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Güten tag!
No, this application will not be in German, even though my entire heritage is German. -mumbles under breath- Ahem. Hello, Jin, and welcome to my application for Rauch! You say you like long applications, so I hope this satisfies that (without overkill, hopefully). Also, I have made a preview of her lookup, here. And finally, you can find her Hydruplit in my gallery, here. I hope you enjoy this application, whether or not I'm chosen. :3 Thank you for this wonderful chance to welcome Rauch to my family! .//end cheesy commentary_
While trying to clear your befuddled, frozen, useless brain, a rumble comes to your ears. Oh, GREAT. Thunder, too? But, in fact, it turns out to be worse than thunder could ever be, despite the fact that you were in just about the highest earthly point in Neopia, where lightning was most likely to strike you. No, in fact, that rumble was snow.. Many, many tons of snow coming down at you. It's rather scary, but just look at it... So pretty.. Preeeeetttttyyyyy.....SHIIIIIIIIINY...
Clunk! The definite sound of ANOTHER piece of ice making contact with your head. The impact altogether clears the haze on your mind and, as instincts kick in, you run like a madman.
You can hear the snow gaining on you; literally. It seems to be emitting sonic boom as it rumbles down the slope. The snow hinders your steps, and you realize it's pretty impossible to outrun an avalanche. Then, you see a dark blue-purple shape flash by and feel something besides an ice chunk hit you. Suddenly, the rumbling stops.
You're in a cave, now, with glittering, shining walls. There's very little light, and you have trouble seeing. It is, however, extremely cold. You hear the sound of rock on rock--flint, maybe? You can see small, growing embers, and hear an almost-coaxing breath, presumably to fuel the fire. The flames come to life in a glorious eruption, scattering light all around the cave walls, stalagmites and stalactites, all of which are frozen solid. And, disregarding the walls, you can see a purple-blue Draik.
The fire inside gives you warmth and comfort, a sharp contrast to the icy storm you were once in.
The glow illuminates the form of your mysterious savoir, although you're not quite sure how you got in the cave in the first place...
You notice a couple of peculiar, identifying characteristics.
The flames reveal her head, and play a trick on your eyes; the firelight dances on her face, making the markings appear to move every time you look at them. You stare at the markings and realize that, actually, it's not the fire. In fact, it's not an illusion at all. The silver designs move just a tiny bit, every second or so, so that you have to be waiting for it to move to even realize it.
The whites of her eyes have a pink hue, and her irises are gray-red. Y'know, She says, My eyes do weird things when I go into my... ah... episodes. They go darker, and my irises go orange..
WHOAH! You think, and before you realize you're being verbal, say You've got some really weird ears!! You start apologizing for your outburst, but she shakes her head. It's alright. They also change when I'm in a chaotic fit, like my eyes, and also when I'm mad. The bottom goes straight instead of curvy, then.
Her tail is an arrowhead, made of some metal, that shimmers in the flames. However, it has small, circular holes on one side, and a somewhat-triangular one above the stop of purple color, with another on the opposite side.
Her wings are translucent, partially revealing the icy walls behind them. The membrane appears extremely thin, however; in fact, so thin that it doesn't seem like it could support her. They sparkle with stars, as well. They go from gold to gray-black to gold, over and over again.
My past is strange, very strange indeed--of that, I can assure you. If you wish to hear it out, I certainly won't deny you that choice....
I was born in another land. To tell you the truth, I don't know where it is, or how you can get there, for I only know of two ways to get there--and I mean no disrespect, but you couldn't manage either. Even if you could perform the one, you wouldn't last long...
Ah, well, moving along. My father, Sirrush, was Draik, yes, but no ordinary one--he was the god of chaos. When I say chaos, I mean chaos; he was and is the master of all havoc, panic, and, often, unpredictability in the world. And his home reflected this perfectly... I did not see this place, his home and my birthplace, until much later. I will, I think, come to that story soon.
My mother, Galeru, was a sort of muse, or nymph of sorts, of the skies. Being the wife of Sirrush, she could withstand his home, and come and go as she pleased... When I was born, my parents beamed around me. But five minutes later, my father went into one of his uncontrollable, chaotic rages--a sort of price for the power he was born with. My mother almost cried, because she realized I that I couldn't grow up in our real home; it was too dangerous for a young Draik.
When Sirrush was out of the fit, he agreed that it was not to be, that I'd have to leave until I got older. My mother says he shed one tear, but it turned the world of chaos upside down (as if it weren't strange enough already) for years.
.//First Home, First Discoveries
My mother bore me across the skies on her back. I don't remember that trip clearly, but I do remember that the skies swirled, like my eyes were darting around, when they weren't. She brought me through space, to another world--a sight I do remember vividly. It was like a giant marble of gorgeous, deep blue with hints of green and whimsical swirls of white... It didn't seem to get any closer, and then we were suddenly... surrounded by grass. I had no comprehension of distance then, but I know now that she must've teleported right onto the surface of Neopia.
We were to live there, so that I might grow up away from a dilapidated world, an inconsistent one where matter and energy change spots every few milliseconds... The sudden change from far away to up close fascinated my young, wide eyes, which darted about with wonderment. We had switched from the beautiful marble to... glistening, vast, wonderful white. And then, I felt something else. It was, honestly, the first thing I had felt, other than my mother's touch and the presence of air. I felt.. Snow. Little flecks of whiteness. One gathered itself on my nose, and I went cross-eyed trying to look at it; then I sneezed, and laughed at the discovery of coldness, snow, and sneezing.
.//Early Years
I won't tell you much of my childhood because nothing truly notable happened; at least, nothing I can mention without giving you an entire account of my early years. My mother and I were happy, living at the peak of Terror Mountain. From there, we could see every star in the sky. My mother was happy to raise me away from civilization, away from the influence of the crowded world. I didn't wonder too much about my father for a long time; however, I eventually wanted to know why my mother was raising me all alone. When I asked her about it, she became extremely withdrawn and would not discuss him, as if she had been hurt and didn't want to open a wound. I hadn't met my father, but from my mother's behavior, I began to hate him. I just knew he had to have kicked her out or abandoned her, or something. I vowed to meet my father, once I was grown up, and make him pay for what he'd done.
From then on, I began to train myself. I often left my mother's watchful eyes to explore the icy caves, which made her get mad because she worried so, and I went to a large, icy cavern I had found before to try and learn to fight. You may think I was full of folly to do this without some kind of instructor; however, you must understand that we were in the middle of nowhere, and only I could help myself.
I was an ungainly, graceless fighter. I had no real targets to use, so I attacked icicles and frozen stalagmites in my self-contained battleground. As you might imagine, I learned very quickly that dodging was invaluable. Icicles hurt mightily when they fall on your head.
It was during one of these private sessions that I had my first experience with my inherited powers. As I was training in a cave made of ice, with literally tons of ice on top of it, it was inevitable that I'd eventually attack the forms protruding from the ceiling violently enough to cause a cave-in. My claws were stuck in the frozen stalactite. I kicked my legs in futile effort, and beat my wings, but I couldn't get off the "target." Suddenly, I heard a cracking noise; I heard a very loud, dread-bringing, cracking noise. Ice began to fall from the ceiling; first, stringy icicles rumbled and cracked, falling to the floor and shattering like glass. The noise was deafening. I was completely stuck...
Suddenly, the world swirled, twisted, contorted, somehow gyrated around me. I swallowed, feeling the bile trying to rise in my stomach. It was like I was dizzy, but instead of rotating around and slanting in one way, the world was stretching in all directions and angles at the same exact moment... I closed my eyes, and waited for my icicle to slam me into the ground, for the cave to bury me, and hoped I didn't throw up before it did so..
.//First Time
But it didn't happen.
The noise suddenly stopped. All I could feel was snow gently falling on my forehead fearing what had happened, I opened my eyes... And saw my home. In fact, I was in front of the cave where my mom and I lived. I blinked, a blank, shocked -disallowed_word- and boy, that I'll never forget) that I traveled through time or space. It was also the last time in a long while that it would occur to my advantage. From that day on, I began to involuntarily bend the space and time around me, unconsciously transporting myself all over the place, and back in time. Honestly, I don't know which was scarier; in actuality, a change of place made me panic inwardly, because I immediately knew I was no longer home, and didn't know where I was then. In premise, however, time was terrifying. As I've said, I could not control my power, and I often didn't even know when I had gone somewhere in time; often, when it happened, I was still home, so it took me a while to figure it out. I began to live in fear of my ability, anticipating with dread the next bend in the laws of physics. I became anti-social to anyone I met but my mother, whereas I used to talk to whoever I didn't know, because we were so isolated... I feared talking to anyone, because I feared being in another time and changing history.
.//Confrontation
I didn't want my mother to know about my power, because I didn't want to make her worry more about me. However, it couldn't last forever...
You need to talk to me, Rauch. I swallowed, avoiding my mother's benevolent gaze. I already know, and I want you to tell me. I may be able to help you more than you think.
I told my mother about my uncontrollable powers. She frowned as she listened.
You probably don't know this, but I can teleport through space. I never had problems with controlling my ability, though... Nor could I change what time I was in. I think you've inherited more than I thought from your father... She appeared deep in thought. You're old enough, Rauch. It's time to go home.
I blinked at her. But...But this is home...Isn't it? Isn't it?!
I had to take you here to raise you until you got big enough. Now that you have grown, you need to return to your real home. It is a dangerous one for Draiklings, but you are past time to go there, and meet your father. He may be the only one who can help you with controlling--
The father I've never met? The father who kicked you out?!
My mother was shocked. Her eyes went wide, and I could see she was, emotionally, in pain. Is that what you think of him, Rauch? You've got it all mixed up. He didn't kick me out of our home, Rauch. He had one of his fits very soon after you came into our world, and we both decided that it was not safe for you to be constantly moving in an inconsistent, chaotic, pattern less whirl...
I'd never thought of it that way, and I realized the folly of my groundless assumption. I'd never even met my father--how could I have hated him so.
We're going tomorrow. Say your goodbyes to the mountain, for now. I wanted to ask more, but I figured I'd soon see for myself.
.//Chaos
I couldn't control my ability to leap through space, so Galeru brought us both to the world of chaos, my home. It didn't feel like home, of course, but I was, honestly, drawn to it. I followed my mother down a path, a path that was completely and utterly straight, yet was swerving in all directions. Surprisingly, this felt completely natural to me. I never fell once during my time in my real home, from that day on.
An orange Draik was staring into the distance; his eyes were gray-red, like my own. His tail laid like a lifeless, useless attachment, sprawled on the ground behind him in a slight curve, and it appeared to be elongating, the middle of it widening and narrowing. His body looked... Tired, as if he was drained after a long battle. Despite his weary appearance, he had an aura of sorts, an aura of power. I could feel it running through his veins...
My mother smiled. Sirrush.
The draik's head turned rapidly, as if energy had been poured back into his heart. Galeru! The orange Draik exclaimed. He ran to us, his massive body no longer warping in and out and all about. They embraced.
So this is my father...
Our meeting was awkward. He had seen me as a newborn, and I had grown so much, although he still recognized me. But I had never seen him before, had never even heard much about him, and had lived hating him mistakenly for a very long time.
Despite being alienated from him, he embraced me as if I had lived with him for years. It was strange for me; to be distant for so long, and to, finally, meet.
Not long after, my father learned of the complications I was having. I warped time and space very frequently now, around twice a day, and I needed help. For all the time I spent in the world of chaos, I never warped randomly, even before I learned to control my powers. And when I did, I was in full control.
My father taught me to harness my abilities by consciously holding the universe to order, to prevent a warp, or consciously disfigure the world around me to make one happen. When it came to time travel, making the melting world around me come closer put me forward in time; making it seem further away put me back. Teleportation was a simple matter of creating a warping area around myself and whatever small thing--trinket or person--that would accompany me, and creating a warp, mentally, where I wanted to go. If I didn't know where I wanted to go, then I was just plopped somewhere randomly.
.//Real World
The years I spent together with my family in Chaos were happy years. But I couldn't stay there forever; despite the many opportunities for exploring there, I needed to return where I'd also been raised.
I returned to Terror Mountain, this time alone and under my own, controlled warping. It was a victory to be able to do this solo. However, I found out quickly that in this ordered, regimented world, it took many times more effort to keep the warping under control. I've gotten better over time, but every now and then I lose control. I've started to call these episodes of lost control "fits"-- it takes hours before I can regain it, and warp back to my own time and place.
I have another problem, however; I don't like to warp so much, in case I fall into a fit for too long. Right now, I'm struggling to understand my powers and their possibilities, even more than I'm trying to control them. I don't understand my purpose in life.. And now, I believe I have enough control--as much as I'm going to get--in this "real world." I'm going to warp a bit more, travel the world, and try to find my purpose....
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Ah. This is my sister, Mysterybeam, or Myst. Myst is a rather peculiar Eyrie; she's supposedly Maraquan, but she doesn't really look like it. Myst is a very nice person, but not awfully or unbearably cheerful. I would like to get to know her, but she lives in the water, so it's considerably difficult to...

Yes.. moving on. This here is Kaa_Bea, or as we call her, Kaa. She's a Hissi, saved by Spazz from the pound... Kaa's an intelligent, witty, sometimes sarcastic fellow, but she can be such a riot. She really is funny, but if you aren't listening you won't hear any of her few but hysterical jokes; she says them with a normal voice and a deadpan face. Her sarcastic remarks can be rather... scalding, but once you get to know her, you understand.
One day, soon or late, I'll learn what happened to Extonal. You see, Ex no longer has a body; out of my whole family, I'm the only one who can see him, because he gives off a miniscule temperature... I'm not quite sure what he is, exactly. I know he's some sort of Kougra; whenever I see him, it's just a shimmer, an outline, but it looks like a kougra with a strange tail and back legs. He needs to take over a body as his host, so he can hunt and drink, and live, because he needs to do all the things a normal organism would, and can't in his true form. He can only take over dead things, though, and he never kills something for himself unless it's necessary for survival, an act of desperation. I wonder why he hates hunting so much...
Takakota, A.K.A. Tam, is an interesting fellow. He's a total and complete gear head and, if he realized how scarily mechanically=inclined he is, he would be completely proud of it. He's a Tyrannian Bori, and his favorite hobby (and obsession) is to take things apart and put them together again. And, of course, repairing anything. Recently, he made a whole mechanical arm connected to nerves, so it functions normally..
Severrence is a thief, but no ordinary one. Sever went to the Lost Desert in search of a way to redeem himself from his almost-uncompassionate behavior in Meridell, or so I hear. He never steals anything of value from people, only what he needs to survive. I see him again on occasions, as he often returns to Meridell to visit old friends and family.
Frankly, I don't know Foghesse well enough at all. I do know that Fog has a bit of a military attitude, but not overpoweringly so. He has an often strategical mind, but he's probably killed many people in the war in his world... Just look at those mechanical wings. He's got some powerful weapons under that metal covering. (sorry for stealing your page, Fog!)
Hiroshae is a Shoyru who is said to have been a tomb robber before Ramlaya changed his ways. Now, he's a Djinn, and is quite the companionate soul.
Will Rauch be a role play pet?
Spazz: *explodes in glee* HEYEAH! (Ahem.) You bet she'll be! Here's an example or my role play style, so you can get an idea of what to expect... The dragon paced outside, completely unresponsive to the severe snowstorm whirling around her head. Her legs dug trenches in the snow as she walked back and forth, her tail swishing from side to side. She was anxious. The snow's parting made a quiet sound, which was impossible to hear through the howling gusts hurling about snow. She was obviously waiting for something. And she must've gotten impatient, because she abruptly stopped pacing. The silver markings on her cheek began to move. Slowly at first, they inched their way forward, from her ear to her snout, like tiny, shining worms. And then, they exploded into huge speeds. Her eyes glazed over, a bright, pure orange color taking over. The mark on her leg went through its loop thousands of time a second-- all the while, the path actually changed. The marking moved, blurred, smudged, contracted... as if it were being stretched on her very skin. And then, quite suddenly, she was gone.

Spazz: Photobucket killed it, but here she is with how her markings are when she warps time backwards. (Please drag to top of address bar--if that doesn't work, just right click and copy the url.)

Complete view of her design. :3
And numerous pages under construction:
Zeth
Ramlaya
Kaa
Ex
Eek. Look at all that horrid, old artwork... I know I'm always degrading myself, but as far as I'm concerned, it's for good reason. Moving on... I haven't saved up enough to dream of buying a Draik egg, morphing or transmogrification potion; however, I'm not poor. My pets have suiting petpets which, like Sever's Carmariller, Kaa's Soreen, and Hiro's Seti, cost a considerable heap of Neopoints, at least at the time. Also, I've painted Zeth Skunk, Sabyiae Mutant, Hiroshae Ghost, and Ex sketch. These aren't the most expensive colors in the world, I realize, but I didn't paint them so my account would look impressive and superior, I painted them because it suited their character and design. So I'll now make a clumsy transition to the subject of "trophy pets." I don't want to adopt Rauch just so I can get a tiny little 100x100 square with pretty graphics. I'm not trying to make myself look high in status by having a Draik. I want Rauch part of my little family because she has so much potential as a character, and I want to let it out. Eeep! Almost forgot. If I'm chosen to adopt Rauch, she'll live on my main account, Vitality Eminent.
Well, I suppose that's all, for now. Thanks for giving me the chance to be Rauch's new home, and I wish you luck for finding a new owner, whoever that may be.
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