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Every week we will be starting a new Story Telling competition - with great prizes! The current prize is 2000 NP, plus a rare item!!! This is how it works...

We start a story and you have to write the next few paragraphs. We will select the best submissions every day and put it on the site, and then you have to write the next one, all the way until the story finishes. Got it? Well, submit your paragraphs below!

Story Twelve - Ended February 16th

Terror Mountain was very quiet the afternoon that Black Widow and Bubbles decided to go shopping for fake fur coats. Like everyone else at the lodge, these two were trying not to think about what happened to Electric Blue Monkey. "A little shopping always helps me get my mind off mishaps," said Black Widow. "Yeah, I know what you mean," Bubbles replied. The two were like bears in a honey shop purchasing everything in sight. The shopkeeper thought it was a little suspicious that they were in such good spirits... Author : Neopets Staff
Date : 12th Feb
...So the shopkeeper went over to the extremely happy Black Widow and Bubbles with a suspicious mind. He tapped on Bubble's shoulder and questioned, "Why are you in such a good mood when a terrible death has come upon Electric Blue Monkey?" Bubbles and Black Widow turned around startled. "Why? Well we can't stay depressed forever!" replied Bubbles. "And besides. I never liked Electric Blue Monkey anyway!!! I mean, do you have this jacket in another size?" added Black Widow. The shopkeeper didn't mind them being so happy because they were buying everything in the store, but he kept a close eye. After they had paid for their extra large purchase they left in a hurry. Electric Blue Monkey's bandanna fell out of Black Widow's pocket as she went out the door. The shopkeeper picked it up and called the cops... Author : keechee4000
Date : 12th Feb
...Black Widow and Bubbles skipped and jumped on the road back to the Lodge. "I just love this fake Kau coat I bought; the yellow matches my eyes," exclaimed Black Widow, snuggling her face into the coat. "Awww, but this fake Cybunny coat is worth much more and the texture is more appealing than that rough hide of a coat you bought." Black Widow was about to say something to that remark when they both heard a police siren in the distance. They stopped in their cold tracks and waited for the car to pass, but to their amazement the snowmobile stopped two inches away from their toes. The Neopet that was snowmobile hopped off and glared at the two with his beady little eyes. It was Officer Chia, the toughest officer around. "You two!" yelled Officer Chia. "Get on! You have some major explaining to do." Black Widow and Bubbles were hesitant at first, but finely they got the snowmobile with puzzled expressions on their faces. They were brought to the ski lodge where they were seated in the dining room. "Now, see here!" cried Black Widow. "Hey you, did I say you can talk" Officer Chia said in a sharp reply. He sat down and took a donut out of what appeared to be a three month year old lemon sprinkled donut box. "Officer, what have we done?" Bubbles asked instantly. "Some days ago, Electric Blue Monkey...well, you know all about that!!! Then we find you two, cheerful, without a care in the world and in possession of this!" Officer Chia slammed Electric Blue Monkey's bandanna on the table. Black Widow and Bubbles were shocked... Author : lightfaerie22
Date : 12th Feb
"...I've been framed again!" Black Widow's scream echoed around the dining room. "First my husband, then my husband, then..." "I'm putting you under house arrest," Officer Chia said. "I think you, Miss Bubbles, are an innocent victim, and you are free to go." "Well, thanks a billion," Black Widow cried as Bubbles was led from the room, but Officer Chia wasn't swayed. "I know you did it, and I'm going to prove it!" he hissed at Black Widow.

***

That night Mr. Plaid was sneaking around the lodge, looking for clues to the murder of Electric Blue Monkey, and sipping a cup of hot Borovan when he tripped over a large object on the hall floor, spilling his hot drink. Turning on the light, he let out a blood-curdling scream. "Black Widoooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...."
Author : meran_emma
Date : 13th Feb
...Everyone came running when they heard his cry, asking what was wrong. Mr. Plaid could only point to the fallen woman. They all gasped in one big gasp. Then began running about in confusion. Mr. Plaid heard many different voices shouting: "Who did it!" "What happened!" "Why the Widow?!" "Nice jacket; is that fake Kau?" Finally someone had a good idea. "Call for Officer Chia!!" Then everyone was rushing about trying to call at once. Then they heard Bubbles cry out, "Hold it please." Then louder, "Hold on!" Then at the top of her lungs, "I. Said. HOLD IT!!" Everyone stopped and quieted at her shout. "Thank you. Now I have already taken the liberty of calling Officer Chia. He should be here at any moment." Then everyone heard the siren of a police snowmobile. In came Officer Chia straight through the doors and to the hall. "All right! Which one of you killed Black Widow?" He turned to Bubbles, "Was it you?" "Was it you, Mister Pickles?" Then he swiveled to Mr. Plaid, "Or was it you? Actually I think we'd all like to know why you were poking about at night. Just happening to end up where Black Widow was found dead?" All the lodgers looked at Mr. Plaid... Author : smalltownpoets88
Date : 13th Feb
...He looked like he was about to cry, "I-I was just coming through here to get a cup of Borovan, and when I came through here after I got it...s-s-she was just here! I was only in the kitchen for about five minutes...I didn't even hear anything. I just found her like this. Poor thing." Officer Chia looked skeptical but had no evidence. "Well then, since nobody can prove it was you, we'll have to investigate further. I will bring in the big shots so they can dust for fingerprints and clues. Nobody goes anywhere!" he shouted. Everyone stood quietly for a few minutes until Bubbles broke the silence. "I have got other things to do around here, I don't need to be hanging out here waiting for Officer Chia to bring in the NeoFeds to prove it was Mr. Plaid, I'm leaving." Some of the lodgers looked like they didn't want her to leave, others didn't care that she was in a hurry to leave. Mister Pickles was sleeping. Nobody said anything until Jasmine asked, "Bubbles, what other things are more important than finding out who what happened to your friend? Weren't you just shopping for fake Kau coats this afternoon together? I would think that you would care the most about Black Widow. Huh?" Bubbles looked around hesitantly... Author : rosaria85
Date : 14th Feb
...Bubbles was shaky. "I just can't stay here anymore. Who's going to get it next? What then?" She broke down sobbing. Jasmine gave her a questioning look. She was still unsure, but she understood her fear. Bubbles went to the door but it was shut. There was no way out. She turned and looked at the others. Jasmine fainted. "NOOOOOOOOOO!" screamed Bubbles. "What's going on here? I'm not getting a good feeling about this," said Mr. Plaid, waking up Mister Pickles. Slowly, they saw Jasmine's eyes flutter open. Rhiannon, shoving Bubbles aside, stooped down beside Jasmine. "What happened?" she asked in a soft voice. Jasmine looked up at her. "The door is locked and we're all going to get it. What about my modeling career?" Rhiannon raised her eyebrow and asked, "Did you try unlocking the door?" Cookie turned the doorknob and said, "The door was unlocked the whole time. We should still wait for the NeoFeds to arrive." Mister Pickles opened the door. "We might as well get some air in here. It's getting quite stuffy." His hand had just reached the knob when... Author : alishka
Date : 15th Feb
...the lights went out! Everything went black and some people started screaming. Suddenly there was a loud scratching sound and the lights flicked back on. Everyone was in the same place they were before-except Black Widow's body was gone. All the lodgers stared at the empty space where Black Widow previously laid. "W-WW-who!? What!? What's going on!?!" yelled Bubbles. "Everyone just s-stay calm!" Mr. Plaid said, trying to remain calm. "HOW CAN WE STAY CALM WHEN A BODY JUST DISAPPEARED????" screamed Rhiannon. The door suddenly banged loudly and the NeoFeds came in. "What's going on here?! Why is everyone screaming!? Hey, where's the body?" Nobody knew what to say... Author : pallas45
Date : 15th Feb
...Mister Pickles just stood there nonchalant and said, "I didn't do it." Officer Chia looked at him. Just staring straight into his eyes. "You didn't do what?" "Make everybody scream," explained Mister Pickles. Officer Chia then looked around the room and told the NeoFeds to check out the whole room to look for secret passages and fingerprints. Bubbles, still in shock from what had just happened began to weep. "Why? Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy? Wawawhy does this have to happen?" Mr. Plaid came over to Bubbles to try to comfort her in her time of need. The NeoFeds were clueless they couldn't find anything that would lead to a secret passage or at least something to explain why the body was missing. Officer Chia was not happy about this as he was starting to become a bit irritated at the fact that a body would just disappear like that. "I need something to drink," said Officer Chia. Jasmine got up and yelled, "I'll get you one." She just ran out of the room in a flash and everyone was so surprised at Jasmine's reaction that they all ran after her to the kitchen. Suddenly a loud shrill came from the bathroom... Author : joseybebe2
Date : 15th Feb
...The lodgers and the Neofeds stormed in at the same time, thinking that someone was trapped in the bathroom. Nothing was there. "Hey, where's Bubbles?" Mr. Plaid said as they heard another scream. Mr. Plaid recognized it right away, "BUBBLES!" suddenly the large crowd of people and independent pets ran out of the bathroom, and into the dinning room. There, they saw a body, a new body. Bubbles was there, sprawled across the floor. The Neofeds quickly went up to her to look for clues. The lodgers gathered around, trying to see what they were doing. Officer Chia, who was in the middle of the circle, spun around and pointed at Jasmine. "Is this why you were so eager to get my drink?" Officer Chia said. "W-what?! I c-c-could n-never do s-such a thing!" Jasmine gasped as she shook with terror. "All we know is that the culprit is or isn't in this room. It could be you, Jasmine!" Officer Chia spat. "H-hey Officer Chia! We found something!" Mister Pickles yelled. Officer Chia turned around, suddenly eager. Bubbles was clutching a metal candle stick. "Guys, get over here and dust for prints," Officer Chia ordered the NeoFeds. "Let's see...the item belongs to... Author : shine_aqua_illusion
Date : 16th Feb
...Black Widow! But, why would Black Widow cause all this commotion?" They searched for months, and finally caught Black Widow. "Why did you do this?" asked Officer Chia. Her eyes filled with tears. "I just miss Electric Blue Monkey!" she screamed. "Ever since his death, I have been very depressed and sad, but I didn't want to admit it!" she cried. "I just miss him, okay? I thought you would tease me, so I acted as if I was glad that he passed away! And I only pretended to be asleep so no one would think it was me. I'm sorry." Officer Chia's eyes and mouth opened wide in shock. "You can take me!" she sobbed, "I dragged myself out the window while it was dark, and I thought that Bubbles would tell, so I knocked her on the head with the metal candle stick!" Tears streamed down her cheeks and onto the floor, until she was sitting in a puddle. The hospital truck came and dropped off Bubbles at the scene, and drove off. Bubbles was still in the hospital cot, but she could sit up. "I feel much better!" she said, and jumped out of bed, but got a little dizzy and drowsy, so she climbed back into bed. "Look what you did to Bubbles!" yelled Officer Chia. "You will be sentenced to 20 years in jail!" "No!" yelled Bubbles. "She doesn't deserve it!" "Okay," said Offcer Chia. So, Bubbles ended up okay, but Electric Blue Monkey...well, he should have never come to the ski lodge. Black Widow was sentenced to a mere 2 years in jail. Mister Pickles would often visit her and bring her a plate of her favorite spotted pudding with custard. As for the rest of the ski lodgers, well, it's not over yet.

The End
Author : littlewashu10000
Date : 16th Feb



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