Welcome
to pretense
Right about now, you're probably asking 'What is Pretense?' Well, I'm about to answer that question. Put simply, Pretense is a roleplay help site. It's here to teach you the basics of roleplaying, along with the more advanced tips and tricks designed for those just looking to improve themselves.
After that, it's likely that you, a visitor, are wondering what my qualifications are. Who am I to tell you how to roleplay, right? Well, there isn't much proof I can give you. But if you're willing to believe me when I say that I'm a literate roleplayer with years of experience, then read on. If not... you can leave if you feel like it. Note: All typos are most likely on purpose! Point them out anyway and you get extra points, though!
News
what's new?
August 20/09: I fixed a couple things, and made the sample sections easier to navigate. All the samples are now in handy little boxes, so you have little to scroll past if you don't want to read them. There's also a plot section up, which includes an amazing example. I'm hoping to get a section on making a good character up at some point as well, but there are no guarantees. Keep checking back for more updates. August 19/09: Well, the site is officially up and running. New information is constantly being added, so make sure to keep checking back! The results of my review from The Two Timer will hopefully be in today, too. August 18/09: Got some more information up, and rethought how I was going to make this work. Look forward to navigation and the like soon! August 17/09: Started the site!
Information
what's there to know?
Before we get started on the basics of roleplaying, there are quite a few things you need to know. The first is the different levels, and the second is how I'm going to be working through this guide. We'll start with the first point, obviously. There are three different levels to roleplaying as I see it. Neopets may see it differently, but this is my guide, so meh. The three levels are as follows: Basic, Intermediate, and Advanced. In order, these levels range from Illiterate to Semi-Literate to Literate. See the trend in that? The higher the level, the more literacy you're expected to use.
Time to explain how I'm going to work through this guide. It will be divided into three sections following this one: Basic, Intermediate, and Advanced. Each of these sections will have tips, tricks, and examples of writing as I see it. There will also be a definition of the levels, along with a glossary of important terms. Note: All glossary words have been underline the first time they're used! Just use the navigation off to the side to skip to whatever section you need.
Basic Level
start from the start
Basic level roleplaying is the easiest level you can find. It's often quite illiterate, and filled with chatspeak, one-liners and grammatical errors. Misspellings are also common, and aren't frowned upon like they are in the higher levels. List intros are approved, and are the most widely-used form of introducing a character. This kind of roleplaying isn't often found in roleplaying guilds or on the boards, because it's seen as a waste of time by the higher-level roleplayers. However, almost everyone starts out at this level.
Tips and Tricks
needed advice
- Know the most basic roleplaying terms.
- Keep chatspeak and spelling errors to a minimum.
- Try for at least two sentences per post.
- Keep characters realistic.
- Don't be a despie.
Writing Sample
show the work
Introduction:
Name; Lorissa Becker Age; 15 Looks; Short, with brown hair and hazel eyes. Wears a pair of black skinny jeans and a dark pink t-shirt. Personality; Kind, afraid of snakes. She has a temper, so watch out when she gets mad. Other; None.
Pretty simple, right? That's the general format of a basic introduction. There isn't much detail included, but it gets the general point across. Sometimes the 'Looks' section is replaced by a link to a picture. This picture is usually found off of Photobucket. Here's an example of an actual post: Post:
Lorissa walked into the school and waved hello to Brandon. She said hi and walked to class.
Glossary
definitions galore
Roleplaying (RP): Roleplaying is the 'art' of acting out a character. Similar to acting, but it is done through writing/typing. One-Liners: Posts that are only one sentence long. Quite common in Basic roleplaying, though frowned upon in the higher levels. List Intros: Introducing your character in the form of a list. Again commonly used in Basic roleplaying, and not approved of in the higher levels. Despie: Someone desperate for attention, usually through the form of a romantic roleplay. Their characters are always trying to get a boyfriend/girlfriend, even though this is clearly against Neopets rules. Introduction: The way you introduce your character. Normally a paragraph in the higher levels.
Intermediate
level two
Intermediate roleplaying is the middle level. It's almost smack-dab in the center of Basic and Advanced, though there are sub-levels to this one. Lower-Intermediate, which is closer to Basic, and Higher-Intermediate, which is obviously closer to Advanced. Once you hit Higher-Intermediate you're well on your way towards Advanced, which is the much sought-after level. Mary Sues and Gary Stus come into effect at this level, and are seriously a bad thing to do.
Tips and Tricks
make it right
- Use OOC and BIC. You'll thank yourself for it later.
- Spell out all your words, including numbers below one hundred. Chatspeak is a huge no.
- Use spell check. It'll save you grief later on when someone comments on an error you made.
- Try and make your posts at least a paragraph long.
Writing Sample
any improvement?
Introduction:
The real question was why was she attempting to get a hot, caffeinated beverage in such heat? Well, Callie wouldn't able to survive the California streets without something in her body. Yes, she was addicted to the sweet taste of the coffee beans; a consumer spending hundreds of dollars on little Styrofoam cups filled with the steamy beverage. Sometimes though, Callie would "shake it up" and buy an iced coffee but all the same she needed it to get through her day.
Flashy was Callie's specialty, between the off-white flats decorated with a vibrant pink bow, or the way she held herself hips swaying as she walked purse dangling from her shoulder. Callie was basically always showy. Her eyes set on the goal, a coffee shop at the end of the corner. There was just a small issue with such an idea, it was so humid. The thickness in the air created a fog over the side walk making it very difficult to walk such a distance. The ring of a bell was the only thing she heard having some peace of mind when the click was drowned out by the sound of coffee being brewed.
Um, hello?" she said to the person, unsure what to really say to people standing behind the counter. She had been there millions of times before though she always found ordering an awkward phenomenon.
The person stared at her confused at why she hadn't already ordered after staring at him for a matter of two minutes. "What would you like to order?" he asked incompetent to the idea she was scared to speak to him. Shrugging she looked down for a second then up at the menu.
May I have a medium coffee? Extra sugar and extra cream in it please." she said with a smile beginning to play with her hair. Twirling it Callie waited patiently for the man to give her the coffee. Upon handing it to her she quickly rushed out of the door. With the click of her heels no longer bothering her, and the ring of the door she was gone and in the heat of the day again.
She was your basic college student, running on her parents' money and partying whenever she got a chance. Her parents were well out of the picture, she was irresponsible as ever and wanting a big break.
She was good at looking pretty and she was quite the show person about it. Sure, she seemed shy quite frequently but when she was in the spotlight she was all that and wasn't about to return. She'd feel better than you and know she was too. It gave her an adrenaline rush that she absolutely adored. She knew she it was her passion in life, to become famous. Her degree was in performing whether it is singing, instrumental, or acting. Everything.
Walking back to her apartment, Callie cradled the coffee happily. She was in her own world at the moment walking about with her head high and confidence up. Written by Ninaxdots.
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Something wet and slimy made its way up Caroline Hayes' face as she slept. She batted it away, and rolled over to try and get a few minutes more sleep. And then she realized that something wet and slimy was on her face, and her dark eyes opened in shock and fear, her small body tensing up. "Oh, it's you," Caroline mumbled in relief, relaxing as she wiped her slimed face with her duvet. She gave the eyeless woman with the inordinately long tongue a shove in an effort to get her off the 14-year-old's bed. "Go away, you're getting maggots all over my bed sheets, it's horrible." The woman-thing slunk off to hide in the shadows behind Caroline's curtains, holding the maggot-infested wound on its bloated belly with one of the blade-like protrusions it had in place of hands.
Caroline, too, got out of bed, and went to see if the girl with the bleeding face and fingers that she had discovered the night before had gotten out of her shower yet. She hadn't, so Caroline had to settle for brushing the tangles out of her long dark hair without washing it. There was something nasty standing behind her in the mirror, but she did her best to ignore it. She'd have to talk to someone about that shower issue. Maybe request a room change.
She got dressed as quickly as possible, while eyes popped open on the walls of her room, watching her every move. The uniform was still stiff and uncomfortable, and wearing a skirt was a brand-new experience. And her tie was such a gross red-brown colour. Like some kind of bloodstain.
After tidying her room and brushing her teeth, Caroline's stomach was growling quite insistently, which meant it was time for breakfast, so she left her room and the various nasties in there and started heading downstairs.
About halfway down the stairs she stopped in her tracks, swaying slightly on the spot. Her vision hazed over. It transitioned quickly past the mist-with-worrying-dark-shapes-in, through red-and-don't-look-too-close, and nasty-horrible-monsters-everywhere, leaving Caroline seeing the plane that she disliked the most: the one where everything was the same as the normal one. Except that everyone's faces were distorted, or cruel, or reptilian, or bird-like, or any number of unpleasant things.
Well, at least she would be able to make it to the canteen without tripping over. Written by Guttersvoice.
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It was a brand new day.
Everything was going spectacularly and nothing had been tinged with mold so far--nothing spoiled. It was absolutely wonderful! What could go wrong? Nothing, he was positively sure that nothing could go wrong. Nothing would go wrong as far as he's concerned. He needed a second, in fact, to catch his breath from this wonderful discovery. This had never happened before, and should be celebrated with the utmost amount of joy!
But, there's just one little problem with his theory. Today was not that day that he dreamed of. In fact, it was one of the worst days of his life; that was nothing out of the ordinary, even, and he brushed it by with a grudging shrug of his lightly-furred shoulder. Though he could marvel at one thing about himself and his relationship with fate.
Oliver had to admit that he was dressed well today. No strange clumps of whatever clinging to his underbelly, no excessively infested-with-oozing-puss cuts and scrapes showing, and his tawny eyes were rid of the dull gloss of late morning snoozes. He had to admit that today he looked dashing.
His eyes, however, were bright with something that he was familiar with, or, recognized, if he hadn't familiarized himself with it yet in his distractions with hating the world. Snorting with discontent, the silver-coloured male continued to stalk through the lands, bristling with irritation. His mind was working wonders, for he was a bright canine, though working endlessly around the dark subject of how messed up everything was. How messed up everything is.
It was plain to see the evil within the wolf, his dark thoughts of everything around him. Any being with half a brain could see that the world was purely insane; Oliver's thoughts revolved around this. He couldn't believe how filthy everything was, how unclean and unsanitary everyone was. He couldn't believe the lies everyone was sputtering out, even on their deathbeds. It was all absolutely putrid, and he was part of it, regrettably.
He wasn't quite aware of his surroundings, and not looking in particular to what was around him from his leveled gaze and lowered neck, parallel to his pointed shoulder blades. Tufts of light silver, tipped with a dark ebony, undulated on the nape of his neck and back, or, what seemed to be left of a thick neck. No, he was not aged in any way. Oliver was merely the unfortunate result of poor breeding, great thanks to his parents for that. He was a lean creature, with a level underbelly and no particular thickness in build in any show of muscle nor mass in any way.
But, mass in what? Not just bone mass, skin mass, the mass of the atoms that he was made up of, but mass that consisted heavily of a growing sense of darkness. Oliver groaned to himself, lifting his mottled gray paws off the filth of the ground quickly as he padded, not very silently, on the path that the unforgiving trails of fate led him on. Written by Justsayagii.
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A few scuffs were the only sound that came from the large building, continuously cycling in a rapid rhythm to accent the maker's anxiousness. There was absolutely no doubt of his nervous pulse, running fast and jumping up and down his thin neck. It wasn't often that he got like this, however in situations so dire, there was really no excuse for not being stressed.
Oh, but was there any doubt of his talents?
Milky gray eyes continued their purpose-less stare at the patterns of ivory marble, elegantly carved into the floors he now strut upon so recklessly. He was sure his ankles had worn themselves into nothingness, bow-legged strides becoming more even. And so it was, like clockwork, did the candle-maker turn his pale-faced head, wiry locks of silver hair undulating at the sudden pivot of his skull, bangs peeking from the ridiculously tall ebony top hat atop his round skull, nearly as long as his six-foot-four body.
Well then, that pile of mushed out candle wax would just have to suffice for the time being. A reminder ticked on the curved windows, elegantly bound to what seemed to be almost Victorian-like, though with a little more spook to their frames. The reminder was very persistent, for it tapped again, ensuing a dull scowl from the wiry man's face. Dusted, ghost-like lips pursed together, bringing a calloused, long-fingered hand up to his chin, side-glancing at the window dripping with liquid reminders. The rain was persistent this evening.
Hmm," his monotonous voice breathed after a moment of staring at the -blocked- The male's scuffing of the garish yellow suede shoes came to a halt at last, shrinking into softer taps as he made his way towards a massive desk. The large room the man now situated himself in was lit by only one source, which was the thirteen-foot torch-like candle sitting atop the carved, wooden desk. The man swiftly seated himself upon the velvet chair, reaching behind him to prevent sitting upon the billowing v-shaped tails of his tuxedo, matching the garishly-hued yellow shoes he wore upon his tiny feet.
Claw-like hands reached over, grabbing the mound of wax that sat molding away to his left. Scooping up a fist full of the cold stuff, he began to his work, swiftly and accurately shaping the ball into what looked like a flying finch. Bringing it to his lips, a wicked smile prodding at his cheeks, the candle man released a whisper of breath onto the creature, watching it shudder and release a small chirrup of noise. A grin stretched across his ghostly face.
Now, my little bird. You shall fly," he whispered to it, brows raising as its eyes, beady and illuminated with the flame of a candle, stared back at him with a certain knowing. Of course, the time had come to assemble, and he would be the first to let the news be heard. Or, so did Enoch Horace the Ninth think. Written by Justsayagii.
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Glossary
find a term
Mary Sue: A perfect female character. Often has a tragic past to get the reader to pity her, though it normally doesn't work. Often steals the attention away from the other characters, or at least tries to. Gary Stu: Male version of the Mary Sue. Ooc: Out of character. Used when saying anything put your roleplay post. Bic: Back in character. Used when you're switched from ooc back to the roleplay.
Advanced
high as you can go
Advanced roleplaying. If you've made it this far, you deserve a round of applause. Intermediate is one of the hardest levels to rise above, simply because of the standards in place at this level. You're expected to have long, detailed posts. But make sure you don't go overboard with the purple prose. Detail is good, but too much of it gets you laughed at. Mary Sues and Gary Stus are pretty much shunned, not that most people make them at this level except for a joke anyway.
Tips and Tricks
some extra help
- Keep your characters original. No one wants to read a character that's been given a large dose of stereotypes, no matter how interesting they might seem.
- If you're making a gifted character, give them a unique power. It gets both boring and annoying when seventy different characters have the same ability.
- Take the time to write our your intro/post before hand to check for spelling and grammar errors. Don't forget that those are a big no-no at this level.
Writing Sample
introduce yourself
Introduction:
Eight abnormally long toes wriggled uncomfortably in an ill-fitting pair of shoes that they were evidently unused to; thin shoulders shifted under a heavy jacket. The few small areas of skin that were not hidden under clothing or in the shadow of a navy blue baseball cap were extraordinarily pale, as if the young man had been bleached white.
No, it was more like the white of bones. The mop of hair that poked out around the edges of the cap was the same paper white, cut in the scruffy manner that many teenage boys sported these days.
It was clear that the young man had done his best to hide his inhuman nature, despite the fact that there were several improvements that could have improved his 'I am definitely a human' disguise.
For a start, he could have worn gloves, to cover even more of that pale skin, not to mention the fact that his fingernails were stained slightly lavender, rather than a more natural pink. Although perhaps it was a little warm for gloves, he was clearly trying to hide his abnormalities, and they would have been useful.
Sunglasses might have helped, too, because despite the baseball cap doing its best to keep his face in shadow, it was still pretty tricky to hide those deep blue-purple eyes, the colour leaking out of the iris and into the pupil and sclera, giving him an odd, almost bird-like look.
Perhaps even some lipstick might have helped; as feminine as it might seem, a plain, neutral shade would serve quite nicely to cover up his lips. Like his fingernails, they had a definite lavender shade to them.
And even without all that, he could have at least remembered to keep his inner monologue as 'inner' as possible. As it was, he was mouthing words to himself, muttered complaints that very much displayed his double rows of needle-like, silvery teeth.
Stupid Prussian, why's he always sending me to get stuff? He's so mean, and it's not even as if he's the oldest, 'cause if you're counting who's been awake longest, it's me, if I am a couple hundred years younger than him agewise, and Treuse and Ridi are older than him anyway, and it's not even as if I'm the youngest, and sending Sienna would be more sensible, at least she blends in better than the rest of us, but nooo, Pruss has to be all 'send Indigo, he's got nothing better to do' and actually I have plenty of better things..." Indigo continued to blather incessantly as he mooched down the street in the direction of the nearest gas station, plastic bag full of groceries hitting his leg with each step, muttering something along the lines of 'might as well get a snack while I'm out'. Written by Guttersvoice.
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She remembered her high school years vividly, looking back on it from there life went downhill. My goodness her pact with her friends was tight yet it was ripped apart by college. Emma herself moved to New York City. Yes, she was a big city girl who grew up in a small town. Her heart was always much too big for the little place and her dreams would never be accomplished there. She had always dreamed of Broadway and wouldn't stop anything short of it.
Attending Julliard had been very hard on her parents; they struggled to allow her to stay as well as pay for the massive tuition. It had all paid off though. Emma got on Broadway, she had been performing in plays as small parts but still got pay working in a coffee shop as a side job. It wasn't much income but it was Emma's dreams. Now, one day at the coffee shop that "man" came in, he was the one for her. Or so Emma would have thought, they lived together and were both performers, in the big apple for identical reasons.
After nearly a year of being together they were married and rushing it Emma convinced her dream man they should have a child. That's how Camille came into the picture, they were both extremely happy but alone with the recession came stress, as well as a young daughter. No one really had money to see the expensive shows so Emma's husband was laid off. With this came more annoyance and then a child screaming all the time wasn't something he was willing to deal with. He left feeling as though he had let the family down and refused to keep contact with Emma only to send a check to her once a year.
Camille and Emma were more than happy together, they shared a two room loft in the heart of the New York, Emma working for any acting program she would come upon. Cleaning up the house though in order to move Camille into a bed rather than a crib was when she came upon these tapes: her friends and her. Emma became obsessed over the idea of seeing her friends again, seeing the change in them, wondering what they were like. Her and her daughter had to go back there even though Emma's parents were relocated since she moved. Pushing a tape into the VCR one mast time Emma knew what she had to do.
Camille! Pack some toys!" she screamed to the three year old, rushing through the house putting many things into a suitcase.
Where are we going mommy?" she said, tugging at her dress. Now Camille was a complete diva, she loved attention and would do anything to get it.
We're going to see where mommy grew up. We'll be spending a week there." She said rushing through her drawers getting enough clothes together then moving to Camille's room grabbing garments by the arm full. Brightly colored and decorated in floral patterns. Camille on the other hand had been packing her favorite dolls, a couple stuffed animals and her favorite of all: Sunglasses.
After hours of making phone calls and packing Emma was ready. "Come on Camille!" she said happy to get away from this big town for a bit, yes she absolutely adored the environment but it was time for her to see home again. She shoved everything in the car with a cooler full of snacks as well. Her in the driver seat, Camille in her car seat in the back and they were off. Two meals, a lot of boredom and whining, and a nap later and they were there, in the middle of nowhere Massachusetts.
Pulling into a little coffee shop Emma remembered quite well she got out then pulled Camille out, they needed a potty break and a snack before going to find a hotel again. With a double beep from the car it was locked and she was walking into the door talking a small table by a window not really sure of what to make of the people inside. Written by Ninaxdots.
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The water rippled on and off with the occasional wave rising into the air and then crashing harshly down onto the shore. The sun set high in the sky, resting easily on two plump, fluffy clouds. The trees had seemed to just bloom an hour ago from the drastic change from winter to spring. Pink petals had burst from the twigs sprouting off of the many branches. At this point, they were wide open to reveal the powdery yellow center with the few antennas sticking firmly with the occasional Mothim fluttering by to pollinate it.
Feet padded against the damp sand, practically being absorbed into the soon to be mud. Lugging behind faithfully was a Feebas, supposedly the ugliest of all pokemon. The boy could not comprehend this and actually found Chatial to be quite, well, there wasn't really a word he could use to describe it. But whatever it would've been, it'd be a compliment. The Feebas swished her blue tail rapidly trying to keep up with Niko, the back fin hardly hovering over the surface, only to keep her wide eyes laid upon the boy, thick, black circles surrounding them. Overall, the sandy brown and the darker shade mixed together with the rest of the fish made Chatial quite unique.
Finally Niko squatted down and pulled out an indigo pokeblock from his pocket and juggled it in his hand. Chatail's face twisted in pure joy as she surfaced her mouth wide open seeming to beg for it. A light smirk rested firmly on his lips as he giggled softly. You really want it that badly?" he asked acknowledging how much he was torturing her. Once she closed her lips, it was almost as if she was pursing her lips, but the subtle glare was easy to notice. He chuckled again and threw the pokeblock into the sea, and within a few seconds, there wasn't a fish in sight. A few minutes passed and Chatial slowly loomed into view, exhaling harshly.
Niko couldn't help but continuing to chuckle and a glare drew across the Feebas' face. He knew how hungry she got after his return from school. Quickly she gulped in a lungful of water and rose to the surface and squirted a steady stream of water at him, flattening his black hair, leaving it completely damp. Practically sobbing wet, gradually dripping down to his suit. Gently he squeezed his hair with a rough churn of his hands, and swished shook his head and smoother it down to avoid it being spiked up. "Real funny," he murmured, knowing he couldn't throw sand and completely tick her off. So the odds were against him. He softened his scarlet eyes and returned to his dull ex'pression, a combination of half-way open eyes and a lazy frown, this time fully sitting. He dressed almost like a business man, the combination of a white blouse tucked underneath a black suit with a checkered black and white tie, completed with black slacks and dress shoes.
Niko couldn't help but notice that his backpack kept on slipping down as he stroked his hand over the Feebas' back. Then he remember the text books that was weighing it down, he had a lot of home work to do. Luckily for him, his family was practically owned a tycoon for a house so that they could afford a tank big enough for Chatial with the right filtration of salt water. They had also learned that they could remain out of the water for a period of time, enough time to constantly transport her from the sea when he has to catch the bus so that she doesn't get bored during the day, and then back to the house where they could do whatever with air conditioning. "All right, come on," he said reaching down and picking her slippery body up and dragging her home. Written by Pineluff.
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Glossary
key terms
Purple Prose: Excessive, unneeded description. Much like what Twilight is filled with, in fact. (And that's coming from a FAN of Twilight).
Plots
plotlessroleplaysaywhat?
Plots are one of the most important parts of a roleplay. Without one, there isn't any point to the writing. In order to have a good roleplay, you need a good, original plot. I can't really help you with creating one; it's most up to yourself. But I can give you examples so you know what a good plot looks like.
Another Opinion:
Certain role plays can function beautifully without a plot, because it gives them a free range, and allows the other writers to expand the possibilities in which their character could interact. But that's by no means to be lazy- no plot can only work if used appropriately, with the right genre and/or role players, but if it isn't, the role play will fall flat on it's face.
Becuase, then again, the 'OMG GIFTDS R RUNNIN FRUM DE GOVMENT!!!11!!" is a plot, but it's so overused and shallow, it makes a role play worse.
Let's say you're role playing Pokemon- you can come up with something amazing, or if you know you're going to have literates on your hands you can get away with saying,"Setting is in Azalea Town."
But you can't forget Mini-plots! Lovely little mini plots! Mini plots are not a full, in-deph plot, but an event or minor problem they most likely will affect most, if not all, of the characters. A mini plot, and let's stick with Pokemon again, would be: "Setting is in Azalea Town. It's pouring rain, and all roads are flooded. There's no way in our out." It tells role plays, "okay. here's the basic idea." but still gives them plenty of freedom that most role players love! Written by 48cats.
Examples
try these on for size
Twenty years ago, seven young genetic scientists stumbled across something during their studies that they hadn't expected; the existence of magic, or something similar to it. They kept it a secret between themselves, knowing that no one would believe them anyway. However it wasn't long before they began to use it selfishly, for personal gain.
Until the accident, that is. The machine that had been churning out magic, which had originally been intended to help change DNA in order to cure genetic diseases, went out of control, creating what could only be described as an explosion of pure, uncontrolled magic. Three of them were engulfed and killed. The four who survived managed to confine this magic to one building, which has been declared off-limits and dangerous by the government. The struggle to trap the magic was too much for one of them, however, and he died soon after from sheer exhaustion.
During the trapping of the magic, some of course escaped, implanting itself within a small percentage of the world's population, and now, the children of those people have been displaying unusual abilities. Of the three remaining original scientists, there is only one whose whereabouts is currently known; the self-proclaimed enchanter Malachi Shaw, who has recently set up a school for these gifted children.
Shaw's Academy: a previously derelict castle, tucked away in the English countryside, which has recently been refurbished so as to act as a school for children of all ages who have been displaying unusual powers, from pyrokinesis to telepathy, from sprouting wings to speaking with animals. Each of these children is different, and, to help these children to find a place where they can fit in, Malachi Shaw set up this school. Alongside normal lessons, students learn to control and hone their talents.
The Academy has six floors: the top two are devoted to student's rooms. The fourth floor contains club rooms and recreational areas; the third and second floors, and part of the first floor are all classrooms of varying size and usage. The first floor also contains the Foyer, where the secretary, Priscilla, will be all too happy to welcome new students, the Main Hall, which also serves as the Academy's theater, the Canteen and Dining Hall, and the Sports Hall. They are vast, and, as well as a lake and small grove of trees, contains various sporting facilities, notably tennis and basketball courts.
As a school, the Academy of course has a uniform, which all students are expected to adhere to, at least to some degree. The boys uniform consists of a dark blue blazer, white shirt, black or grey trousers, and, most importantly, a school tie, which is acquirable only from the school, as they are enchanted by Mr Shaw himself to change colour according to the student's powers.
The girls must wear a white shirt with either a black or grey pleated skirt, or black trousers, and once again, the school tie.
It is the beginning of the school year, and students have been turning up at the Academy for the past few days. Lessons begin tomorrow. Currently, it is about eight o'clock in the morning, and students who have already arrived should be waking up, as breakfast will be served in the canteen in half an hour.
It's raining heavily, and it is therefore inadvisable to go outside, especially for those with fire-related abilities – although those who have an affinity with water may enjoy this weather. Students arriving this morning will probably want to hurry indoors to avoid getting soaked. Written by Guttersvoice.
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Started August 18th 2009
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