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Revenge: Part One

by Gzusgirl

Nicolna the Chia runs up to the window of her chocolate room in her owner's NeoHome. She looks outside. Yes! It's bright and sunny and the perfect day to go outside and play! Nicolna runs down the hall and wakes up her brother, Moustous the Kacheek.

She's so excited she then runs down the hall to her sister Jibojibber the Jubjub's room and wakes her up. She runs into GemofIce the Shoyru's room and wakes her up. All of Nicolna's siblings wake up lazily and go into the kitchen. They are all half asleep while eating their NeoCrunch while Nicolna is bouncing around in her chair between bites of NeoCrunch Moustous looks at her and asks, "Why are you so crazy?"

Nicolna looks innocent for a moment and then says, "Crazy? Who says I'm crazy??"

Moustous rolls his eyes and finishes his NeoCrunch

After lunch, the group walks around town aimlessly and then discover 50 Neopoints on the ground. Jibojibber squeals for joy and is now happy that Nicolna woke them up so early in the morning. Nicolna and her siblings skip along the street happily and then Nicolna runs SMACK into something. She opens her eyes and screams. The others are so horrified they are at a loss for words. Standing in front of them is the Swamp Ghoul! Nicolna shudders with fear and Jibojibber holds the bag on NP tightly.

The Swamp Ghoul smiled a ghastly smile and says, "Well, hello there little ones. Mind if I borrow, say... 50 Neopoints?"

Nicolna shouts, "Oh no you don't!" and stands in between the Swamp Ghoul and Jibojibber.

The Swamp Ghoul eyes Nicolna and wonders where she got the courage. Then a green Skeith that was walking across the street sees this and decides to watch.

The Swamp Ghoul asks, "No I don't what?" He reaches for the 50 Neopoints Nicolna uses her spark ability against the Swamp Ghoul. The Ghoul gets very angry and punches Nicolna as hard as he possibly can. The Skeith starts running over to the group.

The Ghoul kicks Nicolna one last time and she sputters out a small spark at him. Jibojibber gets extremely angry at what the Ghoul is doing to her sister and uses her smoke screen. The Ghoul seems unaffected by this and grabs the Neopoints He kicks Nicolna one last time and goes on his way.

The group doesn't know what to do. Nicolna has no more Health Points left and they don't have any healing potions with them. The Skeith runs up beside Nicolna and says, "Hey Shoyru! Can you fly us up to Faerieland?" GemofIce says she'll try and actually manages to get the group up there, including the Skeith.

The Skeith grabs Nicolna and runs over to the healing springs. The rest of the group follows him. The water fairy tries her best to come up with a good spell. She says some words that the rest of the group can't understand and then finally Nicolna opens her eyes. She smiles, "Hey you guys.... Sorry he got the Neopoints. Hey, who's the Skeith?"

The Skeith takes a bow and introduces himself as Ambreeze. Nicolna thanks Ambreeze with all of her heart and GemofIce flies them back down to the mainland. The group waves to the Skeith as he leaves, then they run back to their NeoHome. Their owner has been worried sick about them and hugs them very tightly. She decides that in the morning, she's going to take them all to the Toy Shop and they can all pick out a new toy.

That night, Nicolna decided that after they go to the toy shop. She was going to hunt down that Swamp Ghoul. She couldn't let him get away with what he did! She wondered if anyone would go with her, then she remembers Ambreeze. She wonders if he'd want to go with her. But then she wonders where the Swamp Ghoul lives. She decides she will ask the Brain Tree.

To be continued...

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