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December
6th
Hey guys! Sorry for being away for so long. It's been busy lately! Hopefully I'll get some new info up!
December
2nd
Reviewed Octillery! The paparazzi section might look off a bit. Had to hurry and save work. It's thundering bad! I'd rather it look like poo for a bit than lose it all! D:
December
1st
Reviewed by On The Run! Recieved an 87 out of 100! Wonderful. =) She's a great reviewer. Use her if you need your site reviewed by a second person too! Anyways, changed some stuff! As you can see, the affies and updates are in a new gray box. Was recommended and I think it looks better. =)
November
28th
Reviewed Orange Art Requests! Hopefully getting a cute rating system going soon.
November
25th
Opened the new and improved site! Now known as The Fame! Layout v. 2
November
24th
No school until Monday. Will be on and reviewing till then. New review today: Shattered Crystals. Visit Kitty, she has a great site! Hopefully getting some new buttons today. Urgh.
November
23rd New directories I'm listed at were added. Colors changed fixed up a few things.
November
22nd Adding new affies! New buttons! We're really moving along. =) If you have any comments about improvement or questions neomail me! Also, new review. Midnight Buttons!
November
21st Set up an organization system in the reviews. Rearranged the site.
November
19th Page is now open! Added forms and review box. Subject to change in design!! =)
November
17th Em's Reviews is almost open! Working hard to get this page up!
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Red CarpetDon't TripStanding in front of the photographer in your new jeweled dress is tiring. You wonder how someone could bear to take pictures of people all day. The paparazzi constantly follow you everywhere. You've always dreamed of being famous, and it took a lot of work for you to get this far, but you're not sure if it is everything you thought it would be. You're always so tired being up all night, and when you do get to bed you can never sleep. Everyone expects so much from you. You try so hard to keep up with the new trends from overseas. You're old friends glare at you from across the street. The only friend you seem to have is your manager but even she turns her back to you. You realize while stepping into the limo outside that the life you had always wanted wasn't all that great...
![]() Flashing lights. City streets. Parties till dawn. This is The Fame. It's only the beginning for some. It is the end for others. To climb the ladder of success and make it to the top is everyones dream. Will your story be glamorous? Or will it be a nightmare? Only you can choose the way. Started Nov. 22nd 2009
RSVP For Your ReviewBefore You RSVP,Well, looks like you've made it this far. Want to see what your really made of? Submit a request. The magazines and paparazzi will scrutinize your every movement. They'll tell you if you really are one of The Fame.
Meet the PressYou feel like you might be making a mistake accepting this offer for an interview, but your stomach starts to settle as you see a sassy reporter walk through the hotel lobby. Hello there, I'm Ema! I'm a reporter for the Blah-Blah Times. I've got my camera all ready for this interview and photoshoot. I'm glad you agreed to do this. You're my favorite person on that one show! And I really need a big break, ya know. I want a promotion so bad! The boss doesn't know how to cut a girl a break! Well, anyways, I guess I should tell you a few things before we start. Ya know, all this important legal stuff...
Legal Guidelines
Must be a petapage.
Let Me Tell You A Secret!
The magazines and paparazzis are hard critics. You have to please everyone in this life. Make sure you get as many good shots in one interview as possible. You wouldn't want me to get a hold of a bad photograph! This is how the interview will go!
First impressions are very important. This will show what the I think when your page first loads. Remember, I look at every little inch!
Reputation: Out of 10 Photographs
Style: Out of 10 Photographs
Glamour: Out of 10 Photographs
Conversation: Out of 10 Photographs
Interview Printed: ??? Out of 50 Photographs Were Taken
Scheduling Your Interview![]() Fast Reply Form If you've created your petpage and you need me to look it over by that night or the next day then use this form!
Regular Reply Form If you've created your page and you aren't in any hurry to have it reviewed then use this form!
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Total Scores of 40 Photos and Up: Two(2) Lowest Number of Good Shots: 35 Highest Number of Good Shots: 46
Interviews
First Impression: 9 out of 10 Photographs
I'm looking for super-high quality sites, with 88x31 sites! My, what a small site that would be! I know what you meant and it would be easy making that mistake! Change it to buttons. =) If you lived in Canada, or you study history, like what I am doing at school, you'll probably hear of a place called Acadia, which is now Newfoundland, today! Acadia, was once owned by the French, then it was owned by Acadia, for the French's other colony. You should be you have. Newfoundland, today needs no comma. Acadia, was needs no comma either. Acadia, for needs no comma. The italicized text I am not sure about what the corrected forms should be, but it doesn't look right. There a too many commas within the first sentence.
First Impression: 10 out of 10 Photographs I really enjoy looking at this directory. It's easy to navigate and view. It's very useful in finding resources. And it's just plain cute!! Organization is the big deal in this and you hit it! The banner isn't too big and the rules and key are both easy to understand. You have plenty of updates for a site that just opened and a good number of hits! It's great that you have a counter also. My eyes applaud your hard work! Reputation: 9 out of 10 Photographs I am a long time Pokemon fan of about 8 years! So this made me very happy. I loved how you used the images and pixels that matched the theme. The cuteness of it fits well and you use the images within your buttons. But I feel like it's missing something. I really love it all but to me it lacks that Come on in and have a seat feel to it also.Just cute little additions to the site would fix that. Style: 10 out of 10 Photographs I really like your layout. It fits the page so well. I really like these layouts for directories. It's way easier to navigate. My second favorite is the one that I have as my current layout. Those also work well for directories(see Faerie Compass). Anyways, it is very organized and clean. It isn't too busy or too boring. Of course this is just my opinio,n but this is one of the best directories I've seen(aside from the pros that have been in the neopets directory business for a LONG time). I will use this one when I need to find something! You've heard it from me: I recomend this directory! Glamour: 10 out of 10 Photographs Purple, some orange, and black. Very nice, mainly because I love purple. Also the colors go so well together in this type of scheme. I adore the background because its not flashy or OMG-HEY-U-GUYZ, lol, get what I'm saying? It's very easy on the eyes. Conversation: 5 out of 10 Photographs My, my. I've already told you about the only thing I really don't like about your page. The text areas. I don't really understand how you think they are supposed to be used. I can't even get a type cursor to show up. To get your button I had to turn off the style on the page. That's a bother to do for many people. Atleast make the height a wee bit more. I have no problem with small text areas though! They really save space, but those are just too small. I understand they might be different on your browser though, but you have to take account for every browser. Ask for browser testers for your site on the HC. Plenty of people will help! Also, the orange Click to Neomail is kind of confusing. I had no idea the octo pixels were the ones that needed to be clicked. And in the different sections you already have a link to neomail you. So you should pick one to use. The pixels or the regular link. And! I love the welcome graphic that you have. If it's possible make one for every section name. It looks very nice and professional. Keep adding sites and advertise on the Help Boards much more. Try to limit your affies to sites that are related to yours. Not just because they are in your directory but that you feel your users will want to use along with your directory. Like one or two coding help sites, many directories, some button sites that you feel are advanced etc etc. Find many more places to be listed at also. Interview Printed: 44 Out of 50 Photographs Were Taken You did great for a newer site! Go ahead and collect your award in the awards section.You still have a few things to change, but you are on your way to being one of the top directories! Keep updating everyday and stick with it. Add more content too! It was a pleasure reviewing you!
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First Impression: 8 out of 10 Photographs
Capitalization! You should also take out that comma before but, and just start a new sentence. Take out the or and the extra comma. I love chatting, am I friendly so... I'm pretty sure that's supposed to be and I'm. Do you need it by a cirtian date? I'm sure you meant certain. That was found in your form, by the way. Also in your form, you misspelled reference! Those are just a few, but see what I mean? It's very important to show proper grammar. Be sure to put punctuation marks, too! ;) Interview Printed: 35 Out of 50 Photographs Were Taken Overall, I think your idea is great. If you love orange then that's wonderful! But you can have an orange themed page with a bit less orange. It'll still get the point across! You should run your content through a spell checker also. That will help weed out a lot of those misspellings. I'd love to see that adoptables idea happen also. I'll give you another review soon after you've made a few changes! Just neomail me. =)
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