There is an image that is set into a stained glass window of a church on the far side of a London city. It tells a story of a Chosen Wolf, of the rare, close to extiction species of the Fervine Wolves. A lab-created species made incredibly intellegent through 'tests', created by scientists. The Chosen Wolf is said to have a certian red symbol set on his/her left thigh, a sign of their status. Though, the Chosen Wolf most likely no longer is in exsistance... yet, we could be wrong and there is yet hope left...

Take it from the eyes of a beast; try to keep from straying into places you haven't truely been to once before. Certian kinds of... acidents could happen

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Toby, maybe we shouldn't be here... you tell the boy that leads you through the dark depth of the vile sewers. Due to the reeking and desgusting stench that wafted from the grusome place, you had been breathing through your mouth for the passed hour or so to keep from inhailing the sickening aroma - or keep from breathing at all.

What? Are you afraid to get your shoes a little dirty? he mocked.

Try filthy. you reply, suddenly in a bad mood. Thanks to Toby's adventurous mood, he had decided to explore the sewers.

I don't see why, you thimk gloomily to yourself, all there is down here is a bunch of rats.

A sudden splash makes both you and Toby jump. Spinning around, Toby shines his torch in the direction of the sound. The light reflecks off the vile waters, revealing the long mound of dark green fur that was making its way in your direction; slithering on the surface of the water as would a snake on land.

Quicker than you could blink, a large, growling creature drags his upper body onto the bank, teeth bared. Sewage dripped from his green fur and claws, giving him an ubearable stench. Though, somehow, his daggar sharp teeth had managed to stay clean. He roars in your face, a flicker of amusement flashing in his crimson eyes...

NAME---Comaatose AKA---Coma GENDER---Male SPECIES---Fervine Wolf AGE---Adult CARETAKER---Jet DAM---Dead FATHER---Unknown SIBLINGS---Dead DESIRE---No-one SPOKEN---English, French, Chinese, Japanese, German FORECLAWS---Long, retractable, dark blue PERSONA---Clever, caring (on occation), rarely trusting, somewhat mad, gentlemanly (rarely), genius BUILD---Large, muscular, thin FORMS---Quad & Furry Anthro

STRENGTH---Godly BACKGROUND---English HEIGHT---6 ft. from foot to shoulder (when standing on hind legs). 17 from nose to tail tip WEIGHT---Aprox. 390 OCCUPATION---Swer dweller IQ---Highly intelligent FAULTS---Membraneless wings (flightless) ADVANTAGES---Can walk on hind legs on and off willingly, large size, claws OFFSPRING---None BATTLE TACTIC---Using his wing blades, claws, scaring his prey, or simply attacking head-on ORIENTATION---Straight

.:: Loathes ::. Crowded Cities Ignorance Hero wannabes Most humans Snobs Most females Failure

.:: Adores ::. Sewers Somewhat filthy waters Those scared of him Victory Dark colors Solitude Makila

Since there are only a handful of Fervines left is this wretched world, I have taken it apon myself to record all I have learned of my kind, so my knowledge of us beautiful creatures may pass on when I am dead and gone (which, of course, I have yet to discover a Fervine's natural lifespan).

ENIMIES

--+ Humans (oviously):: Humans, though not all, mostly consider us a pest to their livestock and want us all dead. In truth, Fervines are calm, rational creature from so long ago. But, as is a common human instict, they are afraid of anything different from them. It's sad really. I mean, take us once lovely creatures that have stood at man's side for so long and turn us hostile and violent with your threats and weapons. I mean, you created us in the first place.

--+ Monifoarian Snakes:: *shudders* very dangerous, Fervine Wolves only natural predator, created by humans to rid us of this world. After the scientists descovered that the others of their breed didn't respond to us too well, they were force by government issue to create these wretched things. They bear the image of a simple black snake, though carry a vicious venom dangerous to only us Fervines. Infact, the only different to a black snake and a Monifoarian is the splinter of red in their eyes. But no Fervine in their right mind would ever risk being that close to one.

BASIC KNOWLEDGE

APPEARANCE --- a long manegoing down the back; from the top of the head to the base of the tail (rarely all the way to the tip of tail. Bat-like wings, tuffs of fur on the back of thighs (matches color/pattern of mane). Long foreclaws (usualy retractable). Smallish feathery ears. can walk on both twolegs and and four (much like a mouse or rat at times)

FEMALES --- males and females have few differances; no blades on the ends of their wings (though, it is possible they could have them), and muzzles that aren't as broad as the males

COLORING --- Fervine wolves only have three basic colors when it omes to their fur and its really only one color, only with three different shades. It isn't possible to list all the color schemes for a fervine wolf; but the most common is the mane and fur on the back of the leg to have the darkest color, and the under belly and tail to have the lightest, while the rest of the body bears the middle-color. But there are often other cases where a Fervine's mane has the lightest color, the main body the darkest and the paws and legs the middle-color, it's just impossible to say what a Fervine cubs coloring scheme will be.

The eyes and wings are a completely different matter - they are the only parts of the body where the design/color can easily be predicted. For istance, the membrane of the wing is depended on by the color of the female grandparents (mothers side). The fur color and the blade color is depeded on by the male grandparents (fathers side) wing membrane color (unless the cub is female, then the main bone of their wing wil match the grandparent's blade color), and he eye color is depended on by mothers eye color.

HISTORY --- The first pack of Fervine wolves where a pack of normal timber wolves that were hunting near the forests. A labratory captured them and ran tests on them. As it turns out, their tests morphed their appearances and made them highly intelligent, more so, than possibly the humans. They were released back into the wild, where two expectant she-wolves of the pack (that, as it turned out where with child as the tests were going on) gave birth, barely an hour or so after release. One to seven pups, while the other (that just happens to be my great-great-great-great-great grandmother) borne eleven healthy cubs - four female, seven male.

Soon, the Fervine population grew, each female giving life to numerous litters with their mate-for-lfe and breeding large families. But, like the common wolf, our kind were hated, and hunted. Now, however, the few left can be found in Europe, Alaska and even hiding in large cities (Fervine wolves like brightly lit places and well populated areas - though it dosen't help their kind are hated) Fervine wolves, also have a part in their brain where they hold information about the world, moderenly; as in they'd know if a certian cloak or jacket in the current time period would look more suspicoius than it woud have those years before. So our desquises are well made and unrecognisable. And because we are mostly nocturnal, we come out mostly at night than day and that makes our desguises a little harder to figure out.

BIRTH/PREGNANCY FACTS --- Fervine wolves carry their young for as long as a human would (aprox. nine months) and can birth 1-20 or more cubs. The birthing process isn't as long as most animals (1-3 hours counting labor) but is loads more painful. A female will treat all her cubs and family with respect, and would give her own life for the sake of her cubs and would never harm or abandon them, even if a gun barrel is pointed at their head. If a male were to harm or slaughter his own young, the mother would attack the male and fight unto death, as a male would to a female.

That's a lot to remember about my species, ain't it? Well, like you and your species's history and whatnot, we have to memorise it all.
(remember, the Fervines are copyright to Jet and if you want to create a Fervine wolf of your own, mail her with your application, titling your message FERVINE in caps, so she'll know what you want)

The application isn't hard to fill out, simply send a link to the pets page (must have at least one pic/ref of the pet's design), a short background story, and a description of the soon-to-be-Fervine's personality; but don't worry about applying, it's always open and Jet hardly ever says 'no' *hint hint, wink wink*

Application:
Pic/Ref Link(where to find it --
Persona--
Short History--
How you found this page(optional: I'm only curious ^^)--

OTHER FERVINE WOLVES SO-FAR
Karra
Okashii
Venom

Only 4 of us are left...

NEW FINDINGS

Apparently, wolves/dogs and Fervines can mate and reproduce. I've always thought that due to the Fervine's mutation we could only mate with our own kind. But I guess not. The Fervine seems to be a more dominant gene, however. Every pup is born with wings and the girth of a Fervine.

My studies of this will continue further.

Makila is a former lab rat that found her way to the sewers, I found her when I was very little, and soon found her to be one of the very few females I enjoy the company of.I've allowed her to bred a rather large family in my sewers - infact, she's just recently given birth to her 12th litter. Despite the fact I eat her kind, she's stayed with me ever since I found her in an old shoebox in an alley, left there in thoughts that she had died. Even though I most despise females of nearly ever breed or species, I've started to like this one very much.

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death until the dust and were waiting
ruined in the rust of our craving
it feels like it feels like
dont you know the cost of your betrayal
youre the one thats lost you're gonna fail
it feels like it feels like youre gasping with all your might

you can't take away my strength
fix these broken veins
theres nothing left to fight live free or let me die
you cant take away my pride I wont be denied
theres nothing left to fight live free or let me die

insects walk below im on a wire
fire will burn below but I am higher
it feels like it feels like
dont you know the cost of your betrayal
youre the one thats lost youre gonna fail
it feels like it feels like youre gasping with all your might

you cant take away my strength
fix these broken veins
theres nothing left to fight live free or let me die
you cant take away my pride i wont be denied
theres nothing left to fight live free or let me die

do you remember how
you became who you are now
do you remember how
it felt to breathe without
gasping with all your might

you cant take away my strength
fix these broken veins
nothing left to fight

you cant take away my strength
fix these broken veins
theres nothing left to fight live free or let me die
you can't take away my pride i won't be denied
theres nothing left to fight
nothing left to fight nothing left to fight live free or let me die
live free or let me die
live free or let me die

Ah, finally. The PFFWR (People For Fervine Wolves' Rights) is a small company that live within my city. I visit them on occasion. They are a wonderful group that fight to keep the Fervines exsisting. So far, their record show only a couple of Fervines still exsist offically, (icluding me) and just a while back they had found a litter of six healthy Fervine pups abandoned at the back of their building. Apparently a dog owner's pet had given birth to them, though, not knowing her dog had mated with a Fervine, was shocked at how the pups had looked. Then, finding out about PFFWR, she disposed of them there. I've been studing the pups lately, trying to decifer which characteristics had been more dominant in them (dog or Fervine).

--+ Keith:: Keith is the main scientist that had the Fervine Opperation Approved of. Though, eventually, the government had had their minds changed and ordered his company to shut down, but he ignored them and continued in his now, "ilegal" studies. When word reached that the Fervines had been offically created, his company was finally shut down after being forced to create an enemy even greater than humans to destroy us. He stubbornly refused and left science, leaving his employees to do the work. Barely a month after the enemy was realeased, he created the PFFWR. And I thank him heartily for that -- we all do.

Just because I am what I am dosen't mean I can't have freinds

Rain is the sister of the queen of Manigalio. She's a rather... hansome girl, really. She was hiding from her sister's guards and was in the comapny of her mate, Silence, when she fell into my sewers. She's a charming gal to say the least, and seems to have taken an intrest in my kind (and Makila). She currently resides in Murder Hills with Silence and her two pups.

Siam. I'm not sure what has happened to her. But I... oddly miss her... like a dear friend. She was there to witness Makila's birthing and she knew how scarece the Fervine Wolves had become. I do hope I can see her once again.




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I F . Y O U . G I V E . A . D O G . A . C O M P U T E R.

(Thank you all, I love them sooooo much! ^^)

Q: Can [insert name of lupe here] be mates with Coma?
A: That depends, they'd have to have Rped for a good while, and even on that note, there's not a garetee he'll like her.

Q: Can [insert name of lupe here] rp with Coma?A: Maybe, mail me first - I hardly ever say no ^^

Can [insert name of lupe here] be a Fervine Wolf too?
A: You'll have to ask me first, and send an application that I have posted, here.

Q: Can [insert name of lupe here] be Coma's twin/brother or sister?
A: Maybe, they wouldn't be from the same litter, of course, seeing as the rest of Coma's brothers and sister died after birth. And his brother/sister would have to be older, since his mother's last litter was Coma's before he died. As for the twin thing... not possible.

Q: Can I use Coma's design/plot for my lupe?
A: NO WAY! if you even think about trying without asking/applying, I WILL report you, and you will DIE! *cough* er, I mean be frozen!

Q: SOMEONE STOLE COMA"S IDEA/DESIGN/PLOT/SPECIES WITH OUT CREDITING YOU/ASKING!
A: WHAT!?!?!? WHERE!?!?

Q: Can [insert name of lupe here] be friends/enimies with Coma?
A: You'd have to Rp first before anything is decided.

Q: YOUR MEAN!
A: Love you too.

Q: You spelling stinks!
A: Why, thank you! ^^ now, if you don't mind, I'll chase you with a sledge hammer *grabs sledge hammer*

Q: Your a FREAK!
A: Thank you, thank you, I try, I try ^^

Q: O.o
A: ...What is there something on my face?

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With a cheeky grin of pure amusement, the creature crawls twoard you, rising onto it hind legs and spreading the bladed limbs that jutted out from his shoulders; merely remainders of what were once glorious wings. He reaches his long foreclaw twoard you, hoping at least to get a scream from you. It was Toby that gave the beast what he wanted. The creature turns twoard the sound of his screams, bareling his teeth just barely an inch from the boys face. You stand there, frozen with fear and shock until, to your relief, a voice calls.

...Hey down there! a voice calls, followed by the rushing footsteps of countless men. The beast's ears perk foreward and he turns in the direction of the sound, growling at the light of torches that shimmer on the rushing sewage waters. With a final snarl, he dives back into the water, disapearing from veiw.

Thankful for the interuption, you look in the direction of the party of men that rounded the cornor.
You two shouldn't be down here, we can't have one of you falling in, a man said, clearly the leader of the search party.

You shudder at the thought. Putting an arm round each of you, he leads the party back to the exit.

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Fervine Wolves © Jet

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