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Every week we will be starting a new Story Telling competition - with great prizes! The current prize is 2000 NP, plus a rare item!!! This is how it works...

We start a story and you have to write the next few paragraphs. We will select the best submissions every day and put it on the site, and then you have to write the next one, all the way until the story finishes. Got it? Well, submit your paragraphs below!

Story Twenty Nine - Ended June 15th

Quietly, Adee snuck into the Ice Cream Factory to try and get a few scoops of Neopia's finest. Little did she know, the owners of the factory recently installed the best security system that Neopoints could buy. Adee slowly crept into the factory and eyed the giant freezer where all the ice cream was stored. She licked her lips and took out her very own special spoon for eating large amounts of ice cream. With only a few more steps to the freezer door... Author :Neopets Staff
Date : 11th June
...Adee's pulse began to race. Thoughts of being caught and sent to the Neopian police crossed her mind but were pushed out of perspective by the thought of a watering mouthful of the creamiest most satisfying ice cream ever created in Neopia. Suddenly with out thinking twice Adee swung the freezer door open and her eyes beheld the most beautiful sight in the whole Neopian world, heaps and mounds and containers just filled with the finest ice cream ever conceived. Then the trance was broken by the shrill voice of an alarm. Just as the two Lupe guards spotted her, Adee grabbed a container of Jubjub-banana swirl ice cream. Two of the guards lunged at her but Adee was too quick for them. She hopped towards the stairs that she had come up from but found that they were blocked by two surly looking Lupe guards. The only other choice she had was to go up the flight of stairs that led to the roof. She hurriedly bounded towards them and hopped all the way up. Once Adee was at the top of the stairs she pushed herself upwards once more and closed the doors behind her. She turned to face the sky and was blinded by the brilliance of the sun's rays. Now she began to panic because the guards were pounding on the doors and she was much too frail to keep them out for long. Then by the hand of the Faeries her special titanium alloy spoon dropped to the floor and an idea popped into her mind. She slipped the spoon into both the handle's and created a makeshift lock. But that would only keep them out for a few more minutes. She had to think. She searched her mind in vain for a way out of the mess she had gotten herself into. The only option she had left was to leap off the roof of the ice cream factory. With her ice cream still in hand she moved towards the edge... Author :evilhotdog
Date : 11th June
...when she heard the Lupe guards howling. "We want some ice cream too!" they cried, pounding at the doors she had locked with her spoon. She looked back at the doors in amazement. "Jubjub-banana swirl ice cream is our favourite! But... sniff sniff... they never let us have any, so we just sit there, day in day out, guarding the ice cream; but we can't have any!" And Adee couldn't help but feel bad for the poor, ice cream craving Lupes. "Okay, okay, wait a second," she said, and went up to the door, when a Pteri flew down and grabbed the ice cream right from her hands. "Hey, wait!" she called out, then lunged after it towards the edge of the building. She was on the edge of the ramp, reaching for the Pteri who was just too far away, then the Pteri laughed at her very rudely... Author :otaku317
Date : 11th June
..."Ha Ha!! You really fell for that trick? That's the oldest trick in the book you know. The Lupe Guards have caught a lot of prisoners this way. I guess you don't read any books! Ha Ha!! Too busy stuffing your belly!" And the Pteri flew away. "Ugh...first I get insulted AND now I'm going to be hauled into the prison AND I lost my ice cream. What a horrible day!" Now what was she gonna do? There was nowhere to run, nowhere to hide. Just then she spotted an air vent. "Ah ha!" Adee ran to the air vent and took off the metal part. She had seen this in many movies before (who needed books?). She started to squueze through. Brr... it's cold in here, she thought. She heard the Lupes crashing through the door. "Where'd she go?" asked a Lupe. "Hey look! I think she went through the air vent!" "Yeah! You're right! Good call." "Hmm... wait, doesn't that air vent lead to the Mega Freezer in the basement?" "Yeah, it does!" "Ha ha! She'll be a frozen Chia Pop in no time!"... Author :sharrkmaster
Date : 12th June
..."Yeah, but still, we have to go get her!" Growled the other Lupe, as he climbed into the vent. Adee panicked when she heard the guard, and scrambled crazily through the vent, which was getting colder by the passing second. "Ouch!" cried Adee, as she collided with something hard and very, very cold. She peered closer and screamed! It was another Chia frozen solid. "But wait!" Adee started giggling to her self. It was just the newest life sized Chia Pop. Suddenly, a plan formed in her mind. "I wonder if the Lupe will be tricked too?" She caught hold of the pop and flung it back through the vent... Author :pvicnan
Date : 12th June
...Suddenly, a voice rang through her mind, "Adee! Remember, NO ICE CREAM ALLOWED! YOU ARE ON STRICT DIET!" Regardless of her mother's advice, she continued to head for the Giant Mega Freezer. More saliva drooled down her corner of her cheeks as she stepped closer to the Mega Freezer. She opened the freezer door and saw even more ice cream than she had ever seen before. She was hoping for an alarm to sound off so she could fight off the security guards with her giant spoon. She sighed in dismay, "What a pity, I was hoping to get a bit of stretch! Hopeless securities! Those Lupes aren't too bright." She jumped into the boxes of ice creams then the security alarm system went off! "DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT IT!" bellowed a voice. Adee replied, "And WHO ARE YOU TO SHOUT AT ME LIKE THAT!" "I AM THE OWNER OF THE FACTORY!" Adee turned around calmly and was shocked to find that the owner was... Author :theliving
Date : 13th June
..."Cut!" the director called out. Cheri sighed. She knew working with a director like Beril AND playing a character like Adee would be hard, but this was the millionth time Beril had called 'Cut'. "What now?" she called to the other side of the set where Beril was seated among the cameras and lights. "You need to sound more sassy when you yell out 'AND WHO ARE YOU TO SHOUT AT ME LIKE THAT!' Okay?" "Okay," Cheri sighed. "Take it from 'AND WHO ARE YOU TO SHOUT AT ME LIKE THAT!'" Beril commanded. Cheri got into position. "Action!" Beril yelled. "AND WHO ARE YOU TO SHOUT AT ME LIKE THAT!" Adee yelled. "I AM THE OWNER OF THE FACTORY!" Adee turned around calmly and was shocked to find that the owner was...her mother! "Mom! Wha..why..?" Adee stuttered. "I knew you wouldn't stick to your diet," her mother scolded. "Now let's go!" Her mother marched her out the door when the Lupe guards rounded the corner, going WAY too fast... Author :kittykat8_2000
Date : 13th June
...they knocked down a few props behind it, and one in front. "No, no, no! Cut! Slow down a little... someone call them to come back in here!" Beril hollered. A Mynci who was working the cameras ran over by the prop door. He turned around and shrugged in confusion... Cheri screamed as they carried here off. "Let me go! He called cut! This isn't in the script! Stop it!" but they continued to carry her out of the studio. Cheri got a short chance to catch a glimpse of the character's face. "You're not an actor!" she yelled at her. "No, and I'm not the Faerie Queen either kid!" she said rudely and snotty. The Lupes glared and barked at her to be quiet, but she didn't. Cheri kept yelling as they ran with her through the empty lots. Finally, Cheri cried, "Help me somebody! I'm being petnapped!" The Lupes and imposter Chia dropped Cheri cold on the ground. The two Lupes held her down at her arms, and barked at her. Cheri was afraid they were going to bite her, and knew she had to think quick... just like Adee! She began to cry very loudly and dramatic. The Lupes got nervous and jumped off her arms, then shoved her upwards. "No be quiet and walk!" They barked at her. Cheri walked with the Lupes behind her, and the other Chia in front of her. Cheri cunningly looked to her left in shock and began waving yelling "HELP!" They all looked in that direction while Cheri ran for the closest building to her right. She knew they would be chasing after her, and would catch up quickly. She opened the huge door of another studio, and almost couldn't tell if the scenery was real or a prop, but stood staring clueless where she was... Author :blackorchids
Date : 14th June
...and just when she figured out she was on the set of "The Chuckles the Clown Show" the Lupes ran in. However, they were caught by a bear hug from one of the clowns. "Be happy and sing a happy song!" said Chuckles. And with help from above, the Lupes obeyed. "Sing a happy-happy song, sing a happy-happy song!" After cracking up for about an hour, Cheri finally knocked enough sense into herself to run away. She ran off the set, ignoring the cries of "Wait! Sing a song with us!" from Chuckles and the Lupes. She found herself on the set of 00 Moehog. Cheri knew that the director got incredibly mad at anyone who was on the set without permission. She sneaked into the room, and ironically they were playing the spy music. Cheri had seen the movie and she knew they were in the scene where everything blows up. 3,2,1 she thought. BOOM!! During the explosion she ran out before anyone could see or hear her. She ran around like this and that, until she came to the beginning of the Ice Cream Factory set, which was her own. When she stepped in however, she noticed things were a little different... Author :redhawk30
Date : 14th June
...instead of finding the familiar set in which she played Adee, Cheri found the set destroyed. The giant freezer was torn to pieces and lying on the ground. Tables and chairs were broken and strewn everywhere. Someone didn't want this film to be made. But why? What would make someone not want this to be shown? The plot was great and everything and everybody wanted to see it except for one person, Cheri thought. Outside she thought she could hear something. Time to hide, Cheri thought. She ducked behind a broken prop just as the door opened. In walked two Unis. "Great job at wrecking the set, it will take them weeks to fix this," one of the Uni's said gleefully. "We finally will have our revenge on that no talent director. Maybe he will think twice before he insults us again," the other one said. Cheri heard every word they said and she started to tremble. "Let's go before someone spots us," one Uni said. "Right. Good idea," whispered the other one. Cheri waited a few minutes before she got up. I have to leave and tell the director, she thought. Just as she reached the door it flung open and there sat the director tied to a camera... Author :trini232
Date : 15th June
..."Oh no! Larry? Larry, what are you doing being tied to a camera?" Cheri said. "MWAWAMA!" he tried to say something. "I'll untie you!" Cheri said. She ran over to the director. She then untied the tape from around him. Once he was untied, he bounced up. That's when she realised! That was not the director! It was some other actor from some other film! "Uh oh!" She then ran as fast as her feet would carry her. She jumped into the next set, in which she had not been into before. "Cut! Who is that girl? Security! Get her off my set." She heard the director say. "Oh, I'm sorry. I'll get off this set right now." Cheri ran off the set and onto the next one. The next one she was on was the set for 'Planet of the Mynci's.' All around the set were green vines, fake trees, and scary masks for the Mynci's to wear. The set was closed, so no one was there. "Cut! Marie! Perfect scene. Let's take five."

The End
Author :becmel2001
Date : 15th June



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