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The Neopian Times Week 41 > Continuing Series > The Raider of Kiko Lake - Part Two: The Journey Begins

The Raider of Kiko Lake - Part Two: The Journey Begins

by jenjen26785

For everyone who missed the last issue, here's an update of our heroes, heroines and villains ...

Angel_72_21, a.k.a. Angel. The heroine of the story. She's a pretty, smart Electric Eyriess whose stubbornness can get the better of her at times. She's very lyrical and poetic, and—being a country gal—believes all the rumours of Neopia being such a fantastic centre for the arts. Her favourite item of jewellery is a lovely golden locket that she never opens. She's getting bored of life at the swamp, and is determined to travel to Neopia Central to solve the mystery of the Krawk Clan Raiders.

SwiftBrightBeak, a.k.a. Swifty. He's a well-known Electric-coloured Eyrie at the swamp who carries around a blue rucksack everywhere. He's good at geology and geography, which is why he becomes so valuable in the search for the Raiders. He sees the trip to Neopia Central as an opportunity to expand his geographical knowledge, check out the pubs 'n' clubs, and to get to know Angel better.

Shining_Safyre, a.k.a. Saf, a blue Aisha. Saf is Angel's best friend, and it was she that Inspector Burzwakh decided to victimise. She became very suspicious upon hearing of the Krawk Clan's reputation outside the swamp. She's normally quite quiet, but goes beyond caring when listening to her really cool rainbow boom box! She was very optimistic about going to Neopia Central with Angel and Swifty, in the hope of seeing some of the celebs, but doesn't expect anything odd to happen ...

Spike, a.k.a. Jen is the owner of Angel, Rincham and their older sister Twist. She's the one who, with Rincham, sees the shadowy figure lurking around the swamp.

Rincham constantly changes his colour and species after becoming a Lab Ray pet. He's very crazy and VERY immature, which was what got them into trouble in the first place. With his owner Spike, he was the first to witness the appearance of a very strange, shadowy character lurking around the swamp.

Burzwakh the stone Grarrl is a bit of a bullyboy, and thinks the only way of getting his job done is to intimidate the witness as much as possible. Unluckily for him, his first victim just so happened to be the best friend of a very protective Eyriess! Both Angel and Saf were very suspicious of him, and the rest of the police force were sent to investigate the claims.

Haltred, a white Uni. Haltred is a lot more professional than his partner Burzwakh, but he too just wants to get his job done. He is very suspicious of the Krawk Clan, mainly because they choose to live in a damp, dank swamp instead of the city. He takes the Swamp Raider case a lot more seriously than Burzwakh, but deep down he still believes the rumours that Krawk Clan are just renegades and doesn't entirely trust them.

~*~*~*~

Angel's dream quest was turning out to be quite a pointless task. She had been hunting all day, and there was nothing. No evidence whatsoever. If she can't find any evidence, that's one dirty big black mark the locals can hold against the name of Krawk Clan for a long time to come. She fingered the locket nervously.

It was getting quite late. There was a foul stench in the air. A cold zephyr bristled through her azure fur, and she shuddered. She looked up as the sun was beginning to set.

"Oh well," muttered Saf, "We might as well just visit the scene of the crime again." They had already investigated the willow trees, but to visit them at exactly the same time the attack happened? That would be exciting!

The willow trees are famous for their beautiful view of the lake, and are usually bustling with life. Now it was as quiet and eerie as a morgue. Angel searched the ground. Nothing, yet again.

"I was a fool to think I could make any difference in this investigation", she sighed.

"Don't be disheartened," comforted Saf, "There'll be something here. You know Spike and Rincham as well as I do—better, even. They didn't lie about what happened last night."

At that moment, something caught Angel's eye. A few shrubs on the other side of one of the willows were illuminated by a light source. "Wait here," she whispered. She crept round the tree slowly, and pounced... onto nothing. There was nothing there. But there was still a bright light that now cast her shadow across the ground. She turned. The light was coming from the tree. There were vast claw marks etched into the bark, beaming bright light for a few feet around. Of course, it wouldn't have been seen during the day. And it was quite enclosed too. Deliberately? Things were starting to make sense.

"Ach! That hums! What is that smell, Saf?"

"Angel, I think you'd better take a look at this," Saf called from 'round the tree. She was standing on a log and looking on the ground. Heaped under the roots was a reeking pile of sludge.

"A clue?"

"I think so."

~*~*~*~

Angel and Saf returned to The Hollow, Angel's tree-home built into a majestic Oak, named ~The*Eyrie*Oak~, to discuss this new evidence. ~The*Eyrie*Oak~ was quite a pretty house, covered in bracken ferns and adorned with wild lavender plants. The aroma of the plants intoxicated the air, making anyone who passed through feel incredibly relaxed.

Saf sat at the desk, reading the local paper, The Neopian Times. That, too, was biased against the Clan, donating only a fraction-page article to the case. Angel typed frantically on her laptop.

"Found anything yet?"

"Almost. What colour sludge is it again?"

"Brown."

She stopped typing and turned the laptop to face Saf. "Brown sludge comes direct from Mystery Island. It was being kept under a log. I'll bet someone is trying to get rid of it, or hide it. The log prevented the stench from reaching the investigation area."

"How do you know someone wasn't just trying to dump the stuff illegally in the swamp?"

"That's my point. They were."

"WHAT?!?" Saf looked disgusted.

"Someone has been using the swamp as an illegal sludge dumping ground for years now. Just look at the darker areas of the swamp behind the willows. They're full of it! However, if they've been dumping sludge for years, it doesn't give much insight into why there have only been these mysterious sightings recently ..." Angel spun around sharply on hearing a rustling sound outside the window. Seeing nothing, she shrugged and carried on typing.

Saf was frantic. "Forget the sightings. Our swamp is being polluted! We've got to do something about it."

"Shushushush," Angel muttered suddenly. She crept towards the window. The floorboards creaked as she stepped lightly over them, but they were muffled in comparison with the crackling sound coming from the plants. She reached her paw out of the window, and grabbed something that choked loudly. She yanked her arm back in. Another Electric Eyrie was being dragged, head first, through the window.

"Swifty? What in Neopia are you doing here?"

Saf gave a sigh of relief. SwiftBrightBeak was a handsome Eyrie and a common visitor to the swamp. He was good friends with Angel. He squirmed in her grasp.

*cough cough* "Let go of my throat, and I'll tell you!" *cough*

She let go, reluctantly.

"Okay, okay, I was just passing by and saw this ENORMOUS Tigermouse right outside your window. I couldn't just leave you to get attacked and have your cheese stolen, being the gentleman that I am, so I grappled with it. It tried to bite me, but I was just too fast for it. And then--" He was cut short by the poisonous glares Saf and Angel were giving him. "Alright, I was being nosy. You happy?"

Angel laughed, showing him there were no hard feelings. "Okay, your story checks out."

"Well, FYI, brown sludge comes from Tyrannia, not Mystery Island." They both gave him funny looks, but before they could say anything he explained: "I aced geology."

"You were listening to our conversation?"

"How could I ignore it? Well, if you're going to Tyrannia, you're gonna have to pass through Neopia City; count me in."

Angel shuffled uncomfortably.

Saf had one of those deep-thought looks on her face. "Hmmm, well ... who said anything about going to Neopia City anyway?"

"You need help in solving the case. The most logical thing seems to be to trace these clues back to their origin. Don't try to tell me the thought hasn't crossed your mind already!" Swifty's eyes glazed over in a daze. "Think about it ..."

"... the poetry, the atmosphere ..."

"... the concerts, the stars ..."

"... the clubs and the bright lights ..."

They all grinned together. Saf jumped up. "I'll tell the Clan. We're gonna be gone for at least a few days, so we don't want anyone missing us. Pack your bags; we're off to Neopia City!"

To be continued...

Previous Episodes

The Raider of Kiko Lake: Part One

The Raider of Kiko Lake - Part Three

The Raider of Kiko Lake - Part Four

The Raider of Kiko Lake - Part Five

The Raider of Kiko Lake - Part Six

The Raider of Kiko Lake - Part Seven

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