Some cookies are necessary to make this site and our content available to you. Other Cookies enable us to analyse and measure audience and traffic to the site. Cookies are also used by us, advertisers, ad-tech providers and others to develop and serve ads that are more relevant to your interests. To consent to the use of Cookies and proceed to the site, click Accept below. If you wish to withdraw consent later you will find a link in the footer Cookie Choices. For more information: Privacy Policy.
Storytelling Competition - (click for the map) | (printer friendly version)

If you have any questions about the competition then read our awesome FAQ!


Week 145
You are on Week 146
Week 147

Every week we will be starting a new Story Telling competition - with great prizes! The current prize is 2000 NP, plus a rare item!!! This is how it works...

We start a story and you have to write the next few paragraphs. We will select the best submissions every day and put it on the site, and then you have to write the next one, all the way until the story finishes. Got it? Well, submit your paragraphs below!

Story One-Hundred and Forty-Six Ends September 26th

"Hmrf! You think you're all so pretty, don't you?" Vira sneered, staring into the mirror she held in her hand. Gazing into the looking glass, she saw a group of girls in the school bathroom, preening and combing their beautiful fur, and adjusting bows. Vira's knuckles turned white from her grip on the mirror. Her eyes burned at the image of a beautiful Acara, curling her eyelashes to perfection as she chatted happily with her friends.

"Mirror, mirror..." Vira said in vain. Like that would do anything... to wish that she was that Acara, and not the ugly monstrosity that she was now. She USED to be beautiful, she USED to be popular, until that evil... Vira shook her head. That's enough of that she thought. Her burning thoughts turned towards the giggling Acara once again, who was now heading out of the bathroom, looking... perfect. Rage began to consume Vira. Maybe... maybe if she just concentrated hard enough? The mirror had magical properties. She knew it did. "Make me her..." she whispered, closing her eyes and clutching the mirror to her chest.

She felt her skin prickle. Opening her eyes, Vira had to suppress a gasp. She saw an Usul and Cybunny staring at her. "Are you okay, Kedra?" the Cybunny asked, looking at her wide-eyed face.

It took a moment for Vira to realize the Cybunny was addressing her. "Of course I'm fine!" she snapped. The Cybunny recoiled in surprise, and Vira realized her mistake. If she didn't try to fit in, someone may catch on. "Um, I'm sorry, I... I was just... not feeling well for a second. I'm fine now. Sorry." The Cybunny still seemed a bit shaken, but nodded, accepting her excuse.

"Well, we'd better head off. No use looking beautiful in the bathroom!" the Usul giggled. As they went out the door, Vira glanced at the mirror to admire herself, and nearly fell over in shock. She may be in the Acara's body... but reflections never lie.

Vira hurried out, before the mirror could reveal her true form...

Author: Questions? Comments? Send them to 1-800... er, neo_storytelling
Date: 22 September
...deftly slamming the bathroom door behind her. She stood, her back pressed to it momentarily, inhaling sharply while trying to catch up with her thoughts, which were racing five paces ahead of her. The Cybunny and Usul, her apparent friends, looked at her quizzically.

"Are you sure you're okay Kedra?" the Usul asked, cocking an eyebrow at her estranged friend. "Maybe you should go to the Nurse or something--"

"I already said I was fine!" she said, strangling the annoyance that tried to rise in her throat. I'll just have to get used to company again... Vira thought to herself.

"Well, I'll catch up with you and Kedra after school, Delia!" the Cybunny proclaimed to her two friends, then hopped away to her next class. Before leaving, she cast one last suspicious glance at "Kedra".

"Yeah... I'd better be going, too... Delia." Vira struggled to remember the Usul's name. Slowly, she started to stride down the hallway, not quite sure where to go, but hoping one of her many obvious admirers would point out her way.

"Kedra, wait up!" Delia called out. We have our last class together!" The Usul ran to catch up with Kedra, who was already halfway down the hall. "Are you SURE you're feeling better? I hope you'll be able to participate tomorrow! We've all been looking forward to it for months!"

Vira smiled as Delia went on explaining the event that was to come tomorrow. The reality of where she was still sung inside of her. She was pretty... no, beautiful... living the life that should have rightfully been hers in the first place. It was a tune that she would have to grow accustomed to once again.

* * * * *

The youthful Acara danced playfully in the rain that had started to fall; school had been over for only a few moments, so she and Delia were waiting for their Cybunny friend to turn up. Vira still wasn't sure of her name yet.

"Does my hair really shine when the sun hits it?" The words giggled out of Vira's mouth as she asked the Usul standing next to her for an answer.

"For what must be the 700th time, yes!" Delia threw up her hands in exasperation as she glanced sideways at her strangely-acting friend. She had been asking questions like that all day. "Jillian, over here!" Her thoughts changed suddenly as she spotted her Cybunny friend hop out of the school building.

"Can you believe this weather?" Jillian said, returning the greeting. "My fur will get positively mussed in this rain! We'd better hurry home fast!"

Home.

The word caught Vira off guard. It had been so long since she'd thought of being part of a family. She stopped dodging the rain drops as Jillian and Delia started away, chasing after them with this new word of hope. Suddenly, something out of the corner of her eye caught Vira's attention. A perfectly serene puddle, glassy and smooth on top, no ripple of disturbance daring to scar its surface.

She walked over to the curiosity, knowing full well what she would see, but she looked into its depths anyways. There she was. Not the beautiful, popular Acara she was hiding in... but her. A slight laugh escaped her lips, tumbling onto the puddle's surface, ripples suddenly bursting from the center. A laugh that was not commonly ushered by happy little girls.

With new thoughts darting through her head, she dashed up to Jillian and Delia, contemplating her school day tomorrow. But first, something else had to be done.

* * * * *

Vira approached her own house, the one where, for many years, she had taken refuge in hiding her scaly complexion. Gingerly she turned the door knob, hopping inside while making sure that no one had seen her enter.

Quietly she strode upstairs, where Vira was greeted with a piteous wailing sound. It was a sound she had expected; the sound was coming from her old room. Smiling, she stepped inside...

"YOU! I mean... ME?!?" It was the old Vira, although her body was now filled with another, who stood in front of the smirking youth. "Please, what's happening?" She wailed even louder, casting her eyes to the ceiling and stomping a foot on the floor.

The real Vira eyed her coolly. "What? You don't like being me? You know, some people considered me quite the beautiful one..."

She stopped to laugh as Kedra cast a fearful look her way. "Yo-you mean you kn-know what's going on?"

"What have they taught you in that school, dear?!? Of course... isn't it obvious?" Kedra shook her head, which happened to be Vira's head...

Vira sighed. "Well, I suppose I'll just have to tell you. However, you have to promise... no more of that awful, awful wailing." She laughed cruelly, relating the whole story, but careful to leave the part out about her wanting to become someone more beautiful.

At first, fear and confusion had risen in Kedra's heart. Quickly, though, as the story was being told, those feelings had been replaced with hate, anger, and spite.

"Change me back... now!" Kedra hissed, but this just sent Vira into another fit of spine-tingling laughter.

"Who do you think you're talking to, pretty? I am Vira, a proud member of the Gallery of Evil!" She said her last words almost triumphantly.

"You forget, O Evil One," Kedra's said, her mocking words sending Vira into a fit of silent anger, "I have your magic mirror!"

Her words certainly caught Vira off guard. While the former Kedra held up the jewel-studded mirror, each orb shone as a mockery of Vira's looks.

"Now, now, Vira..."

"DON'T CALL ME THAT!"

Ignoring her outburst with a wave of her manicured paw, Vira continued, "I don't honestly believe that you can work my mirror. After all, even I don't know all the powers that it holds. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to be going. I've got a special event at school tomorrow, you see." Vira viewed Kedra's questioning gaze with pleasure, then continued. "The School Beauty Pageant is after classes tomorrow. I have to look my best from now on, don't I?" she sneered, a look that wasn't meant to cross her now-youthful face.

"How... do you know I-I won't follow you out?!?" Kedra screamed in angst, trying to fish for a way to get her life back.

"Honestly... no one wants to see you, Vira. Even I know that you won't risk the ridicule of all the other pets." She spat her words out, twisting a delicate paw around the door handle and leaving.

"Oh... I may not be able to control your mirror yet, Vira. Just you wait and see, though. Tomorrow is another day..."

Author: lucki_ducki
Date: 22 August

..."And the winner of the NeoSchool Beauty Pageant is..." announced the red Kyrii as he opened the envelope. "KEDRA THE ACARA!"

Kedra felt her eyes fill with happy tears as she received hugs from the runners up. She couldn't remember ever being so happy as she was given the sash, red roses, and a beautiful diamond-studded tiara. Kedra walked down the catwalk, waving to her many admirers and friends who all cheered for her.

"This is just so wonderful," she said into the microphone. "I just want to thank my best friends, Jillian and Delia. Without their help, I wouldn't even be..."

Just then, a scream came from the audience. "Look!" cried a brown Ixi, pointing a hoof at Kedra. "Something's happening to her!"

Kedra wasn't sure what the Ixi was talking about, until she looked down at her hand and saw that her perfectly manicured nails were growing long and sharp, almost like claws. Her fur was turning a strange shade of green, and had begun to look like she had scales. Kedra's eyes widened in fear, as her whole body started to mutate; twisted horns pierced out of her skull, and a pointed tail stuck out of her dress. Finally, wings erupted from her back.

Kedra fell to her knees, gasping for air. "Kedra!" she heard Delia cry. As she looked up to gaze at her friends, Delia and Jillian gasped as they stepped away from her. "You're... you're not Kedra!" said Delia.

"Delia!" Kedra cried. "Yes I am! It's me!"

"No... you're a monster!"

"Monster... monster..." repeated Jillian, in almost a zombie like voice. Soon the entire assembly was joining in the chant.

"Monster... monster... monster..."

"NOOO!" cried Kedra, covering her ears as the chant grew louder. "I'm Kedra! I'm not a monster! I'm NOT!!!"

Kedra sat up, drenched in a cold sweat as she slowly awoke from her horrifying nightmare. "It... it was all a dream!" she whispered. "Oh, thank good..." As she was about to run her fingers through her silky hair, she felt twisted horns atop her head. Looking around, Kedra saw she was in Vira's room, wearing Vira's clothes, and sleeping in Vira's bed. She was still Vira. Kedra closed her eyes and sighed sadly. She had awoken from a new nightmare, only to return to her old one.

"This isn't fair!" she cried. Then, looking over, she saw the magic mirror sitting on her (or Vira's) nightstand. Grabbing it, she wrung the mirror tightly in her paws, shouting at it. "Change me back! NOW!" There was no reaction. "I'm Kedra, do you hear me? KE-DRA!" There was still no response. In pure frustration, she tossed the mirror upon the mattress, then flung herself face-first into her pillow, crying sorrowful tears.

"It's not fair!" she whimpered. "It's not fair..."

Kedra felt her nose filling with mucus, so she reached over to grab a tissue. As she lifted it to her nose, the tissue suddenly flew out of her paws. Kedra opened her eyes in surprise, to find a little Ghostkerchief floating before her. It merely gazed at her with its tiny, blank eyes. Vira has a Petpet, Kedra thought. She slowly reached out to the Petpet, but it quickly flew away under the dresser.

"No!" she cried, getting out of bed. "No, it's ok! I won't hurt you." If there was one thing that Kedra needed at that moment, it was a friend, even if it was a creature from the Haunted Woods. She looked over and saw a water bowl, with "Hexter" written upon it, sitting on top of yesterday's issue of the Neopian Times.

"Um... c'mere Hexter," Kedra said again. "It's all right, I won't hurt you."

Hexter slowly poked his head out from under the dresser and gazed at his "master" oddly. She had never seemed so... nice before. He slowly emerged and floated towards Kedra as she gently took him in her arms. At first he seemed uneasy, but then relaxed as he rested his head under Kedra's chin.

"At least someone isn't afraid of me," Kedra said quietly. "Oh, what am I going to do? As long as Vira's in my body, there's no way anybody's going to believe that I'm her and she's me. If only someone could show me how to work that stupid mirror!"

As she sat there against the bed with Hexter in her hands, she glanced down at the Neopian Times again. It was opened to the Shop Ad section, and what Kedra saw in the middle of the page sparked an idea in her mind...

Author: bitsy_dj
Date: 23 September
... "KAUVARA'S MAGIC SHOP!" she read aloud. Kedra thought for a second... maybe she could buy a morphing potion?!? If that didn't help, maybe Kauvara could teach her how to use the magic mirror?!? Now, how will I get there? After all, it's not like I can really just walk into crowd, she stewed. Kedra stood up and Hexter fell from her lap, then hovered in the air.

"Great idea!" she exclaimed. Hexter, startled, hovered under Vira's gray bed. Kedra looked into her blind spots and saw Vira's great wings bursting from her body. She concentrated hard. Move, wings... move, she thought.

Her wings began to beat, faster and faster, and as a result she rose higher and higher, until bumping her head on the roof. "Come on, Hexter... we're going for a walk--er, fly!" Kedra had a hard time controlling her flight at first, but soon enough she got the hang of it.

"We're almost there," she shouted, flying in the direction of the Magic Shop.

Out of nowhere, a large figure flew past her in the opposite direction. It was the Pant Devil.

"Vira? Where are you going?" he asked, stopping in midair.

"Oh," Kedra exclaimed in surprise. "Uh, I was just... umm.."

"The Evil Denizens of Neopia meeting is starting soon. We'd better hurry."

Not sure how to get out of the situation, she could only agree. "Yes, of course," Kedra said, with Vira's scratchy voice uttering her words. "Hexter!" she called.

Kedra had followed the Pant Devil for about ten minutes when they came upon the Haunted Woods. She looked around, seeing witches and monsters, but her temporary body fit right in. They landed in front of the Battledome and walked in. The Pant Devil led her into a large room with a giant round table. Sitting in one of the chairs, Kedra soon heard a loud, thundering voice.

"VIRA! What, my dear, are you doing in MY seat?"

Kedra's stomach twisted into a knot, as she looked up to find a very large Doctor Sloth towering over her...

Author: 00bunnie00
Date: 23 August

...She felt very, very sick. "I-I was j-just..."

"Vira, I'm amazed!" Dr. Sloth exclaimed. "You're not yourself." He almost looked concerned, but Sloth's face quickly turned to stone. "Move this instant... go sit in your own seat, Vira! Come now, quickly!"

Vira got up and looked around warily. She hopefully turned towards Hexter, who was floating around. "Hexter," she whispered. "Where is my seat?"

The Ghostkerchief seemed to understand, floating down a few rows and hovering over one of the Battledome seats. Vira nodded and sat down.

A clap of thunder soon sounded through the room, and the last one to enter the Battledome finally arrived. It was Jhudora.

The meeting started as she walked to the front of the room. "Evil villains of Neopia," Jhudora started. "We are close to attaining our goal of conquering Neopia, as Vira has, at last, taken form in the body of another. If all goes well, the world will take a turn for the worse." The Dark Faerie eyed Kedra. "This is a traitor," she said, pointing a finger accusingly. "Seize her!"

After a confused pause, the Battledome became a mass of confusion and chaos, as the villains tumbled over each other to reach Kedra first.

In a panic, Kedra took off in a crooked flight, with Hexter in hand. She raced out of the building, the other flying pets right on her tail.

Before long she'd reached Neopia Central, and was nearing Kauvara's Magic Shop. However, she was not sure about being able to keep up the pace for much longer. Her wings sagged as she flew, slower and slower, closer to the ground with every flap of her wings. Suddenly, the Pant Devil grabbed onto her leg...

Author: tolkienlordofthering
Date: 24 September
..."Get off me!" Kedra cried, shaking her leg frantically, but to no avail.

With a sudden movement, Hexter flew at the Pant Devil and bit him on the arm that was grasping Kedra. With a scream the Pant Devil let go. Kedra raced into the Magic Shop, with Hexter close behind. She immediately locked the door, then collapsed with a sigh.

"What's going on?" asked a voice that came from behind one of the shelves, "Who's there?"

Kauvara peeked out from behind the shelf and, seeing all the evil villains hovering outside her door, gasped.

"I can explain!" Kedra said hurriedly, then began to share her story.

By the time Kedra had finished, Kauvara had taken her back into the storage room, to evade the racket coming from the villains locked outside. Kauvara had always kept magical wardings, to stop thieves and villians from getting into her magical supplies. That is one of the reasons why she believed the young Acara... if she really HAD been the real Vira, she could not have crossed the threshold into the shop.

"So, what're we going to do?" Kedra said. She didn't want to be in Vira's body for another instant.

Kauvara stared ahead for what seemed like days. Finally, her eyes lit up. "I know just what we'll do!"...

Author: ninaj26
Date: 24 August

..."I have another magic mirror in the back of my shop, which looks just like the one that Vira used to transform into you. This one, however, is made of positive energy, and will reverse the effects. I only just remembered about it now. Stay here, I'll be right back."

Kedra nodded in agreement as a relieved smile spread across her face. She'd been starting to lose hope, but had now realized that there WAS a way to get out of Vira's cold, ugly body.

Minutes later Kauvara arrived, holding a mirror in her hooves. She placed it onto the table, but by now a serious, somewhat anxious expression appeared upon the Kau's face.

"What's wrong, Kauvara?" asked Kedra, the smile slipping from her face.

"In order to reverse the effects, you're going to have to face Vira. It won't work otherwise. Vira is strong, clever and witty. She'll sense what you're up to, and will stop at nothing to prevent you from turning her into her true self again. She could even destroy you."

"What?!" shouted Kedra, her mouth wide open. "There's gotta be another way! I don't want to put myself in any danger!"

"Danger is inevitable, Kedra. If you want to be free of Vira's body, and become yourself again, then you must face danger. Be strong and you will succeed."

"Thank you, Kauvara but um..."

"You want to know how to use the mirror?"

Kedra nodded.

"Hold the mirror towards Vira's face; she's got to look straight at it. It will only take a few seconds, but during those seconds, Vira will try her best to evade the mirror. You must do whatever is necessary to succeed."

Kedra gulped and her heart fluttered with nervousness. She had to overcome her fear, though, if she wanted to be free of this cursed body.

"I'll ward off the other beasts that are outside the door," said Kauvara. She lifted a blue orb from the table and muttered a few words. Kedra then heard screams of anger and pain from outside.

"They won't be coming back here for a while," Kauvara said. "Now go, Kedra. Go to the school and see Vira before it's too late!"...

Author: ginger23456
Date: 25 September
...Kedra walked across the room, holding out a shaky paw towards the door handle.

"Thank you, Kauvara. I really appreciate it." Kedra said, in Vira's cold, rasping voice.

Kauvara nodded, ushering Kedra out the door. However, just as Kedra was going, Kauvara held her back. "Wait, Kedra... I think you'd better take this," Kauvara said, handing over a small dark orb on a silver chain. "This shall help protect you from Vira's dark powers, if she still has them in your form," the Kau explained.

Kedra smiled, then took the orb and placed it around her neck.

"Take care, Kedra... and remember, she must look straight into the mirror!" Kauvara sang as Kedra took flight. Hexter flew off right behind her.

It wasn't long before they found themselves near the school.

"Well... here it is, Hexter. Time to face Vira," Kedra said. Hexter puffed out his ghostly chest and nuzzled his head into Kedra's cheek. It seemed as though he liked his new master.

As they landed near the entrance, Kedra looked around wearily.

"Well, here we go..." Kedra said, then pushed open the front doors.

She could hear announcements in the background while stumbling down the hallways.

They finally came to the assembly room. Just as she peeked through the opened doorway, Vira, as her former self, walked onstage...

Author: forbiddenonly
Date: 25 August

...Kedra, in Vira's body, snuck through the shadows of the room, to see what exactly was happening at that moment.

"And now," the Kyrii principal boomed with excitement, "Let's take a listen to what our next contestant has to say!"

There was a sudden surge of applause as the creature in Kedra's body stepped up to the microphone.

"Hello, I'm Kedra, Contestant 9 of the Annual Neoschool Beauty Pageant," the Acara said. Her voice echoed throughout the room.

The Acara was in a beautiful red lace gown, and her face was glowing radiantly.

"Now Kedra, please tell us a bit about yourself, and why you should win this competition," one of the judges, an Aisha, instructed Vira.

"Well, my name is Kedra and I'm an honor student. My hobbies include playing dress-up, fooling around with my bestest buddies--" she gave a wink to Jillian and Delia, who winked back, "and looking beautiful. I should win this competition because I believe that I am the the most qualified, not to mention beautiful, contestant in this competition. I am highly enthusiastic, and love to have fun!"

The audience broke out into huge applause, as they had with the other eight contestants.

"Very well, then," another judge said, grinning widely. "It is time for us to choose the winner."

Back in the shadows, Kedra clutched the mirror in one of Vira's hideous paws. The orb Kauvara had given her was still around her neck. Hexter was spinning around in the air.

After a few minutes of discussion, the judges seemingly came to a decision.

"I am pleased to announce the winner of this year's Annual Neoschool Beauty Pageant," a Moehog at the judges table boomed, "The lucky winner of the competition is... Kedra the Acara!"

The Acara stepped up boldly from the row of contestants to receive her tiara, bouquet of roses, and a nice, beautiful golden trophy.

However, as soon as Vira grasped the flowers, they started to wither and turn brown; crumpling, then falling to the floor.

The crowd gasped. A cold gust of wind suddenly blew into the assembly room and swirled around the Acara. The roof blew off the auditorium, and dark clouds swirled above. Although she was in Kedra's body, Vira still caused nature to do horrible things. The crowd became a ruckus of pets, thrashing wildly to escape the disaster.

The crowd eventually left the room, and Kedra took this as a sign to start her siege on Vira to get her body back.

The Acara on stage cackled with delight, pleased to see that she had wreaked havoc upon the school. She then grew angry, though, because her secret had been revealed. The winds blew violently as Kedra and Hexter strained to approach Vira.

"Vira, I see you!" the evil Acara in Kedra's body roared coldly, narrowing Kedra's eyes.

"Stop it! As much as you'd like it to be so, I am NOT YOU!" Kedra screamed, pouncing onto the stage. The wind continued to pick up as Vira grew angrier. Lightning began to strike, and the walls of the room blew away. Rain began to pour down as the auditorium fell to pieces from the violent winds of the storm.

"You foolish, pathetic excuse for a Neopet... you stand no chance against me!" Vira said, laughing maniacally.

She raised Kedra's paws, shooting out little black bolts that seemed to swirl towards Kedra, as if she were a magnet. The dark reflectorb, however, deflected the darkness attack away from her body. However, the bolts found a new victim...

Kedra saw a little white cloth plunge to the floor and lie there, completely still.

"HEXTER!" she cried, tears starting to pour from her face. I've got to save him, Kedra thought to herself, If it weren't for me, he wouldn't be wrapped up in this mess! I've got to do something!

In a fit of desperation, Kedra leapt up in a fit of desperation and, beating her wings, flew over to the other Acara--her own body--and raised the mirror in front of her opponent's face.

"It's payback time!"...

Author: hybrid_insomniac
Date: 26 September
...Vira looked straight into the mirror at first, not realizing what it was. She then screamed, backing away as far as she could.

"G-Get that thing away from me!" she scowled viciously. "You can't let me be Vira again... I'm YOU now!"

Kedra walked forward, holding the mirror towards Vira's eyes. Vira, however, had other ideas. She leapt up into the air and jumped on Kedra, shocking her as she knocked the magical mirror out of her grasp and onto the floor.

"No!" Kedra yelled as Vira pinned her to the floor, laughing insanely.

"You see, VIRA," the real Vira said in a mocking voice, "You can't defeat me... no one can! I'm going to finish you now, so that I can finally be at peace in your body!"

Vira leapt up from Kedra and raised her arms. Black bolts erupted from her hands, but Kedra managed to evade them all. She could see the mirror lying on the floor, but Vira was already running quickly towards it. Just when Kedra thought that all hope was lost, she heard an agonising scream.

"Aaaagggghhh! Get off me!" Vira screamed.

Hexter had latched onto her back, and was starting to bite her. With all the strength he could muster, the little Petpet clung to his former master's back, giving Kedra a chance to retrieve the mirror.

The Acara ran up to the mirror, grabbing it from off the floor. She then ran up to Vira, who could no longer move, as Hextor tried in vain to prevent her from escaping his grasp.

"You put up a fight, Vira... and you lost. This time, it really IS the end for you," Kedra said, almost breathlessly.

She raised the mirror to Vira's face.

"NOOO!" cried Vira. "I don't want to be ugly again! Hexter, Hexter... let me go!"

However, the little Ghostkerchief wouldn't let go. It was clear that he loved Kedra, and wanted her to win.

The positive energy in the mirror was beginning to work. Kedra's facial features were beginning to fade and now. Instead of beautiful blue eyes, evil red eyes were showing instead. Her skin started to change colour, into a dank, greyish green tone. A set of horns sprouted from her head.

It wasn't just Vira who was changing, though... Kedra was, too. Her head was spinning, and for a second it seemed like she would lose her grasp of the mirror. Her paws were pretty once again, and her breathing was no longer shallow and raspy. Realising that the job had now been completed, she dropped her paws and let go of the mirror, dropping it to the ground.

Vira looked at her own paws and screamed.

"This can't be! I'm... ugly once more! I've been beaten by a vain, weak Acara! Come Hexter, we're going! Did you hear me? We're GOING!"

However, Hexter would not obey her orders. Instead he flew to Kedra and landed on her shoulder, nudging her lovingly.

Vira cringed at the sight of them, then turned to fly away. However, before she went, Vira yelled, "You might have beaten me now, Kedra... but next time, you won't be so lucky!"

With those words, Vira vanished from the room and disappeared into the sky. Kedra turned her head towards Hexter and whispered, "I'm your new owner now, Hex! How do you feel about that?"

The Petpet sighed happily as he nudged the Acara once more.

"Kedra!" yelled familiar voices.

She turned around to find an Usul and Cybunny running up to her.

"It's you!" they cried. "It's really you! We saw what happened, and knew that it couldn't have been you. We're so glad that you're back!"

"Me, too!" Kedra said happily, hugging her Ghostkerchief.

"But Kedra," her friends asked, "what if she tries it again?"

"Don't worry," the Acara said, grinning. "I think it will take quite some time for Vira to find her mirror again." Giving Hexter a gentle shake, she laughed as Vira's mirror fell out from under his cloth body. "Hexter, you are one awesome Petpet."

The End

Author: ginger23456
Date: 26 August



Quick Jump

Week 1Week 2Week 3Week 4Week 5Week 6
Week 7Week 8Week 9Week 10Week 11Week 12
Week 13Week 14Week 15Week 16Week 17Week 18
Week 19Week 20Week 21Week 22Week 23Week 24
Week 25Week 26Week 27Week 28Week 29Week 30
Week 31Week 32Week 33Week 34Week 35Week 36
Week 37Week 38Week 39Week 40Week 41Week 42
Week 43Week 44Week 45Week 46Week 47Week 48
Week 49Week 50Week 51Week 52Week 53Week 54
Week 55Week 56Week 57Week 58Week 59Week 60
Week 61Week 62Week 63Week 64Week 65Week 66
Week 67Week 68Week 69Week 70Week 71Week 72
Week 73Week 74Week 75Week 76Week 77Week 78
Week 79Week 80Week 81Week 82Week 83Week 84
Week 85Week 86Week 87Week 88Week 89Week 90
Week 91Week 92Week 93Week 94Week 95Week 96
Week 97Week 98Week 99Week 100Week 101Week 102
Week 103Week 104Week 105Week 106Week 107Week 108
Week 109Week 110Week 111Week 112Week 113Week 114
Week 115Week 116Week 117Week 118Week 119Week 120
Week 121Week 122Week 123Week 124Week 125Week 126
Week 127Week 128Week 129Week 130Week 131Week 132
Week 133Week 134Week 135Week 136Week 137Week 138
Week 139Week 140Week 141Week 142Week 143Week 144
Week 145Week 146Week 147Week 148Week 149Week 150
Week 151Week 152Week 153Week 154Week 155Week 156
Week 157Week 158Week 159Week 160Week 161Week 162
Week 163Week 164Week 165Week 166Week 167Week 168
Week 169Week 170Week 171Week 172Week 173Week 174
Week 175Week 176Week 177Week 178Week 179Week 180
Week 181Week 182Week 183Week 184Week 185Week 186
Week 187Week 188Week 189Week 190Week 191Week 192
Week 193Week 194Week 195Week 196Week 197Week 198
Week 199Week 200Week 201Week 202Week 203Week 204
Week 205Week 206Week 207Week 208Week 209Week 210
Week 211Week 212Week 213Week 214Week 215Week 216
Week 217Week 218Week 219Week 220Week 221Week 222
Week 223Week 224Week 225Week 226Week 227Week 228
Week 229Week 230Week 231Week 232Week 233Week 234
Week 235Week 236Week 237Week 238Week 239Week 240
Week 241Week 242Week 243Week 244Week 245Week 246
Week 247Week 248Week 249Week 250Week 251Week 252
Week 253Week 254Week 255Week 256Week 257Week 258
Week 259Week 260Week 261Week 262Week 263Week 264
Week 265Week 266Week 267Week 268Week 269Week 270
Week 271Week 272Week 273Week 274Week 275Week 276
Week 277Week 278Week 279Week 280Week 281Week 282
Week 283Week 284Week 285Week 286Week 287Week 288
Week 289Week 290Week 291Week 292Week 293Week 294
Week 295Week 296Week 297Week 298Week 299Week 300
Week 301Week 302Week 303Week 304Week 305Week 306
Week 307Week 308Week 309Week 310Week 311Week 312
Week 313Week 314Week 315Week 316Week 317Week 318
Week 319Week 320Week 321Week 322Week 323Week 324
Week 325Week 326Week 327Week 328Week 329Week 330
Week 331Week 332Week 333Week 334Week 335Week 336
Week 337Week 338Week 339Week 340Week 341Week 342
Week 343Week 344Week 345Week 346Week 347Week 348
Week 349Week 350Week 351Week 352Week 353Week 354
Week 355Week 356Week 357Week 358Week 359Week 360
Week 361Week 362Week 363Week 364Week 365Week 366
Week 367Week 368Week 369Week 370Week 371Week 372
Week 373Week 374Week 375Week 376Week 377Week 378
Week 379Week 380Week 381Week 382Week 383Week 384
Week 385Week 386Week 387Week 388Week 389Week 390
Week 391Week 392Week 393Week 394Week 395Week 396
Week 397Week 398Week 399Week 400Week 401Week 402
Week 403Week 404Week 405Week 406Week 407Week 408
Week 409Week 410Week 411Week 412Week 413Week 414
Week 415Week 416Week 417Week 418Week 419Week 420
Week 421Week 422Week 423Week 424Week 425Week 426
Week 427Week 428Week 429Week 430Week 431Week 432
Week 433Week 434Week 435Week 436Week 437Week 438
Week 439Week 440Week 441Week 442Week 443Week 444
Week 445Week 446Week 447Week 448Week 449Week 450
Week 451Week 452Week 453Week 454Week 455Week 456
Week 457Week 458Week 459Week 460Week 461Week 462
Week 463Week 464Week 465Week 466Week 467Week 468
Week 469Week 470Week 471Week 472Week 473Week 474
Week 475Week 476Week 477Week 478Week 479Week 480
Week 481Week 482Week 483Week 484Week 485Week 486
Week 487Week 488Week 489Week 490Week 491Week 492
Week 493Week 494Week 495Week 496Week 497Week 498
Week 499Week 500Week 501Week 502Week 503Week 504
Week 505Week 506Week 507Week 508Week 509Week 510
Week 511Week 512Week 513Week 514Week 515Week 516
Week 517Week 518Week 519Week 520Week 521Week 522
Week 523Week 524Week 525Week 526Week 527Week 528
Week 529Week 530Week 531Week 532Week 533Week 534
Week 535Week 536Week 537Week 538Week 539Week 540
Week 541Week 542Week 543Week 544Week 545Week 546
Week 547Week 548Week 549Week 550Week 551Week 552
Week 553Week 554Week 555Week 556Week 557Week 558
Week 559Week 560Week 561Week 562Week 563Week 564
Week 565Week 566Week 567Week 568Week 569Week 570
Week 571Week 572Week 573Week 574Week 575Week 576
Week 577Week 578Week 579Week 580Week 581Week 582
Week 583Week 584Week 585Week 586Week 587Week 588
Week 589Week 590Week 591Week 592Week 593Week 594
Week 595Week 596Week 597Week 598Week 599Week 600
Week 601Week 602Week 603Week 604Week 605Week 606
Week 607Week 608Week 609Week 610Week 611Week 612
Week 613Week 614Week 615Week 616Week 617Week 618
Week 619Week 620Week 621Week 622Week 623Week 624
Week 625Week 626Week 627Week 628Week 629Week 630
Week 631Week 632Week 633Week 634Week 635Week 636
Week 637Week 638Week 639Week 640Week 641Week 642
Week 643Week 644Week 645Week 646Week 647Week 648
Week 649Week 650Week 651Week 652Week 653Week 654
Week 655Week 656Week 657Week 658Week 659Week 660
Week 661Week 662Week 663Week 664Week 665Week 666
Week 667Week 668Week 669Week 670Week 671Week 672
Week 673Week 674Week 675Week 676Week 677Week 678
Week 679Week 680Week 681Week 682Week 683Week 684
Week 685Week 686Week 687Week 688Week 689Week 690
Week 691Week 692Week 693Week 694Week 695Week 696
Week 697Week 698Week 699Week 700Week 701Week 702
Week 703Week 704Week 705Week 706Week 707Week 708
Week 709Week 710Week 711Week 712Week 713Week 714
Week 715Week 716Week 717Week 718Week 719Week 720
Week 721Week 722Week 723Week 724Week 725Week 726
Week 727Week 728Week 729Week 730Week 731Week 732
Week 733Week 734Week 735Week 736Week 737Week 738
Week 739Week 740Week 741Week 742Week 743Week 744
Week 745Week 746Week 747Week 748Week 749Week 750
Week 751Week 752Week 753Week 754Week 755Week 756
Week 757Week 758Week 759Week 760Week 761Week 762
Week 763Week 764Week 765Week 766Week 767Week 768
Week 769Week 770Week 771Week 772Week 773Week 774
Week 775Week 776Week 777Week 778Week 779Week 780
Week 781Week 782Week 783Week 784Week 785Week 786
Week 787Week 788Week 789Week 790Week 791Week 792
Week 793Week 794Week 795Week 796Week 797Week 798
Week 799Week 800Week 801Week 802Week 803Week 804
Week 805Week 806Week 807Week 808Week 809Week 810
Week 811Week 812Week 813Week 814Week 815Week 816
Week 817Week 818Week 819Week 820Week 821Week 822
Week 823Week 824Week 825Week 826Week 827Week 828
Week 829Week 830Week 831Week 832Week 833Week 834
Week 835Week 836Week 837Week 838Week 839Week 840
Week 841Week 842Week 843Week 844Week 845Week 846
Week 847Week 848Week 849Week 850Week 851Week 852
Week 853Week 854Week 855Week 856Week 857Week 858
Week 859Week 860Week 861Week 862Week 863Week 864
Week 865Week 866Week 867Week 868Week 869Week 870
Week 871Week 872Week 873Week 874Week 875Week 876
Week 877Week 878Week 879Week 880Week 881Week 882
Week 883Week 884Week 885Week 886Week 887Week 888
Week 889Week 890Week 891Week 892Week 893Week 894
Week 895Week 896Week 897Week 898Week 899Week 900
Week 901Week 902Week 903Week 904Week 905Week 906
Week 907Week 908Week 909Week 910Week 911Week 912
Week 913Week 914Week 915Week 916Week 917Week 918
Week 919Week 920Week 921Week 922Week 923Week 924
Week 925Week 926Week 927Week 928Week 929Week 930
Week 931Week 932Week 933Week 934Week 935Week 936
Week 937Week 938Week 939Week 940Week 941Week 942
Week 943Week 944Week 945Week 946Week 947Week 948
Week 949Week 950Week 951Week 952Week 953Week 954
Week 955Week 956Week 957Week 958Week 959Week 960
Week 961     


IMPORTANT - SUBMISSION POLICY! By uploading or otherwise submitting any materials to Neopets, you (and your parents) are automatically granting us permission to use those materials for free in any manner we can think of forever throughout the universe. These materials must be created ONLY by the person submitting them - you cannot submit someone else's work. Also, if you're under age 18, ALWAYS check with your parents before you submit anything to us!