If you have a Facebook account, click here to continue logging in.


If you don't have a Facebook account, click here to log in with your Neopets information.
Storytelling Competition - (click for the map) | (printer friendly version)

If you have any questions about the competition then read our awesome FAQ!


Week 56
You are on Week 57
Week 58

Every week we will be starting a new Story Telling competition - with great prizes! The current prize is 2000 NP, plus a rare item!!! This is how it works...

We start a story and you have to write the next few paragraphs. We will select the best submissions every day and put it on the site, and then you have to write the next one, all the way until the story finishes. Got it? Well, submit your paragraphs below!

Story Fifty Seven - Ended December 28th

By day, Alvie the Shoyru worked as a doorman at the Presidential Palace. The work was hard, and it didn't pay very much, but at least he made enough NP to enjoy an occasional rare toy or fancy dinner, which was fine by him. Besides, Alvie was good at his job, and he liked working at the Presidential Palace, one of the most luxurious hotels in all Neopia.

However, nobody at the Presidential Palace knew about Alvie's secret life. You see, in the hours while he was away from the Presidential Palace, Alvie the Shoyru...

Author: Neopets Staff
Date: 26 Dec.
...was really the leader of the "Shoyru Super Shoguns," a band of samurai responsible for keeping Neopia safe from villainous enemies. These brave Shoyru always carried Shoyru Swords, Shields and an unlimited supply of Shoyru Sharp Shortcakes filled with explosive Sherbet.

One night, all was quiet at the Presidential Palace. Alvie tiptoed away to their secret headquarters, where the others were waiting.

"What do you have to report?" Alvie asked in an authoritative voice that was very different from his daily innocence.

"Well," one of the other Shoyrus, a gardener named Shoythang, muttered, "I have some bad news. You see..."

Author: blakey393
Date: 26 Dec.
...the Shoyru agent on his way here tonight was intercepted." Everyone gasped. "He had some Top Secret information about the you-know-what." Shoythang said. "The Ninja Chias sent out fifteen armed warriors to get him."

"But how can this be?" Alvie exclaimed. "He was our best agent!" Everyone started talking now. Then another Shoyru stood up and said...

Author: iangrant
Date: 26 Dec.
..."What are you talking about, Shoythang? The 'lost' agent is coming through our door!" He pointed to a discreet crack in the ceiling, which they used as a doorway. A body wriggled through and dropped to the ground beside Alvie. It was cloaked in heavy black material, which concealed its entire body. Who else could it be but Shoysan, the missing agent?

"Shoysan! We thought you'd been captured!" everyone cried in relief. Everyone, that is, except Alvie, who narrowed his eyes at the cloaked face. Wasn't Shoysan taller and thinner than the stout figure before him?

Shoysan gave a derisive snort. "Captured?" he said mockingly. "Who would dare?" In the uncomfortable silence that followed, Shoysan laughed while scanning the room. "I've located the band of Ninja Chias that's supposedly out to get me," he said. "Come, we will track them down and punish them for attempting to capture me." He started towards the entrance, then stopped when no one made a move to follow him. "Well? I said let's go!"

Everyone glanced uncertainly at Alvie, who strode up to Shoysan and peered at his veiled face for a long, tense moment. "You're not Shoysan!" he finally spat. "You--"

There was a blinding flash of light and a great booming sound. When the smoke cleared, the Shoguns saw their leader laid out on the ground...

Author: rubberchicken889
Date: 26 Dec.
...unconcious. They soon revived him, but in their haste the Shoyru Shoguns hadn't noticed that all of their weapons were gone. All, that is, except Alvie's Shoyru Sword.

Alvie got up, enraged. He said, "I'll get them!" and took flight towards the Ninja Chia hideout in the Haunted Woods. When Alvie arrived, the Chias were waiting for him, brandishing all of the Shoyru weapons.

"How dare you?!?" Alvie said angrily, then charged...

Author: psyclaw
Date: 27 Dec.
...right into a trap! A deep pit opened beneath him, then closed! Alvie was helpless, and to his outrage and dismay, he heard the Chias hurriedly diguising the hole, so that it wouldn't be seen. He had no food or water, either. "So, they plan to starve me, do they?" the furious Shoyru thought, "I'll show them!"

Curiously, he ran his fingers along the cave's walls. To his astonishment, he found a small hole in the side. "This is my chance to escape," Alvie realized. He put his Shoyru Sword on its lowest setting, and aimed carefully for the hole. When Alvie pulled the trigger, the sword emitted a muffled sound, and the hole opened just wide enough to let him through.

Alvie tunneled his way underground until he felt himself break through to the surface. Sticking his head out, he blinked a few times, because he was unaccustomed to the light. Having been in the dark for so long, the Shoyru then saw he was at...

Author: naomi9290
Date: 27 Dec.
...the Ninja Chias' secret hideout! As Alvie reached for his Shoyru Sword, he saw three green Chia guards, wearing black cloaks and on the lookout by a silver bolted door. Alvie quickly darted from bush to bush and tree to tree, just in time to see ten more hooded figures carrying large crates.

"Do you have the weapons?" one of the Chia guards asked, stepping in front of them.

"Do you think us idiots? Of course we do." the nearest figure growled. Suddenly, he lifted his head and sniffed the air. "There's a Shoyru here! Somewhere near... there!" He pointed at the exact bush in which Alvie was hiding.

Alvie picked up his sword, stood straight, and held it pointed straight at the guard, as if to challenge him. Just then, twenty-three more Ninja Chias emerged...

Author: rexnap
Date: 27 Dec.
...from a sky roof that Alvie hadnt counted on. They landed and looked about them. Dressed in heavy black capes, their figures were unrecognizable, but for the Ninja Chia emblems on their backs. They drew their weapons, and Alvie pressed up against the wall. This was most certainly the end, but...

...they turned around and threw back their hoods, then began to hack at the other Ninja Chias. It was his Shogun mates! They'd come to rescue him. He joined in the fight, but just then, when they seemed to be winning...

Author: murryrose
Date: 28 Dec.
...Alvie was grabbed from behind, and a long silver blade pushed up against his throat. He couldn't see who was holding him hostage, but the mysterious figure yelled, "Alright, unless you want your leader sliced and fried like Barbequed Tigersquash..."

But at that moment, everyone looked at each other in confusion. "Barbequed Tigersquash?" they murmured, "What kind of a freak barbeques Tigersquash?"

The figure was taken aback. "You've never heard of Barbequed Tigersquash... really? Well, it's very good..."

"Eww!" someone yelled out from among the Shogun Samurai.

"Gross!" shouted another.

In his attempt to defend Barbequed Tigersquash, the mysterious figure seemed to forget about Alvie. "No... no really, its quite yummy! Well-done and dipped in a light butter cream sauce..."

But once again, he was drowned out by the sounds of disgust from the crowd. While stammering about the good qualities of Tigersquash, Alvie slipped away unnoticed, making his was to a loose rope he'd seen hanging from a high rafter.

Discreetly, he climbed midway and swung above the gathering. Just as the Chia was saying, "No really, you can even add some salt and basil and it tastes like..." he was knocked to the ground by Alvie, who was met by a huge cheer from his buddies.

Once they'd recovered their weapons and gone back to Shogun Samurai Headquarters, the Shoyrus sat in a sort of tense silence. It seemed as if everyone had something on their minds, when finally Shoythang broke the quiet by saying, "You know, Barbequed Tigersquash doesn't sound that bad..."

Immediately, everyone jumped in agreement, and let's just say they ate well that night.

The next morning...

Author: azlinmyst
Date: 28 Dec.
...Alvie returned to his job at the Presidential Palace. He helped people with their luggage, held open the doors, and greeted everyone pleasantly. Several customers commented on how kind and polite he was. Alvie just smiled and thought to himself, "If they only knew...."

The End

Author: the_real_poetess_123
Date: 28 Dec.



Quick Jump

Week 1Week 2Week 3Week 4Week 5Week 6
Week 7Week 8Week 9Week 10Week 11Week 12
Week 13Week 14Week 15Week 16Week 17Week 18
Week 19Week 20Week 21Week 22Week 23Week 24
Week 25Week 26Week 27Week 28Week 29Week 30
Week 31Week 32Week 33Week 34Week 35Week 36
Week 37Week 38Week 39Week 40Week 41Week 42
Week 43Week 44Week 45Week 46Week 47Week 48
Week 49Week 50Week 51Week 52Week 53Week 54
Week 55Week 56Week 57Week 58Week 59Week 60
Week 61Week 62Week 63Week 64Week 65Week 66
Week 67Week 68Week 69Week 70Week 71Week 72
Week 73Week 74Week 75Week 76Week 77Week 78
Week 79Week 80Week 81Week 82Week 83Week 84
Week 85Week 86Week 87Week 88Week 89Week 90
Week 91Week 92Week 93Week 94Week 95Week 96
Week 97Week 98Week 99Week 100Week 101Week 102
Week 103Week 104Week 105Week 106Week 107Week 108
Week 109Week 110Week 111Week 112Week 113Week 114
Week 115Week 116Week 117Week 118Week 119Week 120
Week 121Week 122Week 123Week 124Week 125Week 126
Week 127Week 128Week 129Week 130Week 131Week 132
Week 133Week 134Week 135Week 136Week 137Week 138
Week 139Week 140Week 141Week 142Week 143Week 144
Week 145Week 146Week 147Week 148Week 149Week 150
Week 151Week 152Week 153Week 154Week 155Week 156
Week 157Week 158Week 159Week 160Week 161Week 162
Week 163Week 164Week 165Week 166Week 167Week 168
Week 169Week 170Week 171Week 172Week 173Week 174
Week 175Week 176Week 177Week 178Week 179Week 180
Week 181Week 182Week 183Week 184Week 185Week 186
Week 187Week 188Week 189Week 190Week 191Week 192
Week 193Week 194Week 195Week 196Week 197Week 198
Week 199Week 200Week 201Week 202Week 203Week 204
Week 205Week 206Week 207Week 208Week 209Week 210
Week 211Week 212Week 213Week 214Week 215Week 216
Week 217Week 218Week 219Week 220Week 221Week 222
Week 223Week 224Week 225Week 226Week 227Week 228
Week 229Week 230Week 231Week 232Week 233Week 234
Week 235Week 236Week 237Week 238Week 239Week 240
Week 241Week 242Week 243Week 244Week 245Week 246
Week 247Week 248Week 249Week 250Week 251Week 252
Week 253Week 254Week 255Week 256Week 257Week 258
Week 259Week 260Week 261Week 262Week 263Week 264
Week 265Week 266Week 267Week 268Week 269Week 270
Week 271Week 272Week 273Week 274Week 275Week 276
Week 277Week 278Week 279Week 280Week 281Week 282
Week 283Week 284Week 285Week 286Week 287Week 288
Week 289Week 290Week 291Week 292Week 293Week 294
Week 295Week 296Week 297Week 298Week 299Week 300
Week 301Week 302Week 303Week 304Week 305Week 306
Week 307Week 308Week 309Week 310Week 311Week 312
Week 313Week 314Week 315Week 316Week 317Week 318
Week 319Week 320Week 321Week 322Week 323Week 324
Week 325Week 326Week 327Week 328Week 329Week 330
Week 331Week 332Week 333Week 334Week 335Week 336
Week 337Week 338Week 339Week 340Week 341Week 342
Week 343Week 344Week 345Week 346Week 347Week 348
Week 349Week 350Week 351Week 352Week 353Week 354
Week 355Week 356Week 357Week 358Week 359Week 360
Week 361Week 362Week 363Week 364Week 365Week 366
Week 367Week 368Week 369Week 370Week 371Week 372
Week 373Week 374Week 375Week 376Week 377Week 378
Week 379Week 380Week 381Week 382Week 383Week 384
Week 385Week 386Week 387Week 388Week 389Week 390
Week 391Week 392Week 393Week 394Week 395Week 396
Week 397Week 398Week 399Week 400Week 401Week 402
Week 403Week 404Week 405Week 406Week 407Week 408
Week 409Week 410Week 411Week 412Week 413Week 414
Week 415Week 416Week 417Week 418Week 419Week 420
Week 421Week 422Week 423Week 424Week 425Week 426
Week 427Week 428Week 429Week 430Week 431Week 432
Week 433Week 434Week 435Week 436Week 437Week 438
Week 439Week 440Week 441Week 442Week 443Week 444
Week 445Week 446Week 447Week 448Week 449Week 450
Week 451Week 452Week 453Week 454Week 455Week 456
Week 457Week 458Week 459Week 460Week 461Week 462
Week 463Week 464Week 465Week 466Week 467Week 468
Week 469Week 470Week 471Week 472Week 473Week 474
Week 475Week 476Week 477Week 478Week 479Week 480
Week 481Week 482Week 483Week 484Week 485Week 486
Week 487Week 488Week 489Week 490Week 491Week 492
Week 493Week 494Week 495Week 496Week 497Week 498
Week 499Week 500Week 501Week 502Week 503Week 504
Week 505Week 506Week 507Week 508Week 509Week 510
Week 511Week 512Week 513Week 514Week 515Week 516
Week 517Week 518Week 519Week 520Week 521Week 522
Week 523Week 524Week 525Week 526Week 527Week 528
Week 529Week 530Week 531Week 532Week 533Week 534
Week 535Week 536Week 537Week 538Week 539Week 540
Week 541Week 542Week 543Week 544Week 545Week 546
Week 547Week 548Week 549Week 550Week 551Week 552
Week 553Week 554Week 555Week 556Week 557Week 558
Week 559Week 560Week 561Week 562Week 563Week 564
Week 565Week 566Week 567Week 568Week 569Week 570
Week 571Week 572Week 573Week 574Week 575Week 576
Week 577Week 578Week 579Week 580Week 581Week 582
Week 583Week 584Week 585Week 586Week 587Week 588
Week 589Week 590Week 591Week 592Week 593Week 594
Week 595Week 596Week 597Week 598Week 599Week 600
Week 601Week 602Week 603Week 604Week 605Week 606
Week 607Week 608Week 609Week 610Week 611Week 612
Week 613Week 614Week 615Week 616Week 617Week 618
Week 619Week 620Week 621Week 622Week 623Week 624
Week 625Week 626Week 627Week 628Week 629Week 630
Week 631Week 632Week 633Week 634Week 635Week 636
Week 637Week 638Week 639Week 640Week 641Week 642
Week 643Week 644Week 645Week 646Week 647Week 648
Week 649Week 650Week 651Week 652Week 653Week 654
Week 655Week 656Week 657Week 658Week 659Week 660
Week 661Week 662Week 663Week 664Week 665Week 666


IMPORTANT - SUBMISSION POLICY! By uploading or otherwise submitting any materials to Neopets, you (and your parents) are automatically granting us permission to use those materials for free in any manner we can think of forever throughout the universe. These materials must be created ONLY by the person submitting them - you cannot submit someone else's work. Also, if you're under age 18, ALWAYS check with your parents before you submit anything to us!