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Neomail MeMrBunnehTrifoliume

Welcome

Hello, I am the receptionist of Hanna's Adoption Centre Archives, Chevreuse. I'm here to introduce you to Hanna and her goals.

I'm guessing you're here because you wish to apply for a pet, already applied, waiting for the results, or are just curious.

First, I would like to stress that this page is only to provide information. It is not used for you to copy directly from. Please use the information to what you view is appropriate.

This is to show why Hanna picked who she picked. Hopefully, it'll help you understand her process. And thus, it may even help you on your future application endeavors.

Please take a seat, Hanna shall be with you in a moment. Feel free to browse around.


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Due date: Undecided


The Archives

In the past, I've had a multitude of pets who I've put Up For Adoption (sometimes neomail and sometimes just directly off of the boards). Two of them were a little Chocolate Kacheek and a little Speckled Cybunny. I gave a decent amount of time, since I know how horrible it is for a foster to give less than a month...

With this, after I received my twentieth application for Trifoliume alone, I noticed a few very nice people who made some very simple application mistakes. These people, probably could have been great owners. But, after seeing the mistakes I doubted them a little.

Furthermore, I've had people who were completely unsure of where to begin (on both petpage and neomail).

Thus, I've decided to begin an archive of my past applications (as well as other fun application things!). Not all applications are shown and the user names are removed.

I also hope this will help out the people who I didn't pick to be my pet's owners. This page will hopefully help explain my reasons. But remember, these are my reasons, not anyone elses. Other people will have different likes and dislikes and might have picked a different person. I even change my views between pets. But this will give a little glimpse into my mind. And perhaps even the minds of other Foster parents.

A Little about Me

I'm Hanna. You may know be from my other petpages or from around neopets. I adore art.

As a foster parent, I'm not here to choose the "Best Owner." I'm here to choose who I think is dedicated to neopets. I'm here to choose someone who's hoping to receive their dream pet.

It may seem a little backwards to some people. I've certainly have just time pounded before (when I don't have time to wait or read applications). But it's how I view things. Why? I can't control what people will do after they receive my pet. Will they quit? Will they decide to pound the pet later? Will they just leave the pet to 'rot'? I don't know.

It's hard to know for sure. Applications are words. Words from people I don't know, who don't know me. Sometimes I can't decide if someone's lying. I can just base it on my thoughts to choose someone who seems to really adore the pet.

And you know what? Maybe my time pound would have received a much better owner than if I went through the application process.

MrBunneh

MrBunneh was created by me on Cybunny day, 2008. I needed a boy bunny to paint royal. In the end, however, I chose to paint Cyways as my royal boy.

I zapped him a couple times and he turned speckled. Since I was afraid of a species change, I decided to put MrBunneh up for adoption on June 22nd.

He didn't have way too many applicants but he did have some nice ones.

MrBunneh's Petpages

Petpage applicants have a screenshot on the top of the application. The pink box lists the content: Italicized means image, Bold means the actual header text of the page, and Regular is just my explanation of text. The blue box lists a writing sample as well as my rates. Remember, this is from my guide. If something is not listed, it means I gave no bonus points.

I also give a paragraph about my impression of the content as well as overall C:

Applicant A.

Content:
  • SunnyNeo Background
  • Flashing Welcome sign from someone off of photobucket (no credit)
  • Reasons I want to Adopt MrBunneh
  • Text on reasons
  • Today I am feeling- Image from Sunnyneo
  • Care
  • Text on care
  • Image of a Cybunny Sparkle someone off of photobucket (no credit)
  • Playtime Fun!
  • Text on schedule of play
  • Yellow Cybunny Plush Toy from Neo
  • Status
  • Text on MrBunneh's Stats
  • Meet the Family
  • Images and text information about other pets
  • MrBunneh
  • Text on future as well as Petpet
  • Image of Eizzil from Neo
  • Funky Fridays
  • Text about Funky Fridays
  • Holidays
  • Text about Holiday treats
  • Image of Dogglefox from Neo
  • Christmas
  • Text about Christmas treats
  • Drawings
  • Two traditional art images of MrBunneh drawn by applicant
  • Likes/Dislikes
  • Text about likes and dislikes of applicant's individual pets
  • Wishlists/ Wanted
  • Text about wishlist of applicant's individual pets
  • Image of Dandelion off of Wishlistcomplete (no credit)
  • Keep Wishing for Your Dreams And They'll Come True
  • About Me
  • Text on applicant
  • Thank You
  • Text on thanks as well as Neomail link and yahoo email address.
  • Image of MrBunneh from Neo
Random quote of writing style:Christmas is the time of year when the advent calendar comes out and everyone gets freebies! Well in the month of December all my pets get special treatments by going to hotels everyday but before they go they get to eat a candy cane and a chia pop! If I'm feeling real nice {on Christmas} they will get crackers candy floss, candy canes, and maybe even a present like another toy to play with or an extra candy to eat!"

Rates

Bonus Points:
About the Applicant: 10
Art Examples: 8
Creativity and Writing Style: 10
Family: 5
Layout: 5
Petpet: 5
Why: 5
(Conclusion for Neomail Subscore: 10)
Total Petpage Bonus Points: 48 points
Neomail Subscore: 50 points

Account Points:
Account Age: 5
Avatars:3
Guild: 5
Lookup: 5
Trophies: 2
Total Account Points: 15

Overall Content Impression: For some reason unknown to me, I thought it was so cute and adorable. I just wanted to hug Kathy. Normally, I would have taken off points for the "feeding" and "grooming" but her application reminded me of a girl who said something along the lines of Why can't we view our pets like the way they use to be? Where we get excited about feeding and caring for the pet? Where we reward them on holidays? Where we don't view them as pixels anymore but as actual pets? I think the main reason it appeal to me was because I remember myself like her. Plus, Kathy obviously put so much work into it. There's a lot of information and nice images. I'm disappointed about the no credits though :/ But it doesn't look intentional just looked like certain images were google'd and put into the page.

Overall Impression: Although I thought the petpage application was so cute, I wasn't impressed by the user account. Yes, sure, it was sweet, she seems active. But, Kathy has three sad pets. Although I don't know for sure, I assume it's because of hunger. Nevertheless, although Kathy seemed like someone who thoroughly adored her pets in her petpage application, her account proved otherwise.

Applicant B.

Content:
  • Neo-Faerie Wings Premade Layout
  • About Me
  • Text about the Applicant
  • My Plan's For Him
  • Text about plans
  • I Promise Not To Do
  • Text about what the applicant won't do
  • His Family + Why I Want Him
  • (On Side)
  • Subject 1
  • Intro text
  • Subject 2
  • Explained what each part of the application was about
  • Credits
  • Credit Link to Neo-Faerie Wings
Random quote of writing style:He will have a great brother edward atleast these names are what I call them not their actual names!!!! his sister's analilia and sophia!!! they will get along great!! they will welcome him to the family right away!!!! He will also feel like part of the family right away!!!! he'll have so much fun with them they'll play all day!!!!!! he'll have a great owner and be treated and loved as much as his brother's and sister's!!!!"

Rates

Bonus Points:
About the Applicant: 1
Family: 1
Future: 1
Grammar and Spelling: -20
Petpet: 5
Why: 5
(Conclusion for Neomail Subscore: 0)
Total Petpage Bonus Points: 0 points
Neomail Subscore: 0 points

-Disqualified because of Under Four Months-

Overall Content Impression: Although a lot of work seemed to have been put into this petpage... x_X I barely could read it. Plus I hate the over usage of exclamation points. I cringe and complain to my teacher people when they pass out worksheets that say "Blah blah!!" D: AHHHH ATTACK Most of the things put into the application was either not needed and I didn't care (such as a giant list of favorite bands, who the applicant's favorite Jonas Brother is, and that she likes puppies...) or wasn't what I was looking for. The applicant did seem to put a lot of work on it though...

Overall Impression: ): Sadly, the account age was under four months. I cannot give the pet to people under four months even if I really wanted to. I don't wait for accounts to age.

Applicant C.

Found under Wall of Shame.
Disqualified and Wall of Shame'd because of Stealing (and claiming of her own creation) art and graphics. This is reportable and a freezable offense on Neo

Applicant D.

Content:
  • Whole layout are just images
  • MrBunneh-Vicario
  • Intro
  • Text on why Molly
  • Intro/Story about MrBunneh text
  • Why Molly?
  • Text about why Molly.
  • About Me!
  • Real World Molly!
  • Text about applicant
  • Real World Bunny Image (Applicant's pet)
  • Online_"Username removed-"
  • Text about applicant's online life
  • Makeable of MrBunneh
  • Vicario
  • MrBunneh
  • Makeable of MrBunneh Reference Image
  • MrBunneh's stats
  • Future Plans!
  • Text about future plans
  • Plush Pictures
  • Images (3 )of Plush (real life) made of MrBunneh
  • Text on materials and information about how the plush was created
  • Hanna,
  • Text about the application
Random quote of writing style:Vicario hopped aimlessly through his favorite park, dodging his friends frantic attempts to capture him. "Naro," he giggled, "we better play something else tomorrow, this is the third day of tag without you catching a thing!" and with that he ran off towards a tree to hide. Although he acted as if he never got tired, he did need some time to rest and he hid in the farthest tree's hollow, he knew Naro would'nt find him. Or at least he knew that he had'nt found him yet."

Rates

Bonus Points:
About the Applicant: 10
Account History: 5
Beauty Contest: 10
Creativity and Writing Style: 20
Colour Ref: 7
Custom Design/Character Design: 15
Future: 10
Other Things: 10
References/Referrals: 5
Story Design: 10
Why: 5
(Conclusion for Neomail Subscore: 10)
Total Petpage Bonus Points: 102 points
Neomail Subscore: 85 points

Account Points:
Account Age: 8
Avatars: 2
BCer: 5
Guild: 10
Pet Lookups: 5
Other: -10(sad pet)
Trophies: 2
Total Account Points: 22

Overall Content Impression: I was very impressed with the petpage. XD; I kept on squee-ing. Sure, I'm not one hundred percent excited about the layout being giant images, but they work. The content was very thorough, and Molly's good friends with Kei. So I'm sure she'll be a great owner. Where Molly got her very many bonus points? The Plush Toy! Dannnngg, that impressed me beyond anything. She actually made a plush toy for MrBunneh (a cute one at that!). That's pretty amazing. I never thought anyone would ever make a plush toy. …I should write it down and attempt to make some sort of plush for my future applications…

Overall Impression: Although Molly's account isn't one of the better ones, it shows she's really dedicated to neo. Plus, it gives her a more 'real' feeling. Only thing was ): she had two 'sad' pets.

Applicant E.

Content:
  • Background from Royaladybug
  • Credit for background
  • Four dancing Cybunny Pixels from Neo
  • Application for MrBunneh he Speckled Cybunny
  • Application text
  • Image of MrBunneh
  • Images of the applicant's pets
Random quote of writing style: A cybunny is one of my dream pets. I was planning on changing MrBunneh's color but the color grew on me and I adore the speckled color. I am trying to help abandoned pets find a good home by zapping them and letting caring Neopians adopt them. Both of my accounts are tended to daily. They are always well fed and whenever they get sick are quickly taken care of."

Rates

Bonus Points:
About the Applicant: 5
Account History: 5
Creativity and Writing Style: 5
Family: 5
Future: 5
Layout: 2
Petpet: 3
(Conclusion for Neomail Subscore: 5)
Total Petpage Bonus Points: 30
Neomail Subscore: 33

Account Points:
Account Age: 5
Avatars: 5
Guild: 5
Lookup: 10
Other: 5
Petpages: 10
Side Accounts: 10
Trophies: 3
Total Account Points: 53

Overall Content Impression: Although the content could have just been a Neomail application, it was defiantly easier to keep track of and laid out quite nicely.

Overall Impression: I was pretty impressed with all four accounts. They all had a lookup and all pets were cared for. In addition, the applicant seemed to have been really active in her guild.

MrBunneh's Neomail

Neomail applications are listed in whole in the pink box. The blue box has my rates C:

I also give a paragraph about my impression of content and over.

Applicant F.

Hello, I'd like to start by apolagising for only being able to write a Neomail application, since my second year of college is starting soon I have found myself up to my ears in coursework O.o As you may tell from browsing my account I am very much a Cybunny fan, but please dont confuse me as a collector - I do not simply collect bunnies and leave them to rot as trophy pets, I use my pets as inspiration for characters, Each pet has their own unique personality and are drawn in Manga style, however at the moment lumeeis is missing his character design, I only received him yesterday. (Continued in Next Neomail)

I am a council member in the guild Cybunny Alliance, This new guild is all about bringing your cybunnies to life as characters, at the moment Anzora is the only bunny I have registered as an Official Team member, however Aqua and Lume are soon to join and Hopefully MrBunneh could be not only welcomed into my family but also into my guild. Im not sure about how else i could really sell myself to you, my account should hopefully be the best thing to base your decision upon as it shows me in all honesty as the dedicated owner I will be for MrBunneh, Eventually I hope to paint Mr Darigan, The story is on -Removed- petpage if you would like to hear more, his name is perfect for the fact it was given to him by a seven year old in my story thanks for your time, I'd love to hear from you in the future. Sarah

Rates

Bonus Points:
About the Applicant: 10
Creativity and Writing Style: 10
Conclusion: 10
Future: 7
Other things: 10 (story)
Overall Neomail Bonus Points: 47

Account Points:
Account Age: 10
Avatars: 2
BCer: 5
Guild: 10
Lookup: 10
Newspaper/AG: 5
Pet Design: 10
Pet Lookups: 10
Petpages: 10
Side Accouts: 10
Trophies: 5
Total Account Points: 82

Overall Content Impression: Oh, really loved Sarah. C: She seems like a very nice person. I have very many Cybunnies too so I understand. A lot of things were very impressing. And I loved the story.

Overall Impression: Very impressed by both the Neomail and the account. Sarah is defiantly someone I will be very, very happy to give MrBunneh to. She does have a pet application for Alyaus but Sarah explained to me about her circumstances. In addition, after reading the page, Sarah didn't include very much well... new useful information I care about. She was as thorough on both applications.

Applicant G.

Hey there!I would like to apply to adopt that cute little cybunny MrBunneh! Why you should pick me:I'm on neopets just about everyday, taking care of my current pet, (& hopefully MrBunneh soon!)I'm an experienced neopets player - despite what my userlookup might tell you at a glance - I infact started playing when I was about 8 for a few years, and now I'm back Cybunnys are one of my favourite pets, and I would always cherish having one as a pet! I like to enter my current pet into the beauty contest and would of course do the same for MrBunneh!Im nice! haha I even took the time to draw this little picture of us together, and I think the picture says it all really! -Petpage link Removed- thanks for taking the time to read this, and good luck on making your decision!
Rates

Bonus Points:
Account History: 5
Creativity and Writing Style: 5
Conclusion: 7
Future: 5
Other things: 10 (art)
Overall Neomail Bonus Points: 32

-Disqualified because of Under Four Months-

Overall Content Impression: I thought Lauren's writing style was really adorable and fun. According to word, there are a few mistakes but I didn't take anything off for it. I loved the art. After I finished reading, I felt that I would be fine if I picked Lauren as the owner. She seems nice C:

Overall Impression: ): sadly disqualified due to being under four months

Applicant H.

hello ^.^ my name is kitty and i am here to apply for your unbelivably stunning MrBunneh .When he first caught my eye i was mesmorised at the sight of him and his incredible style- if i were chosen to adopt him then i would give him a life filled with love,care and the respect he deserves! i would include him in many stories, roleplays and artwork that i will do especially for him- and i solomly sware to give hmi a life with no suffering or rejection. he would have his very own snowbunny petpet and wear a nifty background that suits his livley personality,(i would paint him royal) thanks for your time! please tell me of your decision
Rates

Bonus Points:
Conclusion: 3
Future: 5
Grammar and Spelling: -2
Petpet: 5
Why do you want the pet: 5
Overall Neomail Bonus Points: 16

Account Points:
BCer: 15
Lookup: 5
Pet Design: 5
Pet Lookups: 10
Petpages: 5
Other: -5 (:/ I don't know. The painful loss pound loss page didn't impress me as a Foster)
Trophies: 5
Total Account Points: 40

Overall Content Impression: Didn't give me that great of an impression. Sure, everything sounded awesome, but there was nothing to back anything up at all. How would I know if anything was true? Plus there are a couple of mistakes that bothered me a tad. Later, I searched the account and found an application for another cybunny. Although I don't mind other applications at all, that page had many things that would have given Kitty lots of bonus points. Obviously, since it's not mine, I won't give the bonus points P:

Overall Impression: : Impressed by Kitty's account: BC trophies and such. But I still don't feel like Kitten really cares too much about MrBunneh. Again, I don't mind people applying for other pets and I don't mind Neomail applications. But, it kind of hurts to know the differences: she spent probably 100 times more effort on another pet. I think MrBunneh deserves to go to someone who'd appreciate him more. Plus, according to her, both a skunk cy and a spotted kougra are her dream pets (on different pages). Which leads me to doubt some more. Again, I want to send my pets to someone who'd really appreciate the pet. Yes I know you can have more than one dream pet. But :/ it felt like ...mneh to me.

(My dream pet is a UC grey Acara by the way 8D and only that. My other pets are just my goals.)

Applicant I.

Hello my name is Nikki, and I would like to adopt MrBunneh. The main reason I would like to adopt is for my neice Haley. She went on my account and decided her Tia should get her cybunnies. She is 3, and I made her a side account, that she doesn't know about. I am hoping to get her 4 of them by the time she can actually play. She is young, but I get on her account alot. MrBunneh would be well taken care of and loved, and thanks for reading this!!
Rates

Bonus Points:
About the Applicant: 3
Creativity and Writing Style: 5
Conclusion: 2
Future: -10
Why do you want the pet: 5
Overall Neomail Bonus Points: 5

Account Points:
Account Age: 5
Other: All pets are sad -20
Sick Pet: -10
Trouble on Neo: -5 (sharing accounts?)
Total Account Points: 0

Overall Content Impression: I think this person would have been a nice applicant. She seemed nice and sweet. But what she was doing was against the neo rules. In addition, I really don't think I would like MrBunneh to go to a three year old.

Overall Impression: Defiantly, not impressed with either the actual application or Courtney's account. It doesn't look like anything was done to the account. All pets had the sad face ):. There was nothing else of anything. I'm surprised she's been on for 14 months. In addition, her name is "Courtney and Nikki" which seems like a shared account.

Applicant J.

Hello. I am Roxxie and i am aplying for your pet: mr bunneh. I have been on neopets for more than 5 months. Proof on -Username removed-. No this is not a side. -Username removed- i lost my word so i cant go on it anymore. No i am responsible and have easy to remember memory now every since that. Thanks,Roxxie
Rates

Bonus Points:
Account History: 5
Future: -5
Grammar and Spelling: -10
Overall Neomail Bonus Points: 0

Account Points:
Guild:5
Lookup: 5
Pet Lookups: 2
Petpages: 5
Trophies: 2
Total Account Points: 19

Overall Content Impression: There wasn't anything about Roxxie, MrBunneh, or anything… Just that Roxxie has an older account and is apparently responsible.

Overall Impression: Not way too impressed. Roxxie seemed to be active on neo though C:

MrBunneh's Results

After much thought, I picked Molly (faerieyurbie). I gave her an option of choosing MrBunneh or Clovertene (who I will paint Speckled). Molly picked Clovertene so MrBunneh went to the second runner up: Mannah.

Mannah had an extension because of Hurricane Gustuv. The application wasn't put up in the top ten, since XD when I put the top ten up, I hadn't received Mannah's application yet.

Trifoliume

Trifoliume was created on Cybunny day, 2007. Yes, she use to be a little cybunny.

I wanted to try and zap a chocolate cybunny but instead, found a chocolate kacheek.

And being cybunny based, Trifoliume's name has a really unique meaning. If you search "Trifolium" in google ( Results 1 - 10 of about 1,500,000 for Trifolium. (0.24 seconds)) or even wikipedia ( (Redirected from Trifolium)). Yes, it's a fancy pants name for Clover. The tri part means 'three' and the folium part means 'leaf.'

I adored the name, and Tri, so it was really hard to put her UFA. In the end, I decided I needed room for my Goal pets and that I couldn't take care of her with a design, petpage, and plenty of BCing. Plus, although Tri was my lab pet, I couldn't let a beutiful Chocolate Kacheek disappear. So, on June 10th, 2008 I put her UFA on Neopound with her petpet Mazzew- Clover.

Now, at the end of fostering, I'm very happy to say that I've received so many wonderful applications (XD; almost too many... it's now too hard to choose). And I'm defiantly proud and feel that I'm able to find a wonderful, new owner whoever I pick.

Trifoliume's Petpages

Petpage applicants have a screenshot of the top of the application. The pink box lists the content: talicized means image, Bold means the actual header text of the page, and Regular is just my explanation of text. The blue box lists a writing sample as well as my rates.

I also give a paragraph about my impression of the content as well as overall C:

Applicant A.

Content:
  • Hershey Kisses Background (made by applicant)
  • Marquee text about adopting and pledge
  • Chocolate Kacheek Glitter and Trifoliume Glitter
  • Introduction
  • Introduction about Applicant
  • Reason #1
  • Text about Resources
  • Reason #2
  • Text about being a dedicated player
  • Reason #3
  • Text about Applicant's personality
  • My Poem
  • Text of Poem
  • Reason #4
  • Text about Applicant (history and abilities)
  • A short story!
  • Story C:
  • Meet the family
  • Images and text on family
  • Conclusion
  • Text to conclude the application
  • Where would I keep Tri?
  • Text on which account Tri shall go on
  • Image of a heart
  • Marquee about pets not being sad C:
Random quote of writing style:Trifoliume stepped out into the sunlight. She skipped happily to her favorite place in all of Neopia- the Chocolate factory. Her freshly earned Neopoints from Meerca Chase 2 were grasped tightly in her left paw. She had not even bothered to put them away, because she new they would soon be spent. As she walked into the shop, the shopkeeper smiled and waved at her."

Rates

Bonus Points:
About the Applicant: 10
Account History: 5
Beauty Contest: 2
Creativity and Writing Style: 10
Family: 10* (it was just done so well C: )
Future:10
Layout: 10
Other Things: 5
Poetry: 5
Story Design: 10
Why: 5
(Conclusion for Neomail Subscore: 10)
Total Petpage Bonus Points: 82
Neomail Subscore: 70

Account Points:
Account Age: 10
Avatars: 2
Guild: 10
Lookup: 2
Pet Designs: 5
Side Accounts: 5
Trophies: 2
Total Account Points: 36

Overall Content Impression: I thought the application was very sweet and thorough. And Tri really had a personality (as well as the other pets. I was a tad worried about the "no real main" thing. But I don't think there was anything against the rules going on (only play games on one account …etc).

Edit: The no real main thing was explained. I understand now. All are just played equally.

Overall Impression: The accounts were nice, and the applicant looked real active. There were multiple other applications but they weren't exactly the same, so I can tell that the applicant still worked really hard on tris.

Applicant B.

Content:
  • Chocolate Kacheek background made by applicant
  • My Applacation for Trifoliume ^_^
  • Image of applicant and Triffy made by applicant
  • Image of Blue Kacheek Plushie
  • Why I want your cutie pie ^_^
  • Text about why Applicant wishes to apply for Triffy
  • Little design
  • About Me
  • Text about the applicant
  • Link to Dedicated gallery
  • Some Roleplay"
  • Text on roleplay example and Images of the roleplay
  • Trifoliume's Room
  • Image/Screenie of Trifoliume's Room
  • Text on Triffy's room
  • Why Me? Why be the owner of Trifoliume?
  • Text on reasons to choose applicant
  • My plans with Triffy and Clover
  • Text on plans
  • About Trifoliume
  • Text on Triffy's Stats
  • What About Clover?
  • Story about Clover and Triffy
  • Poems From My Friends
  • Seventeen separate poems from applicant's neofriends
  • Songs!"
  • Four separate poems by applicant and applicant's neofriends
  • Pictures I found
  • Images and credit of four glitters (from Pitty glitters) of Clover and Triffy, Makeable of Triffy from Neopound, Applicants own image
  • The Family ^_^
  • Text about the family
  • Good bye!!
  • Text on conclusion
  • Credit to Simone for layout
Random quote of writing style:I want Trifoliume because of her amazing color, the same reason everyone else is applying for her, But my intentions are purely to role play, draw, and love , not to use her as a trophy pet. Roleplaying is a major passion of mine."

Rates

Bonus Points:
About the Applicant: 10
Art Examples: 10
Creativity and Writing Style: 20
Custom Design/Character Design: 10
Dedications: 20
Family: 5
Future: 10
Grammar and Spelling: -5
Other Things: 10
Petpet: 10
Poetry: 5
Roleplay Examples: 5
Story Design: 10
Why: 5
(Conclusion for Neomail Subscore: 10)
Total Petpage Bonus Points: 125
Neomail Subscore: 85

Account Points:
Account Age: 2
Avatars: 2
Guild: 5
Lookup: 5
Other: 5
Pet Lookups: 2
Total Account Points: 21

Overall Content Impression: D: When I read this, I had many -disallowed_word-*cough* the 17 poems?!?!) as well as "D: AGHHHHH, HOW CAN I DECIDE?" Anywho, I was very, very impressed with this application. Sure, there were some writing issues but the content was way out there. It pretty much had everything there could be stuffed in a petpage. And it was pretty good too. I can seriously tell that Chocolate Kacheeks are Tiffiany's dream pet.

Overall Impression: There were two referrals as well and a whole bunch of dedications: the gallery, the shop, the lookup… There were just a ton of things, and they were worked on too. The account isn't too bad either. All pets are happy, the pets have a lookup, guild owner…etc. Overall everything was pretty much there.

Applicant C.

Content:
  • Neoronic background
  • Neoronic header
  • Welcome
  • Text on welcoming
  • Harris glitter from Neoronic
  • Neronic header again
  • Welcome
  • Harris glitter from Neoronic
  • Story and applicant text
  • Credit and things
Random quote of writing style:One day I was just sniffing around in the flower when i saw a chocolate Kacheek who was gathering food. She was a very friendly kacheek meeting me but suddenly she bolted off. "Wait, Come back!" I called, afraid she would get lost. I darted after her chasing her all through Neopia when suddenly she stopped right in front of the Neoquestopia store (where no neoquest items are sold :D). The owner, Hanna walked out saying, "Oh my little Kacheek, you've found her! Thank you so much." "No problem," I replied."

Rates

Bonus Points:
Beauty Contest: 2
Creativity and Writing Style: 10
Dedications: 5
Future: 2
Petpet: 1
Story Design: 5
Why: 5
Why Not: 5
(Conclusion for Neomail Subscore: 5)
Total Petpage Bonus Points: 35
Neomail Subscore: 38

Account Points:
Guild: 5
Lookup: 2
Other: -10 +5
Total Account Points: 2

Overall Content Impression: The layout seemed to be a tad glitch, but the story was pretty unique. And I loved how my little Neoquestopia store was included. XD; *pokes the store* It really felt that the applicant did research on me or something. I thought it was cute and the user seems very nice.

Overall Impression: Again. The user seems really nice to her pets. But it really hurt how inexperienced she seemed plus her pets had the sad faces ):

Applicant D.

Content:
  • Striped background
  • trifoliume : )
  • Chocolate Kacheek adoptie made by Applicant
  • Tri's Personality Stats
  • Poetry
  • introduction
  • Chocolate Cake Image from Neo
  • Application intro
  • about me
  • Chocolate Aisha Sundae image from Neo
  • About the applicant
  • reasons
  • Chocolate Kacheek Image from Neo
  • Applicant's reasons for wishing to adopt
  • Link to Gallery Dedication
  • meet the family
  • Image of Chocolate Korbat Ice Lolly
  • Images created by applicant and text about applicant and family
  • Profile
  • Image of a Chocolate Faerie Log… thing
  • Tri's stats
  • Image of Tri with a heart
  • Text of Tri's likes
  • Image of Tri with a broke heart
  • Text on Tri's dislikes
  • tri's story
  • Story about how Tri
  • adoptables
  • Chocolate Jhudora Image from neo
  • Set of 20 Kacheek adoptables
  • fan art
  • Chocolate strawberry muffin image from neo
  • Five different fan art images
  • Conclusion
  • Image of a chocolate food item on neo D: which I don't know the name of and can't even guess like the others…
  • Conclusion Text
  • Simone's premade css credit
Random quote of writing style:Back at her neohome, as Trifoliume had a bath, tired, she washed herself. Though how much she washed, she realised, she could not get the chocolate off her skin. "What!?" she exclaimed. A few minutes in the bath did she ponder and realize. She had turned into a chocolate pet! She couldn't believe it- how she had admired Choco, a beautiful chocolate chia. She was so happy, she got out of bath quickly and was skipping and dancing in the living room for a long, long time. "Neopets' birthday is the best day ever!" she sang sweetly."

Rates

Bonus Points:
About the Applicant: 10
Account History: 5
Adoptables: 15
Art Examples: 15
Beauty Contest: 5
Creativity and Writing Style: 10
Custom Design/Character Design: 15
Dedications: 10
Family: 5
Fanart: 15
Future: 5
Poetry: 5
Story Design: 10
Why: 5
(Conclusion for Neomail Subscore: 10)
Total Petpage Bonus Points: 130
Neomail Subscore: 70

Account Points:
Account Age: 3
Avatars: 5
Guild: 5
Lookup: 5
Pet Designs: 10
Pet Lookups: 10
Petpages: 10
Trophies: 2
Total Account Points: 50

Overall Content Impression: I'm very, very impressed with the application. There was a lot of information and the little chocolate images really added to the page. The page excelled on the things I put emphasis on (art, creativity, writing…etc) and it was cute and to the point.

Overall Impression: I'm very impressed with both the application and the account. Active seemed to really care about the pets she had. All pets had a start of a petpage (except for where the application was placed of course). In addition, all pets had a pet lookup and really seemed cared for. The applicant seems active on neo as well.

Applicant E.

Content:
  • Pink stripped background
  • trifoliume header made by applicant
  • Navigation links
  • Welcome!
  • Welcome message
  • Whipped cream and cherry image
  • About –username removed-
  • Text about applicant
  • Whipped cream and cherry image (now assumed to be after every section)
  • The Family
  • Text and Images on family
  • Tri's Story
  • Tri's Likes
  • Images and descriptions of Tri's likes
  • Tri's Dislikes
  • Images and descriptions of Tri's dislikes
  • Photo Album
  • Two Images drawn by applicant and one fanart image from a friend
  • Conclusion
  • Text on conclusion
Random quote of writing style:I had only read about chocolate Kacheeks in faerie tales. They were supposed to be mythological, the creatures of dreams and story books; yet , there sat tiny little Trifoliume, chocolate fur glistening in the Neopian sun, mourning the disappearance of her sundae cap."

Rates

Bonus Points:
About the Applicant: 10
Account History: 5
Art Examples: 10
Creativity and Writing Style: 15
Custom Design/Character Design: 10
Family: 5
Fanart: 5
Future: 5
Layout: 15
Petpet: 10
Story Design: 10
Why: 5
Why Not: 5
(Conclusion for Neomail Subscore: 10)
Total Petpage Bonus Points: 110
Neomail Subscore: 80

Account Points:
Account Age: 10
Avatars: 5
Guild: 5
HP in the Reds: -5
Other: -5 +10
Sick Pet: -5
Side Accounts: 5
Trophies: 5
Total Account Points: 25

Overall Content Impression: I thought the account was very sweet and I loved reading the story. The story was really well written and I can just picture Tri sitting there saying, matter-a-factly although sadly in a way, "I lost my hat." It was just adorable and the rest of the application fit with it well.

Overall Impression: I'm very impressed with how long Heather's been on neo. And she seems really active C: Although I am sad that she has a few unhappy pets : (

Applicant F.

Content:
  • Background created by Applicant
  • Chocolate Mouse
  • Header by applicant
  • hey there!
  • Text about application
  • Pet Comments (now assumed to be after every section unless stated otherwise)
  • about me on neo
  • Text about applicant
  • about me off neo
  • Text about applicant off of neo
  • my accounts
  • Text about applicant's accounts past and present
  • meet my pets
  • Text and images of family
  • future pets =3
  • Text and images of future family
  • why am I interested? Why am I the best choice? What is trifo's future with me?
  • Text about why, information about Trifo's future, and link to background and bow in gallery
  • Image of crayons
  • clover =]
  • Information and future of clover (with Petpet paint brush in gallery)
  • choco kacheek art
  • Four pictures of Trifo drawn by applicant
  • Six adoptables of Trifo
  • Five makeables of Trifo
  • Seven fanart images of Trifo, including one from Clou8D
  • references
  • Three References (another neomailed me directly)
  • a bit of roleplay
  • A roleplay/story about Trifo
  • bai!
  • Conclusion text
  • petpage credit and info
  • Credit Text
Random quote of writing style:Cookie. Cookie. Cookie. She was Vietnamese, like me, and we became very close. She's not my friend anymore though. We branched out. ;-;"

Rates

Bonus Points:
About the Applicant: 10
Account History: 5
Adoptables: 10* (counted adoptables of Trifo instead)
Art Examples: 15
Beauty Contest: 10
Creativity and Writing Style: 10
Custom Design/Character Design: 10
Family: 5
Fanart: 20
Future: 10
Layout: 20
Petpet: 10
Roleplay Examples: 5
References/Referrals: 10
Why: 5
(Conclusion for Neomail Subscore: 10)
Total Petpage Bonus Points: 145
Neomail Subscore: 60

Account Points:
Avatars: 2
Account Age: 5
BCer: 10
Guild: 10
Lookup: 10
Pet Designs: 10
Pet Lookups: 10
Petpages: 2
Side Accounts: 5
Trophies: 3
Total Account Points: 57

Overall Content Impression: I was very impressed by the application. The layout (although doesn't work at all on firefox on my very wide resolution) worked perfectly when I used the suggested format. In addition, the page provided a ton of information that I wished to have. And ^^; Kazzy reminded me of myself… not when I was her age… I was still a very giant newb then. But she reminds me of myself even now. When I read her description of herself I couldn't help but go "8O OMG THAT'S ME!" Except she's Vietnamese and I'm Chinese. And I'm immature for my age and use of smilies and she's mature for hers… But even our writing styles, are similar. And with the transitive property of Hanna… I assumed she'll be on neo for a very, very long time. Plus unlike me… she'll someday go into high school while I will go into college. And since I've been through high school, I know people still have time to play neo. *nod nod*

Okay back to the actual content, instead of ramblings of myself.,. the petpage included everything I really was looking for. And it also excelled on things I really enjoyed and put emphasis on. And the little pet comment blog was very adorable and unique.

Overall Impression: I was very impressed with Kazzy's main. It was nicely organized and things C: I would have loved to see petpages though. In addition, I actually have seen Kazzy BCing her jubjub before I knew her as an applicant. And, being a BCer, I put a huge emphasis on artists. Plus, the contest is one of the only things you can really do to bring out the pet's personality.

Applicant G.

Content:
  • Background Image drawn by applicant
  • Background Image Text: "Trifoliume- the chocolate kacheek
  • Best Viewed in…etc
  • Poem- "E.L.O.- Mr. Blue Sky"
  • Text intro
  • Chocolate Kacheek Adoptable Image #1
  • Introduction - - - - ♥
  • Story and Images (2) of the story drawn by applicant
  • Statistics - - - - ♥
  • Stats and appearance of Truffles
  • Reference Sheet and another image
  • Love and Hate Images and text
  • Text and Image of Chip the Warf drawn by applicant (:
  • My Art - - - - ♥
  • Three traditional images of Truffles
  • Two other art examples
  • Screenies of four fonts dedicated to Kacheeks
  • Image of Trifoliume again (used in reference image)
  • Fanart - - - - ♥
  • Three fanart images
  • About Me - - - - ♥
  • Chocolate Kacheek Adoptable #2
  • Text about Applicant
  • The Family - - - - ♥
  • Images and text on family
  • Why Me? - - - - ♥
  • Text on Applicant
  • Chocolate Kacheek Adoptable #3
  • Why Her? - - - - ♥
  • Text on why Trifoliume
  • Chocolate Kacheek Adoptable #4 and #5
  • Future Plans - - - - ♥
  • Text on future plans
  • Past BC examples
  • Past Neopian Times Comic examples
  • Background image and Future lookup screenie
  • Adoptables - - - - ♥
  • Images and list of adoptables (complete) and makeable image
  • Thank You! - - - - ♥
  • Text on thanks C:
  • The End - - - - ♥
  • Conclusion
  • Chocolate Kacheek adoptable #6
Random quote of writing style:Trifoliume finds the best in others and always has a smile on her face. She is constantly willing to learn about everything- the slorg crawling along a swamp log, to the elusive golden pteri that flies through the sky. With that, she takes her curious nature, always looking for something to study and discover. Don't let her cute appearance fool you! Truffles doesn't take no for an answer!"

Rates

Bonus Points:
About the Applicant: 10
Account History: 5
Adoptables: 15
Art Examples: 20
Beauty Contest: 10
Creativity and Writing Style: 10
Colour Ref: 10
Custom Design/Character Design: 20
Family: 5
Fanart: 15
Future: 10
Layout: 15
Petpet: 10
Story Design: 10
Why: 5
(Conclusion for Neomail Subscore: 10)
Total Petpage Bonus Points: 170
Neomail Subscore: 55

Account Points:
Account Age: 10
Avatars: 5
BCer: 10
Lookup: 5
Newspaper/AG: 20
Pet Designs: 10
Pet Lookups: 10
Petpages: 10
Side Accounts: 5
Trophies: 5
Total Account Points: 90

Overall Content Impression: 8D Oh whoa. I'm very impressed with the entire application. It's very, very nicely done. And I can tell that it's been worked on a lot. It's very cute and adorable and Trifoliume really develops a character. Plus, it's overloaded with art and writing- which is my love. I really loved the story too. I really want to hear more 8D. As a note, there is also a gallery link. I debated on putting it as a dedication. In the end, I didn't since it was just the items. I did, however, screenie the items since they're adorable and matches Truffles' personality.

Overall Impression: Very impressed by accounts as well. XD; and I'm very glad Trifoliume was listed in 'dream pets.' It would have been disappointing if I randomly went there and poof. You fail Hanna, my dream pet is not a Chocolate Kacheek. The account is very nicely taken care of and the user is active. I don't think she'll quit any time soon. I love the application so very much, Truffles' personality is so squishy and adorable. XD; This is the only instance where a hello-kitty song would be appropriate as a background song. …I /do/ have a hello kitty so on my flash drive. *goes back to view it with the song*

Trifoliume's Neomail

Important! Please Read: After receiving over 16+ accepted neomail applications for Trifoliume, I've decided to only include the top three. D: and that's hard since I had 7 finalists... If you are not on the list of three, it means you aren't placed as highly as these three. Sorry. The reason I've only included the top three was because I wished to have only 10 applications per foster pet and all the petpage applications this time were amazing.

And in case you're wondering, P: I picked the top 7 by applications. I then /glanced/ at the accounts to see if anything was troubling and picked the top three by application only. After I picked the top three, I rated the account.

Neomail applications are listed in whole in the pink box. The blue box has my rates C:

I also give a paragraph about my impression of content and overall C:.

Applicant H.

Trifoliume-when I first laid eyes on her, I knew she was the pet for me. With that lucious brown fur and the whipped cream dollop on her head, she sat looking at me and I knew she was the one...About Me: I've been playing neopets for two years and this is my final account. My sides include –username removed- and –username removed-. During the summer, I am on neo everyday to check in on my pets. And during the school year, I am on every weekend and two to three days a week. If I leave for vacation, my pets are in safe care of the neolodge. In real life, I like to read and write, do yoga, and just relax. Otherwise, I am on neopetsThe other half of the applications will come in another neomail. Thanks,~Leafy

Owing Trifoliume: If I were to own Trifoliume, her daily meal would consist of health food and the occasional chocolate treat. Her hunger level would never reach below 'fine' or too far above for that matter. She would have lots of plushies and squeeze toys to occupy Tri's time, plus her sisters would adorn her with love. Tri would sit as my main pet, tagging along with me to the Merry Go Round, Tiki Tours, Jelly World, various wheels, and many more exotic locations.Tri would be the star of short stories and series I am writing for the Neopian Times. All in all, I would love Trifoliume as more than a pixilized trophie. She would have a warm spot reserved in my heart for years to come. I hope I can have covered everything and if not, feel free to neomail at any time with questions. I hope you are enjoying the Altador cup and you have a lovely day,~Leafy

Rates

Bonus Points:
About the Applicant: 10
Account History: 5
Creativity and Writing Style: 10
Conclusion: 10
Future: 10
Why do you want the pet: 5
Total Neomail Bonus Points: 50

Account Points:
Account Age:
Avatars: 1
Guild: 8*
Lookup: 5
Other: -10 (sad pets)
Petpages: 5
Side Accounts: 5
Total Account Points: 14

Overall Content Impression: I really loved this application. The beginning really hooked me in. x_X this is my 15th application I've looked at and wrote about for Tri alone (/today/… D: ) so I've been kind of dead to applications. This one woke me up C: It was sweet and to the point as well and highlighted all the things I care about.

Overall Impression: A little sad about the sad pets, but she seems really active in her guild and active on neo overall. Although... o_O she's only played 26 games in 14 months?!

Applicant I.

Hello, Hanna, I would like to adopt Trifoliume The delicious Kacheek. :3

Why I want to adopt her;
well, why wouldnt I? She's cute, and sweet, and if I was hungry and she happened to be there... xD

what I plan to do wih her;
Enter her in the Beauty Contest,Make her a petpage, and make her a character. I should think of one now! *thinking*
character;
age: 14
nationality(on earth): italian/french
nationality(neopian): neovian
Strengths: courage, being undetectable, yummy,
Weaknesses: can sometimes get very angry, is often overlooked, yummy.

Rates

Bonus Points: Creativity and Writing Style: 5 Conclusion: 5 Future: 5 Other things: 5 Why do you want the pet: 5
Total Neomail Bonus Points: 25

Account Points:
Account Age: 3
Avatars: 2
Guild: 5
Lookup: 3
Pet Designs: 3
Petpages: 3
Trophies: 2
Total Account Points: 21

Overall Content Impression: Aww, I thought this was cute and unique. I like the character chart, and she seems like she'll take care of Tri.

Overall Impression: She has art on her petpages 8D and she seems like she'll be a decent owner

Applicant J.

hello, I would like to be Trifoliume's owner, and i decided to do a different kind of application that will help me stand out from everyone else that applied. So I won't go through all of the I will feed and play with her details, because it is expected that i will feed her. Anyways, since she's chocolate I will definitely not paint her or adopt out, I mean i have a hard time putting bookstained ufa, so it would be impossible for me to put Trifoliume UFA. (Im such a softy ) But whatever, I promised myself I wouldn't get into the details. I guess I should tell you a little about myself. I have been on neopets for 3 years, and this is my main. I have been temporarily banned for talking about global warming websites. But thats all, TNT is really harsh on me. XD I LOVE the twilight series and Gilmore Girls. Well, actually i am OBSESSED with the twilight series like seriously obsessed, my life revolves around it, i live for twilight! I hope you consider me as Trifoliume's owner, thank you for taking your time rea ding this! -Natalie
Rates

Bonus Points:
About the Applicant: 10
Account History: 5
Conclusion: 5
Why do you want the pet: 5
Total Neomail Bonus Points: 25

Account Points:
Avatars: 2
Account Age: 5
Avatars: 1
Lookup: 3
Other: -15
Petpages: 5
Trophies: 5
Total Account Points: 6

Overall Content Impression: Seems like a nice person C: and seems like she'll take good care of pets

Overall Impression: ): She has 3 sad pets

Trifoliume's Results

;-;

I'm sorry, everyone. I love you all.

It pains me to decide.

So...

D: I asked my brother to pick from my top three.

Congrats neodragonangel! You're amazing. The petpage was absolute perfection. And Trifoliume's so cute. When you're done with her petpage, mind neomailing me? I'd love to read the whole story. Annnnnnnndd I love your screenies 8D. If you wish to have an award I shall give you one *nod nod*

Wall of Shame D{

People who made me very, very sad.

User: edrea_teope

Stole and edited art made by another user, and then tried to pass it off as her own. Orginal artist: here.

User: hystericalxhannah

Offered Neopoints and Items to Buy Trifoliume

In conclusion,

Oh, are you done talking to Hanna? Hmm? You don't remember me? I'm Chevreuse, Hanna's receptionist, remember?

FAQ

I'm here to answer any questions you have for me... that I actually know. Other wise you'll need to contact Hanna.

So are all of the People shown finalists?
Actually, no. They aren't. I'm sorry if it's confusing. The archive houses the top ten applicants. This means that if only ten people applied (such as MrBunneh) all applicants are shown. Anyone shown under Trifoliume's section is pretty much a finalist however. So please remember! This is not to show the finalists, but the top /ten/.

Why do you call pets by weird nicknames?
Although Hanna calls Trifoliume, Tri, I'm sure there are more unique and awesome nicknames. Hanna's not the most creative person alive, after all. Hanna calls the pet by the applicant's nickname when she talk about the applicant's page. The archive files it that way to recognize the character in more, er in character?

Why do you have this page?
Hanna wants to explain why she picked who she picked. And Hanna knows the confusion of trying your hardest and still not getting picked. Hopefully this will help all the applicants (shown or not shown) understand why someone was picked to be the owner. Further, hopefully this will help future applicants.

Can I be removed from this page?
;_; if you really want to. Your names aren't shown, however... and the links to the petpages will be removed once Hanna picks the owner. D: but sure, if you really, super, duper want to.

Did you make and draw this page yourself?
Yes, all coding and images (besides the screenies of course!) are drawn and created by /Hanna/. o__O although there's really only one picture she's worked on... the header... anywho. Don't steal please. It makes everyone sad.

Why didn't you screenie the neomails?
It makes the page easier to load and this:


Taken today, September 1st. It goes until June 28th (about 2 months ago). Which was after Trifoliume (June 10th) and MrBunneh (June 22nd) were put up for adoption. ;_; Do you really want Hanna to go search through all that to find the applicants?

Well, I hope your chat with hanna is useful. If you want to contact her, please feel free to neomail her.

She'll get back to you as soon as possible. But, she's very busy.

In any case, I hope you had a nice time. And you are welcomed to check out some of my sibling's petpages.







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