My name is Nuzzle (ohtheinjustice) and this is my application for Varien_Avidan the shadow krawk! I would like to begin with a brief synopsis of my goals for Varien should I be chosen as her lucky new owner.
1. Her color and gender would remain unchanged - as you can see, I was inspired by the idea of a dark-colored, female krawk being a seasoned warrior. There are too many tough guys out there and not enough tough girls!
2. She would be entered in beauty contests - I am pretty much obsessed with the beauty contest because I love to put up original art against the other entrants to see how I measure up against others. I plan on collecting as many trophies as I can with Foldara, and it seems perfectly sensible to do the same with Varien_Avidan.
3. She would develop significantly through roleplay - While her backstory is very elaborate and detailed, I left it open-ended specifically for the purpose of character growth and evolution.
4. Her page will be completely custom and loaded with custom graphics - I am already seeking out art trades and adoptables with which to flesh out Varien's character visually, and plan to continue stocking the website with more of my own.

I have been playing neopets since well before krawks existed (I believe if I still knew what my original account was, it would be about 8 years old). I always find myself attracted to games like this because I absolutely love having pets. There hasn't been a time in my life when I didn't have some sort of critter running around my house (right now I own 8 cats). I've played some manner of pet-owning character in every online game I've taken part in, and take it all more seriously than is healthy.
At the moment I own three neopets - Foldara, Gallitzur, and Clovian. Unfortunately, as the shoyru and xweetok were created on a whim while I was still on an extended hiatus from the game, they have little purpose beyond their own existence. Foldara, on the other hand, I plan on developing as extensively as I've done here for your dear Varien_Avidan!

Yeah, I know there are probably a good few krawks and draiks and what have you up for adoption, and everyone wants a krawk or a draik because that's the cool thing to have. However, I can say with full confidence that I do not want Varien_Avidan simply because she is a krawk. If I wanted a rare pet, I could take my happy little Jetsam or make something like a buzz or ruki and ride off into the sunset. They're their own type of rare, are they not? I could get easy BC trophies, yadda yadda, live happily ever after. However, I wasn't really interested in having a rare pet simply for its rarity. I admit I've looked at a good number of peophins, lupes, and kougras UFA before I ran into Varien, and they aren't rare in the slightest. I could have had any one of them with less effort and fretting poured into an acceptable application, but unlike them Varien had potential. I saw that Avi was UFA and immediately this persona leapt unbidden into my head. I had this feeling that I could just take the krawk in my imagination and run with it for ages, expanding upon it like some artistic masterpiece. I wanted to make this little dream of mine into reality, and so for several days I did nothing but put down the character in my head onto paper and write Varien's story.
In short, I want Varien_Avidan because of this idea of mine that has so enthralled me. It's new, it's innovative, and it has already helped my art evolve more quickly than I previously thought possible(I was uncomfortable with humanoid forms, 75% profiles, frontals, backs, and the like). For the artistic growth alone I already have reason to thank Varien and Grinkbunni, and I will never regret making such an effort to apply.
Oh dear, I've written a novel. =X sowwies.

So where did all this "I am woman krawk hear me roar and see my shiny sword" stuff come from? Well, when I saw Varien up for adoption, I pulled from my love of adventure, personal experience, shiny objects, and tough, warrior-esque personas to create a multifaceted individual with a driving goal (revenge upon Darigan) and the potential for character evolution. I was hoping to create a fresh new personality on the face of Neopia and truly hope I have succeeded.

Curiosity has brought you here to the northern shores of Mystery Island, where not even wild neopets leave their tracks in the wave-licked sand. You follow the coastline west, intrigued by the vague suggestion of a rock formation in the distance. A small cave mouth gapes at you as you approach.
With some difficulty you exercise caution. You can tell by the patterns in the sand that a creature lives here, in a place where not even wild neopets should live. The sun is setting, staining the rocks red with its bloody light, drawing you in toward the escarpment like a moth to flame. No sooner have you begun to walk, however, than you feel the ominous bite of a sword pressed to the small of your back.
What are you doing here?" The voice is deep, velvety, and bristling with foul humor, but distinctly feminine. One clawed hand roughly turns you about where you stand, leaving you facing a coal-skinned krawk with chilling blue eyes. She wears well-polished silver armor with gold filigree along the edges, and gripped firmly in her ready hand is a long, perilously curved sword with a simple black handle.
For the moment, you are speechless. The krawk presses her reptilian face close to yours and growls deeply in her throat. "You do not belong here. Go home." The command is forceful and grants no room for questioning, but you take her brief silence for an opportunity to entreat the irritated creature.
Voice unsteady, you ask, "What are you doing out here?" The krawk tilts her head thoughtfully, though her sword arm does not relax and her eyes remain narrowed dangerously to slits.
Tail lashing, she straightens imperiously. "I am Varien Avidan, and I live in self-imposed exile on the shoreline where I awoke wounded not long ago." She doesn't elaborate, and you don't press her, reading only that she hides the complete truth. With a wave of shock, your eyes stray to the dreadful scar etching itself along her right side, just below the edge of her breastplate. With a hiss, the krawk named Varien slashes the air inches from your face. "You do not belong here!" She strides purposefully toward the distant cave mouth, tail lashing like a panther's. Cautiously, you use your sudden solitude to explore her home a bit more.

ABOUT VARIEN

Name: Varien_Avidan
Nickname: Avi
Personality: Cunning, aggressive, blunt, loyal, righteous, independent.
Former Occupation: Gladiator (enslaved by Darigan)
Current Occupation: Mercenary
Appearance: 5'4" tall, Dark bluish-violet skin (almost black), ice-blue eyes, pale ice-colored headspikes, often wears a set of silver armor with gold filigree on chest, feet, abdomen, and right arm with a heavy shoulder guard on her right shoulder; She always carries a long, curved sword with 6 inches at the base flamberged.
Hit Points: 217
Strength: 107
Defence: 24
Speed: 50
Intelligence: Very Clever



  • Bladed weapons
  • Training
  • Integrity
  • Independence
  • Neggs =3
  • My pet Gruslen, Koro.
  • Naïveté
  • Darigan and his minions!
  • Strategizing
  • Plushies
  • Small talk

IN HER SPARE TIME...

Fencing - swordplay is one of her last little joys, now that she lives more or less alone (with her silent friend Koro). Driven by the idea of revenge, Varien practices her sword techniques daily, often with her pet gruslen as a mock battling partner or simply a quiet observer. She does not have a scabbard, so the sword commissioned for her by Foldara rarely leaves her hand.
Reading - often Koro ventures into the more civilized areas of Mystery Island and carries back books for Varien (often obtained through morally questionable means). She prefers books that have something to say about battle tactics or weaponry, although she is often even skeptical of those. As was true when she fought in the arena with "Lord" Karawn, Avi likes to do things her own way.
Exploring - After such a lengthy incarceration in Darigan's keep, Varien enjoys the open spaces and fresh air afforded her by the isolated shoreline territory. While out prowling, she is just as likely to be studying the scenery as scouring the immediate area for prey or enemies.

VARIEN'S FRIENDS & FAMILY
Lord" Karawn Kinsley - -
Possibly Varien's closest companion as a gladiator, "Lord" Karawn is a fire lupe with an equally fiery temper. He and Varien befriended one another after several battledomes together, during which time she dubbed him "Lord," because of his officious nature. The title stuck.
Shrike - -
A young blue krawk relatively new in the gladiator arena who developed feelings for Varien. Although she never felt the same for him, she still deeply regrets his death and blames herself for the events which led up to it.
Foldara - -
A nomadic peophin who happened upon Varien shortly after escaping Darigan's keep. She nursed the krawk back to health and helped her cope with her problems.

KOROBEINIKI
a.k.a. Koro

Species: Gruslen
Color: White w/ crimson runic markings
Height: 2' at the withers
Varien discovered Koro in the very cave she now calls home. The Gruslen had gone feral many months ago, and had taken refuge much as she had in the solitude of Mystery Island's northwestern shores. Although at first both showed a decided reluctance toward sharing the same space, Avi and Koro eventually grew close as two lonely creatures are apt to do. Koro is a fierce hunter and protector, often reminding Varien of "Lord" Karawn Kinsley with his steadfast loyalty and ferocity. Koro shadows Varien wherever she goes, be it to hunt or to fight. For her part, Varien has told the Gruslen much of her past (including things she hid even from Karawn), despite the fact that Koro cannot respond - he cannot speak at all.




I remember the first time I saw Varien Avidan. She was leaning against a wall, gazing out at something beyond my understanding, face softly illuminated by light filtering through the largest window in the room - which was, regrettably, quite small. Her smooth, swarthy skin was itself a shadow, her mood identifiable only by the shape of her icy blue eyes.
I thought she was beautiful. But, intimidated by her recalcitrance, I kept my distance in the beginning.
We were both prisoners - I don't know if I will ever count myself lucky enough to know her outside this forsaken place. I don't know how long she's been fighting before I was captured and put to the battledome by Darigan and his lackeys. She never tells me much about her past. Still, I trust her with my life...even believe I am beginning to love her. Every night I fall asleep asking myself, "Will she ever love me, too?"

Excerpt from the journal
of Shrike the gladiator

- - - - - - - - - -

Varien Avidan crouched warily behind the heavy metal door to Darigan's battledome, nerves coiled like springs. Clenched in her right hand was a short, worn gladius, its double-edged blade glinting dully in the flickering candlelight. With a calm sweep of her free hand, she checked her lightweight body armor, and then the door slid open, flooding the dimly lit corridor with sunlight. On the opposite side of the arena stood a colossal tyrannian Grarrl, incensed into hysterics by the roaring crowd.
Varien hissed and leapt forward into the sunlit battlefield, teeth bared and sword held offensively before her. The Grarrl charged to meet his comparatively miniscule opponent with his mouth agape. Varien ducked low at the last moment and slithered between the Grarrl's meaty legs, slashing at his ankles as she passed. The beast staggered to a standstill, then shuffled awkwardly to face the lithe black krawk.
She stood still only for a moment before once again taking flight. Varien leapt upon his back, sharp clawed feet grappling for purchase in his leathery flesh. The great reptile spat and snarled, flailing about as though crazed. His adversary, however, was unshakable. She reached the beast's neck and brought the butt of her sword crashing down hard against the back of his head, then sprang free. The massive brute plummetted, unconscious, to the dusty arena floor.
The crowd roared its approval. Varien Avidan could not share in their celebratory mood. With the shadowy forms of her captors approaching to reclaim her, she could not help but seethe with resentment.

- - - - - - - - - -

Ahh...Varien Avidan - I knew her. Better than most, I'd wager. A real perilous beast in the battledome she was, thou I can't say she enjoyed it.
We partnered up for a while to spite that ruffian, Darigan. Before I met her, I thought I was a pretty old hat at this gladiatin' business, but Avi had me well an' truly whipped. She fought like a strikin' viper and showed her enemies no quarter. Once, I asked her why she bothered playin' this slave's game and I remember her givin' me the oddest look with those crazy blue eyes o' hers. She looked right at me and didn't say anythin' for the longest time. Finally, she just stood up and muttered, 'I'm leaving,' before walkin' away.
That was the last time I saw the old gel, though sometimes I imagine she's still fightin' by my side in Darigan's grand arena."

~ "Lord" Karawn; on Varien Avidan

- - - - - - - - - -

Varien stood in the doorway to the blue krawk's meager dwelling, light from the cell block hallway spilling her shadow across the floor. "Shrike."
Lounging in his cot, Shrike eyed her silhouette imploringly.
A moment's hesitation was too much for the sable krawk. She strode purposefully over to his bedside and upset the entire arrangement, Shrike and all. Glaring at her friend dangerously, she hissed, "I need your help."
Shrike bounded hurriedly after the other krawk's retreatng form, mystified. Varien Avidan had never been one to get excited about anything, much less ask for help. Her lashing tail vanished into her own Spartan abode, and the blue krawk peered tentatively in.
The small room had been ransacked; bedding, furniture, and supplies littered the hard floor. Avi's armor rack lay bare on its side, the gladiator's effects bundled like laundry in her arms. She indicated the platemail with a shrug of her powerful shoulders. "Help me put this on." Once again, Shrike's bewilderment delayed him a moment too long. Irritated, she tipped half the load into his arms. "Don't just stand there gawking like an idiot; get busy!"
Numbly, Shrike complied, buckling on her lightweight breastplate and fastening her armguards one by one while she slid on her foot armor. Satisfied, she buckled on her heavy shoulder guard and flexed her right arm to esure that all lay well. Shrike folded his arms across his chest, whiplike tail twitching worriedly. "Varien, what's going on?"
The swarthy krawk paused and glared at him, pale eyes flashing dangerously. "I'm getting out of here - tonight. And you're not following me. You'll just get yourself killed."

- - - - - - - - - -

I always said that Varien was a madbeast! She was either insane or brilliant, but regardless she'd charge right in at ten-to-one odds and run her opponents into the ground quick as y'please. That old gel was never a krawk to dawdle about talkin' strategy, either. Always was a lone wolf, that one. I'm surprised she put up with me 's long as she did.
That poor young buck Shrike, though, got himself in too deep, I regret to say. I warned him over an' over, but he didn't once mind me.
The pup went out chasing after that she-wolf the very night she walked out. Real shame...real shame...

~ "Lord" Karawn; on Varien Avidan

- - - - - - - - - -

Varien pinned the other krawk against the wall, hissing like an adder. "Curses, Shrike, I told you to stay here!" Her claws dug into the flesh of his arms before she let him fall, stunned, to the floor. She was livid, but it was not cruelty that fueled her ire. Alone, Varien could easily flee Darigan's keep - Shrike would complicate things. He would be risking his life simply by pursuing her.
The sable krawk stalked away, leaving the winded Shrike crumpled against the wall.
She padded silently through labyrinthine passageways, mind racing, heart troubled. Why could he not obey? Avi did not want her blue friend injured for her recklessness.
A patrolling guard's footsteps echoed down the corridor, and she slipped without a sound into a recessed doorway. Why could Shrike not sit by, content to watch her pursue her daredevil schemes like Karawn?
The passing guard, a Darigan aisha, caught sigh of er shadowy form and barked a warning before she could silence him. Adrenaline raced through her blood as the cry echoed, rousing reinforcements. Varien bolted, treading on the unconscious aisha's back as she went. The shadowy krawk darted down the only deserted hallway, passing before the eyes of several hustling Darigan guards, each armed to the teeth.
Suddenly, a voice rang out above the rising din that made her blood run cold. "Avi!" Shrike was stumbling down the corridor toward her...toward the side halls teeming with hostile guards. Her eyes went wide with fury, fear, and disbelief, and she could only watch as soldiers poured into the corridor and fell upon the hapless Shrike like wild dogs.
Her mobility returned. "Shrike - no!" Varien leapt upon the nearest guard, dealing the creature a harsh crack to the back of his neck and shoving his senseless form aside. She repeated the brutally simple action time and time again, trying to unbury the blue krawk, until a blow from a sword butt made stars explode in her vision. She twisted away, dazed. reaching behind her for her assailant.
Varien's vision cleared slowly as her hand closed around the scruffy neck of he kougra who had hit her. He snarled in her face and she fought to shove him away, his sword arm flailing. The blade scored the flesh just below her breastplate and a bolt of liquid fire erupted in her side. The krawk clenched her jaw to stifle her cry of pain and staggered to her feet, intent now only upon escape. She did not know what had become of Shrike.
Mustering the last of her energy, Varien limped away from the confusion at a dogged pace. She located a service entrance and slipped out into the open air, bolting the door behind her. The wounded krawk staggered to he edge of Darigan's floating island, her side screaming with each movement. As she gazed down over the ege into the chhurning waters far below, Varien Avidan lost consciousness and toppled into the abyss.

- - - - - - - - - -

I do not know what had drawn me to the offshore waters of Meridell. Nevertheless, I was there, gliding through the moonlit ocean in rather good humor. So it was that my whimsical jaunt was interrupted by a body splaishing heavily into the water directly in my path from far above. It was a krawk, unconscious and sorely wounded, sinkling rapidly from the weight of her armor.
I rescued her, and carried her on my back to Mystery Island, all the while fearing for her life. She was so dreadfully cold against my skin.
Somehow, she survived the journey to the faraway island's shore. I dragged her as far as I could onto dry land and did my best to dress her horrific wound with moss and kelp. "I am Foldara," I told the krawk, "you are safe now."

Excerpt from the diaries
of Foldara the Wanderer

- - - - - - - - - -

The black krawk recovered quickly, though she spoke not a word to either man or beast. She ate her meals in silence and trained and slept alone. Foldara sent her armor to be repaired and polished, thinking it important to her recalcitrant charge.
One day, as the sun sank low in the west, reptilian gaze met equine for the first time. "Where are my effects?"
Foldara, startled, could say nothing at first. "They are on their way back here, along with a weapon for you." The black krawk blinked slowly and then turned away, apparently satisfied. "It is a perilous blade - I believe it will be to your liking."
Varien's eyes grew wide as her head snapped back toward the peophin. "So long as it sheds Darigan's blood, I care not what it is!" The peophin backed farther into the shallows, troubled by Varien's ire, but the krawk's attention had already left her. Varien gazed out into the vast western ocean, where the setting sun stained the water's surface red. "Yes, Darigan," she whispered, "I will shed your blood.

ART FAQ

What program do you use?
I use Paint Shop Pro 9, a slightly less expensive and versatile version of Photoshop.

Can you draw my neopets?
I can. Will I? It depends – I don't do art requests, only trades and (on rare occasions) fanart for pets I really like.

Can I enter your pictures into the beauty contest or use them on my page?
No – that's called thievery. In fact, if you see anybody else doing it, please let me know. =3

What is the air-speed velocity of an unladen swallow?
African, or European?

VARIEN'S REFERENCE IMAGE
Here is the image you should use if you plan to draw Varien either for an art trade, a custom adoptable, or fan art. I always appreciate fan art, so draw away!

Art Trades: OPEN
Art Requests: CLOSED

ART TRADES
(drag to address bar for full image)
I drew the anthro hissi line art on the left as an art trade for a hissi application by _wolfspectre_. And of course, on the right is Wolf's wonderful sketch of Varien_Avidan. ^.^
This is an art trade I completed with the talented Diane Fisher, who was kind enough to draw Varien with her future petpet, Koro (right). On the left are two krawk characters for an application she is completing.





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OTHER KRAWKS
Varien's quilt ^.^

Till death do us part...-lick-
_Light_Envelop_Me_

FRIENDS AND FAMILY LINKS

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NOTICE!

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You have been warned.
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