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~*~Makui Introduction~*~
Name: Makui
Full name: Makui-Shen
MAI-CU-SHEN
Spesie: Peophin
Gender: Female
Element: Balance
Colour: Christmas
Wished Paint: Acquired
Guardian of: Mecca the Shaman( Noomeci )
Sprite: Inu the Feepit
Mate: None
Siblings: None
Voice: Misty, of Pokemon
Sweet-shy-silent-wary
Alter ego: Shinobi
Name: Shinobi
SHIN-NO-BI
Darigan
Distorted-evil-manipulate -malevolent
~*~Welcome~*~
"Hi and welcome to my home." Said the huble little Christmas peophin who stood infront of you. "My name is Makui Shen, but plz call me Makui. Shen is only a tittle, It means Godly however I really doubt that I am."
"I live among three other pets, and together we're Noomeci's guardian. However I'm on a journey of self-knowledge, of who I really am. So I have little contact with them. But I know there well, I just know" She smiled faintly " I guess I should tell you before its to late. I have …how can I say this, an other self. " You looked upon her confusedly. "An alter ego." She replied seeing your reaction" Her name is Shinobi. For a long time a thought she was a wicked and cruel person, the evil side of me, but about a month ago,…I realized she's just the confused side of me. But still I don't know how she came to me, and that basically what I'm searching for. But the journey is long, … however Its good to know I'm not alone, not really…cuz of Shinobi.' She sighs, but when she looked up her face was filled with glee , her weariness gone. "But enough of that, let me show you a bit around this place. First up is what led me to my journey; this is the beginning of my story, and look carefully for a few hints." Than later I'll introduce you to the family, err …guardians of Noomeci, oh and my sweet little companion Inu." She swim of, and you hastily try to follow her."
~*~Story of Makui~*~
~*%*~Makui the Truth~*%*~
"I came to this village as a young pheo of 6, I had no say of the choice that was made. We had to leave my old home, I wish I could only understand why…I'm 15 now …and I still don't know why. Maybe if we still stayed at our old home…maybe Shinobi would have never appeared"
Makui stood at her window located to the far-off wall of where I stood. She was a dark olive green Pheo, I Christmas pheo if I'm not mistaken, with a cream mane and tail. But the most eye seemingly attribute of Makui was the miserable broken look in her eyes. And one can only guess that this Shinobi is the cause of this.
Makui came to me about two years ago; she was a complete and utter wreck., and I had no choice but to accept her into my family of Guardian Neopets. I'm known as the Noomeci Mecca, a shaman as you will, or is that rather a shawoman. And it's only essential that I have guardian beast that protect me. Makui, now becoming one of them. She seems lost most of the time referring to bits and pieces of her live, but other wise she's still reluctantly silent about how she came to were she is now. But one thing is clear, if she had the chance she would have chosen to stay away from people as much as possible. In fear that Shinobi will appear once again.
"I've actually felt the joy when she created chaos in the town centre, so many years ago…hmmm…when I snapped out of it I was malicious laughing my lungs out. Houses burning amidst me, people fleeing …some even glaring at me in hope that they'll do me harm threw their eyes… But they feared me…they feared Shinobi."
She fell silent at the mention of the name, as expected.
Shinobi. I only got a glance of her a few times before, never came to close… wouldn't want to, but today it had to stop. That's why I'm here actually, Makui explained to me once that she could feel Shinobi determination to get free, and that Makui only had so much enough force to keep her at bay. Today, Shinobi will once again be free, and its up to me to get her under control.
"Shinobi, why won't you leave me alone ….
It began..
Makui's eyes was closed in concentration to bear Shinobi inside, sweat driping over her forehead, tears forming in her eyes. I suspected a massive and brutal transformation, but was baffled to see the alteration being much simpler. Before me Makui's colour scheme morphed from green to a deep mauve, sprayed with dark black spots, her mane became tackier, longer, and was now the colour of ebony black.
Her angel wings became misformed, leathery and rotten wings. Tears now trickled down her cheek; a single drop stained the wooden floor where it had felled.
In front of me stood a whole new strange pheo , her aura darkening the room we occupied.
"So you're Shinobi?"
Se didn't move, but the vicious, malicious smile could clearly be seen In her reflection in the far end window she stood at.
"So you're Mecca…" A pregnant silent fallowed, disturbed when Shinobi turned her head, so that one of her eyes could view me. "…Are you here to stop me?"
Taken aback by this remark, I suddenly felt a drowning darkness come from this Pheo. I felt it before when I saw her at a distant, but was no magnified with her close presence.
But something else caught my eye, a tear, I first thought of it to be one of Makui's tears while transforming. But was surprised by seeing that the tears were multiplying. Shinobi was crying.
" I'm sorry, … I harmed so many, while it's me who should be punished. ..I…I …can..t …stop..Mec.c…ca.., Its my curse, and now its Makui's too."
I listen deeply, not noticing what I was doing, when I found myself again, I found myself beside Shinobi. As out of planned instinct, I threw my arms around her face, hugging it, allowing her tears to wet my clothes. Shinobi was as lost as Makui was, and I felt the same love for Shinobi as I did for Makui. Realizing, that they weren't different at all, but one is the same..
"Makui, what happened was never your fault, …your mother was dying from a disease, … you took it upon yourselves to be the guilty one, that you allowed yourselves to be blamed for her death. You left your home because of that, the Village, was in a warmer climate, but it was to late, …your mother was going to die"
Shinobi pulled a bit away, her eyes; even thought it was a red colour, was still Makui's, calm and sad eyes. Makui, never knew the meanings of her past, but I knew. I always knew, it was a gift, and I had such a strong bond with my pets, that it was my gift to know everything about them… I only now saw Makui's past. But I could only see it through Shinobi. I now understood… Shinobi was an alter ego, a phantom, a replica of Makui's past horrors, and blame. She allowed the hurt to always return, Shinobi was just another Makui. And Makui was the innocent and the good side of Shinobi.
"So now what Mecca."
"You live…. as one"
This is just a little piece of the puzzle solved, Shinoni is still part of Makui, but how come did she have a major brake down, does Shinobi and Makui, actually be one peo with two different personalities. Why is Makui turning into Shinobi? And why would she take pleasure in harming others. If she could burst in to tears, just any normal peo could. Even if I'm a Shaman, I can't answer all, ...Makui needs help... and maybe I'm not the right person to do so. Makui left on a journey to claim herself, maybe you'll meet her long the way, if you do just give her a great of confidents, and I you meet Shinobi....RUN LIKE HELL.




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