and thought that the site would be good.

Content 27/35: You're not diverse at all! You need more then just icons! Trust me, you'll get TONS more people if you have more. Also, your icons are great but they need some more pizzaz! Try adding stuff to it.

Update/Blogging 0/15: You do NOT blog at all! This is REALLY important!

Language/Grammer 4.5/5: I found two punctuation errors, but that was it.

Site Layout 15.5/20: The layout is not the best I've ever seen. Try makeing a layout on your own! Your just might b really good at it, even though it seems hard. =)

Navagation 10/10: You have no navagatuion but you don't need it. Accully you have a link to you "Pick up" site and that kind of counts.

Other 5/5: None

Total: 70/100

Toxic Exhilaration

First Impression 10/10: My first impression was that your site would be great.

Content 30/35: Your graphics are good. The layouts are kind of dull. Add more to them.

Update/Blogging 15/15: You update!

Language/Grammer 2/5: I found tons of punctuation errors.

Site Layout 15/20: There is a couple of stray lines. Also, the border for the main picture looks very wierd. Speaking of borders, I think you need some on your colums. The blend and header is really great though.

Navagation 10/10: You have navagation!

Other 5/5: None

Total: 87/100

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