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July.29.2013
Requests are now closed -- I didn't get a second request, but I don't want to leave requests open for too long x3.
Received a beautiful new link back button made by the amazing Rika!

July.27.2013
I've received one request so far, so requests are still open ^-^.
HMR is now listed at Fireflies!

July.26.2013
I'm back! Yay! I suddenly got the urge to start reviewing again, so HMR is off hiatus!
Requests are open ^-^. I'm only taking two requests though. So request quickly!

Welcome!

As you walk into a large forest, you notice a light not too far away. You wonder what it is and continue walking down the long path, passing trees, slowly coming up to a small bridge over a pool of water. You carefully walk across the bridge, looking down at your feet to make sure you don't accidentally fall. As you look up, you notice a girl with light flowing around her standing under a large tree, with several small fairy-like creatures walking around. You walk up to the girl slowly, confused, not sure who she is or where you are. As you approach her, she looks at you and smiles.
Hello, welcome to my spring, I'm the Harvest Goddess. She says, still smiling. I'm sure you've found me by accident, but I welcome you anyways. Are you looking for Harvest Moon Reviews? She asks. You nod your head slowly, looking around still, especially at the small fairy-like creatures, she begins to speak again, laughing quietly. Those are the Harvest Sprites, they're my little helpers. They help me keep peace in this wonderful land. She says, Just go back down the path, and out of the forest and you'll find Harvest Moon Reviews which is hosted by Fangs. She points at the path again, smiling. You nod your head, thanking her for the help, then you turn and walk down the path again, heading out of the forest.

Rules

Welcome to the Rules Page! I know rules aren't all that great, but please just read over them, it wont take too long!


I only review sites. I will not review guilds, about me pages, other review sites, etc.
If I review your site, and you don't like your review, please don't get angry. I just want to help you, and if you can't handle criticism, then please don't request.
Please only request a review if you plan on making changes to your site.
You may get your site re-reviewed after two weeks if you've made improvements to your site. Have you read all the rules? Put 'Animal Parade!' in your form then.
You must link back to the site once you are put on the waiting list and after you get your review done.
Once you request and are put on the waiting list, please do not make any major changes to the site. It's hard for me to review your site if you have one layout one day, then a new one the next day.
I will only review in Firefox or Chrome. You can choose which browser I use to review your site.
I have the right to refuse any request -- If I deny your request, I'm sorry, and I will give you the reasons why I denied it in the neomail.

Rubrics

You walk out of the forest and into a small town. You look around, amazed. As you look around, you notice a building labeled Horn Ranch. You decide to see what the building has, so you walk up to the door and go inside. Once inside, a woman behind a counter greets you with a smile on her face.
Welcome to Horn Ranch! My name is Hanna. She says kindly, Here at Horn Ranch, we offer many animals for you to choose from. Make sure to read the info about them before you pick them, though! She warns. She reaches underneath the counter and pulls out a small book, which she hands to you. You open it slowly, smiling as you start to decide which animal you'd like to get.

Cow (In-Depth Review)


This review type is for sites that have a lot of hard work and time put into them! I'll be giving an in-depth review on the whole site. Not recommended for new sites.
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Silk Worm (Short Review)


This review type is a shorter version of the In-Depth review. I'll still review most of the same categories, but I won't go into as much detail.
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Sheep (Pro/Con Review)


This review type is just a small review. I'll list some good things and some of the things that need to be changed about your site. I wont go into great detail or look over your whole site, I'll do more of a quick-glance at some things.
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Goat (Custom Review)


This review has sections that you get to pick! You may pick up to 6 areas on your site.
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Chicken (Proof Read & Link Sweep)


For this review, I'll just proof read things on your site and do a link sweep.
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Cow Rubric



Site Name: Site Name Here
Site Owner: Site Owner Here
Review Type: Review Type Here
Score: ?/100

First Impression (?/20)

In this section, I'll tell you what I thought about your site when I first saw it. Did anything stand out? Did everything look organized and easy to read? Did it make me want to stay, or leave right away?

Layout (?/20)

In this section, I'll be looking over your layout! Does it all show up? Is part of it cut off? Does the navigation work? Does it stand out, and do all the colors work? If I notice any problems, I'll try my best to supply you with some help, though I am no expert in coding.

Introduction (?/10)

In this section, I'll be going through your introduction, and the story on your site (if you have one). It's important to make sure your introduction makes sense, and is fun to read! If it's boring or doesn't sound very happy, then I probably wont want to stay around your site.

Content (?/30)

This is a very important section, what you're offering on your site should be good and easy to get to! Can I get to the content easily? Is the content high-quality? Do you have a lot of content to offer?

Sitely (?/10)

Here is where I'll go through your sitely area and do a link sweep. Do you have good link back buttons? Are all of your affiliates active, and have they listed you as an affie as well? Are any of the links broken?

Grammar & Spelling (?/10)

I'll be going through your site and checking for any spelling errors or things that may make no sense. This is also where I'll go through your rules to make sure they all sound good.

Other

Here I'll give some other tips, and my overall impression of your site.

Recommended/Not Recommended

Here I'll tell you if I'd recommend your site to other people or not(:

Total Score & Title
?/100 - Title Here


Silk Worm Rubric



Site Name: Site Name Here
Site Owner: Site Owner Here
Review Type: Review Type Here
Score: ?/50

First Impression (?/10)

What did I think when I first saw your site? Did it make me want to stay, or leave? Was it too bright? Too dark? Here I'll tell you what I thought when I first clicked on your sites link.

Layout (?/10)

Do any colors pop out? Does it make me want to leave? Is it too bright or too dark? Does it match your theme? I'll be looking over your layout to see if it all works and looks nice.

Content (?/20)

Here I'll be looking over the content of your site. Do you have enough content? Is it all high-quality? Is it easy to get to?

Sitely (?/5)

In this section, I'll be looking over your sitely section. Do all the links work? Are there any missing buttons? I'll do a quick link sweep and tell you if any sites are inactive or not.

Grammar & Spelling (?/5)

In this area, I'll be looking over all the text on your site. Do you overuse smilies? Can you understand it all? If you have any errors, I'll do my best to provide you with corrections.

Other

If I have anything else to say or any other tips, I'll put it here.

Recommended/Not Recommended

Here I'll tell you if I'd recommend your site to other people or not(:

Total Score & Title
?/50 - Title Here


Sheep Rubric



Site Name: Site Name Here
Site Owner: Site Owner Here
Review Type: Review Type Here

Pros




Cons




Other

Here I'll list some other things that I didn't put in those other sections.

Revisit/No Revisit

Here I'll tell you if I'd revisit your site or not :3



Goat Rubric



Site Name: Site Name Here
Site Owner: Site Owner Here
Review Type: Review Type Here

Since this review is customized by you, I wont put any sections here. You get to pick the sections I review! It can be the layout, spelling/grammar, updates, sitely, credits, link sweep, content, etc. I'll focus on what you want :D If you'd like to see how I review certain areas, feel free to check out the In-Depth Rubric, if the section you want isn't there, still request it, I can provide you with info through neomail (:

Other

For this section, I'll just list other things about your site that I may have liked or saw that needed improvement.

Revisit/No Revisit OR Recommended/Not Recommended

For this part, I'll let you pick which one you'd prefer I do. Would you rather I say if I recommend your site or not, or would you prefer I tell you if I'd revisit or not? It's all up to you!



Chicken Rubric



Site Name: Site Name Here
Site Owner: Site Owner Here
Review Type: Review Type Here

Proof Reading Errors




Link Sweep




Other

Here I'll put other things that I might not have put in the sections above, and I'll sum up the review.



Request

After choosing which animal you'd like to buy, Hanna sends you to Town Hall. The building is very tall, and is connected to a small school and a house. You walk in slowly, expecting Fangs to greet you, though instead, you are greeted by the mayor.
Welcome! My name is Hamilton, I'm the mayor of this wonderful town. He says, a big smile on his face as he stands up. You nod your head, asking where you're supposed to find Fangs to fill out your form. He grabs a clipboard with some papers on it, handing it to you. Fangs isn't in right now, but you can go ahead and just fill out the form and put it in her box. He says, sitting down as he grabs a box with Fangs' name on it, setting it on the table.
You sit down in a chair, filling out the form slowly. When you finish, you put the paper in Fangs' box, walking out of the building.

Form:

Waiting List

  • 1. Megan / Under the Sea / Sheep
  • 2. Name / Site / Rubric

Pick-up

After doing some mining to pass time, you go to Sonata Tailoring. The building was small, and connected to a few other buildings. The windows had clothing pieces in them, showing off the newest clothes. As soon as you walk in, a short old woman standing behind the counter in the back greets you. Hello! Welcome to Sonata Tailoring! She says. My name is Shelly! My granddaughters should be around here somewhere... She says, frowning a bit. Are you looking for your review? She asks. You nod your head. Well, go ahead and find your name and you can pick up your review! She says, walking over to you slowly, handing you a clipboard with a list of names on it. She then walks back to the counter. You look at the clipboard and search for your name.

Name - Rubric - Date - Read More?


Name - Rubric - Date - Read More?


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Portfolio

Welcome to the Photo Album! Here you'll find the old reviews that have been done! Hover over the button for more info about the review!

Extras

As you wander around the small town, you come across a large building. The building is tall and has many colorful windows. You walk up the steps and to the large green doors. A sign next to the door says Celesta Church Grounds. You read it, and slowly walk inside.
As you walk in, you notice many seats and a red carpet leading to a young boy standing behind a small wood podium. He smiles at you, beginning to speak. Welcome to Celesta Church! He says, still smiling. My name is Perry , I'm the owner of this church. He moves around, coming over to you, shaking your hand. Feel free to wander around and look at things. People only show up for weddings, so nobody will be coming anytime soon... He says, sighing a bit as he moves behind the podium again. You frown a bit and begin walking around, looking at things all around the church.

Awards
Here are all the awards and things I have for the site! Feel free to use one, but only if you earned it!

Title Info
Do you want to know all about the titles here at Harvest Moon Reviews? This page gives you all the information, and who made it to these certain titles!








Did you request a review and get a special title? Well, here you can find out all about how you got that title!

The Titles

Ultimate - A score of 100
Super - A score of 90 to 99
Hero - A score of 85 to 89
Master - A score of 80 to 84
Novice - A score of 79 or below

Who Received The High Titles

Ultimate
Nobody yet!

Super
Nobody yet!

Sitely

You walk onto a large farm, looking around. A girl slowly walks over to you, smiling. I see you finally found me and my farm! She says, laughing softly. My name is Fangs! I'm the owner of this farm, and I do a lot of work around the town. I hope you had a nice time looking around, my farm just has all the things about me. She says, nodding at the buildings behind her. Enjoy looking around, I really must get back to farming! I'm sure you'll find my family around here somewhere! She smiles brightly and runs back to her barn, disappearing inside. You walk around the farm, being careful not to step on any of the crops in the field.


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